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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#2]

Narrators POV

An old man in a cloak walked into the neighborhood in which Olivia lived. Everyone stared at him as he walked around.

Olivia's POV

I smiled brightly as I dived into the ocean, "wait up!!!" Oliver laughed as my five brothers ran after me with surfboards, buggy boards, buckets for picking up sea shells, and dad brought out our special maid sandcastle buckets. They were big and made the best structures ever!!! Plus our family is known for our sand castles/structures. I smiled and dived down, feeling the salty cold water against my skin, it's the best feeling ever. When I got up to the surface my family wasn't there, I got out of the ocean and looked around. Then a man in a cloak came up to me, "Can I help you?" I asked slightly shaking a bit. Not because of the cold feeling you feel when the air blows on you after getting out of any body of water, but because of the fear I was feeling. He walked up closer to me, I dived into the water, and swam out to sea. Then I saw a fin, a shark fin, I screamed and swam back to shore. I was lucky I lived, I ran to my house but let out a loud scream when the man grabbed me. My family came outside and went pale, mom got the phone and called 911 but the last thing I saw and heard before the man knocked me out was, "Olivia!!!!!!!" And my parents and brothers running after me.

Narrators POV

The man came to the rough and tough city, where biker gangs, criminal activity, and the houses looked like total shit (pardon my language... but it's true) the sound of motorcycles rumbled around. But the old man soon came to a school, he walked into the school.

Jason's POV

I walked into class, "mr Johnson?" The teacher asked me, "Yeah?" I asked. "It's 4th period" she said angrily. "Yeah so what?" I asked and sat down, "you're loosing your education!" The teacher said glaring at me. "Yeah so what?" I asked again, "why were you in so late?" The teacher asked me. "My Alarm clock didn't go off, I had to take my motorcycle to the shop, I had to get my hair done, and I had to get more clothes so I can look cool" I chuckled. "That's all more important than school?" The teacher asks, I nodded yes. "Who's he?" Cole asked, I turned around to see an old man in a cloak. "How did you get in?" The teacher asked, the man walked up to me, "what do you want?" I asked him glaring at me. "Even when he glares he's hot" Justine sighed dreamily, I flashed a smile before turning to the guy again who then knocked me out.

Narrators POV

The old man walked to a huge huge mansion where you could hear screaming, the old man snuck through the back door.

Tatiana's POV

"I said I wanted a pony!!!!!!" I screamed angrily, "honey we looked for a pony" dad said to me. "Then why don't I have one?" I asked angrily, "the places where they sell ponies are going through a rough winter and they can't be brought to us" mom said, I let out a scream. Then a guy in a black cloak walked into the room. "Who are you?" I asked him angrily, "security!!!" Dad screamed, but he knocked me out and vanished before the security guards came.

Narrators POV

The man in the cloak came to the neighborhood where Cathy lived, the sound of loud screaming echoed through the neighborhood.

Cathy's POV

I ran after my cousin who was visiting, he had taken my bag of candy!!!! I screamed and screamed at him running and running. "Cathy stop being so loud!" Dad called, "then make Donny give me back my candy!" I called angrily. Dad came down, Donny gulped and gave me my candy back. "Thank you" I said but glared at Donny. "Now be quiet" dad said, but literally 3 seconds Donny took my hair brush and I was screaming and running. But then Donny and I stopped, there stood a man in a black cloak. "dad?!!!" I screamed, "no figure it out yourself!" He called. Then mom came back from work, she saw what was happening, she let out a scream. Then the man grabbed me "mom! Dad!" I cried. The last thing I heard before being knocked out was "Cathy!!!!!"

Narrators POV

The man in the cloak came to the town where Xander lived.

Xander's POV

I groaned in annoyance when My sisters let out a loud squeal from the room next to mine. It's hard being the only guy in the family, I looked at a picture of my dad and I. He and I went hiking in the woods, that was the day before he headed into the army. Then 4 months later he was killed in while in battle, I felt some tears fall down my cheeks. He died when I was 6 and it was on my 6th birthday too, but ever since dad died it was just my mom, my sisters and me. Then there was a knock on my door, I opened it to see a man in a cloak. "Uhhh hello" I said, mom came running up quickly. Mom knows when we're in trouble. She let out a scream, the second I look at the guy I was knocked out.

Narrators POV

Now the man came to the village Lexi lives in, people looked at him suspiciously.

