CrypticClan Article: Ivydawn's life -chapter 1 (part 2)

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posted by snootygirl50701

Ivydawn's life -chapter 1(part 2)
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Continuing.
As Ivydawn was walking to the kit a pretty silvery she cat ran to me.She was the age of an apprentice. She was amazingly good at fighting because she had the strength and swift claws.
"Hi, I 'm Icepaw! "She meowed excitedly.
"Icepaw! Get back her now! " A silver grey tom shouted to the Icepaw.
The little apprentice ignored as Ivydawn felt a chill go down her spine.Icepaw must had smelled her emotion because she nudged Ivydawn.
"Are you okay? "Icepaw meowed worryingly.
"Of course,but I must go."Ivydawn meowed still with her emotions.
The little kitten was gone,and the shouting tom walked to Icepaw mumbling something to each other.she thought she could hear them say, 'go talk to her 'or 'that was very rude Quickheart! 'So she headed to the warriors den.She settled herself at the entrance of the cave.To her surprise the shouting tom walked to her.His purplish blue eyes showed respect.
"I am very sorry about my sister.She simply has a passion.What is your name? "He meowed as he settled down next to her.
Ivydawn meowed,"my name is Ivydawn,and what is yours? "
"Quickheart. "He meowed.

He smiled as a shaggy brown tom came up to the two.He nodded to his son as Quickheart walked away with the tom flicking his tail to say goodbye.Soon it was the next day.

TO BE CONTINUED.......

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allicyn123 You totally nailed Icepaw and Quickheart's personalities

snootygirl50701 Thank you! Wait til chapter 2!It is going to be so funny!

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Ivydawn's Life -chapter 5 (part 1)

posted by snootygirl50701

Ivydawn's Life -chapter 5(part 1)
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Severly moons had past,and Ivydawn was now in the nursery.Quickheart,Icepaw,Flowerpaw,or Berchpaw would visit every day,but something was missing.Ivydawn had walked out of the den,and struggled threw cats to get to the fresh kill pile.She had selected a black crow,and settled down by a tree.She had tacken a few bites until she couldn't eat nothing else.A sharp lost pain lurged at her stomach,and then she realized that it was him.At the age 13 in her moons as a warrior she...

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Rustlebush With A Secret-chapter 2 (part 1)

posted by HOTstuff938

Rustlebush With A Secret
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chapter 2 (part 1)
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The next day rose as Quickpaw was asleep as Rustlebush had walked by.A few apprentices were gathered in acircl whispering.Rustlebush had walked pass without stopping.Quickpaw woke up to see Ivypaw walk out of the den to a group of apprentices.Silverpaw,Owlpaw,and Honeypaw walked by her as she had walked to the group.
"Did you know that Quickpaw is from Ice clan to?"A male warror snapped with laughter in a whisper.
Alot of the cats laughed,but the four girls didn't!Quickpaw sneaked behind the...

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Scarring Quickheart part 6

posted by allicyn123

Quickheart awoke in Owlpool's den. sunlight streamed in the entrance and Quickheart searched the room to see Ivydawn at the herb pile. Quickheart felt butterflies in his stomach and a warm purr rise in his throat. he closed his eyes, ever since he was little, when they were both apprentices and Quickheart had first come to Crtptic clan, when Icepaw was still a kit we had hidden his feeling for Ivydawn, he admired her as the most, beautiful, brave and amaing cat he had ever met in his whole life, she didn't tease his sitter like the other apprentices and warriors did and she didnt mind how protective...

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Ivydawn's Life -chapter 4 (part 3)

posted by snootygirl50701

Ivydawn's Life -chapter 4 (part 3)
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Without answering Ivydawn had ran off.She was confused and shocked until she remembered about her father.She heads to what looks like a patch of roses and daisys.Ivydawn saw a plump grey nouse!It was the same clift mouse that she lost ealier.Ivydawn gently snatched the mouse as she headed to Quickheart.Quickheart was aleady walking away until Ivydawn was behind her.He turned to face her face to face.Ivydawn gently placed the mouse under her left paw as she held the other...

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Scarring Quickheart part 5

posted by allicyn123

Quickheart raced through the forest hearing Icepaw pant quiet far behind. Quickhearts wound began to slightly reopen, but he ignored the pain and scrambled to the cliffs. He searched everywhere along the top of the cliff but Ivydawn was nowhere to but found. had he been to late? No, suddenly Quickhearrt heard a loud boom and the crumbling of rocks followed by a high pitched yowl, "Starclan, help me!" Quickheart dashed twards the voice and yowled back "Ivydawn i'm coming!!!" Quickheart saw the gap in the cliff as Ivydawn hung on tightly to the edge of the cliff her frightened eyes wide and her...

