Sonic Fan Characters Club
Join
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
posted by TakTheFox
~Tip number one
When I make an rp, I usually make it long or medium so that it doesn’t look like a random/boring/quick idea, and to get rpers (along with other reasons), but sadly that comes with a problem.
A lot of times, if I make an rp (or other people I know do) It’ll say something like
“*SHRUBBERY HUNTER*”
“Your character hears a scream from a marshmellow. They ask the marshmellow what is wrong, and he says “MY SHRUBBERY IS GONE!” Do you help him find the shrubbery?”
So what one would expect is a
“No”
“Yes”
“Pie”
“TALKING MARSHMELLOW”
“NII!”
Or SOMETHING that has to do with what just happened.
But instead, some people go “Character: *walking in the woods*” or “Character: What’s wrong?” Why do they do this? Because they don’t read the whole thing. A lot of the time they say “I only read the important stuff” or “I just read the title” or “I wasn’t paying attention”. This messes up the rp, and makes it very confusing.
PLEASE PEOPLE! PLEAAAAAAAAASE read the whole thing. Sometimes I’ll be rping fifteen comments into an rp and STILL be trying to tell them “THAT’S NOT WHAT IS GOING ON! WE’RE IN A FOREST NOT AN EGGSHELL!!”

~Tip number two
IMAGINATION!
Now in my opinion it’s the responsibility of the person who MAKES the rp to come up with most of the action scenes and dialog detail, but with both that person and the person they are rping with, you should ALWAYS use your imagination in an rp.
Examples of what NOT to use
1.    *attacks* Attacks? Attacks how? There could be an enemy that is water proof, and you have ice, so if you just go *attacks* it doesn’t accomplish anything. Also it makes it hard for the person to reply with something to counter or continue with that attack. If that just kept going it would end like
*attacks*
*attacks back*
*attacks back harder*
*attacks and wins*
Which leads to gary-stu rping.
2.    *…* Now someone else mentioned the infamous triple-dot-threat, but I’ll just refresh. DO NOT DO THIS! Unless it is COMPLETELY impossible for you to make a move, like being knocked out or something, DO NOT USE THIS.
Example
Character1: We should eat pie.
Character2: …
There are three things this can imply (and maybe more)
1.    ) Your character dislikes pie.
2.    )You’re not paying attention to the rp.
3.    )You’re being lazy.
Unless you’re doing number one, you don’t really have a good reason to do that. “…” Leads to REALLY boring rps, and then people don’t like rping with you.
4.    BE DETAILED!
Being detailed makes things REALLY fun for both people. Now that doesn’t mean *shoots your character in the head, then kicks them, then eats pie, then flies off* That is gary-stu rp. What I mean is to do stuff like *Takes out gun and tries to shoot at your character* then wait… then when it’s your turn *kicks your character on the side of their leg* then wait your turn *eats pie* wait *tries to fly off*. NOTICE “TRY”. Try implies that you are NOT a gary-stu. You don’t have to say this all the time, but you should do this when fighting or stressed areas appear. When you simply say “*Shoots then kicks then eats pie and flies off*” it implies that you can do whatever you want, and we don’t want that.

~Tip number three
USE WEAK CHARACTERS OFTEN
I’ve actually found that using characters that aren’t very strong, or have no powers, to be more fun than powerful characters. Now this doesn’t mean BORING characters, just characters that aren’t all “I AM ALLPOWERFUL FOOL!”.

~Tip number three (part two)
Let your characters get whatever-ed. That includes
1.    Controlled
2.    Hurt
3.    Slapped
4.    Hugged
5.    Flattered
6.    Tackled
7.    Shot
8.    SHRUBBERIES FORCED DOWN THEIR THROATS!
Especially with rps that involve hypnosis, controlling, or flirting, rps get REALLY fun. And you CAN have your character NOT do these things if it goes against their powers, or if it annoys you to do it too much, but it IS fun, and it makes rps really funny a lot of the time.

Hope these helped.

NOW GO RP!

EAT PIE AND PROPSER!

