"CoME B@cK!!! We jUsT w@Nt to plAy with YoU..!!" the gruesome creatures kept chasing after them,seeming tireless despite being dead
the trio let out a terrified scream as one of them emerged from the ground blockng them in all directions..but luckily Moonshine teleported and the chase continued,the journey to finding their companions,endless...with the evil creatures still onto them,not knowing how long it will take until they finally run out of energy...going through the blood red forest
~~~
"huh? i think were lost..." Moonlight said observing the environment "but since were already lost from the first place,we should just..keep walking?" they went from path to path finding a way to get out of the thick and mysterious forest
Twack!
they had bumped and tripped on some hard..wall?
"what?" Cosmic asked,confused "what did we just bumped at?"
Spectrum rubbed his horn and tried to get up from the ground "i dont get it...how could we bump into 'that'? its still just the path"
"ugh...maybe we were hallucinating because of the forest..lets g-Bmmp!" she had fell to the dusty ground again,looking up her confused expression being seen clearly even through the darkness of the forest..she got up again and held up her hoof towards the 'wall' to find it really hard..still dumb founded about the weird thing they just discovered
"i-ill try to figure this out.." said Spectrum holding up his own hoof feeling through every direction until "click!" the 'forest path' revealed itself to be a cave with a cloaked force field "so that was it..genius! im so stupid to have not figured out the magical energy around us...hmm..but actually it was kinda hard because almost everything in the forest has magical energy surrounding them..."
"well,at least we found something..good work!" Cosmic went inside the cave followed by Moonlight..but she suddenly paused "wait..what did you press anyway?"
Spectrum,lit up his horn with a faint green glow coming from it..lighting the wall..which was covered in a lot of ancient writing..each character in a square..like a grid with letters in them..he pressed something with the image of a bear with a star on his forehead and dots big and small all over his body..he observed it for a minute and then went to catch up with his friends going into the deep,dark cave
~~~
still being chased were Moonshine,Winter and Flame who decided to try to fight them..with Moonlight fighting with spells like teleportation,laser beams and freeze spells,Flame got a big sharp stick and swinging them at the monsters and Winter did the same..no matter how much they fight,they just kept coming
"just how many ponies died here?!" Winter screamed with anger and fear
and just as Flame hit the undead pony in front of him,he saw,from the corner of his eye,a cottage..and this time it wasnt abolished,then he shouted "hey guys! over there! maybe the children went over there! gah!" he swing the stick in all directions causing the undead to fly around and make a clear path "GO!"
dun dun dun!
Note: yeah,it was a loooong time before i posted this..i guess it was school work and training for the contest xP
the trio let out a terrified scream as one of them emerged from the ground blockng them in all directions..but luckily Moonshine teleported and the chase continued,the journey to finding their companions,endless...with the evil creatures still onto them,not knowing how long it will take until they finally run out of energy...going through the blood red forest
~~~
"huh? i think were lost..." Moonlight said observing the environment "but since were already lost from the first place,we should just..keep walking?" they went from path to path finding a way to get out of the thick and mysterious forest
Twack!
they had bumped and tripped on some hard..wall?
"what?" Cosmic asked,confused "what did we just bumped at?"
Spectrum rubbed his horn and tried to get up from the ground "i dont get it...how could we bump into 'that'? its still just the path"
"ugh...maybe we were hallucinating because of the forest..lets g-Bmmp!" she had fell to the dusty ground again,looking up her confused expression being seen clearly even through the darkness of the forest..she got up again and held up her hoof towards the 'wall' to find it really hard..still dumb founded about the weird thing they just discovered
"i-ill try to figure this out.." said Spectrum holding up his own hoof feeling through every direction until "click!" the 'forest path' revealed itself to be a cave with a cloaked force field "so that was it..genius! im so stupid to have not figured out the magical energy around us...hmm..but actually it was kinda hard because almost everything in the forest has magical energy surrounding them..."
