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posted by Rozaliciousness
Daisy

Daisy was walking round the streets at night. She did it partially because she couldn’t sleep, and because she loved the stars. She thought the stars were amazing, and she still admired them like a child would, even though she was twenty-four and just stuck inside a fourteen-year-old’s body.
But stargazing wasn’t why she wandered down a dark alley to find a young girl getting abused by a man just like her father. The girl’s aura was a startling bright red as she struggled to get away from him, whereas the air around him was a dull, greedy brown as he enjoyed her fear.
Daisy’s delicate little face scrunched up in disgust as she caught a glimpse of the thoughts running through the man’s head, and she decided it was time to step in.
She called out to where he stood, about two meters from her, “Leave her alone.” Her voice was still as high pitched and girly as it had been ten years ago, but the power that had been in it since she’s died made the man’s head snap upwards in shock. When he saw how young and fragile Daisy looked, he laughed loudly and dropped the girl he was abusing. Instead, he advanced on Daisy, pulling a lethal looking knife out from his coat pocket. Bad mistake.
She jumped on his back with such a speed that she doubted he even saw her move. Before he had any time to react, she had brought her arm down on his neck and knocked him out instantly.
Once he had fallen to the ground, Daisy hopped off his back, quickly checked he was still alive, and kicked the knife out of his hands. She then started towards the girl that was slumped against the alley wall, staring at her with huge, terrified eyes. Her aura was shifting to a dark grey and Daisy knew how to give her the energy she needed. She gently touched the girl’s arm, and she felt the warm glow of some of her energy leaving her through her fingertips, until she had given all she could afford.
“Go home.” Daisy said softly. She then smiled sadly and walked away.
As she walked around the streets for the rest of the night, she remembered what had happened to her ten, long years ago. Normally she tried not to think about it, but the sight of the man in the alley had brought it all rushing back.
Daisy’s dad had been beating her ever since his wife had left him. His little daughter looked so much like her beloved mother; he couldn’t help but take his anger out on her. Daisy had no idea what was going on so she had carried on letting him abuse her, until she day he went too far.
It was Daisy’s fourteenth birthday when her dad came home, drunk, and battered her to death. When she’d woken up, she was inside a bin liner in the bin outside the back of their house. She had gone round to the window, where she could see her dad sat in the living room, watching TV like nothing was wrong. He had had a beer in his hand. Tears welled up in Daisy’s eyes as she remembered how she had waited ‘til her dad had fallen asleep, and then she had crept into her own house.
The first aura she ever saw was her dads, and she saw that it was a deep, dark grey. Daisy remembered accidently tapping into her dads mind, and being immensely shocked when his dreams were full of remorse and regret. She had looked into his old, tired face and had forgiven him completely.
She had walked along to her bedroom. She had looked in her huge mirror framed by fairy lights, and had been taken aback by her reflection. Her pale, freckled, heart-shaped face was un-harmed and un-bruised. Her deep blue, wide eyes had no black rings around them. Her bright auburn hair was full of life and bounced in little ringlets around her shoulders. When she allowed herself a little grin, she had seen that she had all of her teeth, and her smile was friendly and innocent.
Daisy snapped back to the present as she found a small, folded piece of paper lying on the brick wall beside her, her name marked in bold on the front. She picked it up carefully, but when she read it her mouth stretched into a happy grin, and her eyes shined with joy.
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posted by coriann
Chapter 4
After four weeks of being best friends, Brandy couldn’t take it anymore and asked her to be his girlfriend. Why not? I mean after all, she’d already asked him for a “fun kiss” and he’d already snuggled her at a movie because “he was cold”. And she in turn put her head on his shoulder because she was “cold too” and he did rub her legs a bit to help her “get some warmth”. They’d already slow danced at home because they were tired of listening to fast music. And she loved him, he knew it, and it was just as goddamned obvious that he loved her. So one afternoon...
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posted by sweetpuddin6969
Hiya, the names Aurora Faye Boudreaux. I've been thinking about how the worlds changing. I figured my life story could be of some intrest.

So i begin......

