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posted by RanmaRaj
I wrote this Song when my girl broke off with me

My college's band said it was too boring and told me to write another

I'd shared it with Kathy(Lilacool)
She said she liked it......Thanks Kathy


In the center of my heart
there is a deep pain
as if struck by a dart
blood is all going drain

but wait a minute
am i..............?

'tis there all day and night
either asleep or awake
doesn't leave what I might
kick it or give it a shake

but on second thought
am i..............?


Lil puzzling is it's reason
someone once lived there
may be till previous season
she was my heart's only heir

though she is long gone
my heart still says I miss you
best Angel ever born
guess this is the whole issue

'tis there all day and night
either asleep or awake
doesn't leave what I might
kick it or give it a shake

but then
am i really..............?


after all its a stupid hole
blood is still going drain
I will never again be whole
my heart will never beat again

no more missing every sec
no more idiotic love game
and no more What the heck
is it me whom you blame!

'tis there all day and night
either asleep or awake
doesn't leave what I might
kick it or give it a shake

but still............
I might not be.........


swear on my sweet dream,
now a beautiful nightmare
any hard might it seem
alone I'll travel this life's dare

lo its finally happening
my heart is turning stone
a machine I am becoming
or just a loveless clone

'tis there all day and night
either asleep or awake
doesn't leave what I might
kick it or give it a shake

still after all this..........
I'm not sad
isn't too bad


enjoying this pain so much
reminds of her presence
my heart, she would touch
spreading joy, her essence

reminds of my heartbeat
some race were they running?
with her, ran for some feat
weren't those beats cunning!

and yet

In the center of my heart
there is a deep pain(pain)
as if struck by a dart
blood is all going drain(drain)

'tis there all day and night
(all day and night)
either asleep or awake
doesn't leave what I might
(what I might)
kick it or give it a shake

but yes I'm enjoying
she is present in my heart
day-night, morning-evening
she is now a part

pain in my stone heart
(in my stone heart)
all day & night
and on and on and on.....




P.S. If any one of you get a nice tune feel free to compose it.........Just forward it to me too
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posted by DMLIME
MI6 agent Scott Filbury waited quietly outside the office of the head of the department. He was not told why he had been summoned, but the agents usually weren’t. He sat still; the only movement were his eyes, darting to every corner of the blank hallway, trying to take in every detail of his surroundings as he had been trained to 6 years before. He was only 28 and had been recruited after saving 3 people in a burning building, showing a ‘desire for passion and justice’ as his profile read.
He noticed a fly near the bright lamps that were imbedded in the ceiling. He knew that soon the...
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posted by madening_mahem
I only came to resolve a matter, nothing more.
But have you no shame reporter, whose words can bring either joy or pity, have you no shame?
You speak of him, a dearly departed lover of mine and a noble none the less whose actions have been all but harmful to this town, in vein as if he is just another commoner in the street, who sleep in the dirt and has no dignity.
Making a mockery of him though he died only yesterday, but what seems like only an hour to me, and then attempt to treat it with sarcasm.
How dare you. How dare you.
Try not to later state that you knew him well, for that I know very...
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posted by StarWarrior
PROLOGE
“You can’t!” I screeched, griping the thick grass beneath my paws.
    “The whole forest will belong to the Pack of Shadows!” the dark wolf exclaimed enthusiastically, his fur flickering like shadows, “No wolf will stop us!”
    I have to do something! I couldn’t let it end like this! Not with the alpha in this state! Not with the pack split in four!
    “Out of my way pup!” he tossed me aside like a tiny mouse.
    “No!” I leaped at him, biting and clawing with all my strength.
    “This is pointless! You cannot defeat me she-wolf!” I felt him bite me and fling me away again. I was too tired to move now, after traveling this far without resting, I can no longer breathe enough to live.
    I’m over; this is the end of the Pack of Ice! I lay winded and defeated, awaiting death’s arrival patiently.
posted by emmett
~Let You Go~

1: On and on ~ the days go by
Without a sight of you or my sanity
I'm lost not found ~ I wanted to show you , I wanted to tell you...

Chorus: If I say I'm sorry will you believe me?
If I love you again will you never leave me?
I made a mistake when I said no
I never should have let you go...

2: I ring your phone but no one answers, I'm alone
Days are spent reading your old letters, but with a groan,
I'd put them away, In the draw they'd lay until tomorrow...
Tomorrow...

Chorus-

3: This moping, not coping is killing me
My soul is not at rest when I long for it to be
I wish you'd come back or my fears may come true
When I left you, I still loved you and I think you knew

Chorus-

Darlin' don't forget me
I'm locked and you're the only key...
posted by Sephisis17
Another poem by me. This one came out kinda lame,but I'll let the rating be the judge (assuming there will be any).

That Girl

Have you seen that girl,
That goes around here and there?
Nobody knows where she’s going,
Is she even going somewhere?