Lexis POV

my friends, Jane, Nevaeh, and Anna were over at the house for a sleep over. "I brought snacks" mom said coming in with chips and humus, fruit, pretzels, cotton candy, cookies, and crackers. "Thanks mom" I said smiling at her. "No problem honey" mim said and walked out. "So do you still have a crush on Felix?" Jane asked me, I nodded yes, "then why don't you talk to him?" Nevaeh asked me. "You know I'm nervous and can get shy when I even go close to him " I sighed. "We'll help you out with that nervousness and shyness" Anna said smiling, "thanks" I said smiling. Then there was a knock on the door, thinking it was mom, I called "Come in!" But it wasn't mom It was a man in a cloak. He walked towards me, I was afraid. I scooted back, but then i was knocked out.

Narrators POV

The man in the cloak came to the Big beautiful house in the country where Cameron's dad and mom bought so they could go and preform in the country performance.

Cameron's POV

I smiled brightly as I took dance lessons from my teacher. I had finished singing lessons so I'm doing my dance lessons. "excellent Cameron" mr Francisco said smiling, I smiled back. Mom and dad then came in, "now lets practice on the stage" mom said smiling. I gulped a big, I'm very afraid to go on stage you know and I can't do anything about it. Mom and dad took me on a stage with no one there, they put music on but I was too scared to do anything. Mom and dad came on stage with me. I hugged them crying, "I can't do it!!" I sobbed. "It'll be Okay" mom said smiling at me, then a man in a cloak came on stage. He threw my parents away from me and knocked me out

Narrators POV

"Last house" the man in the cloak said as he came to a school, Asher's school.

Asher's POV

I smiled as I solved the hard math problem on the board, "you never fail to impress me Asher" mr Franchise said smiling. I nodded happily, but couldn't help but think about that girl at the pool. She always visits the pool, even in the winter with an indoor pool. Then the fire alarm went off and I smelt smoke. Everyone walked out, but before I got to the door I was knocked out by some guy in a cloak
posted by greenstergirl
This is what it looked like when Danny was getting her earth lesson.
This is what it looked like when Danny was getting her earth lesson.
I played with my new blue dress that I was given ever since I became soaked. After the elemental test they found me worthy as an ice wolf shape shifter.

I was sitting in an ice cave, east of the castle where Zuka, the dog by the painting, was to train me. I have no one to train, there is no one who is the master of ice or the wolf. But Zuka, the dog is close enough.

He sat across from me on the icy floor. A small fire burned in the center of the room. It didn't seem to melt the ice.

"How are you to help me Zuka? Are you an ice elemental?"

"No. I'm actually not a human you must know. I am full...
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This is all I have now, but I will add on more later. Just tell me what you think. I do enjoy ideas but please no mean comments.
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She was sitting there. Tired, alone, and horrified. There was nothing to be scared of, people were around her, and there was nothing to be scared of. Why did she feel this way?
    Stephanie Williams had always been a little bit off normal, but today she was going too far. She was screaming at the top of her lungs, at school. Any person who couldn’t see what she saw would think she was absolutely crazy. But, there are still seven other people...
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posted by Harrypotter148
“Yes” Bree said as she approached the Healer with her head down, she was in a dimly light church, there were up at the alter there faces stiff. She had just accepted a role that she told herself she never would. A role that would end her life but save others, a role she was forced to except. Something she knew she was going to regret, but she said yes, it was too late. She was to lead the Healers into battle, fight for the right reasons but win for the wrong. She wanted to save people, but all she would be doing is damning their souls, so why was she doing this? She had to, to keep Jared...
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Here is the end of the last chapter for you!

