For those that don’t know, “In Another World: Mob Suez” is an else-world non-cannon story that takes people’s characters and puts them into the real world. The main character of this story is Dave Hyatt, who a side-character in the regular stories I usually make. People’s origins are tweaked, and people live in a semi-civilian-based life.
I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to cancel the story.
There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and creativity this brought around, the more I look at this story, the more it sounds like some cliché teenage anime plot, and you all know how I feel about anime.
The point of the story was that the members of the club would affect the story; its progression, its characters, everything. People could send in a profile of their character, what role they wanted their character to be a part of, and what they wanted to have happen with that character.
To say the least, many of these characters were girls. I would blame everyone except me for this, but that’s not the case. I had no less than three female characters of my own that were potential love-interests for Dave, and two that were actively pursued. I will note that I planned to have one leave for a while, and one rejects him early in the story, but there were still two other potential love interests aside from that, one that was owned by me, and one owned by Rawrmonster123, who has left the community.
It wasn’t just that there were too many love-interests, but that the majority of characters were girls. I would not be able to balance this.
This wasn’t the only issue as I found trying to please everyone’s initial requests (including love-lives) difficult. There were unanswered plot-threads that were not going to go anywhere. It wasn’t a mess quite yet but it would become one. One particular plot-hole that bothered me was that an earthquake goes off and the police never appear about it. This was pretty stupid.
I quite enjoyed MANY things about this story, and I had a surprise about Rin and Ira (Virus) that was going to be revealed, but I simply don’t think the story can stand long enough for that.
Not to mention there is literally NO interaction from people when it comes to how the story will play out, and we all know why that is.
Those who were reading it have vanish save a very tiny amount. I simply don’t think this story is worth continuing, at least not right now. MAYBE in the future I’ll go back and fix it all but not right now.
Sorry to let down whoever might read this but them’s the breaks.
God Bless,
Eat Pie and Prosper
I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to cancel the story.
There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and creativity this brought around, the more I look at this story, the more it sounds like some cliché teenage anime plot, and you all know how I feel about anime.
The point of the story was that the members of the club would affect the story; its progression, its characters, everything. People could send in a profile of their character, what role they wanted their character to be a part of, and what they wanted to have happen with that character.
To say the least, many of these characters were girls. I would blame everyone except me for this, but that’s not the case. I had no less than three female characters of my own that were potential love-interests for Dave, and two that were actively pursued. I will note that I planned to have one leave for a while, and one rejects him early in the story, but there were still two other potential love interests aside from that, one that was owned by me, and one owned by Rawrmonster123, who has left the community.
It wasn’t just that there were too many love-interests, but that the majority of characters were girls. I would not be able to balance this.
This wasn’t the only issue as I found trying to please everyone’s initial requests (including love-lives) difficult. There were unanswered plot-threads that were not going to go anywhere. It wasn’t a mess quite yet but it would become one. One particular plot-hole that bothered me was that an earthquake goes off and the police never appear about it. This was pretty stupid.
I quite enjoyed MANY things about this story, and I had a surprise about Rin and Ira (Virus) that was going to be revealed, but I simply don’t think the story can stand long enough for that.
Not to mention there is literally NO interaction from people when it comes to how the story will play out, and we all know why that is.
Those who were reading it have vanish save a very tiny amount. I simply don’t think this story is worth continuing, at least not right now. MAYBE in the future I’ll go back and fix it all but not right now.
Sorry to let down whoever might read this but them’s the breaks.
God Bless,
Eat Pie and Prosper
Well...basicly i got bored and i desided 2 make something 4 Riley! its just going 2 b why i made him and stuff
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Riley is from the Sol Dimention like Ember and her oldest sister Nova. When Ember and Riley were little they played togather all the time. So when Ember "died" he didnt belive it and has been looking for her sence. He got word that a red cat has been seen in the Mobius Dimention and found a way to get there. He STILL hasnt found her but refuses to stop looking. So now hes somewhere in Mobius looking for Ember.
