Max's POV
I ran into my room crying. My head and my heart ached. I thought it was clear I loved Fang, but I guess he didn't know. I saw him kissing a blonde haired tramp at school today. I fell on my bed and burried my face in a pillow. I cried.
10 minutes later
I heard my door open, but I didn't dare to look. I knew who it was and I didn't want to talk to him. Fang sat down next to me and stroked my back.
"Max what's wrong?" He said, worriedly. I just shook my head.
"What's wrong?" I took my head out from under the pillow and stared daggers at him. I didn't care my mascara was running or that it was smudged. I saw a little face peek in through the door. It was Angel. Angel saw my face and hurried down the stairs to tell the others I was crying.
Angel returned with Nudge, Gazzy, and Iggy.
"Max, why are you crying? You never cry," Angel asked. Again, I just shook my head and continued to cry.
"Come on Max, tell us," Gazzy pleaded.
" I....I...I saw Fang kissing another girl at school today, " I replied. That did it. I broke down sobbing. "I'm tired of all this crap in my life. I hate being chased by erasers and Dr. Crazy. My life sucks and there's no meaning to it anymore." I sobbed.
"Dude!" Iggy yelled at Fang. "You know Max loves you, why'd you do that?"
Fang turned to me.
"You love me?" Fang interrogated.
"Well," I said as I wiped some tears away, "I thought I did, but now I'm not sure." They all stayed in my room for a few more minutes, an eventually all left.
Next day
I woke up early, and it was very quiet. I made some breakfast and stood on the porch staring out into nothing. I went to my room and wrote a note to the Flock. It read,
"Dear Flock,
I'm sorry about this but I have decided that I don't want to live anymore. I love you all, but this is what has to happen. The reason the doctors are after you is because of me. I want you to know I will never forget all the good and bad times we've had together. Goodbye.
Love,
Max"
I walked to the laundry room and got some rope. I quietly walked in to Angel and Nudge's room and kissed them on the head. I did the same with Iggy and Gazzy. When I approached Fang's room, I quietly walked in. I sat down next to Fang, and it's a good thing he's heavy. A tear ran down my cheek, and I leaned in and kissed him on the lips. Then I went to the balcony, overlooking the canyon and flew to the ground.
Fang's POV
That night, I had a nightmare. Max was standing at the edge of the canyon. I was telling her not to jump, but she did. I ran off the cliff and opened my wings. I flew above her. I was yelling at her to open her wings, but when she looked up at me, a tear slid out, and she shook her head no. Then... Well, you get the idea.
I woke up next morning as Max left my room. I had noticed a rope in her hand, so I became worried. I got dressed and went to her room. There was a note on her bed, and I read it. Then I realized what was going on. She was going to kill herself because of me. Then I heard Max jump of the balcony and land on the ground. I had to stop her.
Max's POV
I landed on the ground and took in a deep breath, the last one. I tightly tied the rope around my wings so I couldn't fly and just as I did, a car pulled up. I couldn't see who it was, but then some erasers got out. Oh crap. I roundhouse kicked and elbowed erasers, but I was outnumbered. I felt a kick to my side, and fell to the ground, in pain. Erasers were holding down my arms, legs, and head. Then, Dr. Crazy got out of the car and walked over to me. He pulled out a syringe, and was about to inject me when I saw a streak of black cross the sky. It was Fang. He kicked the doctor away from me and started fighting erasers. Unfortunately, some erasers were still holding me down.
I saw something move from the corner of my eye. It was the doctor. He leaped at my with the syringe.
"Fang!" I yelled, but it was to late. The doctor injected to needle in my arm. I screamed in pain, and the toxin entered my blood stream. Then Fang kicked the doctor away and fell to my side. All the erasers and the doctor had retreated and left.
"Max," Fang said, "Max, are you okay?" I couldn't speak. The toxin was already taking over. A single tear slid from my eye, and the world went black.
Fang's POV
As her head fell to the side, I knew this could be it if I didn't get help. Before I knew what was happening, I was picking up Max and running to the house. I jumped into the air and flew up to the balcony.
"Angel, Gazzy, Iggy, Nudge! Hurry, Max needs help!" I yelled. They ran out of their rooms and looked at her. She was just lying limp in my arms. Angel began to cry. Nudge cumforted her so she would stop crying. I laid Max down on the couch, staring at her. I was hoping she would wake from unconciousness, but she didn't. I waited for an hour, watching her, but she never awoke. Angel and Nudge went to bed. It became later and later. Gazzy finally got drowsy, and joined them. Iggy and I were the only ones left. He wasn't going to bed anytime soon. I could tell.
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I ran into my room crying. My head and my heart ached. I thought it was clear I loved Fang, but I guess he didn't know. I saw him kissing a blonde haired tramp at school today. I fell on my bed and burried my face in a pillow. I cried.
10 minutes later
I heard my door open, but I didn't dare to look. I knew who it was and I didn't want to talk to him. Fang sat down next to me and stroked my back.
"Max what's wrong?" He said, worriedly. I just shook my head.
