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posted by Insight357
I ran my hand through my tired hair. I fell asleep on the attic floor last night, after my outburst. I was tired, and ached everywhere. What a night it had been.
    I took my weight of the gurney I had been leaning on. I was at the hospital today, to help calm this schizophrenic man. I arrived here at seven this morning, and had to leave before noon. I couldn’t miss Lucy’s appointment at Social Services.
    It was eight-thirty now, and I was getting ready to meet my patient. He was in the emergency room, with the doctor. He’d had a nervous breakdown, and broken his arm.
    I usually didn’t work in hospitals, but the psychiatrist here was on vacation. They called me as a back up.
    The doctor poked his out the door, and motioned for me to come in. As I walked in, I saw the man was young. He could not have been over twenty-five. He sat on the white hospital bed. His head was in his hands, and he was shaking. He was blonde hair.
    The doctor sat in a side chair, I stood. It made me somewhat uncomfortable to have the doctor in here while I was speaking to the patient.
    “Hello,” I said to the man. He looked up, sweating. His eyes darted to the door, then back to me.
    “Hello,” he said shakily.
    “What’s your name?” I asked him. The doctor had left out many details.
    “Jared,” he replied.
    “Nice to meet you, Jared. I’m Dr. Demidov,” I said. His head jerked to the side, and he rocked slightly.
    “The-the voices…They say you are a bad, bad man,” Jared said shaking his head.
    “Do you believe them?” I asked.
    “They’re right, aren’t they?” Jared said, looking torn.
    “I don’t know. Why don’t you tell me?” To make the proper treatment, I needed his insight in the hallucinations.
    “I-I can’t! They will kill me if I don’t listen to them!” Jared had tears going down his face.
    “Where are they? Maybe I could hide you,” I kept working with him.
    “Right there,” he pointed toward the door.
    “Describe them for me,” I said. Was this man having visual hallucinations, too?
    “Tall, cloaked, with knives, and no face, nor soul,” Jared said starring at the door.
    “They don’t sound so bad. Maybe you could tell me if they’re right if you do it in secret code,” I offered.
    “Um, okay…” Jared thought for a moment. The he moved his hands. He was using sign language. Jared signed that he did not believe them, but he didn’t want to get hurt.
    “I’ll be right back,” I walked out of the room. The doctor trailed behind. I went over to a large, gray desk. The nurses and doctors all buzzed around. I looked at a list of numbers taped on the edge of the desk. I reached the psychiatrist’s number.
    I typed the number into my cell phone, and hit the ‘call’ key. It rung a few moments, then the voice mail picked up.
    “Hello, this is Dr. Laveney. Please leave your name, and number, I’ll get back in touch with you,” Dr. Laveney was the psychiatrist here? Alexander never told me he would be working at the hospital. I felt butterflies in my stomach as I left the message.
    “This is Dr. Demidov, and there is a patient at Skyline Hospital having a schizophrenic outbreak. If you would call him in some medication, it would be great. Thank you. Good-bye,” I hit the ‘end’ button.
    I was walking back to Jared’s room when I heard a cry. I ran into the room, and found Jared hanging from a black belt. The belt had been tied around the curtain rod. How had he gotten up there so fast?
    “I need help in here!” I yelled from the room. I ran over to Jared trying to remove the belt from his neck. It was so tight.
    Two nurses and a doctor rushed in. They all crowded around him, trying to get the belt from around his neck.
    Finally, the doctor yanked on Jared’s feet, and the belt snapped. He fell to the floor, a nurse checked his pulse. The black-haired woman looked up, and shook her head.
    “Time of death, eleven-seventeen a.m.,” said the doctor. “Your work here is done, Dr. Demidov.”
    I nodded, and walked out of the hospital.
"what should we do today Teki?" Kiely asked her tiny dog. Knowing that the dog couldn't posibly respond in any other way than wagging her tail or bark and that is exactly what the dog did.
Kiely sat next to her chihuahua and ran her hand down her back feeling her soft black and brown fur."your a good baby girl" she crooned at the little puppy.
"Lets go to the park and then we could go to fred's,"Kiely finally desided Teki was still wagging her tail. Kiely made her way to the bathroom to freshen up and take a shower. She got out of the shower and headed toward the mirror to see if she had any...
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posted by neonstars
When I woke up July 15,2010 I had no idea what i was a bout to do heres my story:
I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock and it said 5am. Oh crap,Im gonna be late fr work! I said as i stretched my jeans on.I got dresed and ran down stairs.I opend my liitle sisters door to see if she was aslepp and as usaul she was.She was only 12 and i was 17.
I grabbed my keys and I ran out the door,I started my Red jeep and drove down the rocky drive way.10 minutes later ...I parked my car in the parking lot of SUzi Surf Shop.I saw my 39 year old boss suzie turining on the lights.I enterd and a cowoker name...
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If there’s one thing I cared about more than my freedom it was my family. I loved my dad more than anyone though it’s just hard not to love my dad with his kind gentle nature. His eyes were big like a puppies somewhat and were a deep dark chocolate brown framed by long dark eyelashes and dark eye brows that matched his charcoal black hair that had a thick consistency but a silky feel. His skin was a medium olive color and though many didn’t find him handsome I did. He was everything in a father and in myself. He was real shy and my Uncle Drew as I called him though he wasn’t my real...
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WELL I AM CURRENTLY WRITING the wierd and wonderfull world of Belle, BUT I THOUGHT I WOULD WRITE ANOTHER SHORT STORY, SO I DONT GET BORED.


