Kellan Lutz and Elizabeth Reaser in Vancouver

The Character


Name: Marcus

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: Can sense relationships

About Them: Marcus was once one of the prominent leaders of the Volturi in Volterra, Italy. He has the ability to sense relationships and his former wife who is now deceased, Didyme, had the ability to make others happy. After the sudden and shocking death of Didyme Marcus became extremely apathetic and disinterested in life. As a result he voted against destroying little Renesmee in an 'almost bored fashion' without so much as a glance to the Cullens and their allies. Marcus has jett black hair with the fiery red...

1) We never get to hear about Edward's bachelor party, and did Alice even plan a bachelorette party for Bella?

2) There was not enough character development for the Denali clan. I felt like they were just empty, filler-characters to give the Cullens allies later on in the book.

3) The story of the 'immortal children' was just randomly thrown into the story at the wrong time and felt out of place. I would have rather learnt more about the Denali clan than their deceased mother.

4) I absolutely loved the wedding ceremony that Alice planned (Go Team Alice!) and in my head, the dresses, decorations,...

Thanks for all the replies, theyre really appricieted. I have the next installment (which is in JACOBs POV =]) already written out and will post it as quick as possible. Thanks again =]
My whole body ached to be with her. My anxiety must have been showing because even without Jasper present Alice leapt lightly to my side and thought softly towards me.
"Dont worry the DOGS" she thought fiercly "will be gone soon and you can see Bella." she added hoping to placate me.
I sent Bella a quick text, i knew how bad anxiety was for her.
"Problems with dogs. Will be late. Love you, E" i smiled knowing that...

Chapter 2- The Doctor

It was a ten minute drive to the hospital in Columbus, I sat and stared out the window of my father's farming truck that was for emergencies only. My mother had stayed at home to finish dinner and tend to the younger children.

My father carried me inside and sat me down on one of the hard wooden chairs. The emergency room was empty apart from the two of us and a mother and her screaming infant. I tried to focus my thoughts on something other than the horrible pain in my leg. I thought about the grand adventures Tom, Lily and I had gone on in the past few days. My father...

Before I could walk over to my door Alice burst in, always full of too much enthusiasm.
“You will not believe what Edward told me.” She immediately launched into a conversation without so much as a ‘hello’. I was right to say it was about the wedding. “I was just on the internet browsing for flowers when he walks in a little earlier than usual. I knew he was going hunting with Emmett and Jasper so it didn’t throw me.”
I nodded and smiled as she spoke. It was best not to say anything when Alice was speaking or you got an evil glare you never thought someone as innocent looking as...

"Yes thats me" Edward replied "well we were just wondering can we get some help" she said.While walking in. "what can i do for you-"

"My name is jessica and this is justin,Im half- vampire my father is Laurent."

Just then we all froze.Did she come avenge us or the pack?Did she want to take kill my daughter and justin will take out Jacob?

"Dont worry i just came to see if that carlisle would except us into his coven."

"of course we will except both of you." "Thank you so much oh bella may i see nessie and nessa?"

"how do you know our names" i asked "Well thats part of my talent it cames from...

End of Chapter 1:

I jumped off of the balcony, followed by Rosalie.
"You can't even control your wife," she said to me.
"I'm not going to get hurt. Besides, Emmett should've seen it coming."
Then I noticed Jasper was following us.
"Jasper, I doubt we'll need you," I said.
"Alice sent me. None of you might need me, but Jacob does."
Rose and I looked at each other. Jacob thinks we saved Bella. If he finds out Bella is a vampire, he may attack at any moment. Just what we need, an angry wolf pack attacking us and breaking their own treaty.
All because of Jacob.

2. HUH?
Jacob


I was running through the...