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posted by anbonie
“Nice performance!”
“Thank you, butler!”
Servant smile to Pieter and opens the door of red Ferrari. While driving no one used to speak, until Pieter say something to his butler and bodyguard:
“Did you hear when my voice trembled? I think that was 14th song.”
“No, Sir…”
“When my father isn’t near, please call me Pieter”
“Yes, Si… I mean Pieter”
They arrived to McChink’s mansion. Servant turned engine off and ran on other site of car to open Pieter’s door, but he was too late. “I’m sorry, Sir…” said butler. Pieter sent him angry look: “I can open the door! And we came to an agreement that you will call me Pieter, not Sir! We aren’t in army.” Servant looked really carefully and said to him: “Your father was looking trough the window, I really couldn’t…”
It was dinnertime. While dinner was Georg McChink all time watching Pieter and servant. Pieter felt almost like in hell.
When they finally finished, Pieter stood up and went into his room. Butler went quietly after him.
Pieter was on half way to his room and then: “Boom!!!” North wall was crashed.
Pieter fell downstairs and hit his bodyguard. Last he heard was screaming out of dining room.

When Pieter woke up, was house in flames. Under him was his bodyguard, who hurt his head, because he laid in puddle of blood.
He couldn’t go to dining room, because it was in flames. He knew that he will not be able to save parents, but he can save butler and himself. He looked around; no exit. Than remembered that at least one way exist. At school, for example, he said that his girlfriend is getting a baby, just for left lesson earlier.
So, he looked around himself one more time. And he saw it. It was shaft. It was too high for him. He looked one more time around the room. He saw rug. It was hiding something. Pieter took the rug away. There were moving-able stairs.
With some troubles he picked up stairs. He went upstairs and opened shaft. And now he had only one question: how to move these muscles witch were lying under him so high. Pieter have by the way seen pulley. He has answer, and now, where he can find rope? And then he remembered. He was wearing last type of Nike’s training suit. It was really, really high quality. He pulled rope out of trousers and cardigan. But rope was already too short. Where he can find more rope? Shoes! Shoelaces were made from same material as training suit. He rope all ropes together, but the now rope was already too short for about 20 centimeters.
Butler was all time wearing two belts. One was using to lave trousers on himself and second, he was wearing for more dangerous look. Pieter tightened servant for 15 centimeters, he was exaggerating a bit too.
He picked butler up on same high as shaft. And than, with swinging in it.
And now, harder part. Pieter realized that bodyguard’s heart doesn’t beat anymore. He has to give him mouth to mouth; but – yuck!
At last, he didn’t have any other choice. He image, that butler is that pretty girl who he met on camping. Her name was Alice. He realized that he is daydreaming. He has to save servant, now!
Pieter’s lips touched butler’s (during that he was thinking, why he isn’t one of men, who are usually visit Club Pink Panther) and then he started to resuscitate servant.
Butler opened eyes and Pieter seemed really happy. He didn’t want to change bodyguard again. Last one he locked in fridge, where he froze.
Bodyguard was dizzy because coma. Thank god for Pieter’s rucksack, because in it he always has water bottle. He gave it to his new friend –they actually met this morning, when Pieter’s father bought butler– and he saved bottle again, when butler drank some water. Than they went inside shaft.
Pieter felt fresh air. That mean they are almost outside. But on other site it wasn’t garden. It was father’s cold room.
Pieter ask bodyguard to crash door. But butler wasn’t as week as Pieter told. He jumped in cold room and went to door. Than Pieter wanted to jump, but bodyguard shouted: “Go back! Fire is before the door. Door is hot.” Pieter knew, that door is heavy and it doesn’t let air out, but father has in cold room explosively things. If they don’t hurry out, they will be ash.
On watch which his father invented was program which could calculate, how much time they had. On watch appeared numbers: 480 seconds, that mean they have 8 minutes.
Butler came back in the shaft and Pieter told him, what he realized. Bodyguard became red in his face. He was looking for something in his pocket. It was handheld computer. He found map of house and clicked button “shafts”. There appeared lines and red spot. Bodyguard said: “Here we are.” He was showing red spot.
Butler became normal colored. Pieter wanted to know what was wrong, bud butler said just: “Forget…”
Watch was showing just 69 seconds, but servant and his protégé were only on half way. They absolutely had lucky day. Shaft started going down. They let down, like they were on slide. First went butler. And because it was safe, Pieter went too. And when they were again together, Pieter felt fresh air. And now he knew he is right. He smelt mother’s new flowers.
Clock was showing only 10 seconds. Pieter realized that they will not be able to escape. But he didn’t give up.
He always did what ever he wanted.
They ran to exit. Shaft was protected by diamond bars. But butler said that they are electro-magnetic.
Inside the shaft was button for eliminate bars. But hour show only 1 second. Pieter said: “Goodbye, butler…”

