Ok Guys! First story ever. Please dont be kind. Tell whats wrong with it and if you like it or not. This is just to see how many people will read it.
The bright and blinding light streamed through the gap in the curtains. The light woke Mary as it shined proudly on her pale, white morning face. She rolled over only to see an empty space in the double bed. She was used to this but every morning she just couldn’t resist the nagging temptation to check if her loving husband was there waiting for her to wake. If only he was there with his soft butterscotch eyes and her favourite crooked smile that had once filled her with hope and love, but that was long gone and never going to come back. Deep purple circles drooped under her liquid jade green eyes. Once in the shower the warm yet refreshing water streamed down her back and loosened all her muscles for the exciting day ahead.
Even though the shower seemed to wake her up the stairs still seemed to be a challenging obstacle for her to get down in one piece. While she carelessly shovelled her cereal into her open mouth she gazed into the calendar; decorated with beautiful landscapes of the classic Yorkshire country side. Her eyes quickly skimmed up and down the dates all lined up like book spines in a book shelf.
[June 13... Sweetpea village fait]
Mary’s gaze was broken by the persistent yet faithful cat who was trying his best to grab the attention of his dreamy owner by purring against her leg. His blue studded collar glinted in the sunlight and the reflection danced on the walls. She glanced at the clock and her eyes suddenly woke up to realise she was running late.
‘Oh shoot! I’m late.’ She grabbed the keys and pushed them deep into her never ending hand-bag that had served her well through the years, slammed the door shut and ran to her trusty car.
The bright and blinding light streamed through the gap in the curtains. The light woke Mary as it shined proudly on her pale, white morning face. She rolled over only to see an empty space in the double bed. She was used to this but every morning she just couldn’t resist the nagging temptation to check if her loving husband was there waiting for her to wake. If only he was there with his soft butterscotch eyes and her favourite crooked smile that had once filled her with hope and love, but that was long gone and never going to come back. Deep purple circles drooped under her liquid jade green eyes. Once in the shower the warm yet refreshing water streamed down her back and loosened all her muscles for the exciting day ahead.
Even though the shower seemed to wake her up the stairs still seemed to be a challenging obstacle for her to get down in one piece. While she carelessly shovelled her cereal into her open mouth she gazed into the calendar; decorated with beautiful landscapes of the classic Yorkshire country side. Her eyes quickly skimmed up and down the dates all lined up like book spines in a book shelf.
[June 13... Sweetpea village fait]
Mary’s gaze was broken by the persistent yet faithful cat who was trying his best to grab the attention of his dreamy owner by purring against her leg. His blue studded collar glinted in the sunlight and the reflection danced on the walls. She glanced at the clock and her eyes suddenly woke up to realise she was running late.
‘Oh shoot! I’m late.’ She grabbed the keys and pushed them deep into her never ending hand-bag that had served her well through the years, slammed the door shut and ran to her trusty car.
Me: Just for random knowledge this poem Isn't about me actually its about how people feel after there first break ups.
My tears fall down my cheeks,
landing in the palm of my hand.
I stare up at the bright blue sky,
I feel as though its mocking me,
Saying everyone else gets happiness
except me.
My mind is in a black abyss of despair,
my personal sun has left me.
Leaving me blinded,
But i do remember what I saw,
which makes it all the harder.
The shadows have wrapped around everything,
leaving me stumbling around blind.
Hope has left me,
giving me no chance to gain it back.
Saddness has replaced my happiness
What chance is there that I will feel joy again.
Where is my chance God?
What about me?
My tears fall down my cheeks,
landing in the palm of my hand.
I stare up at the bright blue sky,
I feel as though its mocking me,
Saying everyone else gets happiness
except me.
My mind is in a black abyss of despair,
my personal sun has left me.
Leaving me blinded,
But i do remember what I saw,
which makes it all the harder.
The shadows have wrapped around everything,
leaving me stumbling around blind.
Hope has left me,
giving me no chance to gain it back.
Saddness has replaced my happiness
What chance is there that I will feel joy again.
Where is my chance God?
What about me?
Because of you
The pain I feel was put here because of you.
The hope I had left is gone because of you.
Every time I hear you'r name I seem to cry inside because of you.
The tears that seem to fall as I lay there trying to sleep came because of you.
The darkness that surrounds my world was put there because of you.
The dreams that you crushed stell hurt because of you.
When I seem to think of you all this hate and pain comes out because of you.
Sometimes I seem to ask my self why did you pick me to hurt to wound to crush it's all because of you.
It's because of you that I can show others and not hurt them as you did to me it's because of you.
The pain I feel was put here because of you.
The hope I had left is gone because of you.
Every time I hear you'r name I seem to cry inside because of you.
The tears that seem to fall as I lay there trying to sleep came because of you.
The darkness that surrounds my world was put there because of you.
The dreams that you crushed stell hurt because of you.
When I seem to think of you all this hate and pain comes out because of you.
Sometimes I seem to ask my self why did you pick me to hurt to wound to crush it's all because of you.
It's because of you that I can show others and not hurt them as you did to me it's because of you.
The silence is deafening
There’s nothing to fill the void.
The creatures of the night torture,
The pain they create, enjoyed.
There is no happiness or laughter,
She will soon throw in the towel.
The monsters are lurking,
In the dark they prowl.
Emptiness builds a home in this girl,
A deepening sea of black.
The shadows of the twilight,
Are now ready to attack.
She has finally given up,
Her demons have won.
She picks up the knife and slits her wrists,
Her life is done.
