Hi! Sorry this took so long. School has been hectic. Review please. And if you could pass this to your friends, fans on fanpop, etc. that would be great! I'm currently writing chappie 6 so, yeah. Tell me your opinions of how the story is going so far:D Anyway... on with chapter 2!!!!!!!
Chapter 2
I awoke to a sunny, cloudless morning. Edward was still there. His body showing like thousands of diamonds. "Good morning"., he said. "Did you sleep well"? I yawned and streched. "Yes I did". Edward bent down to kiss me. I wrapped my arms around his neck. "I love you"., he whispered. "I love you too. So what do you want to do today"?, I asked. "I have to hunt. Alice was thinking about you and her doing some wedding stuff today"., he said grinning. I groaned. "Can't you tell her I'm sick"? Edward was still grinning. "She'll have seen you asking me". "This will be torture".,I said. The whole day followed with me trying on veils, shoes, garters, and things I couldn't identify. Alice had virtually decided on everything but, she stilll wanted me to try on the things she had decided on with the dress. It was getting late so, we had decided that I would try on everything tomorrow. "Edward won't be able to come tonight. He has to help Carlisle with a surgery. He says he's sorry and he loves you"., Alice said. "Thanks Alice'".,I replied. Alice left. "Bella, said Charlie, I have to go to Port Angeles. More animal attacks up there. I thought I'd help out. I probably won't be back till later". "Ok Dad. See you later". After Charlie left, I went up to my room and picked up Wuthering Heights for the 140th time. I sunk into my reading chair and began to read. By the time I was on the 6th chapter, I looked up. Someone was in the window. "Edward"?, I called out. "You're supposed to be helping Carlisle. Is something wrong"? Just then, the figure came into view. It wasn't Edward. "Hey Bella"., James said. "Miss me"?
So, what do you think? Pretty good cliffhanger huh? I thought so myself. FYI: I'll try to update as soon as I can but, I won't promise anything. Remember to review too. I love all of my fans! I'll try to get chapter 3 in tommorrow.
Chapter 2
I awoke to a sunny, cloudless morning. Edward was still there. His body showing like thousands of diamonds. "Good morning"., he said. "Did you sleep well"? I yawned and streched. "Yes I did". Edward bent down to kiss me. I wrapped my arms around his neck. "I love you"., he whispered. "I love you too. So what do you want to do today"?, I asked. "I have to hunt. Alice was thinking about you and her doing some wedding stuff today"., he said grinning. I groaned. "Can't you tell her I'm sick"? Edward was still grinning. "She'll have seen you asking me". "This will be torture".,I said. The whole day followed with me trying on veils, shoes, garters, and things I couldn't identify. Alice had virtually decided on everything but, she stilll wanted me to try on the things she had decided on with the dress. It was getting late so, we had decided that I would try on everything tomorrow. "Edward won't be able to come tonight. He has to help Carlisle with a surgery. He says he's sorry and he loves you"., Alice said. "Thanks Alice'".,I replied. Alice left. "Bella, said Charlie, I have to go to Port Angeles. More animal attacks up there. I thought I'd help out. I probably won't be back till later". "Ok Dad. See you later". After Charlie left, I went up to my room and picked up Wuthering Heights for the 140th time. I sunk into my reading chair and began to read. By the time I was on the 6th chapter, I looked up. Someone was in the window. "Edward"?, I called out. "You're supposed to be helping Carlisle. Is something wrong"? Just then, the figure came into view. It wasn't Edward. "Hey Bella"., James said. "Miss me"?
So, what do you think? Pretty good cliffhanger huh? I thought so myself. FYI: I'll try to update as soon as I can but, I won't promise anything. Remember to review too. I love all of my fans! I'll try to get chapter 3 in tommorrow.
Hi! Sorry about the short chapter. I had homework. There will bo more Edward in this chapter too! On with the story!
Chapter 6 pt 2
I laughed. "I missed you so much". "I missed you too Bella. So, what do you want to do today? There's a thunderstorm coming. Do you want to play ball?" "Ok". Just then, Charlie came down the stairs. He was frowning. Edward looked surprised. "What happened Dad?", I asked. "Ben Matthews' body was found by the river today. It looked like he was dead for three hours untill they found him. All the blood was drained from his body." "Is it alright if I go to Edward's for a few hours"? "Okay. But be careful".
Sorry about the chapter again. My mom told me to get off the computer. I will finish the chapter tomorrow. I swear and if I'm lying, may I get a paper cut in front of Jasper.
Chapter 6 pt 2
I laughed. "I missed you so much". "I missed you too Bella. So, what do you want to do today? There's a thunderstorm coming. Do you want to play ball?" "Ok". Just then, Charlie came down the stairs. He was frowning. Edward looked surprised. "What happened Dad?", I asked. "Ben Matthews' body was found by the river today. It looked like he was dead for three hours untill they found him. All the blood was drained from his body." "Is it alright if I go to Edward's for a few hours"? "Okay. But be careful".
Sorry about the chapter again. My mom told me to get off the computer. I will finish the chapter tomorrow. I swear and if I'm lying, may I get a paper cut in front of Jasper.
tomorrow i will update that i will promise .
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the.
previous
is
when
bella
is
already
at
the
clearing
where
do
you
think
the
cullens
are
i
do
not
own
twilight
and
the
characters
dont
worry
will
not
break
this
promise
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