Pretty face, pretty hair,
Nobody knows her name,
She seems sad, what a coincidence,
I’ve been feeling the same.

She seems lost,
Doesn’t even know where she’s from,
I’m a nice guy so I invite her,
To stay in my home.

She seats in the couch,
My, is she pretty?
I wonder what I can say,
To comfort that girl , so dreamy.

Sarah,
She tells me it’s her name,
She feels sad,
Funny,
Because I’ve been feeling the same
posted by fangs286
I ran as hard as i could, my feet smaking the ground, crushing leaves and twigs.
I heard my own breath ragged but i kept running. David had already been taken and so had Amy but i wasn't giving up that easily. I threw another look over my shoulder, even though i didnt hear anything. Of course there was nothing there.
They were to smart for that.
In my haste, i tripped over a tree that had fallen. i tried to scramble back up, but i hard set of arms grabbed my shoulders. I screamed, but i knew that no one would come for me. So when the hand clamped over my mouth i stopped my protests. Of course...
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posted by Vampiyaa
"Hey, aren't you supposed to be in bed?" Toyo asked, when he spotted Aiko lying down on the couch reading one of May's magazines. Aiko didn't respond. It took a few seconds for Toyo to figure out she was sleeping.
"Silly," Toyo laughed, kneeling beside her. "You'd better wake up before the monitor finds out you didn't show up at your dorm." He attempted to prod her awake and then gasped as his entire body went numb. Something dark inside him stirred, and he widened his eyes and locked them on Aiko's neck. Unconciously, he reached out his hand and slid it onto Aiko's neck. The monster inside...
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posted by juicyjossy9
Where are you at this moment
Only in my dreams
You're missing, but you're always
a heartbeat from me

I'm lost now without you
I don't know where you are
I keep watching
I keep hoping
but time keeps us apart
Is there a way I can find you?
Is there a sign I should know?
Is there a road I could follow
to bring you back home?

Winter lies before me
Now you're so far away
In the darkness of my dreaming
The light of you will stay

If I could be close beside you
If I could be where you are
If I could reach out and touch you
And bring you back home

Is there a way I can find you?
Is there a sign I should know?
Is there a road I could follow
to bring you back home?

To me...

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LivHILuvAlwaiz♥jj9
posted by Funnygirl77
love bites
love bites
Zack was still in his car, wanting so bad to go back to Kisa. He walked up to his house, opened the door and was immediately sucked into a vision. Kisa was going to get kidnapped and it was all because of Zack. Kisa got up and walked to her window, when she opened it she saw two guys in black coming up towards her.
She ran and locked the door, and all the windows, for some reason she just didn't fill safe. She opened her closet to hide, when a voice beside her said: "That won't work. The can smell you the can hear your heart beat." Kisa sung around ready to save her self, not looking at who...
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added by IloveMyLord
this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good or not before I submit it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear love you once were a shining ray.
In my eyes you meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about you is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your love is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our love is coming to its new close.
Colors were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would love to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our love has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our love left it took you along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying love was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me love would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
posted by ZekiYuro
Basics: Hannah Meyer age 17, Born August 1, 1995. Lives in Bradenton, Florida
Blond hair, blue eyes.

What is your happiest memory? My happiest memory was when I finally got to meet my mom's
parents. They lived on the east side of Berlin and did something that got them put in prison for a while.
I'm not sure what they did because my mom won't talk about it.

What don't you want anyone to find out about you? I am afraid to let my guard down. What I mean is, I've seen so many of my friends get hurt in relationships or by their parents breaking up. I hear my parents fighting a lot and so I'm afraid to...
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posted by PotterLambert93
His name was Charlie Brown. We first got him in the fall of 1999. He was cute cocker spaniel with the color of brown and had dark eyes. For 13 years, he was a part of our family. We played with him, took him for walks, gave all the love we had and so much more. He was also a ruff dog as well. Whenever people would come over he would bark at them, thinking that he was trying to protect us from danger. He would also bark at other people's dogs when we took him for walks and, he was very capable of biting badly. Despite all of that, we still loved him, and he loved us.

Around a few years ago, he...
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posted by thirteen_times
He didn’t want money or fancy cars; all he wanted was to be loved by someone, any one at all. He needed someone to care about him, not his wealth, not his ties to the rich and famous, someone that actually cared about him, the boy with bright blue eyes that sparkled in the sunlight, curly raven black hair and a boyish grin permanently plastered on his face hiding the pain of being alone. Yet no one did, all they saw was the heir to the Jeffrey Empire, the boy that was going to inherited it all. The boy, who was the prefect son living up to the Jeffrey name. They never saw the boy’s who’s arms were covered in cuts, the knife against his skin, the blood dripping down staining the carpet, his eyes closing never to open again. No one read the note tucked into his pocket cause no one cared.