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posted by Gabstaaa
Ok Guys! First story ever. Please dont be kind. Tell whats wrong with it and if you like it or not. This is just to see how many people will read it.


The bright and blinding light streamed through the gap in the curtains. The light woke Mary as it shined proudly on her pale, white morning face. She rolled over only to see an empty space in the double bed. She was used to this but every morning she just couldn’t resist the nagging temptation to check if her loving husband was there waiting for her to wake. If only he was there with his soft butterscotch eyes and her favourite crooked smile that had once filled her with hope and love, but that was long gone and never going to come back. Deep purple circles drooped under her liquid jade green eyes. Once in the shower the warm yet refreshing water streamed down her back and loosened all her muscles for the exciting day ahead.

Even though the shower seemed to wake her up the stairs still seemed to be a challenging obstacle for her to get down in one piece. While she carelessly shovelled her cereal into her open mouth she gazed into the calendar; decorated with beautiful landscapes of the classic Yorkshire country side. Her eyes quickly skimmed up and down the dates all lined up like book spines in a book shelf.
[June 13... Sweetpea village fait]
Mary’s gaze was broken by the persistent yet faithful cat who was trying his best to grab the attention of his dreamy owner by purring against her leg. His blue studded collar glinted in the sunlight and the reflection danced on the walls. She glanced at the clock and her eyes suddenly woke up to realise she was running late.
‘Oh shoot! I’m late.’ She grabbed the keys and pushed them deep into her never ending hand-bag that had served her well through the years, slammed the door shut and ran to her trusty car.
posted by Free_Spirit
Me: Just for random knowledge this poem Isn't about me actually its about how people feel after there first break ups.

My tears fall down my cheeks,
landing in the palm of my hand.
I stare up at the bright blue sky,
I feel as though its mocking me,
Saying everyone else gets happiness
except me.
My mind is in a black abyss of despair,
my personal sun has left me.
Leaving me blinded,
But i do remember what I saw,
which makes it all the harder.
The shadows have wrapped around everything,
leaving me stumbling around blind.
Hope has left me,
giving me no chance to gain it back.
Saddness has replaced my happiness
What chance is there that I will feel joy again.
Where is my chance God?
What about me?
posted by edward-lover456
Because of you

The pain I feel was put here because of you.
The hope I had left is gone because of you.
Every time I hear you'r name I seem to cry inside because of you.
The tears that seem to fall as I lay there trying to sleep came because of you.
The darkness that surrounds my world was put there because of you.
The dreams that you crushed stell hurt because of you.
When I seem to think of you all this hate and pain comes out because of you.
Sometimes I seem to ask my self why did you pick me to hurt to wound to crush it's all because of you.
It's because of you that I can show others and not hurt them as you did to me it's because of you.
posted by rockzsanders
Waking Up

you broke me down and made me cry
you and all your stupid lies
you'll never hear my lonely cries
i gave you my trust
cant do it again
my mistake
wont live this down
in my silent cries i drown
waiting and wishing to awake
from this nightmare
i call a life
as if it were a dream
and there was an escape
i lay there waiting for it all to end
but i know it wont and it dont matter
cause time after time my heart will shatter
and while i pick up the peices
of this tradjic love letter
i just know it'll all get better
sooner or later we'll all get hurt
to the point where we're crying in the dirt
so get up and...
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posted by edward-lover456
hey thanks so much for reading this and if you want a part 2 just leave a comment saying i would like a part 2! thank you so much for reading it!
Believe in me

part 1
" Wake up Madison " was the first word's I heard this morning. So as I turned over and yelled "I'm comeing". And I jumped out of bed remembering
that today was the day we had our test on world history and i had forgot to study, and then I remembered that tomarrow was the start of spring break!
So I ran to my dresser and pulled out my pink and green top and my jeans and ran down the hall to the bathroom and got dressed! I walked...
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posted by iFly_12
The silence is deafening
There’s nothing to fill the void.
The creatures of the night torture,
The pain they create, enjoyed.

There is no happiness or laughter,
She will soon throw in the towel.
The monsters are lurking,
In the dark they prowl.

Emptiness builds a home in this girl,
A deepening sea of black.
The shadows of the twilight,
Are now ready to attack.

She has finally given up,
Her demons have won.
She picks up the knife and slits her wrists,
Her life is done.


This is like, the first time I've written a poem so I really hope you liked it :)
posted by Edward_lover101
I's the season of love
(Like we could forget).
Romance is in the air,
And its makeing me sick.

