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Chapter 4

The Beginning of Mission


Jason was in a strange little futuristic town. It was dark at night, there were odd blue lights glowing all around him, and there were barely any buildings. As he walked he heard a voice. It was slightly squeaky, the sound echoed. Although, when Jason made a sound, the same volume and pitch, there was no echo. (Just a plain voice.) Strange, Jason thought. Something strange is going on, and I know it, eagerly thought Jason. Jason heard the same squeaky sound again. Now from all directions, Jason could hear the voice. He attempted facing a different direction. The same results occurred. Feeling slightly scared, Jason scurried along the road to the nearest and only building he could see. Jason entered the building. Nobody was in it.

“Hello-o!” exclaimed Jason. There was no answer. Jason tried again.

“Hello-o!” said Jason again. Again, no answer! He walked through a hall and into the first room on his left. He sat down in a seat, big lumpy, and soft. In the seat he was relaxing, as if sitting by the pool and drinking a coke. But instead he was really in the middle of a dangerous mission and in great danger. He was about fall comfortably asleep when…
“Whoosh!” A black
shadow zoomed across the wall. As it got slower, its faces color slowly became viewable.

“Ahhhhhh!” yelled Jason. Jason finally made out the face. It was scary, had gooey skin with blue veins showing, eyes in the shape of footballs and rotated in a 45º angle, it had lots of sharp teeth that would be to terribly painful to imagine if bit, and red fangs. Then the body became viewable. It had blue veins popping out of its skin too, and had large wings.

“Sssccccsss!” hissed the monster.

“Coin,” Jason heard whispered in his head. He took out a coin, and before he could click the button, the monster flew straight at him.
“RRRrrrr!” the monster growled, chomping its jaw. The monster was eyeing Jason’s hand. The monster snapped its fangs at Jason’s hand, but instead, Jason snatched his hand away losing his coin. The monster crawled to where the coin had landed, and ate it. For this, the monster became stronger. A spike in the shape of a sword grew on his forehead. The monster charged Jason again. This time it was off target. For the few seconds Jason had to spare, he took another coin, and pressed the button. What had just been a coin, was now an electric spear. As the monster charged at him a 3rd time, Jason stuck his spear right in front of him. “

“RRrrrr,” The monster’s sound weekend as Jason’s spear struck right through its stomach.
“Oooh Nasty!” exclaimed Jason. The monster was now dead. Slimy blue blood leaked out of the whole Jason created in its stomach. Jason ran out of the building. Suddenly, other buildings appeared.
“Huh it’s a trap!” mumbled Jason, and yet, it was.






























Chapter 5

The one that shall not be named’

Back in the chaotic society, creatures and human like things were freaking out. Some were glad that Jason killed the monster, some were afraid because Jason lost one of his precious coins. (Most were afraid) He needed each coin to survive. One coin lost, a one-point disadvantage.
“Uh,” mumbled the inventor.

“A disadvantage, a disadvantage! A DISADVANTAGE! I know it seems like a happy little time because Jason killed the monster, but NO! It’s Not!” Yelled the inventor.

Meanwhile, Jason was attempting to sleep on the sidewalk next to a bright red building on the left side of him. He wished he had a bed or a cushion. Because of that, he walked towards that bright red building and knocked on the door.

Then he heard somebody from the inside say,” Say the password.” The password. Jason thought. Jason thought about it for a moment, then answered,

“Blue flame!”

“No!”

“Wectrilsion!”

“No!”

Then something that looked like the first creature that he met except in ghost form, slowly flew down at him and whispered his last name,” Say this carefully. “Disamonastation.”

“Dis-a-mon-a-sta-tion” said Jason pronouncing every syllable very carefully.

“Uh,” groaned the person inside.

He opened the door, and Jason stepped inside. Jason walked up to the front desk. Standing there, was a human. At least it looked like a human.

“Excuse me sir, what type of job or hotel or motel is this?” Asked Jason.

“Neither,” answered the front desk manager. “It’s just like a hang out sort of thing. If people want somewhere to rest, we have seven rooms available.

“Could I have a room please?” Asked Jason.

“Rooms cost one gold weapon,” stated the front desk manager.

Jason took out on of his gold coins.

“Is this enough?” asked Jason taking out one of his gold coins and showing it to the front desk manager.

“That’s just enough!” answered the front desk manager, forming an evil grin.

Jason handed him the coin, and the front desk manager handed him the keys to his room.

“It’s the 3rd room on your right.” said the front desk manger.
After Jason found his room, back in the society, the inventor was freaking out. Now two coins were lost.

Why didn’t Jason just sleep on the couch in the waiting room? Then he realized the trap that the front desk manager set was too easy to fall for. Since Jason lost a coin, that’s a 50% or 40% chance of Jason not surviving!







































Chapter 6

Strange

Jason found his room and oddly, He realized he had just made a mistake. Not just a mistake, a BIG mistake. He wondered, why am I even here? I don’t disserve to be here. I’m just like any other person. Why did I even have to have a flame on my leg? Why wasn’t it someone more athletic, more popular, or something? It doesn’t make any sense. I’m just the average child. Is this mission for good or evil? All
These questions flowed in his mind. Confused Jason looked out the window, and strangely, there were no blue lights flashing.

Could one of the blue lights be the blue flame? Thought Jason.

Just then, the blue lights flickered. He disappeared, and the building disappeared. And then he noticed, he could only see one thing. One building. The building was the one he saw in the very beginning. Invisible Jason was just about to figure out the situation, when in was swooped blackness. Nothingness. Space. Again. Jason couldn’t move, neither think, nor talk.

Invisible Jason knew the situation before, and this is what he figured. When the lights don’t flicker, everything stays in its place. When the lights flicker,
everything that is not in lined with the first building disappears.

Just then something that looked like the second creature he met except in ghost form said his last name. Now
Jason could move, talk, think, and hear.

“Say inseblistle,”

“In-se-blis-tle,” again said Jason pronouncing every syllable.

Jason was now back in his room. The strange thing was, the lights were still flickering.
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