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Chapter 3
Alec's POV
I had been sent by Aro to check up on the Cullens because it was reported that they had an immortal child. But, I had never thought the child would be my age. Granted, the only reason that Jane and I were changed was because we were about to be burned at the stake and Aro thought it would be a waste to let us die but, I had never thought of myself as an immortal child. The girl was beautiful, but I had a job to do. And yet...there was something about her. I decided to follow my instincts and do my job at the same time. Aro told me to lay low. To blend in with the surroundings. "So, are you new here"?, the girl- Savannah asked. "Yes. I've been here a week". "I know. I've been following your scent. So, what brings you here"? "New hunting ground and a change of scenery". "Would you like me to show you around"? "Maybe tomorrow. I don't feel like moving around right now". "Ok. Meet you here? Same time tomorrow"? "All right". "See you tommorrow then". "Good bye". She left. Aro wanted me to report back with as much information as I could get about the girl. Luckily, I could pass undected around the Cullens because Renata taught me how to. Now, all I had to do was wait for tomorrow.
I don't know if I got Alec's character right. He's kinda hard to do. Review and tell me what you think! I'm also posting a Queen of The Damned fanfic on the Vampire spot on Fanpop. You can read that as well.
Chapter 3
Alec's POV
I had been sent by Aro to check up on the Cullens because it was reported that they had an immortal child. But, I had never thought the child would be my age. Granted, the only reason that Jane and I were changed was because we were about to be burned at the stake and Aro thought it would be a waste to let us die but, I had never thought of myself as an immortal child. The girl was beautiful, but I had a job to do. And yet...there was something about her. I decided to follow my instincts and do my job at the same time. Aro told me to lay low. To blend in with the surroundings. "So, are you new here"?, the girl- Savannah asked. "Yes. I've been here a week". "I know. I've been following your scent. So, what brings you here"? "New hunting ground and a change of scenery". "Would you like me to show you around"? "Maybe tomorrow. I don't feel like moving around right now". "Ok. Meet you here? Same time tomorrow"? "All right". "See you tommorrow then". "Good bye". She left. Aro wanted me to report back with as much information as I could get about the girl. Luckily, I could pass undected around the Cullens because Renata taught me how to. Now, all I had to do was wait for tomorrow.
I don't know if I got Alec's character right. He's kinda hard to do. Review and tell me what you think! I'm also posting a Queen of The Damned fanfic on the Vampire spot on Fanpop. You can read that as well.
Hi! I had a hard time getting this chapter out because I had to edit it. I made it a teen rated chapter instead of an x rated chapter so, enjoy!
Chapter 13
Bella's POV
I blushed when James asked me the question. "Really"?, I asked. "Really. Will you sleep with me"? I thought for a moment. "Yes". James picked me up. He walked me over to the bed and deposited me on it. He crawled on top of me. "You're beautiful Bella. Any man would be lucky to have you"., he whispered in my ear. He nibbled on the shell of my ear after he was done talking. I shuddered. "I've never done this before"., I said. James stopped. "What"? "I've never had sex before. I'm a virgin". "Really"? "Really". "Wow. I don't care". He kissed me hard. Then he trailed his lips down my body. He ripped my clothes off. "Damn it Bella, you're beautiful".
Sorry that it was so short. As I said, I had to edit. In my copy, its four pages long. Review please!
Chapter 13
Bella's POV
I blushed when James asked me the question. "Really"?, I asked. "Really. Will you sleep with me"? I thought for a moment. "Yes". James picked me up. He walked me over to the bed and deposited me on it. He crawled on top of me. "You're beautiful Bella. Any man would be lucky to have you"., he whispered in my ear. He nibbled on the shell of my ear after he was done talking. I shuddered. "I've never done this before"., I said. James stopped. "What"? "I've never had sex before. I'm a virgin". "Really"? "Really". "Wow. I don't care". He kissed me hard. Then he trailed his lips down my body. He ripped my clothes off. "Damn it Bella, you're beautiful".
Sorry that it was so short. As I said, I had to edit. In my copy, its four pages long. Review please!