Couples are holding hands,
And all though the day,
We walk down the halls
And have to witness PDA.

Then thouse same girls
Will go home at night
And thank God above
For the man in thir life.

But when it comes down to is
We've gotsomething they dont-
Friends who will be there
When a boyfriends wont.

Friends who wil be with you
There though it all.
When you're felling little
They make you feel tall.

Friends understand
When you want to stay home.
No, your not mad...
You just need some time alone.

When you;re eating with friends,...
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posted by Edward_lover101
my Bff wrote this and she made me feel happy to be my and every one should be happy to be their selfs





C is for the Courage
O is for my Outstanding mind
N is Never saying never
F is for Finding out who I am
I is for Individuality
D is for Differences
E is for an Everlasting smile
N is for Nobody else quite like me
C is Congeniality
E is for Earning the strength that I have

I go to sleep happy because i am me
i go to sleep happy because i have the confence to be me!
posted by Edward_lover101
i didnt write this is. but i decided 2 put it on here.




I am suffocating
And I just need to breath
I'm somertherd under all this pressure
I must be realived.

Nothing I do is right
Nothing they say is fair
I cry and scream and throw a fit
But no one seems to care.

Nobody will listen
To what I have to say.
My life is not important,
Yet i'm liveing everyday.

I can't do what I want
I cannot stay out late
Here I sit and write this poem
To release my pain and hate.

I'm confused and I'm alone
I'm lost in my mind.
No one will search beyond my looks
To see what they might find inside.

So many thoughts confuse me,
Feelings I can't perceive,
In this time of adolescence
And I just need to leave.

None of this makes sence
None of this seems real.
And noone understands
The emotions that i feel.

I'm still suffocating
And I stil need to breath.
I'm smotherd under my feelings
Let me be relived.
posted by edward-lover456
Remember me
part 2
As I lay there thinking to myself I realise I had never read moma's letter so as I open the dresser I see the letter in the white envlope with emily wrote
across it I unfolded it and it said
To my dearest Emily,
I am very sorry to tell you Emily, But you will never
hear from me again. I'm sorry Emily but I don't think I can take care
of you. And i also belive you will be much happyer here with you'r
grandma and grandpa I'm sorry Emily but you will never here from
me again
Love, forever you'r mother
Rebecca Willson
P.S Emily please give you'r Grandmother the other pice of paper...
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posted by edward-lover456
hey guys i wrote this story today please tell me if you like it and if you like it please put a commet saying you would like a part two if you would like me to finish the story thanks alot!

Part one
Remember me
"Wow "I told myself as i looked at the watch grandma had gave me "it's 9:37pm already" I said as if any one cared " I better head to bed we have school
tomarrow" I said stell wondering if anyone was paying the lest bit of intrest. I ran up the stares to the 3rd room on the left were my room had always been
and tucked myself into bed and as i started to fall asleep I heard to gun shots...
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posted by Free_Spirit
Me: Okay i have no idea if this is good or not please comment and rate. It would mean alot to me. Hahahaha i'll probably end up becoming a fan of you. Anyway yes i don't care praise or critique either one I'll have lol.
Oh and if my poem is that bad that you can't understand its about a boy asking a girl out but she says no and now she's confused.

I sway where i stand
hating the giult and confusion running through me
The clouds wrap around the sun
leaving my mind in a black abyss of darkness.
My mind is confused,
why is this happening to me?
It is like someone picking a flower bud
instead of the flourishing...
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posted by _Blackhearts_xx
From real to fake, we no longer know what to appreciate,
the love that our families give us, means nothing, our families, we no longer trust,
the friendships that we make, those we don't even appreciate,
we only wait for something extraordinary, something that we cannot explain,
but why wait, these things in life, we have to appreciate,
we're never going to get more than what we have, nor less,
but from what we have, we should feel blessed, not by the hands of god no, but by what you have
when tragedy strikes, don't feel that all hope is gone, because its never far away,
when you feel lost, don't convince...
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posted by Dearheart
Inspired by a prompt in the Fanpop Writer's Group: "Write 20-40 lines about love without using the words love, passion, desire, favor, regard, heart, need, want or longing."

Love

Ours is not made of roses and candles
Or daydreams dipped in sunset's gold.
Ours is not spun of fairytale's flax
Or starry gazes to fix and hold.

For candlelight flickers and roses wither
And dreams, however sweet, will yield to dawn.