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Small? yes...but i was feeling lazy...so i WILL make a story version soon
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Riley is from the Sol Dimention like Ember and her oldest sister Nova. When Ember and Riley were little they played togather all the time. So when Ember "died" he didnt belive it and has been looking for her sence. He got word that a red cat has been seen in the Mobius Dimention and found a way to get there. He STILL hasnt found her but refuses to stop looking. So now hes somewhere in Mobius looking for Ember.
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Small? yes...but i was feeling lazy...so i WILL make a story version soon
Sandi:
Ribbon broke my heart,
I knew he would.
So what is he going to do?
I'd know if I could...
Gizbin:
SHUT IMBECILES, I'VE HEARD ENOUGH.
Killerpose:
People call me the terror.
People call me the selfish.
People call me the nasty.
People call me the cruel.
People call me the idiot.
People call me the stupid.
People call me the crazy.
People call me the annoying.
People call me the long lasting.
People call me the fishy.
People call me the curious.
People call me the laugh.
People call me the cheesy.
People call me the stubborn.
People call-
Everyone: SHUT IT!!
Ribbon broke my heart,
I knew he would.
So what is he going to do?
I'd know if I could...
Gizbin:
SHUT IMBECILES, I'VE HEARD ENOUGH.
Killerpose:
People call me the terror.
People call me the selfish.
People call me the nasty.
People call me the cruel.
People call me the idiot.
People call me the stupid.
People call me the crazy.
People call me the annoying.
People call me the long lasting.
People call me the fishy.
People call me the curious.
People call me the laugh.
People call me the cheesy.
People call me the stubborn.
People call-
Everyone: SHUT IT!!
Welcome Everybody to my Chatroom, for those who are just finding this im making a Video of me playing Slender with Commentary. Okay let me Explain all the other details. im going to be talking to you all before the "Action" and that will be at 12:00 A.M. Central Time.I will be recording a my best friend's house so you will be hearing him in the background. So untill i make the Video or Videos (it depends on my nerves after the first video) Please don't freak me out because if i get scared i will scream, and im guessing thats what you want(XD) OH I almost forgot to mention this if you want to thank someone for (in a way) starting this Thank TakTheFox, when he made the Slender RP he encouraged me to watch videos of other people playing the acursed game which led to this whole thing!
Oh here is my youtube account name so you can know where to go: Uberko2424
anyways feel free to talk to me and to each other.
Oh here is my youtube account name so you can know where to go: Uberko2424
anyways feel free to talk to me and to each other.
Blood's Past
Chapter One:
T.D.
Ten year old Miles Blood Prowler wakes up and walks downstairs to eat breakfast "Good Morning Honey" said Erica Prowler (Miles Mom) "Morning mom!" said Miles happily, "where is dad?" "Oh your dad went to work early this morning" Zoey walks down stairs and tackles Miles playfully and the two go outside and play. Erica goes to the T.V. and turns it on then the news comes on "I have just received that Dr. Robotnik has attacked the robot manufactureing factory" an explotion is heard "Oh no thats where West works!" said Erica "there are survivors here is a list of names" "West Prowler! Kids get in the car now" "Okay mom" said Zoey and Miles,
Two Hours Later...
"It was Dr. Robotnik! he has gone insaine" said West weakly "Miles here i grabed this for you" West hands Miles a small computer "What is this dad?" West coughs "its a computer with a voice i call it T.D."
Chapter One:
T.D.
Ten year old Miles Blood Prowler wakes up and walks downstairs to eat breakfast "Good Morning Honey" said Erica Prowler (Miles Mom) "Morning mom!" said Miles happily, "where is dad?" "Oh your dad went to work early this morning" Zoey walks down stairs and tackles Miles playfully and the two go outside and play. Erica goes to the T.V. and turns it on then the news comes on "I have just received that Dr. Robotnik has attacked the robot manufactureing factory" an explotion is heard "Oh no thats where West works!" said Erica "there are survivors here is a list of names" "West Prowler! Kids get in the car now" "Okay mom" said Zoey and Miles,
Two Hours Later...
"It was Dr. Robotnik! he has gone insaine" said West weakly "Miles here i grabed this for you" West hands Miles a small computer "What is this dad?" West coughs "its a computer with a voice i call it T.D."