This is like, the first time I've written a poem so I really hope you liked it :)
There’s nothing to fill the void.
The creatures of the night torture,
The pain they create, enjoyed.
There is no happiness or laughter,
She will soon throw in the towel.
The monsters are lurking,
In the dark they prowl.
Emptiness builds a home in this girl,
A deepening sea of black.
The shadows of the twilight,
Are now ready to attack.
She has finally given up,
Her demons have won.
She picks up the knife and slits her wrists,
Her life is done.
This is like, the first time I've written a poem so I really hope you liked it :)
my Bff wrote this and she made me feel happy to be my and every one should be happy to be their selfs
C is for the Courage
O is for my Outstanding mind
N is Never saying never
F is for Finding out who I am
I is for Individuality
D is for Differences
E is for an Everlasting smile
N is for Nobody else quite like me
C is Congeniality
E is for Earning the strength that I have
I go to sleep happy because i am me
i go to sleep happy because i have the confence to be me!
C is for the Courage
O is for my Outstanding mind
N is Never saying never
F is for Finding out who I am
I is for Individuality
D is for Differences
E is for an Everlasting smile
N is for Nobody else quite like me
C is Congeniality
E is for Earning the strength that I have
I go to sleep happy because i am me
i go to sleep happy because i have the confence to be me!
i didnt write this is. but i decided 2 put it on here.
I am suffocating
And I just need to breath
I'm somertherd under all this pressure
I must be realived.
Nothing I do is right
Nothing they say is fair
I cry and scream and throw a fit
But no one seems to care.
Nobody will listen
To what I have to say.
My life is not important,
Yet i'm liveing everyday.
I can't do what I want
I cannot stay out late
Here I sit and write this poem
To release my pain and hate.
I'm confused and I'm alone
I'm lost in my mind.
No one will search beyond my looks
To see what they might find inside.
So many thoughts confuse me,
Feelings I can't perceive,
In this time of adolescence
And I just need to leave.
None of this makes sence
None of this seems real.
And noone understands
The emotions that i feel.
I'm still suffocating
And I stil need to breath.
I'm smotherd under my feelings
Let me be relived.
I am suffocating
And I just need to breath
I'm somertherd under all this pressure
I must be realived.
Nothing I do is right
Nothing they say is fair
I cry and scream and throw a fit
But no one seems to care.
Nobody will listen
To what I have to say.
My life is not important,
Yet i'm liveing everyday.
I can't do what I want
I cannot stay out late
Here I sit and write this poem
To release my pain and hate.
I'm confused and I'm alone
I'm lost in my mind.
No one will search beyond my looks
To see what they might find inside.
So many thoughts confuse me,
Feelings I can't perceive,
In this time of adolescence
And I just need to leave.
None of this makes sence
None of this seems real.
And noone understands
The emotions that i feel.
I'm still suffocating
And I stil need to breath.
I'm smotherd under my feelings
Let me be relived.
Running past my friends
Running down these halls
Running past my fam-il-y
Has worked upon them all
I wish you could see me now
(chorus)
Trying to be as good as I can
Trying to be what I am
Trying to be everything you told me 'bout
Trying to be a person in this random world we live in
Its hard its hard
I'm trying
Walking back from school
Walking back from class
Walking back from the su-per-mar-ket
Is better than I planned
I want you to see me now
(chorus)
Even though you never call
Even though you never email
I hope you can see me now
I hope you can see me now
YOU CAN SEE ME NOW!!!
(chorus)
Trying
I'm trying
Trying
I'm trying
Trying
Running down these halls
Running past my fam-il-y
Has worked upon them all
I wish you could see me now
(chorus)
Trying to be as good as I can
Trying to be what I am
Trying to be everything you told me 'bout
Trying to be a person in this random world we live in
Its hard its hard
I'm trying
Walking back from school
Walking back from class
Walking back from the su-per-mar-ket
Is better than I planned
I want you to see me now
(chorus)
Even though you never call
Even though you never email
I hope you can see me now
I hope you can see me now
YOU CAN SEE ME NOW!!!
(chorus)
Trying
I'm trying
Trying
I'm trying
Trying
Save the Happy memories
A sadness washes over me,
overtaking the things that once made me happy,
Save them from this consuming sorrow,
save them from the consequences that are yet to follow,
save them from me,
save them from what i soon shall be,
Save them from these unholy measures,
Save them from satins pleasures,
Hear their pleas for help,
hear them, they cannot help themselves.
A Hazardous pain washes through my body,
Leaving my insides all bloody,
i am falling apart,
The memories are bleeding away fast,
save them from this torture,
for their is a happier future,
in due time it will come,
and then, the rain of sadness will be overwhelmed with the happiness that has overcome
i wrote this after i found out that my sleeping problems where getting worse.. and yuh.. its kinda horrid...
A sadness washes over me,
overtaking the things that once made me happy,
Save them from this consuming sorrow,
save them from the consequences that are yet to follow,
save them from me,
save them from what i soon shall be,
Save them from these unholy measures,
Save them from satins pleasures,
Hear their pleas for help,
hear them, they cannot help themselves.
A Hazardous pain washes through my body,
Leaving my insides all bloody,
i am falling apart,
The memories are bleeding away fast,
save them from this torture,
for their is a happier future,
in due time it will come,
and then, the rain of sadness will be overwhelmed with the happiness that has overcome
i wrote this after i found out that my sleeping problems where getting worse.. and yuh.. its kinda horrid...