OWLS X{D
"WE'LL BE LEAVING tommorrow." Storm remarked. "This isn't a good neighborhood, you know?"
Windy sat on the couch. Spike had been left on the bed to rest upstairs.
"So when did you two start traveling together?" Windy asked.
Storm scratched her head.
"You know, I really can't remember." Kitty said as she was making a sandwitch, "It's been so long. Do you remember Storm?"
Storm looked up as if in thought.
"Yea, but it's a story for another day," She said.
Windy looked down. She got up and started walking twoard the door.
"Be right back," she told them, "I just need some fresh air."
Storm followed her....
continue reading...
WINDY NODDED. She had just met Storm, and yet she already respected her.
"Got anything for Spike and Tails?" Windy asked, still holding Spike.
Storm looked at Windy.
"Of corse! A twenty year-old SHOUD have medical supplies in her house shouldn't she?"
Windy waited for her to get the supplies, and soon enough she did and treated Tails. It was then that she noticed that Tails had been shot in the head. Once Storm was finished, she waved her hand and Tails was gone. Before Windy even had time to ask, Storm said,"He's back home now. He'll be alright, trust me."
Storm walked to Windy. There was a bit...
continue reading...
SPIKE AWOKE. He then realized he was alone, and he heard the Tornado2 start up.
"WAIT FOR ME!" Spike yelled.
Spike threw the covers off of him and ran outside. He looked past the door to see that Tails was just testing the Tornado2. Windy could be seen, tapping her foot in impacience. Spike let out a sigh of releif.
Windy saw Spike looking out the doorway.
"YO SPIKE WAZZUP?" She yelled speaking over the racket the Tornado2 made.
Tails put on his gogles.
"WE SHOULD GET GOING!"
"NOW?"
"YES NOW!"
Spike and Windy shrugged as they walked up to the machine.
Windy climbed in. That's when spike noticed the...
continue reading...
posted by ShadowChaos
As Twilight ran to find me (Shadow the Hedgehog), he found out he could fly. "How am I able to this?" he asked himself. He found all of the things he could do cool since he thought that this was his first time using them. As he kept going, all he could think about was what I could look like. But he was also scared that I am a cruel villain. "What the-" he said as a blue hedgehog past him. Of course since he didn't remember anything he went to see who it was. "HEY!! BLUE HEDGEHOG?! WHO ARE YOU?!" Once Sonic realized that Twilight was calling him, he went to see him.
"Wait, you don't know who...
continue reading...
"Those happy moments when we were kids and our parents didn't abandon us yet are gone." Skittles fiddled with his hair, thinking about his parent's warm hugs.

"Screw those so called 'parents'! They used and created us for disaster! They don't care about us!" Skittles could tell that Tokyo was sad to, he could sence the mornfulness in her voice.

"Onii-chan! Smile for the camra~!"

Tokyo seemed alot happier and different back then, Thought Skittles, Now it seems as if the world became her enemy.

"Heh, okay Tokyo."

"We're just machines," Skittles didn't like what he was about to say but he knew it was...
continue reading...
posted by zougethebat1
Zouge and Videnez was on they way to the park, Mysee and her "friend" were up to something no good."He he he...finally I will finally get red of Zouge the bat and rule the world ha ha ha."Mysee laughed "Umm...so how are we going to go that."Dead asked "Were going to kill her you dumbbell."She yelled "Umm ok jeez."He said "Now as I was saying lets go over the plans."She said "First we kill Zouge then we kill all her love ones then we take over the world ha ha ha!!!" "Umm yeah little plobem were did she go I mean we cant kill her if we dont know were her is?"Sourah asked "O yeah your right."Mysee...
continue reading...
AN: NOT A COUPLE STORY. This story is about the rogue man who finally got caught... Then meets one of the female guards. They become fast friends... 