"What's wrong?" I took my head out from under the pillow and stared daggers at him. I didn't care my mascara was running or that it was smudged. I saw a little face peek in through the door. It was Angel. Angel saw my face and hurried down the stairs to tell the others I was crying.
Angel returned with Nudge, Gazzy, and Iggy.
"Max, why are you crying? You never cry," Angel asked. Again, I just shook my head and continued to cry.
"Come on Max, tell us," Gazzy pleaded.
" I....I...I saw Fang kissing another girl at school today, " I replied. That did it. I broke down sobbing. "I'm tired of all this crap in my life. I hate being chased by erasers and Dr. Crazy. My life sucks and there's no meaning to it anymore." I sobbed.
"Dude!" Iggy yelled at Fang. "You know Max loves you, why'd you do that?"
Fang turned to me.
"You love me?" Fang interrogated.
"Well," I said as I wiped some tears away, "I thought I did, but now I'm not sure." They all stayed in my room for a few more minutes, an eventually all left.
Next day
I woke up early, and it was very quiet. I made some breakfast and stood on the porch staring out into nothing. I went to my room and wrote a note to the Flock. It read,
"Dear Flock,
I'm sorry about this but I have decided that I don't want to live anymore. I love you all, but this is what has to happen. The reason the doctors are after you is because of me. I want you to know I will never forget all the good and bad times we've had together. Goodbye.
Love,
Max"
I walked to the laundry room and got some rope. I quietly walked in to Angel and Nudge's room and kissed them on the head. I did the same with Iggy and Gazzy. When I approached Fang's room, I quietly walked in. I sat down next to Fang, and it's a good thing he's heavy. A tear ran down my cheek, and I leaned in and kissed him on the lips. Then I went to the balcony, overlooking the canyon and flew to the ground.
Fang's POV
That night, I had a nightmare. Max was standing at the edge of the canyon. I was telling her not to jump, but she did. I ran off the cliff and opened my wings. I flew above her. I was yelling at her to open her wings, but when she looked up at me, a tear slid out, and she shook her head no. Then... Well, you get the idea.
I woke up next morning as Max left my room. I had noticed a rope in her hand, so I became worried. I got dressed and went to her room. There was a note on her bed, and I read it. Then I realized what was going on. She was going to kill herself because of me. Then I heard Max jump of the balcony and land on the ground. I had to stop her.
Max's POV
I landed on the ground and took in a deep breath, the last one. I tightly tied the rope around my wings so I couldn't fly and just as I did, a car pulled up. I couldn't see who it was, but then some erasers got out. Oh crap. I roundhouse kicked and elbowed erasers, but I was outnumbered. I felt a kick to my side, and fell to the ground, in pain. Erasers were holding down my arms, legs, and head. Then, Dr. Crazy got out of the car and walked over to me. He pulled out a syringe, and was about to inject me when I saw a streak of black cross the sky. It was Fang. He kicked the doctor away from me and started fighting erasers. Unfortunately, some erasers were still holding me down.
I saw something move from the corner of my eye. It was the doctor. He leaped at my with the syringe.
"Fang!" I yelled, but it was to late. The doctor injected to needle in my arm. I screamed in pain, and the toxin entered my blood stream. Then Fang kicked the doctor away and fell to my side. All the erasers and the doctor had retreated and left.
"Max," Fang said, "Max, are you okay?" I couldn't speak. The toxin was already taking over. A single tear slid from my eye, and the world went black.
Fang's POV
As her head fell to the side, I knew this could be it if I didn't get help. Before I knew what was happening, I was picking up Max and running to the house. I jumped into the air and flew up to the balcony.
"Angel, Gazzy, Iggy, Nudge! Hurry, Max needs help!" I yelled. They ran out of their rooms and looked at her. She was just lying limp in my arms. Angel began to cry. Nudge cumforted her so she would stop crying. I laid Max down on the couch, staring at her. I was hoping she would wake from unconciousness, but she didn't. I waited for an hour, watching her, but she never awoke. Angel and Nudge went to bed. It became later and later. Gazzy finally got drowsy, and joined them. Iggy and I were the only ones left. He wasn't going to bed anytime soon. I could tell.
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Author's Note: "Look, now I am going to tell you a story of the life of Rosemary Vega a.k.a me."
I am 11 years old.
My birthday is on March 25.
I am very talented at writing stories, singing like famous people (example: Shakira, Selena Gomez, Demi Lovato and Lady Gaga) I love to act!
When I grow up I want to be singer or a voice actress.
I am interested in Star Wars, Pokemon, Everybody Hates Chris and George Lopez.
My favorite pokemon are: Jirachi, Roserade, Mismagious and Meganium.
I was born in Wilson, North Carolina.
Thank you for giving me your time to read this article! :D
I am 11 years old.
My birthday is on March 25.
I am very talented at writing stories, singing like famous people (example: Shakira, Selena Gomez, Demi Lovato and Lady Gaga) I love to act!
When I grow up I want to be singer or a voice actress.
I am interested in Star Wars, Pokemon, Everybody Hates Chris and George Lopez.
My favorite pokemon are: Jirachi, Roserade, Mismagious and Meganium.
I was born in Wilson, North Carolina.
Thank you for giving me your time to read this article! :D