This is a poem I wrote today, 7 May 2008. Feedback/analysis is welcome.
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My eyes have been thirsting for you
These long lonely years
My ears have strained to hear your voice
The boy's enthusiasm for his lover
Has not sagged but rather swelled
With deprivation
Memory paints you
Perfect in wit, charm
Desire
Today I saw you briefly, from afar
I had to avert my eyes
Lest I be consumed
My ears heard your distant laughter
Through all the other noise
In that crowded place
I know that memory lies
But still I shivered
With longing and remorse
Today I also heard of the other man
Now in your life
Somewhere inside, a door slammed shut
A portcullis came crashing down
Putting an end to the questions
Could there be a place for us in our lives?
Might we ever talk again of big things and small
(Not wrapped in each other's arms, but still)?
Would I ever again hear stories about your cats,
Equal parts condescension and affection?
Would you want to talk? Could we be friends, or
Would you want to claw out my eyes?
The door slammed shut, and all I could feel
Was a tremendous, crushing weight
Miraculously lifted from my shoulders
Free - free at last!
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My eyes have been thirsting for you
These long lonely years
My ears have strained to hear your voice
The boy's enthusiasm for his lover
Has not sagged but rather swelled
With deprivation
Memory paints you
Perfect in wit, charm
Desire
Today I saw you briefly, from afar
I had to avert my eyes
Lest I be consumed
My ears heard your distant laughter
Through all the other noise
In that crowded place
I know that memory lies
But still I shivered
With longing and remorse
Today I also heard of the other man
Now in your life
Somewhere inside, a door slammed shut
A portcullis came crashing down
Putting an end to the questions
Could there be a place for us in our lives?
Might we ever talk again of big things and small
(Not wrapped in each other's arms, but still)?
Would I ever again hear stories about your cats,
Equal parts condescension and affection?
Would you want to talk? Could we be friends, or
Would you want to claw out my eyes?
The door slammed shut, and all I could feel
Was a tremendous, crushing weight
Miraculously lifted from my shoulders
Free - free at last!
TURN BACK NOW IF YOU DON'T LIKE INUYASHA!
(ME:*gulp* I don't wanna!
KYO:*whatching with interest*
INU'S CREATER:Have to!
ME:No!
INU:*unsheaths Tetsiuga* SAY IT!
ME:O.O "!"
INU:what?
ME:I don't...own Inu or other characters or his cute ears *touches inu's ears*
INU:*hurts me badly*
ME:i do how ever own Aiko,Kyo,Iuana,and Kiana!SO HA!Owwwwww!)
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KIANA:Iuana!Iuana!
*in the goshinbaku*
IAUNA:haha!
aiko:haha shhhhhhh.
*voices in the backround*
(on hold sorry)
(ME:*gulp* I don't wanna!
KYO:*whatching with interest*
INU'S CREATER:Have to!
ME:No!
INU:*unsheaths Tetsiuga* SAY IT!
ME:O.O "!"
INU:what?
ME:I don't...own Inu or other characters or his cute ears *touches inu's ears*
INU:*hurts me badly*
ME:i do how ever own Aiko,Kyo,Iuana,and Kiana!SO HA!Owwwwww!)
_______________________________________
KIANA:Iuana!Iuana!
*in the goshinbaku*
IAUNA:haha!
aiko:haha shhhhhhh.
*voices in the backround*
(on hold sorry)
The Mona Lisa
The Mona Lisa is one of the worlds most famous art pieces but at one point it was stolen by a man who thought that Italian paintings should be shown in Italy and not France so… when he was all alone in the room where the Mona Lisa was so he took the painting and stuffed it under his smock. It took a week for the museum to find out that the painting had gone missing. I think that ever since this painting went missing museums have more security then they did then to protect more thefts.
I think that this connects to chasing Vermeer because “the lady writing” it on the go and Calder and Petra think that it is not safe just like how the Mona Lisa wasn’t safe in the museum in France. I think that defiantly Calder and Petra would be helpful.
The Mona Lisa is one of the worlds most famous art pieces but at one point it was stolen by a man who thought that Italian paintings should be shown in Italy and not France so… when he was all alone in the room where the Mona Lisa was so he took the painting and stuffed it under his smock. It took a week for the museum to find out that the painting had gone missing. I think that ever since this painting went missing museums have more security then they did then to protect more thefts.
I think that this connects to chasing Vermeer because “the lady writing” it on the go and Calder and Petra think that it is not safe just like how the Mona Lisa wasn’t safe in the museum in France. I think that defiantly Calder and Petra would be helpful.