please tell me what you think.
I told her everything she was so excited that I hung out with more then one guy she hopped he would be the one for me after that I went to my room. I had my laptop on my dark blue desk. My bed was a black blanket with dark purple pillows only one thing in my room that wasn’t dark was the light blue curtains lacey got me when I was a baby. I wonder why my mom didn’t want me. “Kura!” lacey called. I went down stairs. “Yes?” I said. “why did you get the ride with Evan?” she asked motherly. “Um lacey I got the ride with Evan because my truck broke” I said I thought she would be mad but a smile grew on her face. “Well I have to go into work early so can he pick you up.” she said hopefully. With a sigh I said “I’ll call him”. I grabbed my cell phone and dialed his number. It ringed two times before he picked up. “I knew you’d call” he said with a smile in his voice. “Listen I just need a ride till my truck gets fixed” I said stubbornly. “Ok I’ll pick you up at 7:30.” he said. “Fine see you then” I said then pressed end. “Lacey can I use your car to go to the book store?” I asked. I didn’t want to call him again. “Sure sweetie” she said. I grabbed the keys and left. I finally made it I love going to the book store it was oddly calming to be surrounded by books. Then I saw him he walked over “thought you didn’t want to see me” he said. “I don’t and since when do you work here?” I asked. “Since today” he said truthfully. I looked for hours I found seven books. I checked out he commented on my books. He said he couldn’t wait for tomorrow. I wonder why he was just taking me to school. I went to school and finished my homework. I woke from a nightmare. The door bell rang my foster mom got it eagerly. “Hi you must be Evan” she said like a sister trying to get info. “Yes ma’am you’re….. Her sister?” he said. She blushed and said “no her foster mom”. I got up without enthusiasm. “Bye lacey see you later” I said. Once we were outside I asked “why are you acting like you know something I don’t?” his grin grew bigger “you’ll see” he said. We got in the car it smelled like roses he reach into the back seat and surprise he had a dozen red roses we weren’t going on a date why did he have roses. He placed them in my lap and said “they’re for you” I was so flattered stop it you don’t like him I told myself but part of me was falling for him. “Thank you they’re beautiful” I said. We drove past the school “where are we going?” I asked. “To a little place I found and yes lacey knows.” why was he being so romantic? Who knows? “Do you mind?” he said giving me a breath taking smile. “No” I didn’t mind really at all it would be nice to get away from school. We made it to a place near the river it was crystal clear when the sun showed on the river you could’ve sworn you saw diamonds. “Kura?” he said. “Yes?” I replied. “I love you” when he said that my heart pounded against my ribs it really hurt. “I think I love you too” I said. He sat down next he pulled me into his lap he kissed my forehead “I will never hurt you promise.” he said. “You can’t make that huge of a promise.” I said because most likely he would leave.i wanted to be here with him forever. i love him. no you don't Esmaralda will hate you. "Evan why do you love me when you can other girls?" i asked becuase the other girls are prettier then me. "because to me your beautiful and just normal." he said like he meant it. guess Esmeralda hates me.
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♦Evan’s POV♦
I paced my room wondering what to do about her I know I love her but why. “Maybe because you haven’t felt something in about one thousand years. Us shape shifters have to find love some time.” Penelope my real sister (she became a shape shifter 10 years after me so she was my mom). “Can you get out of my head?” I half yelled. “Fine just thought you would like your older sister’s advice.” she said with an attitude. I went outside and had no idea were I was going I just went and I found a place past the school but it was night so the moon reflected against the river it helped me clear my mind when I saw the moon and stars. I let me know I love her all I want is her I called her mom and got everything planned she approved. I had to let her know I did love her. I wanted her with me for all eternity I had to cut myself and put the blood on her but I have to let her trust me and make her hate that dumb wolf Tristan.I went home when I stepped though the door Penelope hugged me “you’re forgiven but-” that’s all she said before Tristan came though the door. “stay away from Kura!” he yelled at me.
