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posted by greenstergirl
Chapter 3

    In front of me was a world like no other. Danny called it BOES but it was nowhere near being a building. There were trees everywhere. In the distance were a couple mountains. There were so many plants, trees, flowers, lakes, ponds, and hills that it could almost be described as a fairy world. I almost thought it was a fairy world from seeing a bunch of pretty mermaids in the ponds, gigantic fire breathing dragons in the sky, naiads, centaurs, and many more mythological animals that I can’t name. There were even real animals, like elephants and cats, cheetahs, horses, dogs, birds, lions, snakes, and more. The valley was also filled with people. They weren’t afraid of any of the animals. Probably every kind of creature on earth filled the valley. In the middle of it all, was a humongous, blue castle.
“WHAT IN THE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” I screamed as I gawked at a sparkling pink unicorn passing by.
“Welcome to the BOES!” Danny said cheerfully.
“MORE LIKE A FAIRYTALE WONDERLAND!!” I practically screamed at the top of my lungs.
Mrs. Brown laughed and led us down a rock road to the palace. It would probably take us hours to get to the castle.
“The castle is so far away! It’ll take us forever to walk there!” I said sighing as I stared at pack of centaurs practicing their archery.
“No, we can ride.” Danny smiled suspiciously.
“Ride? Ride what exactly?”
“Me!” Danny said laughing. She suddenly fell onto her hands and she changed into a massive brown bear. Instead of wearing clothing her bear body was covered in shaggy brown fur. Her hands grew talons and her nose grew longer to become a bear’s snout.
I screamed. Literally, screamed so loud that every single creature around us stopped to look at me. This was WAY too much for one day. MY BEST FRIEND IS A BEAR! You would be panicking right?
“Don’t freak out Janie sheesh!” Danny said as she stared around us like she was embarrassed. How could she be embarrassed? She just shape shifted in PUBLIC!
“You can speak in……..bear…….from……” I asked.
“DUH! I’m not full bear you know! Now hop onto my back.”
“Ha, like you can carry me! Your mom would never approve, wait where is Mrs. Brown?” I suddenly became scared. I didn’t want to be in a valley with dragons if Mrs. Brown wasn’t going to be here.
“Up here darling!” She said. I looked up above me, and there to my amazement, was a small blue feathered bird with a yellow beak flying in circles.
“Uh………………Mrs. Brown………………..are you a bluebird?” I asked with edge in my voice. My best friend was an eagle.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
“Yes, Janie calm down. I am may be a small tiny blue bird at the moment but just go! Now hop onto Danny, she is the fastest mount for you at the moment now hurry up! Your test starts in 10 minutes!”
I sighed. This was the worst day of my life. I jumped onto what I’m guessing was my best friend. I couldn’t believe she had kept this weird talent from me.
Suddenly, Danny burst down the road with me barely keeping hold of her back. The rushing winds zipped through my long hair making me unstable.
“HOW ARE YOU GOING SO FAST?!?!” I tried to yell out to Danny through the winds.
“I’m A BEAR YOU IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
“THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!” I cried out sarcastically. My feelings were hurt, hurt bad. Tears rolled down my face. How dare she call me an idiot!!! She lied to me for all the years we had known each other!!!!!!!!!
Riding down the path we passed millions of different creatures and people. The people walked freely through the animals like they weren’t afraid of them. My favorite creatures were the giant silver dragons that breathed ice. What was weird was I saw one girl a bit older than me jump off a rock and immediately she was a huge brown stallion. Or how I saw an old man turn into a seal by the water. How could they do that?
Once we finally reached the gargantuan castle I immediately hopped off Danny. I didn’t want to be anywhere near her.
“Don’t leave me Janie!” Danny called after my trudging feet.
“Oh why!!??? Because you lied to me all these years and never told me you were a bear girl thing!!!”
“It’s not a bear girl I am a bear shapeshifter you weirdo!!!”
“Me a weirdo? Ha you’re the one who’s a bear!!”
“Shut up!!!”
“You!!” I stomped over to Danny and slapped her furry brown muzzle.
“Teach you right!!! Danny growled and stared at me in the eye. I didn’t care anymore. She lied.
As we were about to pounce on each other a tall man in an orange Chinese robe placed his hand between us. He was bald with squinty Chinese eyes.
“I’m Tiachi. Like the Chinese art. We were expecting you.” He said while bowing down to Danny and I. Danny immediately shifted back into a human and gave me the evil eye while following him.
While walking down a long glowing corridor Danny pinched my arm. While I mumbled in pain Danny whispered through her teeth, “Serves you right for slapping me!”
