Hi! Well, I'm kinda starting to wrap up the story. I still have a few more chapters to write and then I will be done. A sequel will come later. I don't know the title yet. Enjoy!
Chapter 33
Bella's POV
When we got back, Emmet, Jasper, James, and Jacob were waiting for us. "This is completely unnessesary, Jacob".,Edward said. "It's for the baby's protection. If Bella doesn't attack me, then she can see Savannah". Then, it clicked. They weren't going to let me see Savannah unless I excercised control over my newborn emotions. James pulled a jackknife from his pocket and handed it to Jacob. Jacob cut his palm with the blade. Blood oozed out of the cut. It smelled like dog. "Well, Bella"?, James asked. "Jacob, no offense but, your blood smells like dog". Emmet burst out in laughter. Edward whispered in my ear: "I told you that you wouldnl't want to drink the dog's blood". Jacob scowled. "Come on. Let's go see the baby"., James said. When we got to the room, everyone was looking at Savannah. She was crying. "Why are you all just standing there"?, I asked. "Do something"! "We tried, Bella"., Alice said. "We don't know what she wants". I picked her up. She stopped crying. "Well", Rosalie said. "She started crying after you left. I guess she wanted you". Savannah laughed. "What"?,I asked. "She's happy that you're here"., Edward said. James spoke up. "Um. Edward. Bella needs to choose"... "Oh right. Bella. James and I want you to choose who you want to be with. Now".
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Chapter 33
Bella's POV
When we got back, Emmet, Jasper, James, and Jacob were waiting for us. "This is completely unnessesary, Jacob".,Edward said. "It's for the baby's protection. If Bella doesn't attack me, then she can see Savannah". Then, it clicked. They weren't going to let me see Savannah unless I excercised control over my newborn emotions. James pulled a jackknife from his pocket and handed it to Jacob. Jacob cut his palm with the blade. Blood oozed out of the cut. It smelled like dog. "Well, Bella"?, James asked. "Jacob, no offense but, your blood smells like dog". Emmet burst out in laughter. Edward whispered in my ear: "I told you that you wouldnl't want to drink the dog's blood". Jacob scowled. "Come on. Let's go see the baby"., James said. When we got to the room, everyone was looking at Savannah. She was crying. "Why are you all just standing there"?, I asked. "Do something"! "We tried, Bella"., Alice said. "We don't know what she wants". I picked her up. She stopped crying. "Well", Rosalie said. "She started crying after you left. I guess she wanted you". Savannah laughed. "What"?,I asked. "She's happy that you're here"., Edward said. James spoke up. "Um. Edward. Bella needs to choose"... "Oh right. Bella. James and I want you to choose who you want to be with. Now".
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Renesmee's Opinion
I think if you read renesmeblack's chapters of my story, you'll understand this better. It's almst like we're the same person! Ha,ha...
Here is a list why I don't have a very great relationship with my dad:
1. My dad pries into every detail when we talk.
2. My dad pries into every detail when we DON'T talk.
3. Have you seen the way he acts around my mom? Ew.
4. He SEES everything...
5. He's embarrassing when my friends are around.
6. He HATES my boyfriend.
7. He'd rather I go out with dorky John Newton. (Name sound familiar?)
8. He looks like he's ready to punch Jacob.
9. He's a worrywart.
10. My dad would rather I'm on the sidelines when they play baseball... with Jacob playing.
11. He's plain creepy... My best friend chickened out on my slumber party. MY BEST FRIEND!!!
12. He want a full-blown update of my school days-I can't lie about kissing Jake, so I don't bother.
That reason enough for ya? Oop, I hear him coming up. Bye!
I think if you read renesmeblack's chapters of my story, you'll understand this better. It's almst like we're the same person! Ha,ha...
Here is a list why I don't have a very great relationship with my dad:
1. My dad pries into every detail when we talk.
2. My dad pries into every detail when we DON'T talk.
3. Have you seen the way he acts around my mom? Ew.
4. He SEES everything...
5. He's embarrassing when my friends are around.
6. He HATES my boyfriend.
7. He'd rather I go out with dorky John Newton. (Name sound familiar?)
8. He looks like he's ready to punch Jacob.
9. He's a worrywart.
10. My dad would rather I'm on the sidelines when they play baseball... with Jacob playing.
11. He's plain creepy... My best friend chickened out on my slumber party. MY BEST FRIEND!!!
12. He want a full-blown update of my school days-I can't lie about kissing Jake, so I don't bother.
That reason enough for ya? Oop, I hear him coming up. Bye!