ANYWAY THIS ONES ABOUT A GIRLS LIFE,ROBYN. SHE DOESNT SEEM TO FIT IN, AND NOT FOR THE REASON SHE THINKS...

Panicking,I ran. And ran and ran. I didnt look back, all I knew was, I had had to run. They wont get me not now not ever, I wont be used.

2 Days earlier,

"Robyn! Get up now!" I faintly heard my mum shout from down the stairs, moaning I turned onto my stomach, and pulled my pillow over my head. "Robyn Stirling, if you dont get ready for school now, you...
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Date Night
By: moolah
Chapter Two: Party
    Haley sat at Anne’s feet and had Joey in her lap. Suddenly Haley’s iphone vibrated in her pocket. She picked it up and opened the text from Sean.
Sean- Ware r u? I’m @ home. Come home quick!
Haley sighed and texted him back.
Haley- I’m @ Anne’s house. Why what’s rong?
Haley sighed and got up off the ground. “Sorry. I have to go, Anne.” She said and hugged the kids and left. When she got home the house was full of chaos. “Oh my god, Sean! It’s a mess!!!” Haley screamed over the kids. “I know, honey.” He...
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posted by CullenProperty
I wake up with a feeling that something has been taken from me, but in a good way. I lay in my warm, comfortable, pillow surrounded bed for a little while longer before I decide to get up. I go into the bathroom and turn on the shower. The warm water that penetrates my body feels so good and after my thoughts wander to Nick, the water feels even warmer. I wrap a towel around my body when I'm done and quietly tip toe into my room where I see Nick's hoodie lying on my office chair, where I put it last night. I pick it up and take in his essence, smells exactly like Nick. An aroma I can't explain...
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Chapter 3 The cult


“What are you on about?” I was shaking with anger. How dare she say what I am and what I'm not “Stuff you” I wanted to say much worse. I walked away from her. Suddenly James was in front of me, smirking at me then he slowly vanished. I had to get out of here. By the time I come back it will be too late.

I was walking down the empty street the sun had set already. How long have I been walking for? I did not even feel tired. Some how I ended up at the park... thinking of Hannah, I walked past where it all happened Hannah screams echoed inside my head. I felt nothing...
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    Chapter 2
                    LUNCH
I sat where Jill was sitting. The same people from before. The blonde
Kid, the reporter with a few other people. They introduced themselves.
And I giggled when they all were done. I said "I laugh a lot...sorry"
Ken rolled his eyes. I cracked up. Mart the one who bumped into me asked me "so Estella--" "call me Stella" I interrupted. "So Stella would you
Like to grab diner sometime?" I laughed "sure!" ken just rolled his
Eyes, it made me...
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Hello everyone! :] This is only a draft to a chapter of the first story of a series (Shattering Suns) I'm writing and, when I'm through, publishing. Since it's my first chapter, I want to be sure this story is interesting enough. Forgive me if there are any proofreading mistakes. I've been too busy to proofread every line. Please do comment and tell me what you think! Thankies so so much for willingly reading and sharing your helpful thoughts. Take care sweethearts, and enjoy! :D ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blissful Ignorance
My name is Naomi Hart. I am a sixteen year old...
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posted by tayandkris4evr
I'm thinking of this guy resembling Jack. *Disclaimer*
I'm thinking of this guy resembling Jack. *Disclaimer*
"Run, you idiot!"
"I am!"
Niki and I just robbed a gas station. We pointed our Colt's at the cashier, then tied him up. Sweat dripped off my face as we loaded our trash bags full of food and money. I didn't think we'd make it in time before the cops came. But, miraculously we packed up quick enough.
"Alright man, head over to those hills, here take this, I'm gonna go knock that guy out."
Niki nodded and took the two trash bags. His blonde hair falling around his head, soaked with sweat.
I ran back into the station, and went over to the cashier. I asked him if there was anybody else here and...
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posted by iluvPrinceMJ213
How is it possible for there to be possible to be more trouble?

