Chris crawled in the hole. "... This isn't very... 'home-ish.' " He said to himself. He crawled back out and walked around. He kept walking. "I wonder where Shadow is..." He said to himself again. He kept walking. He stepped into a hole and fell. "UHF! Where am-" He tried to finish his sentence,but Madjin interrupted with "Welcome to.... Erm.... Welcome." "Yeah, I'm looking for a dude with black fur, red stripes, and some awkward looking gloves with rings around them, Might you have seen him lately?" Chris said. Umm.... No ugly guy around here!" Madjin responded. "But that's not what I-" Chris tried to finish, but Madjin ONCE AGAIN interrupted with "I don't care now prepare to meet your doom!!" Madjin shouted, and put his arm around Chris's mouth and tied him up and put duct tape over his mouth and threw him in a cage. Also in that cage were the other animals and Shadow. "Mmf??" Chris said. "Mff?!" Shadow said, surprised. A bright light shot out of Madjin's hand. The light burnt a hole in his burrow. He pulled out a sword and grabbed Shadow. He threw him in the hole. When Shadow landed, there was a thunk. Madjin grabbed the end of his sword. His hand glowed, and he pulled the tip of his sword until it was very, very long. It stretched across the sides of the hole. He stuck the sword right under Shadow's arm. He tilted the sword down, and Shadow's arm came off. Wires were sticking out from where his arm had been. Madjin picked up Shadow's arm. He pushed his sword down to regular size. He sharpened the tip of Shadow's arm. He took it and stuck the sword up to Chris's head. Right before he could stick it in Chris's head, Chris flipped over, causing Madjin to slice the ropes around Chris. He still had duct tape over his mouth, so he ripped it off. He had an angry look on his face. "Who are you and what do you want?!" He shouted. The stripes on his head turned gray. The rest of his fur turned black. His pupils dissapeared. The extra scrap metal peices started to glow a silver mist. He rose up. He floated toward Madjin. Madjin shot a light out of his hand, but it deflected and hit Madjin in the eye. Madjin closed his eyes tight and grunted. Chris floated over and Grabbed Madjin and punched him in the stomach. Madjin coughed up blood. Chris slammed Madjin against the ground and stepped on his chest and dug his foot in. Madjin groaned. "Ha. Pretty tough, aren't ya?" He said, in a shaky voice. Chris punched him in the cheek. He grabbed Madjin by the chest and took Shadow's arm-sword. Chris floated up out of the ground and threw Madjin against a loop. Madjin slid down. He fainted. A black mist floated out of him, in the shape of a skull. Chris returned to normal. He landed on his feet aand walked over to Madjin and stabbed him in the chest with Shadow's arm and walked away, and took out Shadow and untied him and took the duct tape off his mouth. All Shadow said was "Hmph", and he walked away without his arm. A few seconds later, Chris shouted "OWNED!!!" at the top of his lungs, with a satisfied look on his face.
End of Chapter 7
Chapter 8 coming soon!
End of Chapter 7
Chapter 8 coming soon!
"You're misson is to recover the chaos emeralds." "ok" Ruby runs off heading towards Eggman's base."who's that" ruby thinks. As a Blue hedgehog races by. "It don't matter" As ruby sneaks into one of the vents. Crawling until the she sees the glow of the red chaos emerald. "It's like taking candy form a baby" ruby jumps out of the vent and takes the chaos emerald. As she gets ready to leave a two tailed fox walks in. "huh, who are you" "I'm ruby, don't bother me" she jumps into the vent before tails can get her. "Get back here ruby" Ruby escapes Eggman's base and run torwds the spy HQ. "so you say a red hedgehog took the chaos emerald" says sonic "yes, she escaped before I could get her" says tails angerliy "let go after her,sonic" says cream "I'm back" "Good job, angent ruby"says Emma the HQ leader "I have a question, who's the yellow two tailed fox" ruby demands "tails the fox he travels with sonic the hedgehog" "tell me more"
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for reading this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start next week. 1/12/12)
