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posted by CheekyCheese
Sorry if this isn't very good!

Angel was so excited, her best best friends were coming for her birthday sleepover at five o clock! Time crept slowly to ten past five and still not a single soul in sight! Suddenly her little sister Summer shouted “Ha Ha they're not coming they hate you so much!” Angel ran upstairs weeping and charged desperately into her sister Friday's room.


“Was Summer being mean to you again?” asked Friday
“Yes, she said that my friends weren't coming because they hate me and that's not true!”
“Don't worry its only because she is jealous about you having the best sleepover ever”said Friday
Suddenly Angel heard a knock at the door “I'll get it!” she called out. As soon as she opened the door Yvonne started singing happy birthday and was holding a large oval shaped present neatly wrapped up in sparkly purple paper. Angel and Yvonne hugged and while they were doing so Tillie appeared holding a square box covered in 'Happy Birthday' paper. They were all catching up on gossip when the bell rang “That must be Aliona!” shouted Yvonne and they all ran to the door. “Hello people!” Aliona shouted in her excited American voice.
“I hope you've all remembered your swimming costumes because after tea we're going for a swim in the lake!” exclaimed Angel
“Right time for the presents!” Angels mum Marigold shouted. First of all Angel opened Tillie's present which was a short book and a flower craft set. Then she opened Aliona's, which was an art box with pencils and charcoal all neatly in rainbow order.
“Oh thank you Aliona! I have been wanting this for ages!”
“Your pleasure” Said Aliona feeling pleased that Angel had liked her gift.
“Mine next mine next!” shouted Yvonne. Yvonne's gift turned out to be a massive tub of sequins, beads and lots of arty things.
“Oh thanks Yvonne!”

After their magnificent party tea the girls went to the lake near Angel's house. “I'll be first in!” Aliona shouted. So Aliona jumped in the lake and screamed at the temperature. The others were too scared so they just left Aliona in there. “I'll try and touch the bottom then” Aliona said. Aliona ducked down sticking her feet in the air and sticking an arm up over the top of the water, waving. A few seconds later Angel, Tillie and Yvonne heard some splashing and saw some bubbles where Aliona had gone down. “She must of reached the bottom!” Tillie shouted excitedly. A number of seconds passed and still no sign of Aliona!
“Where is she?” asked Angel

They waited.
“It's been over nine minutes now!” Tillie shouted, almost in tears.
“What are we going to do?” asked Yvonne who was the smartest of the lot. It was bad news if she couldn't even think of an idea. “We can't exactly tell Angel's Mum, she'll go ballistic!”
“And so will Aliona's parents! They'll never want to see us again!” Things were looking very bad for the girls and they still didn't know what to do.
“Right I'm going in!” cried Yvonne “What? We cant just stand here and do nothing!”
“Y...v..v..v..vonne's right” stammered Tillie who was in tears now “We have to help A..A..Aliona!”
“Right” Yvonne declared “It was nice knowing you guys!” she hugged both of them and jumped in. Tillie and Angel burst into floods of tears. It was bad enough losing one best friend let alone two!
“Yvonne shouldn't of followed Aliona down there, it could be dangerous!” exclaimed Angel (The
worrier of the group). It was getting dark and the two girls who were still dry were very very worried! It had been over 11 minutes since Yvonne had jumped in and 18 since Aliona had disappeared! “Lets go inside and get Mum!” Angel suddenly decided after lots of pondering. “She'll know what to do!”
“But what if they come back up?!” Angel cried “I'll stay here!”

So Tillie went pelting back towards the house, faster and faster, when she saw a hooded figure in the distance. For a split second she thought it was Angel's Mum but no, it couldn't have been. For Angel's Mum didn't have fiery red hair. Angel's Mum wasn't that tall. Tillie slipped out a small scream. Her legs had frozen. She didn't know why, she didn't know how. The hooded figure turned. It had a chalky white face. Tillie felt her heart freeze.
posted by brooki
Hi. My name is Epira, but Epi for short,and I'm 15. I go to a school in the rural South Carolina area, with only 14 people in my class. I have a lot of friends who get themselves into a lot of trouble. Awsome family, and wonderful life. School starts back today, so it will be the first day I've seen my friends in a while!

