(this is loosly based on a cruse I just got back from today)
Courtney's POV: I walked on the ship. my brown hair waved in the sea wind. I could not wait. me, my mom, and my dad got on a very nice ship. This was going to be so fun!!!!!!!
Duncan's POV: Me and my big brother along with our mom and dad got on the ship. I looked around. there was nothing much. we walked by all the stuff and got to our room. not toooo big. just a room. no windows or anything, just a few beds and a tv with like 5 channls. "so much for TV." I said "OH come on!" my mom said "This will be fun!" "Ya righ!" I ansered.
Courtney's POV: My family and I walked to our room. we had one of the bigger rooms. two beds (One for my mom and dad one for me) a TV a desk and a look out spot as my dad called it. "OOOOOO! Courtney! There is a teen club! You can hang out there!" My mom said "sure" I ansered "why not?"
Duncan's POV: "DUNCAN!" My mom screamed "WHAT?!" I ansered "Look there is a teen club. you can go there for a bit. It will be fun. you can also meet new friends!" my mom said "I don't think so" I said to her "OH come ON! It will be fun!" "You'r going to make me do this aren't you?" "yup!" she ansered in a much too happy voice "fine." OH GOD!!!!
Courtney's POV: I walked on the ship. my brown hair waved in the sea wind. I could not wait. me, my mom, and my dad got on a very nice ship. This was going to be so fun!!!!!!!
Duncan's POV: Me and my big brother along with our mom and dad got on the ship. I looked around. there was nothing much. we walked by all the stuff and got to our room. not toooo big. just a room. no windows or anything, just a few beds and a tv with like 5 channls. "so much for TV." I said "OH come on!" my mom said "This will be fun!" "Ya righ!" I ansered.
Courtney's POV: My family and I walked to our room. we had one of the bigger rooms. two beds (One for my mom and dad one for me) a TV a desk and a look out spot as my dad called it. "OOOOOO! Courtney! There is a teen club! You can hang out there!" My mom said "sure" I ansered "why not?"
Duncan's POV: "DUNCAN!" My mom screamed "WHAT?!" I ansered "Look there is a teen club. you can go there for a bit. It will be fun. you can also meet new friends!" my mom said "I don't think so" I said to her "OH come ON! It will be fun!" "You'r going to make me do this aren't you?" "yup!" she ansered in a much too happy voice "fine." OH GOD!!!!
~in hallways with Calvin and Courtney~
Calvin: HOW COULD YOU THINK THAT IT WAS OK FOR YOU TO DANCE WITH DUNCAN TO THAT SAME SONG!?!?!?
Courtney: well excuse me but i didn't think that i needed your permission.
Calvin: *pins her to lockers*
Courtney: OMG Calvin!!?!
Calvin: *slams her to wall*
Courtney: *falls to ground*
Calvin: oh crap....what did i just do?!
Courtney: *still on ground*
Calvin: get up....please.
Duncan: *walks to hallway and sees Courtney on floor* WTF IS GOING ON HERE!?
Calvin: oh she just fainted.
Duncan: your'e lying.
Calvin: no.....it's the truth.
Duncan: i saw it.
Calvin:.............how did you see it?
Duncan: i didn't. i heard the slam.
Calvin: so?
Duncan: do you have a cell phone on you?
Calvin: wtf? why do you need that?
Duncan: To call an ambulance. my dad is a cop. he taught me all the 911 signals.
Calvin: *sighs* fine. BUT i expect to have my cell phone back.
Duncan: *calls 911*
~at hospital~
Calvin: HOW COULD YOU THINK THAT IT WAS OK FOR YOU TO DANCE WITH DUNCAN TO THAT SAME SONG!?!?!?
Courtney: well excuse me but i didn't think that i needed your permission.
Calvin: *pins her to lockers*
Courtney: OMG Calvin!!?!
Calvin: *slams her to wall*
Courtney: *falls to ground*
Calvin: oh crap....what did i just do?!
Courtney: *still on ground*
Calvin: get up....please.
Duncan: *walks to hallway and sees Courtney on floor* WTF IS GOING ON HERE!?
Calvin: oh she just fainted.
Duncan: your'e lying.
Calvin: no.....it's the truth.
Duncan: i saw it.
Calvin:.............how did you see it?
Duncan: i didn't. i heard the slam.
Calvin: so?
Duncan: do you have a cell phone on you?
Calvin: wtf? why do you need that?
Duncan: To call an ambulance. my dad is a cop. he taught me all the 911 signals.
Calvin: *sighs* fine. BUT i expect to have my cell phone back.
Duncan: *calls 911*
~at hospital~
Okay I'm curious as to what you readers want.I only have 1 comment for my new chapter and its been 2 days.I don't know if i'M just impatient or if my story really sucks.I know most of you rpobably like it and don't comment but,I have a low self esteem and when i don't see comments i don't feel too confident to continue because i think no one will read them.My WHY DO YOU LIKE HER story is the most popular now.And that was one of the first ones I did.Now I think I peeked too early.
Anyway,it helps me to see more comments about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Anyway,it helps me to see more comments about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Courtney-um hey so how u doing Duncan-fine fine very nice Duncan-hey can i talk to u in private Courtney-sure sure they walk to a a hallway Trent -im gonna go listen to them be right back dudes .... Duncan-so Courtney um I broke up with Gwen Courtney-why u guys were perfect for each other Duncan-we were cause u were really mean and mad Courtney-i was but then i gusse i got over u Duncan-u did Courtney-i dont know how but i guess i did Duncan-look im sorry if i hert u so would u like to be um Courtney-to still be friends thatll be nice Duncan-sure we can but i ment more than friends Courtney-oh u mean boyfriend and girlfriend Duncan-yeah Courtney-but What will be diffrent this time Duncan-look will be honest and not crazy I just want to be with u Courtney-really? Duncan-really then they kiss