The dampen grass, cool on my skin sends shivers down my spine. I never liked the cold. The moon tonight was full and bright shimmering down upon me. I could point out every star. It's what i love most about living out here. Mire is a little country town in South Louisiana i've grown up in my whole life. It's very peaceful and everyone knows one another. I live on the outskirts of town so the night is dark and peaceful. All my 20 years of...
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posted by coriann
Chapter3
It was during the August vacation that Brandy and his family had moved to Greenwood. His sisters were not too happy about it, they missed their friends. And Cadence had to say goodbye to her boyfriend, but Brandy had nothing and no one to say goodbye to, so he didn’t care. He spent most of his days locked up in his room, and then when he went to school, he was tortured by the kids. The teachers didn’t like him much either, because he was absent minded and frankly, came across quite dim witted. He never handed up homework assignments and he always got really low in his classes because...
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posted by coriann
Chap2
That very same day, Brandy went out into the yard. There was a patch of forest behind the house. He peered out at it. Could it be that his girl…the love of his life was still there? He felt like a real perv for reaching out to her body, but he saw the expression on her face and she did not look afraid, she looked like if she was welcoming him, urging him on, and she was smiling as bright as the sun, her body seemed to be emanating light. Yes he wanted her true…but she wanted him, she did, she really did. And even if she didn’t, this was his time to find out.

He took one easy step...
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"Um,Rachel you know we could get in BIG trouble for this,right?"Haley asked."Why,are you scared?"Rachel replied,then snorted."Um,no.I just don't want to get in trouble."Haley said."Yeah Rachel,this is,like,kidnapping."Destiny commented."UH!I should have known you two would wimp out!"Rachel complained.

Finally,they came to a stop."Come on you two and help me with her!"Rachel screamed.Then Josie heard doors slamming shut and gravel crunching...
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Phoenix lives in an apartment with her Mom, who was 14 when she had Phoenix. She doesn't have a connection with her dad anymore. She is 15. She is generally very happy, and has a good relationship with her mom. They are very tight on money. Phoenix's best friend is a girl named Mercedes, who is kind of out there, being the middle child and only girl out of five kids.

Lately, Phoenix has gotten very sick. She stays home from school often. She...
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posted by pugglelover2000
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Rachel looked at Laura standing in the crowd of kids laughing."Watch were you're going loser,"Rachel kept going as she saw everyone was paying attention,"ouch,look what you've done to me,oh,it hurts!"Then she fake sniffled and added weakly as if she was dying in pain,"what did I ever do to you?"Then her crowd of girl friends flashed Laura mean looks as they hurried to get to the bathroom to comfort...
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posted by emmett
Everyday
It hurts to see you face
Or say your perfect name
It feels like I’m in disgrace
The pain inside of me
I feel it everyday
How can this be?

Chorus 1:
I’m falling to pieces
Bit by bit
I am such a mess
That I am feeling more and more less
Whole
Everyday, everyday
When we’re together
I don’t feel together
Everyday

I guess silence is the only cure
Never looking back
But finding out how very pure
You are everyday, everyday

Chorus 1

It’s 2am and I’m
Thinking bout you again
Can’t you tell that I’m not happy?
Happy without you
It’s 2am and I’m
Feeling like crying again
I hope you know I ain’t...
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"Here's the way to the school," my grandmother said, handing me a map. "Are you sure you don't just want to wait for Foster to bring me the newspaper? I'm sure he wouldn't mind walking with you."

"But I would," I mumbled. She cocked her head slightly. Good; she didn't hear me. "I'll be fine," I assured her. She kissed my cheek as I left. I slowly made my way, making sure I was going in the right direction. I did not want to get lost. The last thing I needed was to show up on my first day late.

It took only about twenty minutes to get to school. It wasn't that big; much smaller than my old high...
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posted by para-scence
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He came over later, and knocked on the door.

"Ready to go?" he asked. I sighed, and looked to my grandmother. Why'd she have to commit me to this? She just smiled and handed me some grocery money and a list of things she needed. We walked out of the house, and down the sidewalk. "So, are you visiting?" he asked.

"I hope not," I said. He smiled, but furrowed his eyebrows.

"How come? What about your parents?" I shook my head.

"They don't like me. So I left. Hopefully she'll let me stay."...
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