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posted by amethyst44

After that, I had the courage to go into the forest. Every time I did, however, I felt a smidge closer to guilt and foolishness. His threat should have prevented me from going into the forest again, or even think about it. But no. I wasn't going to be bullied down by a snobby kid in the forest from letting me have my lovely freedom when I wanted. Besides, we owned these woods. He could file against me, or burn the whole forest for all I cared, but he would be the one to pay the price. And by the way his clothes were mangled and destroyed, I don't think the price would even match his dream sufficiency...

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Sestina 2

posted by housefrk

The woman surveys the damage to the screen
In the window over the desk.
Her son’s bedroom is covered in posters of outer space
And crumbs from many varieties of potato chip.
The boy sits on the bed in his Superman suit
And asks to taste the cup of tea

The mother is sipping. She offers him the tea
But the boy, worried about being punished for the screen,
Spills it on his mother’s suit
And then drops the cup onto the desk
Giving it a significant chip.
He backs up to put space

Between himself and his angering mother, but she closes the space
And begins to clean out of the carpet the spilled tea
Before it...

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Forsaken

posted by Kimi4312

Chapter Four:Immortality

The next day, Kimberly came to her old house she once lived, she walked around and she look at all the rooms and she saw her old bedroom is now her twin daughter's room now, she sees a picture of her daughters and she went to her parents bedroom and sees pictures of her and her sister Alice as children, Kimberly felt so guilty of not telling them she was alive and she cries, Jacob notice she look so much like she used to be when they were younger expect her hair is now short and curly, he sees her sorrow behind her eyes and see a blood tear drop on the floor, he walked...

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Immortal Magic - Prologue and Chapter 1

posted by 1-2vampire

Prologue
“Witch! Witch!” they screamed. Willow ran from the angry mob behind her. She could feel their anger, and their fear. For her there was just fear. She didn’t know what to do; they’d caught her in the act of healing a leaper. At first he thought that she was Christ reincarnated, which was ridiculous, but she made the mistake of laughing at his absurd thought. And he figured it out. He may have been a leaper but he wasn’t stupid.
“She’s over there!” Someone shouted, Willow glanced back, and saw the flickering flames in the distance, and the pointed teeth of pitch forks....

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SONG - Life Partner

posted by viju

Hmmmmm…. (This is a story) aha... (Of husband wife)
I’m not like them
Hmmmmm..... aha aha
That’s the way I am
La la la la la
I’m not like them
La la la la la
That’s the way I am

Be calm, why you’re screamin
Why you cry, when you see me hangin
With some, one else, why I feel
Like something burning

Stay back, why you’re comin
After me, now you’re feelin
Jealous, ain’t I feel
When you were with those bitchy babes when I was seeing you

With somebody else,
Like everyone else
All were watching your back
When you were flat
With those slut girls
You love to hang with them…….

Tell me…..

(Chorus)
Why...

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campfire song song lyrics

posted by Fangirl99

from:sponge bob
wirtten by:sponge bob
guitar by:spongeb
preformed by:sponge bob&patrick& squidward
featuring:Patrick
also featuring :squidward *sorta*
drums:patrick
singer:spongebob

lets gather around the campfire and sing the campfire song our c-a-mp-f-i-r-e-s-o-n-g song. and if you think that we cant sing it faster then your wrong but itll help if you just sing along
Bom Bom Bom
*sing it fast!*
C-a-m-p-f-i-r-e-s-o-n-g song,C-am-p-f-i-r-e-s-o-n-g song and if you think that we cant sing it faster then you wrong but itll help if you just sing along.
*even faster*C-a-m-p-f-i-r-e-s-o-n-g song,C-a-m-p-f-i-r-e-s-o-n-g song Patrick!
"SoNG!C-A-M-P-F-I-R-E..
"squdiward1good!"
Itll help!itll help!if you just sing along!OH YEAH!