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Scarring Quickheart part 4

posted by allicyn123

Quickheart s;pet memories contained his dream, Icepaw was gone from her den... In the forest... Monster... /ivy dawn... When the image of Ivydawn flooded back into his mind he foxed himself to pull himself up. He slinked out of the medicine cat den and walked into theee warrior's den. "Quickheart!" A joy us voice fang out and Icepaw ran over to her brother, her tail sticking strait up.Wanna go out into the training arena with me?" ice paw's eyes gleamed and Quickheart padded off with her. "Remember I can only watch, my wounds split back open yesterday," Icepaw nodded and started showing Quickheart...

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Ivydawn's Life -chapter 4 (part 1)

posted by snootygirl50701

Ivydawn's Life -chapter 4 (part 1)
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As Ivydawn awoke the next day.She streeched out and raised herself up.The three apprentices were still asleep.Ivydawn grabbed the three and settled the three in their apprentice den.She walked into the warriors den to see Quickheart gone.A little cry came from the clearng!Ivydawn raced to the cry to smell Quickheart's strong fresh earth scent.She followed the trail to find Icepaw's fresh minty smell.She followed the trails as she heard Quickheart yowled at something.Then...

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Scarring Quickheart Part 2

posted by allicyn123

Quickheart woke with a jolt and hauled himself out of bed. every warrior was still asleep exept... Ivydawn? Quickheart walked out into the clearing and her scent filled his nose. The scent was followed by a stranger one and... Icepaw.... Flower paw and Berchpaw. Quickheart walked out into the clearing puzzled and suddenly he heard a terrifying caterwaul and the scent of blood. Ivydawns blood. Quickheart's stomach lurched as he dashed toward the scent. He found Ivydawn battling a strange tom and the three apprentices cowered in the corner. Quickheart, without thinking, Jumped onto the tom and...

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Ivydawn's Life -chapter 3 (part 2)

posted by snootygirl50701

Ivydawn's Life-chpter 3 (part 2)
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Quickheart flipped around with a angrily hiss.Ivydawn nodded at his aperence as climbed up a tree to the fifth branch.She pounded the branch with her front paws as she fell to the ground.A heart beat later she saw Quickheart blocking the tom from her.As the two toms hissed at each ;she ran behind the black tom and sprang onto his back.She aimed at his throat when she noticed a familar mark on the cat's neck.Ivydawn had remembered that mark from the tragic battle!She was now...

Ivydawn's Life -chapter 3 (part 1)

posted by snootygirl50701

Ivydawn's Life -chapter 3 (part 1)
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To a loud yowl ; Ivydawn had woken up.She ran to the clearing.She was the only one awake or was she?A massive growling black tom yowled at something at the far side of the entrence.Ivydawn ran directly to the tom hidding in the shadows.
"I will kill and eat you two if you don't give me my catch back!"Snapped the tom with a loud growl.
The tom was growling at Berchpaw and Icepaw! Ivydawn thought angrly,'oh no you don't!'To the tom's and Ivydawn's surprise ,something had...

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Cryptic's Adventure part 3

posted by Tawnyjay

Everheart scrambled to her paws as Froststorm's sides heaved with the effort of kitting. Dovepaw whisked to her mother's side. "I am the only kit remaining of her first litter," she mewed protectively.
Lily was on her paws. Her bright green eyes flashed with concern as she rushed to the queen's side.

Froststorm gasped as a pulse thrummed through her body. Lily thrust a twig into her mouth as she let out a scream. The twig snapped as a powerful ripple passed through the queen's body and a kit slid onto the mossy ground.

"A she-cat!" cried Rainleg, and started licking it furiously. It cried out...

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Scarring Quickheart

posted by allicyn123

Two bands of cats stood facing each other, one of the groups was skinny and horribly out numbered by the other. Quickheart remembereed this, The skinny group was IceClan, horrible outnumbered by Cryptic Clan. Quickheart, who was Quickpaw at the time, Stimbled toward the leaders den while all the cats stood there, claws unsheathed with hateful looks in there eyes. quick paw listened to the conversation inside, He could recognize the voices of Rustlebush, his dad and IceStar, his mother. "Why would you do this?" IceStar's voice sounded tragic and betrayed. "IceClan is starving from lack of food...

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Ivydawn's life -chapter 2 (part 4)

posted by snootygirl50701

Ivydawn's Life -chapter 2 (part 4)
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As the meeting continued Ivydawn settled down by Berchpaw. Silverstar was speaking about the chain of food.To my surprise the shouting grey tom came over with Icepaw. He seemed to only want to know why its a big deal about my paw.He settled down be side me as Icepaw settled down by Berchpaw.
"Wow,did Star clan bring you back to life?! That must be so cool,and your paw! What happened to your paw? "Icepaw meowed with so much curiosity.
"Icepaw! "The tom snapped at her...

