"Goodnight, Barley," said Ravenpaw.
"Sweet dreams," said Barley.
Ravenpaw drifted off into sleep. He found himself in a strange and dark place. Two glowing eyes were staring at him. A cat walked out that Ravenpaw reconized. That scar, that chip in his ear, that tabby pelt, it was Tigerstar!
"T-Tigerstar, w-what are yo-you doing here?" said Ravenpaw.
"Oh, Ravenpaw my favorite apprentice," said Tigerstar,"Turns out our little secret got out, remember what I told you."
"Y-You told me that you would kill me if I told," said Ravenpaw,"But I didn't tell Bluestar, Firestar did."
"Yes, but someone told Firestar," said Tigerstar," And he thought that if he ran away he would get away with it." He unsheathed his claws.
"Y-You can't really hurt me, this is a dream," said Ravenpaw.
"Oh, think again," said Tigerstar. He jumped on Ravenpaw and pinned him. "Our little secret," he whispered and bit Ravenpaw's neck.
"Sweet dreams," said Barley.
Ravenpaw drifted off into sleep. He found himself in a strange and dark place. Two glowing eyes were staring at him. A cat walked out that Ravenpaw reconized. That scar, that chip in his ear, that tabby pelt, it was Tigerstar!
"T-Tigerstar, w-what are yo-you doing here?" said Ravenpaw.
"Oh, Ravenpaw my favorite apprentice," said Tigerstar,"Turns out our little secret got out, remember what I told you."
"Y-You told me that you would kill me if I told," said Ravenpaw,"But I didn't tell Bluestar, Firestar did."
"Yes, but someone told Firestar," said Tigerstar," And he thought that if he ran away he would get away with it." He unsheathed his claws.
"Y-You can't really hurt me, this is a dream," said Ravenpaw.
"Oh, think again," said Tigerstar. He jumped on Ravenpaw and pinned him. "Our little secret," he whispered and bit Ravenpaw's neck.
I mean seriously. People think Cinderpelt was Fireheart's mate or crush at one point. Fireheart was Cinderpelt's mentor before she hurt her leg. They did not like each other in that way. I am going to list a few reasons why they could not be together.
1. Fireheart was and is to old for her.
2. Fireheart liked Sandstorm.
3. Cinderpelt became a medicine cat.
So yes, those are some reasons. I hope I did not offend anyone. This is just my opinion.
Please comment if you agree with me:)
~Mousetuft
1. Fireheart was and is to old for her.
2. Fireheart liked Sandstorm.
3. Cinderpelt became a medicine cat.
So yes, those are some reasons. I hope I did not offend anyone. This is just my opinion.
Please comment if you agree with me:)
~Mousetuft
Ok, this is my first fan-fiction, no negative commments plz.
"Lock' in teh poool," Rumblfoot sadii.
"I seee it, it;s a profecy, Hollylaf sad.
"FBrumble will concour Fir and Bamble and blud will ran throug thee 4rest," Hollylaf resighted.
"Thee poo haz spoooken." Gayflyht said.
"Tall teh medisin cat! A KNEW HERU WILL BE BURN!" Rumblfuut shittad.
Add a hereo wass burned...
Teh thyme of Brumble haz cume.
"Lock' in teh poool," Rumblfoot sadii.
"I seee it, it;s a profecy, Hollylaf sad.
"FBrumble will concour Fir and Bamble and blud will ran throug thee 4rest," Hollylaf resighted.
"Thee poo haz spoooken." Gayflyht said.
"Tall teh medisin cat! A KNEW HERU WILL BE BURN!" Rumblfuut shittad.
Add a hereo wass burned...
Teh thyme of Brumble haz cume.
Hey, guys! It has been a while. So you are wondering...
- Why Miststar's story is not on fanpop anymore
- Why I have stopped posting chapters of Miststar's story
- Why I am not telling you about this here now
Well, I'm here to explain it now. I am NOT here to spoil the whole book. I will be giving you sneak peeks. and much more. The Prologue of Miststar's story will stay here. I am also posting the prologue of two new books:
- Into the clans
&
- Snowstar's destiny
Want to see more? Be a fan of this and comment that you want more sneak peeks. Thanks for reading. I hope you understand!
- Why Miststar's story is not on fanpop anymore
- Why I have stopped posting chapters of Miststar's story
- Why I am not telling you about this here now
Well, I'm here to explain it now. I am NOT here to spoil the whole book. I will be giving you sneak peeks. and much more. The Prologue of Miststar's story will stay here. I am also posting the prologue of two new books:
- Into the clans
&
- Snowstar's destiny
Want to see more? Be a fan of this and comment that you want more sneak peeks. Thanks for reading. I hope you understand!
I was tired so I went crazy and didn't do anything for grammar. Hehe...
Ok, this is my first fan-fiction, no negative comments please
"Look, in the pool," Rumblefoot said.
"I see it, its a prophecy," Hollyleaf said.
"Brumble will concour Fire and Bramble and blood will run through the forest," Hollyleaf recited.
"The pool has spoken!" Jayflight said.
"Tell the medicine cat! A NEW HERO WILL BE BORN!" Rumblefoot shouted.
And a hero was born....
Hope you enjoyed that grammar corrected version!
Ok, this is my first fan-fiction, no negative comments please
"Look, in the pool," Rumblefoot said.
"I see it, its a prophecy," Hollyleaf said.
"Brumble will concour Fire and Bramble and blood will run through the forest," Hollyleaf recited.
"The pool has spoken!" Jayflight said.
"Tell the medicine cat! A NEW HERO WILL BE BORN!" Rumblefoot shouted.
And a hero was born....
Hope you enjoyed that grammar corrected version!
The Warriors series is good for early teenagers, Especially
Cat fanatics it has fantasy elements, and something interesting happens each arc.HOWEVER,it's not good for little kids and those who are sensitive to blood, animal death and violence.
Darknightprincess says that it was a great series the grew up on
Goldfish the Furry said it should be 13 plus which I disagree
I think this book should be 9 plus.
MisakiBeans said that it's ok for teens but to violence for kids.
Binkyhorse said that it has good writing the violence is emotional y impactful, depends on the kid.
Cat fanatics it has fantasy elements, and something interesting happens each arc.HOWEVER,it's not good for little kids and those who are sensitive to blood, animal death and violence.
Darknightprincess says that it was a great series the grew up on
Goldfish the Furry said it should be 13 plus which I disagree
I think this book should be 9 plus.
MisakiBeans said that it's ok for teens but to violence for kids.
Binkyhorse said that it has good writing the violence is emotional y impactful, depends on the kid.