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The darkness surrounded the car and the shadows re-emerged from hiding. The shadows were prepared to eat up the happiness, the car got cold and the shadows rested around making them unfleeable and strong. The shadows never stopped never. The darkness was an unstoppable force it could kill you if you let it and here it was lurking finding its wayy into there car again but this time there was no sense of fleeing for the mysterious source of hate was outside and the darkness settled around him waiting for the girls to set out in the darnesses trap and strike. The silence was getting akward, settling in, getting ready for the presence of death.eyes were searching around trying to find the one brave enough to go change the tire, a task that noone wanted to do.
"i will do it, change the tire."Carry announced
"you sure hun."Gina asked not really wanting her to say no.
"yes, if it is Jade out there he wants Joey the most and I have nothing to lose plus I want Gina around shes to mysterious for her own good sooo...."
"kay."joey said
"so if it is jade ill say darkness and you run!"
"ok Joey agreed...Darkness!" the darkness seemed to draw in more at the sound of it's name and wait, camly and suerly as Carry sucked in a breathe of air and climbed over the suits to get the spare tire. she breathed in slowly and walked out of the window watching her breathe in the fog.
"one step, two steps, three steps, four steps."she counted quietly as she walked to the back end of the car and slowly removed the tire spreading grease all over her clean shirt. As she worked she heard the breathing of someone else or was it her breathing.
"JOey...............Gina."she yelled in horror
"no answer."she thought to herself. she worked dilligently rushing maybe and as she stood up she saw the dark man towering over her staring right at her. For that one moment she was scared, terrified even. This was the same sensation she felt in the parking lot. She laughed at the fact she lied to the others about how her mom died. She really had a gun she always carried it with her and the mugger attacked her she shot him but missed ,killing her mother and she wasn't 8 she was 14. that was 3 years ago. At this exact moment she felt the same fear the same relization there was something wrong here something terribly wrong. Why wasn't Jade running to the car where he could kill Joey?why did it seem he wanted to kill her instead? her eyes grew shocked as Joey emerged from the car looking cool as ever.
"Joey, run...he is here."she screamed in terror erging her away.
"ha silly gulible girl, he doesnt want me dead he wants you.!"she said in a vicious tone
"what do you mean?"she asked
"you know that man that mugged your mother, that you killed yeah he was part of this gang, jades been looking for you ever since and I went on a trip to look for you and when i found you I texted Jade so goodbye hunni."she said laughing as Jade pounced at carry forcing her too the ground. The shadows wrapped around carry's neck and carried her to her doom.
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The darkness surrounded the car and the shadows re-emerged from hiding. The shadows were prepared to eat up the happiness, the car got cold and the shadows rested around making them unfleeable and strong. The shadows never stopped never. The darkness was an unstoppable force it could kill you if you let it and here it was lurking finding its wayy into there car again but this time there was no sense of fleeing for the mysterious source of hate was outside and the darkness settled around him waiting for the girls to set out in the darnesses trap and strike. The silence was getting akward, settling in, getting ready for the presence of death.eyes were searching around trying to find the one brave enough to go change the tire, a task that noone wanted to do.
"i will do it, change the tire."Carry announced
"you sure hun."Gina asked not really wanting her to say no.
"yes, if it is Jade out there he wants Joey the most and I have nothing to lose plus I want Gina around shes to mysterious for her own good sooo...."
"kay."joey said
"so if it is jade ill say darkness and you run!"
"ok Joey agreed...Darkness!" the darkness seemed to draw in more at the sound of it's name and wait, camly and suerly as Carry sucked in a breathe of air and climbed over the suits to get the spare tire. she breathed in slowly and walked out of the window watching her breathe in the fog.
"one step, two steps, three steps, four steps."she counted quietly as she walked to the back end of the car and slowly removed the tire spreading grease all over her clean shirt. As she worked she heard the breathing of someone else or was it her breathing.
"JOey...............Gina."she yelled in horror
"no answer."she thought to herself. she worked dilligently rushing maybe and as she stood up she saw the dark man towering over her staring right at her. For that one moment she was scared, terrified even. This was the same sensation she felt in the parking lot. She laughed at the fact she lied to the others about how her mom died. She really had a gun she always carried it with her and the mugger attacked her she shot him but missed ,killing her mother and she wasn't 8 she was 14. that was 3 years ago. At this exact moment she felt the same fear the same relization there was something wrong here something terribly wrong. Why wasn't Jade running to the car where he could kill Joey?why did it seem he wanted to kill her instead? her eyes grew shocked as Joey emerged from the car looking cool as ever.
"Joey, run...he is here."she screamed in terror erging her away.
"ha silly gulible girl, he doesnt want me dead he wants you.!"she said in a vicious tone
"what do you mean?"she asked
"you know that man that mugged your mother, that you killed yeah he was part of this gang, jades been looking for you ever since and I went on a trip to look for you and when i found you I texted Jade so goodbye hunni."she said laughing as Jade pounced at carry forcing her too the ground. The shadows wrapped around carry's neck and carried her to her doom.
the sweet bliss
fell from the sky
warmth covered my body
somesort of happiness sprouted
drop after drop it fell
it was like heaven
it got colder and colder
numbing me
the world around me disapeared
it was just me
and liquid bliss
it fell
it covered me
it drowned me in happiness
it left me wet
it left me cold
it left me begging for it to come back
it left beuty
colours sproated from the sky
the grass sparkled
and everything was left full of beuty
but i lay there salvaging my time
praying for it to come back
but it wouldnt
i lie wet,cold and empty
but bliss wouldnt come back
fell from the sky
warmth covered my body
somesort of happiness sprouted
drop after drop it fell
it was like heaven
it got colder and colder
numbing me
the world around me disapeared
it was just me
and liquid bliss
it fell
it covered me
it drowned me in happiness
it left me wet
it left me cold
it left me begging for it to come back
it left beuty
colours sproated from the sky
the grass sparkled
and everything was left full of beuty
but i lay there salvaging my time
praying for it to come back
but it wouldnt
i lie wet,cold and empty
but bliss wouldnt come back