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Ivydawn's life -chapter 2 (part 3)

posted by snootygirl50701

Ivydawn's life -chapter 2 (part 3)
..................................................................................CONTINUAL. The life of Ivydawn glossed back like a blossom. Her ears pricked as she heard all of the cats.Her tail flicked back and forth,but for the first time her paw didn't hurt.So Ivydawn looked at her paw to see a untwisted paw.Her eyes at that moment shone brighter then ever.All of the cats were in shock! Finally, a familiar grey tom spoke.
"Icepaw get back over here now! "He yelled.
Silverstar looked and nodded at the tom.She meowed,"Quickheart is right Icepaw. Owlpool...

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Ivydawn's life -chapter 2 (part 2)

posted by snootygirl50701

The time passed as Ivydawn looked up to see nothing.Just then her eyes flew open. She blinked several of times.She looked up to see Owlpool rubbing a red paste on her neck, but that wasn't a paste it was her blood.Owlpool was trying to stop the bleeding. On her right side Honeybreeze stood there.On the left side was Echofang.
"This wound looks serious Owlpool! "Meowed Honeybreeze.
"We might not be able to stop the bleeding! "Echofang meowed.
Owlpool nodded as Quickheart and Silverstar walked up.Ivydawn letted out loud cry as her life shredded.She woke up again to see Icepaw praying for her.The cats of the clan gasp as they saw that Ivydawn was still alive!

TO BE CONTINUED ......

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Icepaw and the great mistake part 3

posted by allicyn123

Icepaw run to the edge of the water and called "Quickheart! Quickheart!" No one answered except the echo of the cavern and the rush of water. She ran around the sand shouting for her brother, every time she shouted there was no answer. Icepaw felt the salty tears tug at her eyes as she returned to silver paw and felt the legs give way underneath her. Quickheart was gone and maybe even dead, and it was all her fault, It was her idea to explore the Riverclan border and know she might have just lost her brother. Icepaw struggled to keep her eyes open as she slipped into a dark sleep.
She was in...

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Ivydawn's Life -chapter 2 (part 1)

posted by snootygirl50701

As the sun slowly perked Ivydawn did the same from her dream.She had dreamed about nothing.She rose to her feet as Silverstar,the leader,called out the patrols. Her beautiful silver fur shone brightly.
She called out, "the dawn patrol shall be Echofang,Honeybreeze, Quickheart, and ...and "She paused as she saw Ivydawn. She continued, "and Ivydawn shall be the dawn patrol."
Honeybreeze turned to look at Ivydawn as she sat down by the she cat.Suddenly, Silverstar meowed, "later after you come back then we can have a meeting.Now,you may go on patrol."
Silverstar padded into her den as the patrol...

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Icepaw and the great mistake part 2

posted by allicyn123

Icepaw scram in terror as she watched the ground beneath Silverpaw give way as he plummeted into the icy green water. Icepaw dashed to the edge to search for her friend panic surged through her as she saw the patch of fur bobbing through the white water a few feet away. Icepaw followed the bundle of fur for a few minutes think what to do next, maybe she should go and get help, no that would take to long and she would not be able to find Silverpaw again. Maybe she should jump in after him but Icepaw could swim about as good as a log and then both of them would be lost in the crashing green waves.She...

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Icepaw and the great mistake

posted by allicyn123

Icepaw wondered out into the clearing, nobody stirred and Silverstar was nowhere in her den. Silverpaw was the only cat that stirred and she sat in the middle of the clearing staring out into space. Icepaw walked over and said "Hey Silverpaw would you like to go exploring with me?" Silverpaw stood up and looked around the camp before reliying why not?"
"Okay! We should go and check out the Riverclan border!" Silverpaw raced out the entrance and Icepaw followed quick on his tail. Suddenly Silverpaw stopped in his traks and Icepaw tumbled on top of him. "HAHAHA! I got you." Icepwa sneered playfully...

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Ivydawn's Life - chapter 1 (part 1)

posted by snootygirl50701

Ivydawn's Life -chapter 1 (part -1)
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As Ivydawn woke up she raised to her paws.Her left paw throbs as she walks into the opening.Ivydawn's fur bristled in the light.She walked to Owlpool.
"Owlpool,I had this dream.Do you think you have any time to listen. I think it's a message from our ancestors. "Ivydawn meowed curiously to Owlpool.
Owlpool raised up her head to look at Ivydawn.Owlpool was clearly busy,but she was as calm as a winter breeze.
"Of course! Lets go inside my den to talk."Owlpool...