Unlike Alexis he wasnt soaked, accept for some dropplets of water in his hair that he had gathered from standing with her. Alexis sat on her knees and rubbed her now sore elbows.They looked at each other for a short period of time, before Alexis sneezed.
"You should probably go somewhere dry before you catch a cold," he mumbled offering Alexis his hand. Alexis shook her head at the offering, before slowly rising to her feet without the aid of his hand.
"I cant go back to school if that what you are thinking,"She snapped looking toward the small dot...
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posted by Buddy8fnj
I sat in the hospital, my mouth hanging open, unsure how to feel. My aunt and uncle, my abusive aunt and uncle, had been in a car accident due to drunk driving. I wanted to laugh, but i wanted to cry. They may not have been the nicest aunt and uncle, but they were my aunt and uncle and i loved them. Less than five minutes ago I had been told they were dead, and that the government would help find a new home for me until he was 18, when he would inheret his aunt and uncle's millions. My uncle had been an inventor until he retired at 56, having made enough money to be more than happy, but then...
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Pride is a belief in myself (or someone else) that within me is something no one else has just like me. Pride can be a wonderful thing. My coaches are proud of me when I execute a move perfectly. I am proud of my efforts when I get the right answer to a test question. However, pride can have a negative connotation. If I am prideful of my singing talent or of my sports accomplishments, then I am not feeling the right kind of pride. Yes, I can be pleased with my abilities; but when I let it go to my head, then I am full of pride, just like Odysseus often was. By believing that I am the only person with that talent, I inflate my ego. I believe myself to be “the best of the best,” and this can damage my relationships with others. They would not want my company if the only things I spoke of were my own accomplishments.
sorry everyone who reads these but i have to stop writing them for three weeks. I thnk i will be able to fit in maybe 1 in that period, but i have my prelims and i will be too tired or too something to publish them, sorry. But i will try, i promise!




































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posted by lovepop
Meghan ran to the bus stop, where she saw Pompika. Thankfully Pompika looked at her politely and said “You know I saw Reg but ya know, how she’s jus’ across the street, she seems a lil’ mad!” Meghan thought for a second and thought ‘why lose Pompika?’ and said, “Geez I don’t know?” Now she wished she had told the truth, instead of lying. “Oh I wish ya did.” Pompika said. “Tsk-Tsk, bad grammar Pompi” said Meghan. “Sorry, fine I wish you did. There ya… you go” “Hhhmmm, nice save.” Meghan said. “Hey look, Reg’s a comin’” said Pompika. “Great that’s good… wait REG!!!” said Meghan. “What?” said Pompika. "nothing."
hI EVERYONE THIS ONES GOING TO BE SHORT BUT VERY IMPORTANT SOOOO READ ON.............................


I walked up the stairs dragging my bag behind me, once i reached my bedroom, I threw my bag in the corner and threw myself onto my bed. And i began to cry, i cried about every little problem i have ever had. My Mum, Zane and his freinds, Damon, and all the things that irritate me. i didnt stop untill my dad drove into the drive way. i quickly ran into the bathroom and washed my face.
"Belle?" Mike shouted from the kitchen, i quickly jogged down the stairs and smiled when i saw him.
"Yeah?"...
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posted by Charlieminster
The morning lectures went quickly and very soon it was five minutes until she had to meet Zach at Starbucks. She walked with Jenii until she reached the turn she had to take “Hey Jen, Jake I’ve got to go” she said
“Ells where are you going?” Jenii asked and Jake looked confused as well
“I’m, um, going to meet Zach for coffee” she answered watching their expressions. Jenii’s face lifted in to a wide grin and so did Jake.
“Okay Ellie, see you at 2 at my place” said Jenii
“Okay see you then” Ellie said and rushed off to meet Zach.
    Ellie made it...
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posted by lucius_malloy
Somewhere, far away from here, there is a parallel universe. Somewhat literally parallel. There, you may not live in civilization unless you have a parallel – by the age of fifteen.
Some people, however, are lucky: twins. They have been born with their parallel.
A parallel, in this case, is a person who shares your hopes, your dreams, your deepest fears – someone, in fact, whom we call a soulmate.
On the first day of every year, a check is made. In every city, town and village, the people who have had the misfortune to turn fifteen during the past year must turn up and display their parallel...
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posted by HarryPLover
“02…..09…..10” I repeated this over and over again in my head as i turned my locker lock. My locker was full of pictures of Matthew and I from like seventh grade a few recent photos; some band pics, bible verses, you know the common things in a teen’s locker.
In science I couldn’t keep myself awake if my life depended on it. Every time I would try to keep my eyes open, my head would fall. And every time I tried to keep my head up, my eyes would close. My lack of energy is probably because Matt and I stayed up til about three talking about his brothers and how his dad got a new girlfriend...
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posted by CullenProperty
Since two days after we had our fight, I haven't seen Lola at school. It’s worried me, but I just pass it off that she’s sick or on a longer vacation or just ditching like she does at times. I haven’t called her or went by her house either.
The day I go back to school starts like any other day; Woke up to my screaming alarm clock, dress lazily, no breakfast, drive to school in my parents car, being Nick's not finished with my bug, get to English class and sit there dazed. I don't look around the class in Math; I didn't want to see or deal with Tom. Science and Wood Shop drag by and when...
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Kat.
Kat.
Prom Night
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter three: Best ending ever!!
    Luke was lying in a hospital bed the whole time Ashlynn gave birth. He missed the birth of his little premature little girl. He was upset and also dreaming about what his baby girl looked like. Ashlynn was aloud to come see Luke. She started crying when she saw him. She was sad that he was in a temporary coma. She thought he was cute in a weird way. She went to lie down. On her way back she fainted. She fainted because she thought she saw Luke trying to hug her in the hall. The nurse screamed, “HELP,...
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posted by mitchie19
11. M E E T A A R O N


