Hi guys making a little story on the kane chronicles. My first story im posting on a actually website so take it easy on my if its horrible lol :D.
I was walking along a pathway. Hi, I’m Timmy, and I’m 14 years old, and I’m an orphan. Except I don’t go to an orphanage I stay on the streets. Wondering how I get my food? Usually my friend gives me his scrap’s. I was walking to the Brooklyn museum. I wanted to go see the mummy’s I loved Egyptian stuff such as staff’s, mummy’s, wand’s, you know Egyptian stuff. I stayed there for hours until it finally got dark. When it got dark I would usually walk around in the streets. I always had my warm fuzzy coat on to not be cold. Sometimes I go to the top of people’s houses to sit next to the chimney if it’s really cold. I have unusual feelings sometimes though like when I’m near this house, or if I’m reading about Horus the Egyptian god I feel alive, But usually I think I’m just a bit weird cause everybody’s weird In their own way. One day I was walking to the Brooklyn museum, and when I got there a monster jumped out of nowhere! Then I recognized it, it was Ammit the Devourer of the Dead. Ammit jumped at me, and cut my arms. I fell backwards and looked at them they were bleeding badly. Then Ammit was in for the final strike when a kid my age jumped out behind me, and sliced his head off. Then I just passed out. When I opened my eyes I saw that I was in a fairly large room. With a stereo, a closet, and CD’s, But the closet had unusual clothes they were linen clothes. That had unusual shoes, but I wore them anyways nothing else to wear. I opened my door, and went downstairs where a baboon was lying on a couch sleeping. I quietly stepped over to the glass window, and looked in the pool. There was a pink alligator in the pool just laying there like it was having fun. I heard footsteps coming so then I hid. I looked around the corner, and it was a little kid maybe about nine. He was heading straight toward me. So I tried to hide somewhere else until he saw me. He screamed “ROBBER! ROBBER! A PERSON IS IN THE HOUSE!” I winced when he said robber, but I do deserve it. I heard people running down stairs with staffs. I said “What are the staffs for?” A girl about my age and was pretty cute said “To torture you until you tell us why you’re here!” suddenly she didn’t seem cute anymore, but she had a little British accent. She said something then I had instant pain in my chest. She said “Why are you here!” I yelled “STOP please!” But she said something else, and it was worse. I started yelling louder and louder. Until a boy came down that looked about one more year older than me said “SADIE! STOP! I found him getting attacked by Ammit! He’s new! He doesn’t know where he is!” The Girl named Sadie said “Oh my gods, I’m sorry!” She said something again, and the pain just went down a bit, but some of it was still there. I held my chest for a bit then got up. The boy rushed over, and helped me up. My sleeve went up, and I looked at my marks from Ammit. They were bleeding still and puss was coming out. The girl said “Quick! Get a healer down here he’s been poisoned!” I started falling. I fell to the ground hard. I was trying not to pass out. I saw a girl come, and start saying words that I couldn’t understand. Her hands started glowing then I passed out. When I woke it was the middle of the day. I still had the same clothes on I had when I changed. A girl was sitting at my bedside it was Sadie. She said “Hey sorry for the torture spell on you. It’s just that were in some hard time’s and I don’t want anybody here getting hurt.” I said “I understand its fine.” I got out of my very comfortable bed, and Sadie helped me downstairs. When we got down there everybody was having some breakfast. The boy who helped me out from getting killed got me a chair to sit in. I said “Thanks’.” When I sat down everybody was looking at me. I looked down avoiding there eye’s. I pulled up my sleeve and saw the mark. It was all purple around it with bruises. Then I pulled it up quickly so no one could see it. When I was done getting my breakfast the boy said “Good morning guys! It looks like we got a new guy here so let’s all in introduce ourselves. Sadie you’re first. Sadie stood up and said “Hello my name is Sadie Kane, and the god I’m following is Isis.” I said “Hello Sadie.” Then it went to a little kid who was nine. He said “Hello my name is Felix I’ m still think of who I should follow but I love penguins!” Then it went all the way down to the boy that helped me he said “Hello, my name is Carter Kane I’m taking the path of Horus.” I said “It’s great meeting you all and such, and Carter thank you for saving me.” He said “Of course I wouldn’t just let you die right there and then.” I said “So what are we doing after breakfast?” Carter said “Well training after my class you to Sadie’s.” I said “Ok.” After breakfast Carter took me to a huge room. There we trained on fighting on shabti. You could solve it any way you wanted. Let’s start out when class first started. Carter led me to a huge room kind of like a basketball court. Carter said “In my class I give you a problem, and you can do anything to solve it.” I said “Can I have a sword?” he said “here I’ll let you use my crook and flail.” I said “Thanks!” Then it began. Felix for some weird reason used 5 penguins to beat up the shabti. A girl named Alyssa whose following the path of Geb. She just touched the shabti, and it kept missing her. A boy named Julian whose following the path of Horus charged with a glowing fist and punched the shabti and it broke into a million pieces. I charged at it and thought of my mother dying and that made me angry I started seeing me glowing and growing bigger until I was 50 feet high and smashing the shabti into bits. When I was out of my form I was a bit dizzy but I was alright. When I looked at everyone they were staring at me so I just smiled and said “I think I went way too hard on it.” Then Carter said “Timmy that was the best magic I’ve ever seen! Walt wasn’t amazing as that!”
