She is like the sun in the world,
Her eyes glitter like sunlight on water,
Her laughter is like sweet warmth,
Her smile more beautiful than the heavens
She is the glow of the world,
Illuminating hidden joy,
And when it rains
Around her, it rains light
Her beauty makes everything seem better,
Her radiance passes on to everyone
And they start to feel the magic within
The effect she has, she’ll never know
No words, in any language,
Could come close to describing it
The way her happiness makes everything light up
Is a miracle beyond words, phrases, poems
The world is her earth and she is its sun,
Her smile brings light out of dark,
She could make the angels sing
But her loveliness comes not from outside
It comes from within her, from her soul
A glow deep inside, a small ball of light
It floats out to embrace the world
And her radiance shines dazzlingly
She’s honestly the most brilliant person I know
She is the sun, the moon, the stars at night
Her heart is made of the purest gold
And she knows she has true beauty
I hope the heavens always favour her
I hope she always emits her radiance
I hope she is happy for years to come
And I hope I can make her proud
The effect she has, she’ll never know
Perhaps it’s better that way,
Knowing the immensity of her beauty
Might make her vain!
Feedback please? :)
Her eyes glitter like sunlight on water,
Her laughter is like sweet warmth,
Her smile more beautiful than the heavens
She is the glow of the world,
Illuminating hidden joy,
And when it rains
Around her, it rains light
Her beauty makes everything seem better,
Her radiance passes on to everyone
And they start to feel the magic within
The effect she has, she’ll never know
No words, in any language,
Could come close to describing it
The way her happiness makes everything light up
Is a miracle beyond words, phrases, poems
The world is her earth and she is its sun,
Her smile brings light out of dark,
She could make the angels sing
But her loveliness comes not from outside
It comes from within her, from her soul
A glow deep inside, a small ball of light
It floats out to embrace the world
And her radiance shines dazzlingly
She’s honestly the most brilliant person I know
She is the sun, the moon, the stars at night
Her heart is made of the purest gold
And she knows she has true beauty
I hope the heavens always favour her
I hope she always emits her radiance
I hope she is happy for years to come
And I hope I can make her proud
The effect she has, she’ll never know
Perhaps it’s better that way,
Knowing the immensity of her beauty
Might make her vain!
Feedback please? :)
Okay, well I want to start writing a Fantasy Book, and I have come up with a couple starting sentences, but I can't think which one I should start with, please give me your honest opinion on which one I should start with......
1. Mr.Johnson's math class joined together in room B3, and sat down at their desks like any other day, but it was anything but that.
2. Once upon a time, there was a school in Grand Rapids, called St. James and thats where our story begins.
3. The school day at St. James in Grand Rapids started out like any other day for the kids of Mr. Johnsons math class.
4. Our story begins with room B3, a classroom in St. James in Grand Rapids.
1. Mr.Johnson's math class joined together in room B3, and sat down at their desks like any other day, but it was anything but that.
2. Once upon a time, there was a school in Grand Rapids, called St. James and thats where our story begins.
3. The school day at St. James in Grand Rapids started out like any other day for the kids of Mr. Johnsons math class.
4. Our story begins with room B3, a classroom in St. James in Grand Rapids.