"well,at least we found something..good work!" Cosmic went inside the cave followed by Moonlight..but she suddenly paused "wait..what did you press anyway?"
Spectrum,lit up his horn with a faint green glow coming from it..lighting the wall..which was covered in a lot of ancient writing..each character in a square..like a grid with letters in them..he pressed something with the image of a bear with a star on his forehead and dots big and small all over his body..he observed it for a minute and then went to catch up with his friends going into the deep,dark cave
~~~
still being chased were Moonshine,Winter and Flame who decided to try to fight them..with Moonlight fighting with spells like teleportation,laser beams and freeze spells,Flame got a big sharp stick and swinging them at the monsters and Winter did the same..no matter how much they fight,they just kept coming
"just how many ponies died here?!" Winter screamed with anger and fear
and just as Flame hit the undead pony in front of him,he saw,from the corner of his eye,a cottage..and this time it wasnt abolished,then he shouted "hey guys! over there! maybe the children went over there! gah!" he swing the stick in all directions causing the undead to fly around and make a clear path "GO!"
dun dun dun!
Note: yeah,it was a loooong time before i posted this..i guess it was school work and training for the contest xP
I just want to end this story so it can be out of the way, and
I can stop overbooking myself.
The next day Trixie knocked on Rarity's door.
Trixie: Well. I did it. I killed them.
Rarity: Oh.. Well. This is awkward... I. kinda.. Changed my mind, and was about to call it off.
Trixie: Oh... I'm still getting paid though right.
Rarity: (sighs) Fine.. (gives her the amount of money she promised too).
Trixie: Thank you. (takes the money). Say. You have any beer?
Rarity: No. Saten came and took the last one.
Trixie: (excitedly) Saten's still in town?
Rarity: I guess.,
Trixie: Great.. You know where he might be.. Because I am totally NOT gonna stalk him.
Rarity: (shrugs unsurely)
THE END
Ending theme.
(theme song/Steven King IT)
I can stop overbooking myself.
The next day Trixie knocked on Rarity's door.
Trixie: Well. I did it. I killed them.
Rarity: Oh.. Well. This is awkward... I. kinda.. Changed my mind, and was about to call it off.
Trixie: Oh... I'm still getting paid though right.
Rarity: (sighs) Fine.. (gives her the amount of money she promised too).
Trixie: Thank you. (takes the money). Say. You have any beer?
Rarity: No. Saten came and took the last one.
Trixie: (excitedly) Saten's still in town?
Rarity: I guess.,
Trixie: Great.. You know where he might be.. Because I am totally NOT gonna stalk him.
Rarity: (shrugs unsurely)
THE END
Ending theme.
(theme song/Steven King IT)
Has anyone ever read CHEERLIEES GARDEN.
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw movies (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her more like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for more of my latest story..
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw movies (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her more like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for more of my latest story..
Alright..
So I found this bizarre MLP story.
That ruins some of my favorite character Twilight and AppleJack, by using the theme of INCEST..
Fuckin incest! Why dose that even excist!?
I thought I stopped having to deal with fuckin incest after no longer reading Alpha & Omega stories.
But nope.
Even my little pony has it.
Just ask Friendship is Witchcraft.
This story is about Twilight and AppleJack switching minds, so I guess in a way it's not incest, but, my mind will forever KNOW it is.
Anyway..
don't EVER read this story.
But if you really have to,
Afried your on your own for finding it..
So I found this bizarre MLP story.
That ruins some of my favorite character Twilight and AppleJack, by using the theme of INCEST..
Fuckin incest! Why dose that even excist!?
I thought I stopped having to deal with fuckin incest after no longer reading Alpha & Omega stories.
But nope.
Even my little pony has it.
Just ask Friendship is Witchcraft.
This story is about Twilight and AppleJack switching minds, so I guess in a way it's not incest, but, my mind will forever KNOW it is.
Anyway..
don't EVER read this story.
But if you really have to,
Afried your on your own for finding it..
This is Papillon