He respected bang, but it happened nothing. Anyway they hurried, because clock wasn’t usually wrong. Butler crashed bars.
When they came out of shaft, in cold room was bang. Bodyguard grabbed Pieter and with him ran across the garden and jumped in pond. He knew that pool is connected with house and it is going to be too dangerous to jump in it.
In the pond there were no many
January 16, 1815

Journal,
    We have gotten fortunate, Journal! Nastea has found coats in the broken down train. She sits by Sasha now, covering her in them. And she took one for herself as well. I can see color returning to Sasha’s cheeks. Nastea coughs harshly, shivering nervously. Her toes are turning blue, and one has already fallen off. We slept in the train last night, getting as much warmth as we could. We have to start to move tomorrow, find shelter. The berries Nastea fed Sasha seem to have made Sasha a lot sicker than she was before. She’s coughing up blood now. The snow around her is stained with red and pink. I attempted to make a fire earlier, and let me tell you journal, it didn’t work out. It’s much to cold to start flames. For every time the fire ignites, it extinguishes, the harsh winds blowing it out. I’m losing my teeth, journal. Nastea can’t talk anymore, and her and Sasha’s hair is mostly gone. Journal, what’s happening to us?
    Bye Journal,
        Nadia
posted by Charlieminster
“Uh, Monday mornings” Ellie groaned. She got out of bed slowly and looked at the clock, 10 o’clock, she had half an hour to get dressed and walk across campus to her first lecture of the day. Ellie put on her favorite pair of gray skinny jeans, a black t-shirt with I love reading gothic books written on it, a pair of red all star converse and a bag to match. When she walked pass the breakfast bar she picked up her English and History book and her pencil case and put them in to her bag with her purse and phone.
        The Ellie made her way across...
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posted by kitsine
The Pookie

The pookie fell from a tree
upon hitting the ground he farted
scared at his own flatulence he tried climbing up the tree. But for every branch he grabbed he tooted. and for every twig he broke, he farted.

farting all the way up, pookie climed that tree. He had to make it to the top you see, cause that where pookie's make pee. Relief was almost in reach for pookie. till a stiring occurred within.. a rumbling sensation, and pookie knew.. with a tear, that he couldn't hold it in.

Till this day those who were near said it sounded like a cow mooing. The momentum of his farts became like a rocket and shot pookie up and out that tree! Up in to the sky..till pookie could not be seen.

moral of story? dont eat beans. O_o

next chapter "The pookie Returns"
posted by cutiegirl01
I was sitting on the sand down by the beach listening to my cousin Lora babble on about why she had believed in something I can’t remember. I was just staring at the clouds that had rain coming out of it. I was watching how every time I looked at them they seemed to get darker each time.
    Then I felt someone push me onto my back and I heard Lora say, “You’re not listening to me.”
    “Of coarse I am Lora the last thing you said was that you think that they are horrible things that shouldn’t be alive.” I guessed “Lucky guess. Don’t look...
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posted by juicyjossy9
Think
See
Remember

If we compare the world with a village of 100 inhabitants, taking into account all components, the village would look like this:

♥ 57 Asians – 21 Europeans
♥ 14 Americans – 8 Africans
♥ 52 women – 48 men
♥ 70 coloured people – 30 white
♥ 70 non-Christians – 30 Christians
♥ 89 straights – 11 homosexuals
♥ 6 people would possess 59% of the total global wealth
♥ 6 people would have U.S. citizenship
♥ 80 would be homeless
♥ 70 would be illiterate
♥ 50 would be dependent on someone else
♥ 1 would be dying
♥ 2 would be born
♥ 1 would have a PC
♥ 1 would...
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posted by hannah_vampire
Thanks for the comments plz keep reading and commenting :)

Nothing more then a visual whisper, like a ghost, slipping past not to be seen.I stood still feet planted on the ground and hoping I would be as peacefully As I could and not be scared of what may lie ahead. I could see the fierce Fire dieing in peoples eyes and I was hoping that the fire would not fully die in mine.