    “ Hey Cindy” Thomas shouts from across the room. I put a finger to my lips. Just as Mrs. Fitzgerald turns to Thomas and says “ Mr. Carlson sit down.’ “ What eva teach.” “ Now class since its pride time we are going to come up with ways to ask your teachers things and what are things to ask.” Thomas then throws a paper airplane to me with a message when Mrs. Fitzgerald isn’t looking. I begin to unfold the paper airplane just when Jaylee the school brat snatches it out of my hands and shouts...
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posted by summer448
I opened my bedroom window to let in an evening brezee. All of the trees have been bare for a while, exposing the cloudless sky. Letting out a sight i rested my head on my hand and leaned out letting the wind whip across my face. Today is the very last day of winter break,then its back to school till spring. May as well enjoy it. "ARTIE JONES, GET DOWN HERE RIGHT THIS SECOND I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE A WORD WITH YOU!" My mom yelled vioentley from down stairs. Sluggishly I stood up and walked out of my room. "Mom my name is amy." I said walking down the steps. She just glared at me. " You can change...
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A little bit on what Sayuri looks like:)
A little bit on what Sayuri looks like:)
Okay, so here's the third chapter of this! Hope you all like and PLEASE COMMENT!! ^.^


We immediately arrive in Hollow Bas- I mean, The Radiant Garden.

"Let's go find Leon and everyone," Sora said, and along the way to Merlin's house, we saw just how much this place has improved.
When we came to the house, Sora opened the door and went in before Kairi and I could stop him and tell him to knock first.

"Hey, everybody!" Sora shouted to everyone, and they all jumped.

"Huh? Sora..." Leon mumbled after he jumped.

"Jeez, Sora! Ever heard of knocking?" Yuffie asked him and he smiled sheepishly.

"We're here...
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CHAPTER 1

“Where the fuck is he?!” Simon was getting really pissed already. Jacob was supposed to be back an hour ago. He promised Adele he wouldn't be late. While waiting, Simon turned on the TV. He laid down to the couch, drinking beer, waiting for the news to start. Adele came back from the kitchen, drinking apple juice, “I don't know. Calm down, please, Simon.” she replied. “And don't drink!”
“Why not?” Simon asked her.
“Because,” she said, grabbing the beer bottle from him, throwing it away, “First, you're not old enough to be drinking, you're fifteen, if you hadn't...
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posted by hannah_vampire
It was late and I think I had fallen asleep on damon, I really didn't want to go home But soon I would have to and thats when i would talk to my dad about this stuff.

I woke up and I was in this very nice room, I am supirsed that Damon has a bed, I thought vamps didn't sleep although it could be for decoration. "Had a good sleep" I jumped up qiuck way to quick making a painful cracky nosie I think from from leg "sorry Belle should have knocked i thought you would be sleepy".

I didn't care more, I hated that we took it slow and getting in trouble would show my dad why you shouldn't like To Ariel-Belle....
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posted by coolie
Both Crack-a-bottle and Shatter-a-glass were teens, and their names had a lot in common. Crack-a-bottle and Shatter-a-glass. Hee Hee. The question right now is how the heck do we get out of here?” said bill. Shatter-a-glass searched in her pockets. Hey my phone, the only phone in the world that lets you text and do nothing else,” said Shatter-a-glass. How will that help?” asked Crack-a-bottle. I could text a plane to fly over here and pick us up!” answered Shatter-a-glass. Shatter-a-glass was thinking for a moment. She didn’t have a clue of what number she text so she did every combination...
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"Drip,drop,drip drop."I couldn't tell if it was the rain or the tears running down from my face that had was drip dropping.I still couldn't believe Joel actually left me here all by myself.Alone in this pouring thunderstorm.Joel was suppose to my best friend,my soul mate,my lover but instead he became the opposite,the total jerk of my life.But the hardest part is that even now,now that tears flood my face and my heart is completely torn I still love Joel as if he hasn't done anything wrong.I knew I wouldn't be able to just let him go like that;I don't think I will be able to get over him ever!...
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Academic life has challenging demands. Students are expected to manage their time wisely between their academic requirements and extra-curricular activities. Living in a time when the world requires highly sophisticated demands, this challenge is no easy feat. No one understands this dilemma better than professional writers, students, retirees, and freelancers specializing in academic writing seeking to offer their excellent services to students who intends to maintain a good academic standing but needs some assistance in completing academic requirements due to time constraints and limited...
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After the film they all walk to Antiworld to hang out for awhile. They all laid on the grass, peacefully thinking about random things in their lives. Grito was watching over them, thinking that Cassie, Nathan, Slone and Lindsay may be in trouble if they keep their bonds with the others. Parvulo was sleeping on Grito’s shoulder, making no sound what so ever. Grito himself was getting drowsy, he quickly fell asleep, and he hadn’t slept in a few days, watching over them. What could stop something from attacking them now, Grito is asleep, and a sneak attack and Grito may not be able to save...
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Marley was bleeding from his wound, he was fighting the same sort of creature as the others, it was small but it was fast plus its forearms are used like clubs. The creature had marks all over its body, due to Marley’s elbows and knees. It swung its arm again, hitting Marley straight in the shin, Marley was quick to react and slash up the creatures face. It left four claw like marks on its face; Marley looked at his hand and notice that his nails had pointed, as the creature wiped it’s eye he looked at Marley and saw that his eyes had become yellow. Marley quickly struck the creature in...
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