I told her everything she was so excited that I hung out with more then one guy she hopped he would be the one for me after that I went to my room. I had my laptop on my dark blue desk. My bed was a black blanket with dark purple pillows only one thing in my room that wasn’t dark was the light blue curtains lacey got me when I was a baby. I wonder why my mom didn’t want me. “Kura!” lacey called. I went down stairs. “Yes?” I said. “why did you get the ride with Evan?” she asked motherly. “Um lacey I got the ride with Evan because my truck broke” I said I thought she would be mad but a smile grew on her face. “Well I have to go into work early so can he pick you up.” she said hopefully. With a sigh I said “I’ll call him”. I grabbed my cell phone and dialed his number. It ringed two times before he picked up. “I knew you’d call” he said with a smile in his voice. “Listen I just need a ride till my truck gets fixed” I said stubbornly. “Ok I’ll pick you up at 7:30.” he said. “Fine see you then” I said then pressed end. “Lacey can I use your car to go to the book store?” I asked. I didn’t want to call him again. “Sure sweetie” she said. I grabbed the keys and left. I finally made it I love going to the book store it was oddly calming to be surrounded by books. Then I saw him he walked over “thought you didn’t want to see me” he said. “I don’t and since when do you work here?” I asked. “Since today” he said truthfully. I looked for hours I found seven books. I checked out he commented on my books. He said he couldn’t wait for tomorrow. I wonder why he was just taking me to school. I went to school and finished my homework. I woke from a nightmare. The door bell rang my foster mom got it eagerly. “Hi you must be Evan” she said like a sister trying to get info. “Yes ma’am you’re….. Her sister?” he said. She blushed and said “no her foster mom”. I got up without enthusiasm. “Bye lacey see you later” I said. Once we were outside I asked “why are you acting like you know something I don’t?” his grin grew bigger “you’ll see” he said. We got in the car it smelled like roses he reach into the back seat and surprise he had a dozen red roses we weren’t going on a date why did he have roses. He placed them in my lap and said “they’re for you” I was so flattered stop it you don’t like him I told myself but part of me was falling for him. “Thank you they’re beautiful” I said. We drove past the school “where are we going?” I asked. “To a little place I found and yes lacey knows.” why was he being so romantic? Who knows? “Do you mind?” he said giving me a breath taking smile. “No” I didn’t mind really at all it would be nice to get away from school. We made it to a place near the river it was crystal clear when the sun showed on the river you could’ve sworn you saw diamonds. “Kura?” he said. “Yes?” I replied. “I love you” when he said that my heart pounded against my ribs it really hurt. “I think I love you too” I said. He sat down next he pulled me into his lap he kissed my forehead “I will never hurt you promise.” he said. “You can’t make that huge of a promise.” I said because most likely he would leave.i wanted to be here with him forever. i love him. no you don't Esmaralda will hate you. "Evan why do you love me when you can other girls?" i asked becuase the other girls are prettier then me. "because to me your beautiful and just normal." he said like he meant it. guess Esmeralda hates me.
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♦Evan’s POV♦
I paced my room wondering what to do about her I know I love her but why. “Maybe because you haven’t felt something in about one thousand years. Us shape shifters have to find love some time.” Penelope my real sister (she became a shape shifter 10 years after me so she was my mom). “Can you get out of my head?” I half yelled. “Fine just thought you would like your older sister’s advice.” she said with an attitude. I went outside and had no idea were I was going I just went and I found a place past the school but it was night so the moon reflected against the river it helped me clear my mind when I saw the moon and stars. I let me know I love her all I want is her I called her mom and got everything planned she approved. I had to let her know I did love her. I wanted her with me for all eternity I had to cut myself and put the blood on her but I have to let her trust me and make her hate that dumb wolf Tristan.I went home when I stepped though the door Penelope hugged me “you’re forgiven but-” that’s all she said before Tristan came though the door. “stay away from Kura!” he yelled at me.