At exactly 3 pm, Mario, our house guard beeped through the telecom.
“Mr. Riley?” Mario asked. He used his British accent. I shifted my weight near the front door which the telecom was hung beside it. I pressed the button. “Yes, Mario?” “There’s someone at the gate, looking for Ms. Marhion.” I wonder who it is. I looked out the window. A silver BMW was parked in front of the gate. Weird.
He might not be a bad guy. “Send him in,” I told Mario then I saw the gate opened.
I approached the guy looking for Mariah. “Hi, Riley Cruz,” we shook hands. “Aaron...
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posted by mitchie19
8. C O N C E R N E D H E A R T


My vision was black. Just plain black. It’s like I’m falling into a deep dark room where I can’t see but the darkness and falling into nothing. It felt cold. The deep dark room was cold.
I slowly opened my eyes. All I can hear was the sound of the heart monitor beeping. I was in a hospital. What happened to me?
Beside me, Norah—sleeping with her head tilted down the side of the bed.
“Norah,” I heard me whisper. I felt the IV dripped into my arm.
Norah had awoken. Her arms around me and sobbed. “Thank God, you’re okay,”
I managed to rub her head...
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posted by mona_me
i am looking for the star, our star, but this time i am alone, you aren't standing on the port next to me..
i feel i am lost now, i can't find this star. you remeber what did i descoverd that night? i found only one star in the whole Portsaid's sky..
you didn't belive that one star is exist.. you said: which star? the sky is felling of the stars!
i thought you was kidding, i was very sure that there's one star.. yeah, sure as the blind is sure that there's nothing around him!
now i see what you were talking about, i loved you, so i couldn't see anyone else but you..
you was my heart's only love..
it was Portsaid's only star..
but you .. you didn't point to the same star, you saw all the stars but mine..
now i am alone, seeing many stars, can't find my star, am i blind? or ..was i blind?
twinkle, twinkle, my littel star..
Portsaid's only star, which one is you?
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*Portsaid is an Egyptian port.
posted by sexiitreysongz
Chapter 2
The next morning I woke up feeling tired and worst than usually. Swollen feet, aching back, I was up all night long treating people who thought they had the flu. I knew I had to get up and go to work, I lived alone for now and somebody has to pay the rent. And right now, it's me. Just as I was about to get up the phone rang. "Hello?", "ohh thank goodness I caught you before you left. Listen jasmine, I know you really need this job to keep your rent up but you've been working yourself crazy down here at this clinic. You’re pregnant and I think you should really take the day off, stay...
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So Tom Closes The door...and heads back into The bathroom With bill.
"That was Gustav" Tom said.
"what did he want" bill asked
"he was Wonderin if we was Ready" Tom Replied.
"Well mabye we..." bill said but got inurupted by Tom Saying
"Shh." He said as he licked The Top of his Nips softly.
"mmmmm Tomi u Gustav." bill moaned.
"and Wats The point Wats n america 4 us?" Tom Asked
"i dont know but u should stop" bill said.
"mmm o billy u Know u Want it," Tom moaned. bill looked at the shower head as Tom Took off his pants. Tom Then looked billnin his Eyes.
"is This Wrong?" Bill asked
"im not sure. but i...
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posted by house_of_nightx
THE LEGEND OF THE VAMPIRE PRINCESS:
THE LEGEND COMES TO LIFE

CHARPTER1:STARSTRUCK

STAR
16 YEARS LATER

I woke to a brisk summers morning in a small town just outside of New York City in my parents best friend Kachiri and her daughter Quinns apartment.Kachiri has been looking after me since i was a baby since my parents had died in a car accident when i was very younge and i had no other family,Kachiri said my parents wanted her to look after me anyway.

As i got out of bed to go downstairs i made my way into my bathroom brushed my hair,cleaned my teeth and examined the sapphire dragon that streached...
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