“Where are we going?” I asked trying to change the subject.
“We are going to go test you. They will explain.” Danny rolled her eyes and ran up to walk side by side with Tiachi.
The halls of the castle that we walked through were pure crystal wals. The windows that shown light through made them shimmer and gleam. The floor was pure white with a long green rug stretching all the way to a gigantic grand door at the end of the hall. Paintings of different creatures filled the room. The creatures were more than your normal zoo animals.
As we approached the door I finally noticed there was no doorknob. “How are we going to get in?” I asked impatiently.
Tiachi rolled his eyes and answered, “Don’t ask questions.” I sighed and started to turn back. But something stopped me, Danny’s hand on my shoulder.
“Wait…” She whispered with a small smile on her face. Watch. I turned around. Tiachi clapped his hands together and bowed down. Then he jumped up and moved his hands to the sides just like Mrs. Brown had. And to finish off his funny dance move a gust of fast air swirled around the room opening the door.
“WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE?!?!?!” I asked extremely frustrated.
“I’ll explain don’t ask questions!!”
Ugh. Stupid baldie.
Beyond the door it was the same before, crystal walls and ceiling along with a blue rug on the white floor. I tried to leave again but they pulled me back. Inside the room were ten different people, Four girls, four boys, a cat, and a dog. Four of the people sat in a group on the left side of the room. On the wall behind them was a grand green flag with an orange leaf. The other four people sat on the right side with a blue flag. In the center of it was a diamond. And in the middle of the room stood the cat and the dog with no flag but a painting of a lion and a wolf.
“Janie, welcome to the ten elders. They rule the BOES, and each of them are experts on a certain kind of element or animal.”
“Yea…I don’t get any of this.”
A girl of about 70 in a black dress got up. “I will explain. But first I will introduce myself. I am Matilda, the master of the walking creatures. The creatures that walk with two or four feet. I am a black stallion.”
“Haha….no you’re a lady Matilda.” I laughed.
“Actually, I’m a lady….and a black stallion. Immediately she turned and instead of an old woman there was a grand horse with a smooth black pelt. A white diamond was on her head as well. “I told you!” She said.
Great. An old lady is a horse. A talking horse.
She turned back and sat down again in her chair on the side with the leaf flag.
“so….you said you would explain this to me?” I said while tapping my foot.
“Oh haha yes I did!!” She smiled. “Since the beginning of time, people have learned how to live. WE used to communicate with animals and we saw them as equals. We all spoke English, we all lived together, and the world was great. But many humans began to see the animals as creatures, not equals. Over time the animals were just creatures we used for labor, and wee used them as slaves. But some people believed that animals were still equals and they helped the animals. But when the people declared a war against the animals, the people who followed the creatures didn’t know which side to join. So a man named Nephi asked the first wolf, a powerful creature that could control the ice and snow, to give him the power to shape shift into a wolf. Then he could act like he was on the human’s side and then fight on the animal’s side as a wolf. Many of the good people who still loved animals did the same becoming all manner of creatures creating a new race in our world, shape shifters.”
“Huh?”
“May I continue?”
“Yes….”
“Okay, so in the end the humans won and the animals lost the way to speak English and forgot that humans used to be their friends. But the animal shape shifters still did, they were half human, half animal. They ten passed on their powers to their children but soon they no longer had to teach the power. Children were born with it. We created the BOES for those animal shape shifters. So they could learn their powers. But you see, some animals were elemental, like a dragon for example. It was a giant lizard that controlled fire. A wolf was as well. It could control ice, the most powerful element. It has properties unlike any other. Then there became people who couldn’t shape shift, but could only control an element. That’s why there are three groups in this room.”
“Huh?”
“This flag-“ Matilda pointed at the leaf flag, “represents the people who can only shape shift. The diamond flag stands for the people who can only control an element. And the painting is for the people who can control an element AND can shape shift. Like your friend here, Danny.”
I looked at Danny. She smiled.
“Danny can shape shift into a bear. And she can control plants. Her mother can become a blue bird AND she can control air. And now we will test you to see who you are.”