I walked through the forest as I stopped to see the most beautiful animal before me A real wolf fully black with a white star shape on its right front paw and it was so Sleek and beautiful. I saw a girl running towards me...
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THE LEGEND OF THE VAMPIRE PRINCESS:
THE LEGEND COMES TO LIFE
PREFACE:

The grand ball of the anniversery of the vampire royal family the vampire royal family,the Reasmussens rule was beautifull with chandeliers of a thousand crystals hanging from the ceiling as the many guests below twirled along to mezmerising music on the dance floor,the ladys with their spectacular ball gowns and the gentlemen in there dashing suits.Although these were not just any guests these guests were made up of Vampires,Shapeshifters and Witches.

The Resmussens had a baby girl they called Star because of her unbelievable...
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posted by Charlieminster
left front clockwise: Charlie,Alice,Hollie,Connor and Jon
left front clockwise: Charlie,Alice,Hollie,Connor and Jon
Charlie walked over to the in front Mrs. Dale's Desk and sat down.
"Charlotte,you haven't got anything to worry about this isn't for anything bad." said Mrs.Dale
"okay" said Charlie "What is it about then?"
"Your father,sister and myself recived a phone call today from a lady called Miss. Fairchild who is from the school of special skills and she believe that this school would help you contorl your power." Mrs.Dale explained "The school is in Index, Washington state. There are six kids your age going and they all have special power as well. The semester begins this week end. Do you want to go...
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posted by harrypotterbest
The newspaper I my hand was already rolled in a tight ball. I biked as fast as I could toward my best friend Maisi’s house. I had already told her I was coming, but not why.
The reason I was going was infuriating, mysterious, and suspicious. How and why someone would do such a thing was a mystery. As Maisi’s house came into view, I hopped of my bike and put it in their bike chain. I ran up the steps and rang the doorbell continuously. Maisi opened it and ushered me inside. We both went up to her room.
She shut the door. ‘Okay,’ she said. ‘Out with it. What’s the matter? You look...
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Chapter 4
When I woke up I was in an un-familiar place I Jumped from where I was laying down and walked down a flight of stairs
To a room full of people who were pale, I saw Edward and Bella so I
Thought this must be something that Bella knows about. I walked down the
Stairs and demanded I know what was going on, this pale man with blonde
Hair who looked so young came up to me and told me that Bella had come
To save me from losing my life and that Edward brought you here. I
Started asking questions:
"Why are you guys so pale?"
"Well we are vampires like you"
"But I am not as pale as you, and YOU...
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posted by sexiitreysongz
CHAPTER 1
10 years ago I lost both my parents in a car crash. I've been living on my own for about 8 years, I lived with my grandmother for a while untill I got a job and found an apartment for real cheep. I never realized what it was like to lose your parents and feel this bad. I never knew my self would be in this postion. Alone, no true family, a baby on the way. How do these girls deal with kind of stuff. They act like everything is so easy,and they have nothing to worry about. Maybe becasue they have moms and grandmothers to help them out. I have no body. My grandmother kicked me out after...
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posted by booklover13
Heres the summary the novel I recently finished writing. I'm not great at writing summaries, but i tried :) Please comment!!!

Its placed in older times, with magic and stuff like that, just fyi!




Ash and Anna are two ordinary girls, living two seperate lives in a world where magic is abundant. But when their prophecy brings the twin sisters together, and they learn that they have a long-lost triplet brother, kidnapped at birth, their worlds are turned upside-down, and every choice they make will affect the fate of the entire world.