I was walking along a pathway. Hi, I’m Timmy, and I’m 14 years old, and I’m an orphan. Except I don’t go to an orphanage I stay on the streets. Wondering how I get my food? Usually my friend gives me his scrap’s. I was walking to the Brooklyn museum. I wanted to go see the mummy’s I loved Egyptian stuff such as staff’s, mummy’s, wand’s, you know Egyptian stuff. I stayed there for hours until it finally got dark. When it got dark I would usually walk around in the streets. I always had my warm fuzzy coat on to not be cold. Sometimes I go to the top of people’s houses to sit next to the chimney if it’s really cold. I have unusual feelings sometimes though like when I’m near this house, or if I’m reading about Horus the Egyptian god I feel alive, But usually I think I’m just a bit weird cause everybody’s weird In their own way. One day I was walking to the Brooklyn museum, and when I got there a monster jumped out of nowhere! Then I recognized it, it was Ammit the Devourer of the Dead. Ammit jumped at me, and cut my arms. I fell backwards and looked at them they were bleeding badly. Then Ammit was in for the final strike when a kid my age jumped out behind me, and sliced his head off. Then I just passed out. When I opened my eyes I saw that I was in a fairly large room. With a stereo, a closet, and CD’s, But the closet had unusual clothes they were linen clothes. That had unusual shoes, but I wore them anyways nothing else to wear. I opened my door, and went downstairs where a baboon was lying on a couch sleeping. I quietly stepped over to the glass window, and looked in the pool. There was a pink alligator in the pool just laying there like it was having fun. I heard footsteps coming so then I hid. I looked around the corner, and it was a little kid maybe about nine. He was heading straight toward me. So I tried to hide somewhere else until he saw me. He screamed “ROBBER! ROBBER! A PERSON IS IN THE HOUSE!” I winced when he said robber, but I do deserve it. I heard people running down stairs with staffs. I said “What are the staffs for?” A girl about my age and was pretty cute said “To torture you until you tell us why you’re here!” suddenly she didn’t seem cute anymore, but she had a little British accent. She said something then I had instant pain in my chest. She said “Why are you here!” I yelled “STOP please!” But she said something else, and it was worse. I started yelling louder and louder. Until a boy came down that looked about one more year older than me said “SADIE! STOP! I found him getting attacked by Ammit! He’s new! He doesn’t know where he is!” The Girl named Sadie said “Oh my gods, I’m sorry!” She said something again, and the pain just went down a bit, but some of it was still there. I held my chest for a bit then got up. The boy rushed over, and helped me up. My sleeve went up, and I looked at my marks from Ammit. They were bleeding still and puss was coming out. The girl said “Quick! Get a healer down here he’s been poisoned!” I started falling. I fell to the ground hard. I was trying not to pass out. I saw a girl come, and start saying words that I couldn’t understand. Her hands started glowing then I passed out. When I woke it was the middle of the day. I still had the same clothes on I had when I changed. A girl was sitting at my bedside it was Sadie. She said “Hey sorry for the torture spell on you. It’s just that were in some hard time’s and I don’t want anybody here getting hurt.” I said “I understand its fine.” I got out of my very comfortable bed, and Sadie helped me downstairs. When we got down there everybody was having some breakfast. The boy who helped me out from getting killed got me a chair to sit in. I said “Thanks’.” When I sat down everybody was looking at me. I looked down avoiding there eye’s. I pulled up my sleeve and saw the mark. It was all purple around it with bruises. Then I pulled it up quickly so no one could see it. When I was done getting my breakfast the boy said “Good morning guys! It looks like we got a new guy here so let’s all in introduce ourselves. Sadie you’re first. Sadie stood up and said “Hello my name is Sadie Kane, and the god I’m following is Isis.” I said “Hello Sadie.” Then it went to a little kid who was nine. He said “Hello my name is Felix I’ m still think of who I should follow but I love penguins!” Then it went all the way down to the boy that helped me he said “Hello, my name is Carter Kane I’m taking the path of Horus.” I said “It’s great meeting you all and such, and Carter thank you for saving me.” He said “Of course I wouldn’t just let you die right there and then.” I said “So what are we doing after breakfast?” Carter said “Well training after my class you to Sadie’s.” I said “Ok.” After breakfast Carter took me to a huge room. There we trained on fighting on shabti. You could solve it any way you wanted. Let’s start out when class first started. Carter led me to a huge room kind of like a basketball court. Carter said “In my class I give you a problem, and you can do anything to solve it.” I said “Can I have a sword?” he said “here I’ll let you use my crook and flail.” I said “Thanks!” Then it began. Felix for some weird reason used 5 penguins to beat up the shabti. A girl named Alyssa whose following the path of Geb. She just touched the shabti, and it kept missing her. A boy named Julian whose following the path of Horus charged with a glowing fist and punched the shabti and it broke into a million pieces. I charged at it and thought of my mother dying and that made me angry I started seeing me glowing and growing bigger until I was 50 feet high and smashing the shabti into bits. When I was out of my form I was a bit dizzy but I was alright. When I looked at everyone they were staring at me so I just smiled and said “I think I went way too hard on it.” Then Carter said “Timmy that was the best magic I’ve ever seen! Walt wasn’t amazing as that!”
