I felt like I was on fire, but the pain was drowsed by bigger pain, me loosing Mark. He meant the world to me. He did trying to protect me. He should of just ran, I think I could take them.
I curled in a ball, and let the pain have me. Let the pain slowly eat me alive.

I rather deal with the pain from being burned, than the pain of realizing Mark was gone. What was the word Alice used to describe pairs of vampires?
Mates? Yeah it was mates. Mark was my mate. He died for me.
I couldn't hold back the trees. The pain surrounded my like water, drowsing me in it. The pain was overwhelming. I bit my lip. I just wanted Mark alive. But that was never going to happen. Just when he got the money and the guts to propose, he.. dies.
For me. He wouldn't want me to be suffering like this, lifeless. He would want me to alive, to act like i usually did. Not some zombie.

The pain was eating me ALIVE. Why didn't Bella stop the fire? Were they burning me on purpose? Or was those vampires that got to us, burning me. I just hope it would end soon. The pain grew and grew. Would it ever end?

I felt like I've been burning for DAYS. But some time later, I felt the pain die down. And my heart sped up.
I grew frantic, what was happening to me? The pain drained from my legs and fingers. Moving like ants towards the cake. The heat and pain increased in my chest, in my heart. I felt the pain die down some, then my heart stopped.
Stopped?
I continued breathing, but I had no heart beat.
I could feel I was still in a ball. I opened my eyes to see my arms, but there was a crack inbetween them. I peeked out and saw Bella pacing.