When the two girls learn of their exceptional magical ablities,...
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posted by Hime666
This is a story of SAW and in this story Billy (AKA Jigsaw) is a human^^

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As Billy was walking in the abonded house.He sighs as he realises how long he had been alone.He walks in the room where John was right now making plans for new traps. "Hey John?"He asked and walked up to him. "Yes,Billy?"John asks. "Is there...Anyone who have came in here?"Billy asks hopefully. "no sorry.."Joh says and continues making the trap plans. "Oh...I didnt have anything else to say..."Billy says and walks out of John's...
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posted by starwarsfangirl
This is another piece of a story I've been writing...
If you've read the other part, this has absolutely nothing to do with Drew. NOTHING.
This takes place in a mythical and magical country known as Dragomria.
Please review!

Light hadn’t even graced the towers of the palace in the capitol city of Dragomria as the scribe rushed through the grand corridors. He burst into the throne room.
“Your Majesties! Prince Berthold has chosen a bride!” He said, gasping for air. Queen Callidora stood, her bright red hair cascading down to her waist, her brilliant green eyes cutting like a knife through...
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posted by hannah_vampire
Sorry that this took so long I hope you like it, I was busy so sorry :)

Dear diary,

I wish that I was someone else, All the drama was giving me a headache and
I can’t think on what was important. I need some where to go, Blair was still
In the hospital and I guess I could go there I mean with no distractions.
Bye


I couldn’t open the front door, I ran around to the back door and I was lucky
That the key was still hidden in the crack of the bricks. I sat on my bed and closed
My eyes, finally some peace and I can think straight now.

I heard the creak of my door and opened my eyes, ‘Do you ever...
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*Note; This is a variation of RachelGal97’s Endless Pain. Same names; just a different plot. Please comment and tell me if you like and what’s your favorite part*

Endless Pain: Chapter Four

“Selena!” Taylor shouted. She stood up and waved to Selena who stood across from her in the cafeteria. “Over here!”

“Sit down, Taylor!” Demi said, tugging on Taylor’s shirt. “You weird enough as it is.”

“Sorry.” Taylor sat down and crossed her arms.

“Hey guys,” Selena said. She set her tray down and started eating.

Demi and Taylor exchanged glances.

“What’s going on?”

“Nothing.”...
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posted by MileySelena982
*Note; This is a variation of RachelGal97’s Endless Pain. Same names; just a different plot. Please comment and tell me if you like and what’s your favorite part*

Endless Pain: Chapter Three

“Are you sure it was David?” Mom asked as she comforted Selena on the couch.

“I’m positive.” Selena replied. “I’d know that face from anywhere. And… if I was never his girlfriend, he never would have gone to that jewelry store, and he never would have died!”

Mom didn’t reply. She knew her daughter was feeling guilty, and nothing could help it. Instead she said, “But, sweetie, he loved...
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posted by Sylar-Gray
From the Mind of a Raven


Irene

I shoved the rusty key into the ancient looking lock. I turned it a hard left and the giant door creaked opened. The realtor was going on about the history of the house. But I already knew all that. As the door open a chill went through me, as if warning me of something in the house. I walked in, leaving the key in the lock, and had a look around the parlor. It was huge, with a high ceiling with grates in it. I saw something black move behind the grate and jumped back.
“Is there any history of rats in this house?”
“Uh…no. but as I was saying...”
“I know....
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I wondered if my dad knew where I was. I wondered if he cared. A father should care if his daughter spends the night at some guys house, shouldn't he? A father should do a lot of things that mine doesn't do. On the upside, he's probably out buying Cleetus a big old bone. Woohoo.
I looked up into Ethan's eyes and tried to meet his gaze. The way the shimmered made me feel like my eyes were the dullest thing on earth. Annabella liked this guy and I knew I was wrong to be this close to him. I promised her I would not get too close to him, but I almost kissed him. Almost, the key word.
I stayed...
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posted by inexplicable
It was my turn re-one time far too late.
The dress rehearsal already had started a quarter hour ago and I arrived panting and completely breathless in the test room.
yes, you are, finite since Daniela, our rehearsing leader, shouted to me, ".
> > excuse me, I could not get away from the musicschool earlier<<, I answered still struggling for breath.

Yes, if there was something I really loved, then it was the theater and the music.
Unfortunately, I did not manage to get both things under a hat here so that I paint,
it was late there. The dress rehearsal proceeded despite my late arrival...
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