Chapter 3 of my story. It does get a bit more dramatic and a wee bit violent/scary but it will make sense as I go further along.
1st chapter: link
2nd chapter: link
Chapter 3
Koda stood just outside his school, only 10 minutes until the first bell rang. He was thinking about what Jax told him with his dream. He knew he shouldn’t let it bother him but it kept picking at his conscience like a crow was picking at his heart.
It was just a drunken dream, he told himself.
His thoughts quickly turned to anger as he began to remember how his family always treated him.
An outcast, a screw up…
The bell rang causing him to come back from his angered mind and rush towards the door before he got into more trouble with his principle who also treated him as a screw up.
Racing through the hallways of his high school he managed to get to classroom door before it even closed until he felt a strong grip on his shoulder that made him stop in a dead freeze.
I’m screwed.
He turned to face his principle.
Principle Nakai was the same height as he was but his face and body was built like a warrior…and he looked like one too.
Straight black hair past his shoulders and braided in the traditional Indian style. His skin was a deep reddish brown, almost darker than Koda’s. Dressed in a business suit, which made him look like a CEO of a company instead of a school principle, he looked like he could take down any competitor without any mercy.
“Late again Koda,” he said in his deep Indian chief voice.
“Not really, I just made it to the door. I would have gotten in if you hadn’t stopped me.”
Oops, Koda grimaced, shouldn’t have said that.
Principle Nakai’s hand went from his shoulder to the back of his neck….hard.
“Ow! Damn not so hard man!” he shouted as Nakai dragged him to his office.
Koda was shoved into the office, nearly slamming into the chair in front of him. He was about to say something in protest but decided against it, he didn’t need more trouble.
Nakai sat across from him at his desk, staring straight through Koda’s face. His face had no expression except for maybe a hint of ‘you make me want to kill you’ in his eyes.
“You Koda, are not ready to be a man”
Oh great, not you too.
“In fact, I don’t think you’ll ever be ready”
“Thanks for the encouragement,”
“You’re expelled.”
Koda’s eyes went wide.
“What? Why?” he exclaimed.
He couldn’t believe he was getting kicked out for being nearly late for school.
“I have my reasons, now get out.”
“A little harsh aren’t we? I didn’t do anything wrong buddy.”
Koda was getting angry by the second.
“You’ve done plenty.”
Koda got out of his chair and started to walk out.
He stopped.
His breathing became hard and fast, feeling his rage start to overflow his senses.
Without thinking or even realizing his movements he turned sharply back to Nakai, grabbing the desk and flipping it over, toppling his principle.
Koda looked over at the desk wreckage, seeing Nakai on his back with blood dripping down his face from where his head hit his office chair. He was barely conscious.
“I had plenty of reasons to do that.”
As I said, a wee bit violent at the end but not too bad...will make sense later on with the character.
1st chapter: link
2nd chapter: link
Chapter 3
Koda stood just outside his school, only 10 minutes until the first bell rang. He was thinking about what Jax told him with his dream. He knew he shouldn’t let it bother him but it kept picking at his conscience like a crow was picking at his heart.
It was just a drunken dream, he told himself.
His thoughts quickly turned to anger as he began to remember how his family always treated him.
An outcast, a screw up…
The bell rang causing him to come back from his angered mind and rush towards the door before he got into more trouble with his principle who also treated him as a screw up.
Racing through the hallways of his high school he managed to get to classroom door before it even closed until he felt a strong grip on his shoulder that made him stop in a dead freeze.
I’m screwed.
He turned to face his principle.
Principle Nakai was the same height as he was but his face and body was built like a warrior…and he looked like one too.
Straight black hair past his shoulders and braided in the traditional Indian style. His skin was a deep reddish brown, almost darker than Koda’s. Dressed in a business suit, which made him look like a CEO of a company instead of a school principle, he looked like he could take down any competitor without any mercy.
“Late again Koda,” he said in his deep Indian chief voice.
“Not really, I just made it to the door. I would have gotten in if you hadn’t stopped me.”
Oops, Koda grimaced, shouldn’t have said that.
Principle Nakai’s hand went from his shoulder to the back of his neck….hard.
“Ow! Damn not so hard man!” he shouted as Nakai dragged him to his office.
Koda was shoved into the office, nearly slamming into the chair in front of him. He was about to say something in protest but decided against it, he didn’t need more trouble.
Nakai sat across from him at his desk, staring straight through Koda’s face. His face had no expression except for maybe a hint of ‘you make me want to kill you’ in his eyes.
“You Koda, are not ready to be a man”
Oh great, not you too.
“In fact, I don’t think you’ll ever be ready”
“Thanks for the encouragement,”
“You’re expelled.”
Koda’s eyes went wide.
“What? Why?” he exclaimed.
He couldn’t believe he was getting kicked out for being nearly late for school.
“I have my reasons, now get out.”
“A little harsh aren’t we? I didn’t do anything wrong buddy.”
Koda was getting angry by the second.
“You’ve done plenty.”
Koda got out of his chair and started to walk out.
He stopped.
His breathing became hard and fast, feeling his rage start to overflow his senses.
Without thinking or even realizing his movements he turned sharply back to Nakai, grabbing the desk and flipping it over, toppling his principle.
Koda looked over at the desk wreckage, seeing Nakai on his back with blood dripping down his face from where his head hit his office chair. He was barely conscious.
“I had plenty of reasons to do that.”
As I said, a wee bit violent at the end but not too bad...will make sense later on with the character.