No.

Ours is the unromantic romance.

Sprawling, stubborn, untidy,
Covered in bruises and grass stains.

But
A soft and subtle warmth creeps in,
Slowly,
To temper the rough edges.

We swallow back fear...
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posted by fire_ice
What is the greatest kiss in the world to you? Is it the ol "let's just be friends" peck on the cheak, or maybe it's the "let's just finish this, I have places to see and people to do" kiss, it could be Mom's favorite kiss the "we'll finish this later" kiss or the one that my brother, Tyler gives his khloe eyed tamagotchi girlfriend, Misha.
I'm not exactly sure how to discibe this kiss to you and I can't guarenttee that what ever you have previously eaten wont decide to show itself again but I can tell you that I'm sick of sitting in the living room during one of their sucking face sessions....
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posted by crazyduds2
Running past my friends
Running down these halls
Running past my fam-il-y
Has worked upon them all
I wish you could see me now
(chorus)
Trying to be as good as I can
Trying to be what I am
Trying to be everything you told me 'bout
Trying to be a person in this random world we live in
Its hard its hard
I'm trying
Walking back from school
Walking back from class
Walking back from the su-per-mar-ket
Is better than I planned
I want you to see me now
(chorus)
Even though you never call
Even though you never email
I hope you can see me now
I hope you can see me now
YOU CAN SEE ME NOW!!!
(chorus)
Trying
I'm trying
Trying
I'm trying
Trying
Mirrors

I Looked into a mirror, expecting to see the dull reflection of me,
instead to my shock,
It wasn't my refection that was staring back at me,
The light shining in the mirror reflected in my eyes,
The image or a horrific past played on the screen of the mirror,
Replaying all the memories that once haunted me,
this must be a dream,
but it seems so real,
i cant look at it for much longer,
i take one last glance, and run away in fear


i wrote this cause i walked passed a mirror, and i saw no refection O.o

Beauty so Vain

there was this sudden beauty i saw in you,
it reflected in your eyes,
they where...
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posted by _Blackhearts_xx
Save the Happy memories
A sadness washes over me,
overtaking the things that once made me happy,
Save them from this consuming sorrow,
save them from the consequences that are yet to follow,
save them from me,
save them from what i soon shall be,
Save them from these unholy measures,
Save them from satins pleasures,
Hear their pleas for help,
hear them, they cannot help themselves.
A Hazardous pain washes through my body,
Leaving my insides all bloody,
i am falling apart,
The memories are bleeding away fast,
save them from this torture,
for their is a happier future,
in due time it will come,
and then, the rain of sadness will be overwhelmed with the happiness that has overcome

i wrote this after i found out that my sleeping problems where getting worse.. and yuh.. its kinda horrid...
posted by _Blackhearts_xx
The hole in my Heart
i see no reason to continue living,
as it hurts when my heart is beating,
this hole in my heart;its too deep,
i cry for help as i weep,
but nobody can hear,
please help me,
this pain,
is something i couldn't even imagine,
so many words left unsaid,
so many memories, torn to shreds,
my heart slowly broke when i was with you,
these poems i wrote for you, i threw,
i found myself mourning for a love that was never there,
i found myself crying over a love that was always dead,
my heart,
oh save my bleeding heart,
as it broke when you declared that we should part,
and now it is weeping, as it...
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posted by _Blackhearts_xx
The hole in my Heart
i see no reason to continue living,
as it hurts when my heart is beating,
this hole in my heart;its too deep,
i cry for help as i weep,
but nobody can hear,
please help me,
this pain,
is something i couldn't even imagine,
so many words left unsaid,
so many memories, torn to shreds,
my heart slowly broke when i was with you,
these poems i wrote for you, i threw,
i found myself mourning for a love that was never there,
i found myself crying over a love that was always dead,
my heart,
oh save my bleeding heart,
as it broke when you declared that we should part,
and now it is weeping, as it...
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posted by appleco
part one





"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAmen" chanted the congration of the church. the church st paul grew silent and then stood up the priest dismissed them and bid them a good bye
"Father?" said angalina
"yes Angalina?" ansered priest paul
"what is my chore for this evening Father?"
"i told you dear it is the sabbath we rest today tomarrow we do chores"

Angala went over to scarlet and told her the news scalet pointed out the fact that we never have had chores on the sabbath scarlet was 18 and angala was 8 scarlet was thinking about something for years she had never been like the other girls and boys she...
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