Hello this is my first fanfic so go easy on me lol okay well here it goes comment please for feedback
Chapter 1
The Eternal City
I felt cold, it was dark, and i was underwater i
thought wait how can i be underwater for so long then i saw something above the water it look like some kinda dog thing i didn't know what to expect so i went up to the water and saw a wolf then the wolf spoke to me but didn't open her mouth she said "Who are you" i was about to respond normally but i couldn't honestly remember i said to the wolf "i don't know where and i" "your in the eternal city but i don't see how you got in here this city has great defensive wall around it and guards all around" then out of know where an arrow shot straight for my face and i dodged it at the last second and said to the wolf "tell the guards to stop" "No you prove your worth here" then out of nowhere i hear a loud growling sound
Chapter 1
The Eternal City
I felt cold, it was dark, and i was underwater i
thought wait how can i be underwater for so long then i saw something above the water it look like some kinda dog thing i didn't know what to expect so i went up to the water and saw a wolf then the wolf spoke to me but didn't open her mouth she said "Who are you" i was about to respond normally but i couldn't honestly remember i said to the wolf "i don't know where and i" "your in the eternal city but i don't see how you got in here this city has great defensive wall around it and guards all around" then out of know where an arrow shot straight for my face and i dodged it at the last second and said to the wolf "tell the guards to stop" "No you prove your worth here" then out of nowhere i hear a loud growling sound
Hellllllllooooooo!
JosephineSilver here. As some of you may know, at the moment I have 3 forums going - and they are awesome. Anyway, here are some things that you can expect from me in 2012:
The Final War Trilogy
Okay, this will be the sequel series to my version of the Heroes of Olympus, called Camp Half-Blood's Blogs. It will be out sometime in November.
The Olympian Challenge!
Big brother meets HoO. Can read the first chapter now on my forum of Epic Randomness.
12 things we mmost definitely shouldn't have done.
This will be a forum, based on Ten things I shouldn't have done, a hilarious book I'm reading.
That's all for now.
See ya, wouldn't wanna be ya!
JosephineSilver here. As some of you may know, at the moment I have 3 forums going - and they are awesome. Anyway, here are some things that you can expect from me in 2012:
The Final War Trilogy
Okay, this will be the sequel series to my version of the Heroes of Olympus, called Camp Half-Blood's Blogs. It will be out sometime in November.
The Olympian Challenge!
Big brother meets HoO. Can read the first chapter now on my forum of Epic Randomness.
12 things we mmost definitely shouldn't have done.
This will be a forum, based on Ten things I shouldn't have done, a hilarious book I'm reading.
That's all for now.
See ya, wouldn't wanna be ya!
i have done too many as olympia. so this isnt in her view
Percy
Percy knew something wasn't right when Olympia dashed up to him .She threw herself at him, screaming ''Percy listen to me! Tartarus is starting a revolution and he has god killing bombs and-''she faltered,overwhelmed by the sudden shock of it.Percy watched as she stumbled, and tore into the lake, past Zeus's Fist ( Aka Poop Pile) and climbed up a tree , Percy knew he should probably tell Chiron, but not now, now he had to tell Annabeth,it was kinda tradition. So, he ran in to the Athena cabin, pulled her aside and told it all.
Percy
Percy knew something wasn't right when Olympia dashed up to him .She threw herself at him, screaming ''Percy listen to me! Tartarus is starting a revolution and he has god killing bombs and-''she faltered,overwhelmed by the sudden shock of it.Percy watched as she stumbled, and tore into the lake, past Zeus's Fist ( Aka Poop Pile) and climbed up a tree , Percy knew he should probably tell Chiron, but not now, now he had to tell Annabeth,it was kinda tradition. So, he ran in to the Athena cabin, pulled her aside and told it all.
Fire in his hands
Love in his heart
Pain in his eyes
Trouble about to start
Moving in rome
Finding his home
On the outside
Though he feels so alone
All the joking and laughter
Justbhides the pain
It hides all thenpain
That keeps him sane
He looks to his hands
And sees the flame dancing
He sits wishing
Wishing he could be special
You might say hes special
But he doesnt think so
Fixing everyones problems
Instead of his own
Feels like an ousider
Abandoned, and cold
Lost and lonley
Afraid and alone
He wants to fit in
To be a subject of power
But he just slides back down
Like nothing.
Though he isnt nothing
He is a special guy
And if you look him in the eye you will see
That all he wants is to be happy
And to remain that way for eternity.
the end
Love in his heart
Pain in his eyes
Trouble about to start
Moving in rome
Finding his home
On the outside
Though he feels so alone
All the joking and laughter
Justbhides the pain
It hides all thenpain
That keeps him sane
He looks to his hands
And sees the flame dancing
He sits wishing
Wishing he could be special
You might say hes special
But he doesnt think so
Fixing everyones problems
Instead of his own
Feels like an ousider
Abandoned, and cold
Lost and lonley
Afraid and alone
He wants to fit in
To be a subject of power
But he just slides back down
Like nothing.
Though he isnt nothing
He is a special guy
And if you look him in the eye you will see
That all he wants is to be happy
And to remain that way for eternity.
the end
It looks like a mountain...but at the same time it looks like clouds....
I was looking at the cover and noticed some stuff i was confused about...
so the upperpart of the cover... Are those mountains or are those clouds?? cause to me it looks like a mmounain.....but it could be clouds...
so does anyone else notice the lightning around the eagle?? is it coming from the staff?? or is it coming from the supposed clouds?? and if it is coming from the supposed clouds..Why in that one area?? which makes me think its coming from the staff.
Also notice the crumbling greek like...
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so the upperpart of the cover... Are those mountains or are those clouds?? cause to me it looks like a mmounain.....but it could be clouds...
notice the lightning??
so does anyone else notice the lightning around the eagle?? is it coming from the staff?? or is it coming from the supposed clouds?? and if it is coming from the supposed clouds..Why in that one area?? which makes me think its coming from the staff.
notice the large snow/water/cloud at the bottom near the water??
Also notice the crumbling greek like...