"Epi!", squealed Kae,who is my bestest of all best friends. We have a lot in common, and love each other like sisters. She has the coolest family and cutest little sister you ever did see, Mackie. She was the only person I constantly talked to over the summer; I went over to...
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Duncan: Cousin, why hast thou forsaken me?
Macbeth: Forsaken you? Thou hast forsaken me. Thou...
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posted by dragonrider
Ugh she's been crying all day! I'm sick of it thought one of Alex's sisters Janet
Janet was the middle child and felt she never got attention. She was never a sensitive child. She never had a close relationship with Alex. Janet was five feet one with blond curly hair with ocean blue eyes. She had on a wavy blue faded dress with a few rips in it.
Janet looked at her hysterical mother. She hated to see her mother cry " Mother stop crying! I'm sure Alex is fine!" she shouted to her hysterical mother
The grandmother in the corner of the cabin near the closed window stood up suddenly "Your daughter...
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posted by TDIlover226
Annie & Ann, The spirits of the devil and and an angel part 1.

It all started out in a little town in missouri, it was surrounded by small hills and cornfields and from it you could see the beautiful horrizon and watch the sunset. No matter how beautiful this small town was, no matter how colorful, it still held a terrible secret that the towns people struggled to keep. Outside of this town hidden away in the cornfields was the spirit, called Annie. The spirit of the devil, she was truly this, she would terrify the townspeople who went into "her" cornfield. The town did have only one good...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I woke up, still in Ethan’s arms; my face was up against his chest. I slowly moved up, Ethan noticed this, he let go of me. I got up and walked over to the kitchen table. Why was I in Ethan’s arms? But then I remembered. ‘Adam.......he’s dead’ Dawns words came to my head. I nearly fell down again, but arms caught me. “Whoa....come on” Ethan said pulling me back to the couch. I was now sitting on the couch, Ethan sat beside me. “How did he....?” I asked. I sounded angry but I wasn’t I just couldn’t feel anything else. “We don’t know” Ethan answered me. He was trying...
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posted by xXDreamWriterXx
This is the rough draft of the first chapter of "Beyond a Dream" It's a book that I'm currently writing but it would nice to get some feedback about it. Its long but hope you like it!

Chapter 1

“What! We’re moving?!”

Aria stares at her father, Thomas, with disbelief and utter horror. Thomas sat in his favorite seat; a maroon armrest chair with soft kind of fabric that made it hard not to touch. His shoulder length silver layered hair and black framed glasses that went over his gray eyes made him look like the plain glasses business man that he was. Aria stood in the middle of their living...
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posted by InnerMermaid
What u will need
Water
Salt
Pen'n paper
Cup
Shell from the sea
Your powers might be
Hydrokinisis
Hydrocryokinisis
Termokinisis
Sieren singing
Telekinesis
U might get all the powers but put your first choice on your pic.
First get a pencil and paper and draw your tail what u want it 2 look like I would recommend the u draw your chest as well for better results. Lable your pics!
After u have done that fill the cup with water and sprinkle salt over the cup and the shell. Dab your fingers in the shell and try to get some salt on them. Rub them on your legs and say:

Coaral reefs ocean floors where ever u may...
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posted by Mermaidgirl11
Hi today i will tell you haw to become a mermaid


Side effects:
-itchy legs
-drinking lots of water
-singing allot


Method:

Get into the shower take your shower.
near the end say this spell:
Mermaid magic come to me
I would like a tale not two feet beuaty be upon me fish of all kinds let me see when im finished in the sea when im dry let my feet return to me SO MOTE IT BE

When you say it make sure your wet
Then dry up
Next time you touch water close your eyes imagine you being a mermaid and count to ten out loud then you should fall over and open your eyes