THE END

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That week Chapter 3

posted by dragonrider

Still the first day - Athena's perspective

I smiled as I walked back to my friends and I's table. I sat down and looked at my friends.
"Where have you been?" Erica asked "I need make up advice and you know Emily isn't into that,"
Emily hardly looked up from her book "Make up is a complete waste of time," she said
"Not it is not. It attracts cute boys," Erica argued
Emily sighed "As I told you before your personality attracts them," she said
I held up my hands "Girls please! You want to know where I was or not?" I asked
They both exchanged glances "Yes we do,"
I sighed "Alright. I was talking to...

The Fire Neverending: Chapter 2: Sterns and Banks

posted by ganondorfslayer

Morgan Sterns was sipping up the last drips of her coffee. She was going to need every last drop if she was going to work late enough to finish all of her reports. She had reports on all kinds of things. Serial killers, counterfeiters, asassination attempts, the list went on and on.
Why do the FBI get handed everything, she wondered. But what she really wanted to know was why she was the one always stuck with work when most of the other agents and anaylists were just standing around telling jokes and drinking coffee. Morgan got back to her seat and pushed her almond hair out of her eyes and...

A CURSED STORY CHAP: 10 edwards pov

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter10: Edwards pov
Days passed one by one and I was getting more suspicious about Bella I could see it in her eyes that she truly hated Damien but here actions were telling something different the ways her body curled around him the way she hugged him, kissed him I just wanted to get up and kill him. even Alice saw a few visions of it and sent Emmett and jasper to get a hold on me but even with all this evidence that maybe ,maybe Bella loved him but I knew there was something wrong, her eyes were so sad, emotionless and cold, she's not the happy perky Alice like but not annoying Bella my...

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More Than Friends or Just a Dream? (Eminem Story) [Chapter Two - Who Are You?]

posted by EminemAddict09

Oh great it’s probably that creepy garbage man again. I thought. I turned around anyway, my eyes widened, I felt my face turn red, I couldn’t believe who was standing in front of me. I felt embarrassed. He just stared at me, with a look that just says hello. I opened my mouth thinking I was going to say something. Nothing came out I quickly shut my mouth and took a step back, about to walk away. “No, don’t run,” he said, his voice was so sweet.
“I… Umm…. Em…Eminem…uhh… hello?” I stuttered nervously with a stupid grin on my face, after I knew he wasn’t mad at me.
“Who...

Living and dieing with the hate....

posted by ashesandwine

It's been a while since I write anything here! I just didn't feel like posting this on my spot, so I thought I would post it here!

I looked into his eyes, not knowing what to think... It's been so long, so much has happened and yet I feel just like I did that first time!
I hate thinking of it... Every word that comes out of my mouth seems to fade away as soon as it reaches the air. Every thought that comes to my mind is full of pain and hate, and yet I never seem to be sad!
I face life with a smile in my face, with a mask in my heart! I keep my thoughts close, not letting anyone reach them!
I...

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A CURSED STORY CHAP:6

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 6: headache.
I was reading a book on my bed when I heard my phone buzz
-hi Alice!
-hey Bella I was wondering if me and edward could come and see u?
What? People just don’t call and invite theme selves over! ugh! just be nice Bella she's a good vamp or I think she is……
-yeah sure when are u coming?
I asked. I was positive she even had a set time to come here….
-at 3:00 pm it gives u 1 hour to clean and dress up! I'm so happy to come over! Yay!
Then she hung up oooh I don’t want to dress up! Right now I just want to sleep or continuing reading my book! I just climbed of my bed and cleaned...

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The Vampire Reporter -- Chapter 8

posted by BiteMeCullen107

An hour later they had gone threw what little was left and found four bodies one out of four survived. He was badly hurt and probably wasn’t going to be out of the hospital for a couple weeks possibly months. Vanna wasn’t to hurt she broke her left leg and had to get three stitches. You’d think that because I was closer to the building I would have gotten hurt more but no I just sprained my wrist had to get six stitches and had a couple cuts and burses.
“Excuse me sir?”
I walked up to a one of the doctors that was taking care of Vanna at the time. He turned around and it looked like...