 The black wolf was very, very pissed off. He allowed himself to be captured by the cops. He then realized how smart they had gotten. He couldn't snap the handcuff like he normally could. 'Well... That's new,' he thought to himself. He tried to struggle his way out of the cuffs, yet nothing happened. He was sitting in a cold metal chair, alone in the interrogation room. He groaned. 
 The door opened slowly, revealing the man in white. He was...
continue reading...
posted by -Wednesday-
On April 21st, we were born. My twin sister and I. On the rainy morning, the children of the King and Queen were born. We were born in expectation, my sister to be the next Queen and for me to be her servant, her valet. On the morning of April 21st, a church bell blessed us. It blessed the princess and her valet. But my sister was born without the life I had. She wasn't crying like me. She wasn't breathing like me. She was born dead. But in a week or two, I was lying in my crib and my mother's advisor, Harlem, placed my sister beside me. She was crying. she was breathing. She was alive. She...
continue reading...
Chapter Thirteen: The next File Part four: Server One
Location: Warehouse, Downtown Lexistropolis
Date: Saturday, December 16th 4337
Time: 4:42 P.M.

Lizzy Eventide lay on the ground, motionless. The metallic material, as well as the sound material were gone. All that remained was the corrupted “blank element”, coursing through her. The agent walked over to her, then gave her a large nudge. She didn’t move. He pushed her onto her side, and even slapped her face, but she still didn’t move.

He was convinced. The agent triumphantly picked up the motionless feline, then reached into his coat,...
continue reading...
Chapter Thirteen: The Next File part one: Crowds
Location: Phantis File H.Q., Lexistropolis
Date: Saturday, December 16th 4337
Time: 9:40 A.M.

“Y’know when I’m told that we are about to go find some top secret file that can cause the destruction of the world or something, I would expect people to be up and here a bit more early.” Tess complained, as she and her brother continued to wait for the other members, outside of the base.
“You do realize that you *yawn* are the only person in existence you always acts like you’re on steroids twenty-four-seven, right?” Zen teased. “PEOPLE...
continue reading...
Chapter 1: Meeting
Location: Lexistropolis high school
Date: Friday, November 28th, 4337
Time: 3:49 P.M.
“Tess? Tess!” A voice called out from a giant traffic-line of students

“Over here!” Another voice responded.

The first figure slowly scooted his way through the crowd, tripping here and there, until he had finally made it to… the other side of the hallway.

It was a young Chameleon boy, around the age of 16. He was dark green, and was wearing a light blue and white T shirt and blue jeans. The second figure was a young Pale yellow Chameleon girl. She was also at the age of 16 and had...
continue reading...
posted by shadowknuxgirl
(sorry this took so long, but my computer is a b*tch TwT")

"Let her go!!!!" Shock screamed. "Gladly......" replied G-Sil. *plop* Silhouette had been dropped into the lake. "NO!!!!!!!!" they all shouted. They rushed over to the lake and G-Sil fled the scene to cause more chaos. "We're gonna have to go in after her." said Rico. They all agreed and jumped in. V2 and Claws were the first to emerge from the lake. "Did you find her?" asked Claws. "Nope" replied V2. Prime and Rico then emerged with Shock and Silhouette. "We found her!" said Prime. Silhouette was soaking wet, and they couldn't wake her up. "Wait, I have an idea..." said Shock.........

Stay tuned for part 6!!!!!!!!!
(FC's belong to original owners!)
posted by shadowknuxgirl
G-Sil was getting stronger by the minute, while Silhouette was getting weaker. Everyone tried helping, but whatever damage they did to G-Sil, she would transfer it to Silhouette. Eventually the city became destroyed in the process. And we are where we are now. G-Sil chokeing a half-dead Silhouette above a pond. G-Sil could've dropped her at any second, but she wanted Silhouette to suffer first. Claws screamed "Don't hurt her anymore!" "YEAH!" agreed Shock. But G-Sil couldn't be negotiated with. If you listened closely, you could hear Silhouette's limbs creaking. She truly was in pain. And no one knew what might happen next........

Stay tuned for Part 5!!!!!!!!!!
(FC's belong to original owners!)
posted by shadowknuxgirl
Name: Natsumi
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't home often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.

Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" fan chara. And she still is. But she is also a fan chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"

Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
~Have a good Christmas, everybody!
(To the tune of "Jingle Bells")
Madjin: *wearing a Santa Claus hat*
Drexel: *Holding a present*
Chris: *wearing a star on his nose and covered in clorful lights*
Madjin: Chris is such a hoe.
Chris: Well, Madjin is so gay!
Drexel: And I think you all should know... Madjin's too scared to pray!
Chris & Madjin: HA HA HA!
Madjin: * frustrated* I'm not gonna say one thing.
Drexel: Are you also scared of the light?
Madjin: I don't think you should say that if you want to live tonight!
Chris: OOOOHH, You're life fails!
Drexel: Yes, he fails!
Madjin: I've had enough today!
Drexel: But It's fun to tease you so... Will I listen? Naaaaayyy!!
I jumped up and gasped. I was in my bed. It was a dream. "Freaky dream," I said to myself. it was only 10:58 AM, and I was sleeping. I jumped out of my tree.
I wondered if that masked man with the honey badger face had been doing anything crazy or senseless. Of course, I couldn't assume that he actually had a honey badger face, because that was a dream. I flew over a cemetery, then stopped. I flew down.
In front of one of a tomb stone that said, "Chris the Mechahog 2011-2011", There was a big hole in the ground. I had not the slightest idea of wh0 he was. I then saw a rustle in a bush. I ran...
continue reading...
"Emily don't get scared."Shane said."Shut up Shane like that will work!"The grey cat said."Penny trust me!" Shane said."Penny? Penny is her name? Yes!""How can I Shane!"Penny said."Because it works alot!"Shane said."Emily please help your friends! Tell us the truth, were is Jisseca!"Shane said in the most sweet voice."What are you talking about!?"Emily said who is now scared."Don't play stupid Emily! Now tell us or else!" Penny said."Wtf are you talking about!?"Emily said."Penny, Shane stop your work is done for now."a blue hedehog said in the sweetis voice."AJ? Sonic? No AJ's voice is soft...
continue reading...
The air seemed damped as I layed myself onto the gleaming grass. I watched as Fumiko chased a fragile little butterfly. I was the gardian of Fumiko ever sence her father died. My ear twitched when a drop of water dropped onto my ear. Apperantly Fumiko jumpped into the pool because Shippô popped out of no where and pushed her in.
I got up and pushed Shippô in for fun, but when I did he grabbed onto my tail and we both fell. "Hey?! Why'd 'ya push me?!" "Because I felt like it, problem?" I climbed out of the lake and layed back onto the grass. "That's the only reason I grabbed onto your tail,...
continue reading...
posted by aly001
1.)Star likes the color pink!
2.)She likes wolfs and dogs!
3.)She has a brother that is 19 years old!
4.)Likes music.
5.)Has a crush on tails.
6.)Has a pet wolfdog mix.
7.)Is always there for her friends!
8.)She wets her bed because she has bad dreams.
9.)She is sometimes a crybaby.
10.)Loves to sing, alot!
11.)Is Shock's best friend.
12.)Loves to wach the news.
13.)Loves to read the news paper.
14.)Loves to read books.
15.)Loves the color blue.
16.)Hugs alot of ppl that she knows.
17.)Hates ppl that she dose it knows.
18.)She is always happy.
19.)Feels safe with Shock & Emily
20.)For a little girl she can kick ass.
21.)She loves her pet wolfdog mix
22.)Star looks up to shock as a brother.
The chaos emeralds slowly floated up and started glowing. Shadow and Sonic put their hands into fists and they closed their eyes. The emeralds started sping in a circle. Sonic and Shadow were suddenly warped to outer space. They were in their super forms. They saw Chris punching and kicking Madjin. Madjin was struggling to get away, but Chris would not give in. Chris kicked Madjin very hard in the spot 'where it counts'. "And I said, NO MORE KIDS FOR YOU!" Chris shouted. "We have to stop him! He's beating that guy up!" Sonic said. "But wait, he's the good-" Shadow tried to finish his sentence,...
continue reading...