FIND THE MAGIC TALE

WARNING
THIS MAY NOT WORK FOR YOU
I DID NOT MAKE IT UP MY SELF
I GOT IT FROM YOUTUBE
BUT IF IT WORKS TELL ME ILL TYPE IN MORE SPELLS
THIS IS MY FIRST ONE
STAY TUNED
posted by mermaidgirl1010
Another day in paradise, NOT!
Just another summer day of hanging out with friends and such.
Omg. He. Is. Hot. My friend and I were riding our bikes and I saw the cutest guy IN THE UNIVERSE. Well, maybe I am exaggerating but STILL! He is hot!
I must have been staring because the next minute I was on a tree. OMG. He was looking at ME!!!!!!! ''Hi I'm Brady."
"I......I........." OMG! Sooooo stupid! My best friend was gone now and he leaned down. OMG. He kissed me! Then...... gone. I was in my bed. Was it a dream? Well, I think i'll check just to be sure.
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** Little Red Riding Hood is always told the same way time after time. It's time to hear this story from another characters point of view. The story of fairy tales may be completely different than what you are told. Try thinking of everything from someone else's perspective for once, and see how much that story will change.**

"Here I am again, all alone in these stupid woods," I thought this to myself the whole walk down to the forest. Besides the wolves and birds, these woods were scarcely populated, so it was quite boring here all alone. It was always the same old thing, day after day of...
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posted by ZekiYuro
Imagine,John Lennon's most famous song,was recently voted"Britain's favourite song of all time".It's an idealistic song about peace and hope for a better world.
"Imagine all the people living life in peace."The song was a big hit in 1971,and again in 1980 when Lennon was murdered in New York.It became a hit for a third time after the terrorist attacks of September 11th 2001.

But who really wrote the song?Until recently the answer to this question was always John Lennon.But on a TV programme this week Lennon's wife,Yoko Ono,spoke for the first time about how she,in fact,helped to write the song....
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posted by Insight357
When hate is in your heart
Don’t be afraid to tear yourself apart
Through your demonic fear
Until you hear
The angels sing
Thy blessing
When you hear heaven’s
Yell you wonder if the seven
Of sins were committed
It was you who committed them
And you wil burn for sin

You are consumed by wretched flames
And through everyones aims
You are never hit
Nor bit
By the fire consuming you


Screams from hell
Sound like ringing from a bell
Things of silence
Are really screams
People of benevolence
Have bright beams
Of hope and light

You are consumed by wretched flames
And through everyones aims
You are never hit
Nor bit
By the fire consuming you

We are listening
We aren’t missing
We know what lies within
So raise your chin
Look at the world with your pessimistic gleam
And seem
All so picture perfect
posted by greenstergirl
Chapter one
Okay this is a really random stroy but I was bored and I couldn't get this idea out of my head. In my opinion it is really badly written so sorry.

“Okay Class, you have the rest of the period to finish this quiz. This is the last grade before your midterm so work well, and remembers what we studied,” Said my Mr. Grazing, my math teacher. He was the kind of teacher kids pick on and make fun of behind his back. I hate math, so I don’t care for him as a teacher much. He usually wears a sweater vest and weird 1950 glasses that squeeze his nose at the tip.

I stared at the Chapter...
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posted by EmzLovesCheryl
About me and my amazing best friend <3



Me and my best friend
My best friend and me,
We were always together
Inseperable you see.
Our imaginary games
Our funny little chats,
That special secret language
The fairies and the cats.
The way we always laughed
At every single thing,
The way we loved to dance
Dance and act and sing!

You were always my partner
In everything I did,
Always together
Just like twins they said.
You'd help me with my homework
You've always been clever,
And then I'd help you with your story
We'd imagine those kind of things together.
I could skip and hop and twirl around
And I always knew,
That...
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posted by mitchie19
1. L E T T E R
Dear Mariah,
I and your father are expecting to leave for the upcoming season.
Your father got accepted as a manager of a company in United States and I have to be there to guide him. If you’re wondering whose going to take care of you Norah will be there. She’ll be with you for a while. Don’t worry me and your father will call you to check on you and Norah okay? And expect us that we won’t be there in your graduation and we will always be there to support you. I left your emergency money by the fridge and your money for expenses. Please save your money, we’ll use...
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