Chapter 4: Sunny day
These were the days of peace and happiness.
Days were spent in peace and love.
Jack loved his job, even though he wasn't that patient with children who didn't pay attention on his classes.
But, he knew. He was doing something
important, something useful.
And most of all, he knew that his lovely wife
and beautiful little Gwenny were waiting for him
at home.
Dana was amazing at kitchen.
Jack loved everything she made.
One happy family they were.
Like every morning, Jack would go to work,
and Dana would make a breakfast and some coffee to wake them up.
Morning coffee was something wonderful
for both of them.
After having breakfast, Jack would drink coffee
with Dana, looking at her with the same gentle
and passionate love that never fades.
"I'll see you later, darling." - Jack said and
went to work.
Dana was still sitting and enjoying in the coffee,
watching through the window the sunlight.
She could smell the flowers that were growing
in the yard.
These were the days of peace and happiness.
Days were spent in peace and love.
Jack loved his job, even though he wasn't that patient with children who didn't pay attention on his classes.
But, he knew. He was doing something
important, something useful.
And most of all, he knew that his lovely wife
and beautiful little Gwenny were waiting for him
at home.
Dana was amazing at kitchen.
Jack loved everything she made.
One happy family they were.
Like every morning, Jack would go to work,
and Dana would make a breakfast and some coffee to wake them up.
Morning coffee was something wonderful
for both of them.
After having breakfast, Jack would drink coffee
with Dana, looking at her with the same gentle
and passionate love that never fades.
"I'll see you later, darling." - Jack said and
went to work.
Dana was still sitting and enjoying in the coffee,
watching through the window the sunlight.
She could smell the flowers that were growing
in the yard.
I lied
I lied to them and got caught
I confessed up and told them the truth
but they get more upset
I walk down the dark hallway
into my lonely empty room
I lie on my bed, thinking
I go to move and I can't
I fall down
pain shooting threw me
they walk in
saying I'm faking to make them feel bad
they walk out
leaving me on the ground
crying out in pain
I finally give up
crawl over to the closet
get the gun and cocked it
put it to my temple and pulled the trigger
life...filled with hate
I've chased down all my demons
but it wasn't enough
mistreated,misplaced,misunderstood.
I lied to them and got caught
I confessed up and told them the truth
but they get more upset
I walk down the dark hallway
into my lonely empty room
I lie on my bed, thinking
I go to move and I can't
I fall down
pain shooting threw me
they walk in
saying I'm faking to make them feel bad
they walk out
leaving me on the ground
crying out in pain
I finally give up
crawl over to the closet
get the gun and cocked it
put it to my temple and pulled the trigger
life...filled with hate
I've chased down all my demons
but it wasn't enough
mistreated,misplaced,misunderstood.
I keep my rhythm
I tap in time,
My music is my world
An angry beat inside.
It can crash like a waterfall
Or gradually trickle down,
It can make you laugh and cry
That powerful sound.
My headphones on my head
The lyrics flowing though,
Filling up my brain
Music is the food I chew.
It can be beautiful, strange
Crazy and cool,
I couldn't live without music
There's a style to suit all.
Music is like a brand new life
Jumping around your mind,
Each instrument that is played
Is an ingredient to find.
There's nothing quite like music
There's nothing quite like me,
You can always find a friend in music
Music will always be.
I tap in time,
My music is my world
An angry beat inside.
It can crash like a waterfall
Or gradually trickle down,
It can make you laugh and cry
That powerful sound.
My headphones on my head
The lyrics flowing though,
Filling up my brain
Music is the food I chew.
It can be beautiful, strange
Crazy and cool,
I couldn't live without music
There's a style to suit all.
Music is like a brand new life
Jumping around your mind,
Each instrument that is played
Is an ingredient to find.
There's nothing quite like music
There's nothing quite like me,
You can always find a friend in music
Music will always be.
The city of light was full of marchants and villagers. Elyon stood and gazed at them from the huge silver gate. And gurding the gate was two broad shouldered men, wearing bright white robes, that glowed from every angle.
"Excuse me?" the man with blonde hair asked. When Elyon took a shaky step forward, the men stared shocked at her.
"Elyon? What are you doing outside the city?" The man asked. Elyon took in a deep sharp breath and took another shaky step forward. She still hadnt noticed that the vilagers were watching silently.
"Elyon...my name is..?she smiled and fell into the darknes, fainted. The two gaurds rushed to her aid, and the vilagers erupted into a panicky uproar
"Quick take her to Lady Alexsis!" the man with darker ahir nodded, picked up Elyon and disapered.
"Leo? What the hell is going on? This is a bad sign," an old man closest to the alone guard asked.
"I dont know," he muttered looking up at the castle of light, "i really dont know,".
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"Excuse me?" the man with blonde hair asked. When Elyon took a shaky step forward, the men stared shocked at her.
"Elyon? What are you doing outside the city?" The man asked. Elyon took in a deep sharp breath and took another shaky step forward. She still hadnt noticed that the vilagers were watching silently.
"Elyon...my name is..?she smiled and fell into the darknes, fainted. The two gaurds rushed to her aid, and the vilagers erupted into a panicky uproar
"Quick take her to Lady Alexsis!" the man with darker ahir nodded, picked up Elyon and disapered.
"Leo? What the hell is going on? This is a bad sign," an old man closest to the alone guard asked.
"I dont know," he muttered looking up at the castle of light, "i really dont know,".
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