I couldn’t believe this.
posted by StarWarsFan7
Angel's POV

All of a sudden the lights disappear as do our wands. I hope they were placed somewhere safe. Rosella, Tyler and I arrive in front of some sparkling pool of water. "Uhh...Tyler, what the heck are we doing here?" I question my rebel brother. "I don't know! I swear we were supposed to be with the Goddess of the Oracle!" Tyler exclaims. You know, I totally expected something like this to happen from Rosella. But, since Tyler did it, it's pretty surprising to me! "Well, the way I see it, there's no Goddess here!" Rosella yells at the top of her lungs. I agree with my younger sister for...
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posted by para-scence
We didn't tell mine or Blake's family about the pregnancy. I didn't want anyone to feel sorry for us if we had another miscarriage. I was really excited, but I was also absolutely terrified. And since I couldn't manage to keep myself calm, Blake insisted that I keep taking my medication throughout the pregnancy.

I took Hera to her first AA meeting. I promised not to tell Dad or Kara, even though I knew I probably should. We agreed we only tell them if she kept drinking; and I warned her if she lied to me, I would eventually find out and kill her. She didn't really talk in the meeting, which...
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posted by para-scence
I was able to avoid Drew for the rest of the school week because of work. He wasn't happy about it, but there wasn't much he could do; I had to work. I'd taken the last nonconvulsant pill a couple days ago. This worried me; maybe if I could manage to stay calm and not get too worked up, I wouldn't have any major seizures. Every once in a while, when I'm not on medication, I can have absence seizures; those aren't so bad, but it's still not fun.

Blake asked if I was free on Saturday. I guess I could avoid Drew for another day. He said he'd pick me up at my house at noon.

***

On Saturday, I was...
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posted by bamagirl5899
Alex's pov


I hate Chicago busy all the time and easy to get mugged like right now.The guy was chasing me a gun pointed I couldnt show what I was just around the cornor and wham. I felt a bullet hit me.the bullet was from a .44 magnuim I had one like it in my room at home my friend accidently shot me with it and i knew what the bullet felt like.It hit me in my right shoulder damaging my wing.*no escape* I thought. I finally turned the corner to a dead end.I baked against the wall.Then my friends jumped from the roof tops and surrounded me.I got of the wall and kicked the gun outta his hand and...
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posted by para-scence
Things were better after that. It was... boring I guess. But being bored is better than being raped. I walked for hours upon hours, still seeming to get nowhere. I was starting to believe I was truly lost. My stomach felt like it was starting to digest itself, which I hoped it wasn't, but I wouldn't be surprised. The only time I had something to drink was when it rained. I'd walk down the road, with my mouth open at the sky like a complete idiot. It worked a little though, and I kept myself from dehydrating.

It was three whole days before I got close to home. But I was so hungry and tired and...
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posted by para-scence
It had been almost a month since I arrived at Gail's place. It wasn't that bad there. Actually, it was a lot better than I thought it ever would be. Since then, I had had absolutely no contact from my brothers. I was starting to get worried. How was Reed? Was Nikolai happy I was gone? Did they even miss me? One Saturday morning while I was eating breakfast Gail must;ve noticed I was in a mood.