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A CURSED STORY:chapter 1

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 1: the first meeting
I was remembering the first time I was trying to hide from my only enemy…..Damien I was running away from him for 160 years but he never gave up chasing me. My life is a living hell every little thing made me fear for no reason it’s just the part of the curse I can’t control it…….
-Bella
Angela asked worried I looked at her
-yeah?
-Nothing I was just worried, you were starring there for, I don’t know half an hour!
-oh I'm sorry I was just remembering things
-ok, do you want to talk about it?
-no I'm fine
-ok so I…um..i mean… we were wondering if you wanted...

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black moon chap 20

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 20
While Alice was dragging me to see her family I was worried what will happen when I see edward I mean after all this years ,we moved on and stuff……..ooh I'm such an idiot what can happen??? Nothing can happed if he remmembers he left ME! I didn’t leave him! So what does he wants now?.....
I was thinking hard not realizing were she was dragging me when someone hugged me
-oh Bella I'm so happy to see you look at you!!! You havent changed at all!
Then he laughed his booming laugh,awww I truley miss Emmett he always made me laugh and made fun of me
-Bella honey,how are you?
Esme came...

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The shadowed walk

posted by Free_Spirit

Me: okay this is a short story i came up with. I know its a little bit drepressing but i was in a really bad mood. PLEASE TELL Me WHAT YOU THINK. Sorry i pu that in caps cause people will notice it better. Okay enjoy

I start as the rain begins to fall. Great i thought darkly. I didn't like the rain, i always thought it emphasised how bad this world really is. I waited impatiently for class to end. The class was playing soccer and the other kids seemed to love the rain while playing. I didn't join in, i wasn't apart of that group.

I sighed in relief when i heard the bell signal the end of class....

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Fight to Freedom Chapter 3: Searching for a ghost.

posted by ganondorfslayer

Please read the other chapters and tell me whether this is any good or not. And if you don't like it, please give constructive critisicm.

The last of the dinner guests poured out of Joseph Warren's house. He didn't have dinner parties often because they usually resulted in fight's between two different people or parties with extremely different political views. Fortunately, their was only one, small conflict on whether America should be fighting communism in other coutries or not. Joeseph of course took the side of fighting communism, and so did a couple of others. But most of the other people...

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why me ♦4♦

posted by Thalia_huntress

please rate and tell me what you think :)

“Maryann’s pov (the ghost)”
When Kura woke I went back to the underworld to yell at Magnolia (her mom) “I hate lying to that poor child! You left her to become a vamp after you asked a witch to turn you back into a human to have her then be turned back into a vamp!” I yelled at her. She was getting ready to go feed on the males that followed her around. “Well you don’t have to watch after her I was your choice.” she said like a snob. “Because her mom didn’t care and I’m beyond younger then you I was twelve when you killed me and...

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black moon chap 11

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 11
I pulled away and showed matt where I was looking it was a brown wolf staring at us I bet he was stairing the whole time we were there the wolf had intelligent eyes like human then it disappeared and jake came out of the same spot with his bare chest
-jake?
-Bella what are you doing here? Didn’t you say you were living?
He said coldly
-you talk like this is your land! I was born here you cant say were I should go!
-I can Bella I don’t want to kill you!
I laughed kill me! Pfffff
-you cant kill us!
Matt said angry
-jake what do you want you don’t have powers…………and how did you...

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communism is a fire, chapter 1: employed by liberty

posted by ganondorfslayer

The guards walked back and forth in their normal sweeping motion that they always used. This made Joseph smile watching them through his hotel window with his state-of-the-art night-vision binoculars. just routine as usual, at least that's what the guards thought. Joseph looked at his watch, 12:23a.m. only seven more minutes till he had to go. Joseph grabbed his bag of ammunition and various other things. His small, light smg. He also put on his body armor, his cammo, and grabbed his combat knife. And of course his baby, he'd never forget his baby. His baby was a 9.mm beretta. Aims like a dream...