"What's up, kiddo?" she asked.

"I just miss my brothers," I shrugged it off. "They haven't called or anything,"

"Well that's 'cause they can't," Gail said with a strange hint of optimism in her voice. They...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 18





It was relatively a quiet night at the Slade Ranch in Las Vegas, New Mexico.
Cayden Slade noticed that the horses were slightly on edge as he put them in their barn for the night, there was a storm coming so perhaps the highly charged atmosphere was causing their edginess. He shivered as a sudden chilly breeze blew by, it was odd having it be this nippy at night during this time of year but he ignored it and headed back to the ranch house.
About a 15 minute walk since the ranch was not very large, considered very small by some rancher’s standards but at times it felt like half an...
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posted by para-scence
1 year later...

I ran my hand through my hair, and took a deep breath. After a few more breaths, I finally got the courage to knock on the door. There were some shouts over who should get the door, and I smiled a little. A couple minutes later I heard the deadbolt unlock, and the door opened. I smiled shyly.

"Alessa?" he asked. Tears of joy began their journey down my face and I nodded, smiling hugely. Iwas pulled into a giant hug, and lifted me off my feet..

"Micah!" I shouted. He set me off the ground looked me over, and chuckled.

"You haven't changed a bit!" he smiled.

"I wish I could say the...
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I have no idea what it's called yet. I would post this in answers but it's a little long. It's about a girl named Kathryn who is murdered and her ghost starts following around a girl named Ambyr (name subject to change, I'm just using it for now). This is the prologue:


PROLOGUE
She got up immediately after she tripped, mentally yelling at herself for not paying attention. She ran, her dark brown, almost black, hair bouncing. Tripping had let whoever was chasing her catch up a little. Faster, faster! She thought hard to herself. But she had been running for a long time. Imagine the person behind...
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posted by Insight357
    A raven flew up to me. I stayed up in my tree, my gear tampering with my balance. It was plenty bad on its own. It didn’t need help. I sighed, and jumped down from the tree as I heard my name. No, I didn’t need anyone to know my secret. Not her, not yet.
    
    I awoke to the beeping of my alarm. It was a cold December morning. I would love winter, if it just wasn’t so cold.
    I ran over to the window. Of course, the weather channel lied again. Last night they predicted it would snow, but did it? No....
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Prologue:
When I Was Thirteen



“Chase!” Carrie Flinn yelled over the roar of music. A boy who looked uncannily like her— black hair, hazel eyes and a thin nose dusted with freckles— turned around.
“What?” he yelled back. “I'm trying to listen to the concert!” Carrie rolled her eyes and leaned her arms against the cool metal bar of the small balcony. She was with her brother, Chase, at a Metallic Lights concert, the band Chase loved and Carrie detested. They had quite amazing seats on a little metal balcony that hung just above the stage, so that anybody on stage could just reach...
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posted by itchygum
I glanced around the schoolyard, seeing plenty of familiar faces. Behind the trees, I saw Raegan's black curls. "Raegan!" I called just loud enough for her to hear. I watched her hazel eyes scan the schoolyard. when her eyes met me, she smiled, reveling her braces and waved to me to come over. I couldn't help but smile back. We'd been friends since first grade, but we'd been drifting apart. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Brooke roll her eyes at Raegan. They never did get along.
I walked to the trees, carefully maneuvering around the dirt so my new converses wouldn't get ruined. "Hey, Ana,"...
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I've been lately adding a lot of X Academy, Stardom and Vampire Society excerpts and since nobody really knows what im talking about i decided to make a guide XD

X Academy - Aiko is a fourteen year old girl who was put up for adoption as a baby and was adopted by a man called Gideon. Throughout the years Gideon physically abused Aiko. Aiko gets accepted into the elite X Academy, an enormous school with an enormous secret. A week before Aiko is supposed to pack her bags and leave for X Academy, she is bitten on her wrist by a rogue vampire. She is also saved by another vampire. The bite on her...
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posted by Insight357
I felt stiff, and I stretched. I slowly opened my eyes; I was in Alexander’s bedroom. I was fully clothed, that was a good sign. I laid flat on my back.
    “Yes, I found him on the street,” Alexander must’ve been on the phone. Was he talking about me? There was a pause.
    “He was crying, and I brought him back here. He got into a bad fight with Grey. She kicked him out,” great a recap.
    “Okay, I will. Goodbye Dr. Anozi,” Alexander hung up the phone. He was talking to Dr. Anozi. I felt comforted by the fact that...
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posted by Insight357
I didn’t know where I was going, but I had to go somewhere. The fight with Grey had been bad. I didn’t feel guilty, and that bothered me. I always felt guilty after a fight, but this seemed to be an exception. I was…happy? No, that wasn’t the word, more overjoyed, I guess.
    I kept walking; it was around seven when I sank down on the sidewalk. I was tired, and I had nowhere to go. I didn’t know what I was supposed to do…I could always look for Xander, but knowing him, he knew how to cover his tracks. The only person who seemed to know where he was at all times...
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Chapter 7

The Front Desk

Jason walked up to the front desk. The front desk manager was asleep, with his head facing the back wall. It seemed as if there were one million pictures and folders scattered along his desk. Right on his lap was the gold coin Jason had given him.
Jason reached for it. He was just about to lift it up, when the front desk manager rotated his head in a perfect circle with the front of his body facing the opposite direction. His facial expression and face was completely different. He wasn’t a human. He was a monster. His red eyes were not exactly eyes. They were more like...
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Jason: blonde spiky hair, green eyes, wearing his favorite guitar shirt for almost three days straight, and he’s a teenager, but a rather short one. He has orange braces that are spotted easily when he smiles. Jason has an arm that can oddly twist all the way around in a
perfect circle. One of the strangest things about him is a black thing in the shape of a flame on his left leg. People think it’s a poorly drawn drawing, but he was born with it, and as he got older it grew with him.

Jason was sitting by the fireplace watching the flames blow from side to side. His eyes liked to find themselves,...
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"IDIOT!" the King screeched. Toyo flinched as if the King had struck him.
"DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE?" he continued to yell angrily.
"The Vampire Society figured out that Aiko was at X Aacademy," Toyo said quietly. "So I sent her away."
"Without the protection of other vampires," the King hissed. "Suppose they find out where she is now. Who will protect her? She's as good as dead now!" The King sighed irritably and strode towards the door.
"Inform the Society that I will not be available for the next year," he said coldly. "And this time, don't mess it up." The King strode out of the...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 16






A loud noise woke Bone from his sleep. Becoming more alert he felt a sharp pain in his neck from laying his head over after falling asleep on his shop couch.
Opening one dry eye he could see Jax rustling around the shop benches and he appeared to have his shotgun strapped to his back and somehow he got some old work boots over his injured foot.
He looked like he was prepared for battle.
“The hell you doin’ preparin’ for war?” he said.
“No, goin’ huntin’. Koda hunting”
Bone was wide awake now.
“You are not going to kill my nephew,” he said forcefully stopping Jax in...
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posted by Skitty_Love
"Takaya's grades have been decreasing, there is a chance she may not make high school next year.." Ms. Mitsuba says calmly to my mother. "Takaya! Is this true? Why didn't you tell me you were failing school?" She snaps at me, who was sitting next to her on the cushioned chairs placed across the marble desk. I silently shrug, looking down at the patterned carpet. "Tell me!" She continues to order. "I just-" "Your father is gonna be furious!" My mom cuts me off of my sentence. Thats when I had snapped. "Quit talking! Let go of my now!" I cry, my voice thundering. Ms. Mitsuba grabs my wrist,...
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