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Poor Vincent Matherly was pushed to his death. Poor, poor, Chasity the girl who pushed Vincent to his death. The tears of the parents and the sad looks of passing citzens. Chasity examined the scene once more. Was that the right thing to do? After she had done it, it truly didn't look like the right thing.

Chasity was summoned from the big guy in the sky. He had seen the terrible thing she had done. Chasity wasn't ready to face him not after that. he stared down at her while she looked down at her toes. The big guy in the sky wanted to send her to the big guy below the ground but decided against it. How was he suppose to be a role model if he gave up on his students so quickly. He gave her a second chance but this time she had to do it right if she wanted her wings.

Chasity was ordered to give one wish to Vincent when his spirit arrived. Since he was a equally good and bad guy, they didn't know where to place him. Truthfully, he didn't belong exactly anywhere. The guards of the entrance into the afterlife handed him over to her. She would decide his fate but first she needed to give him that wish.

"Um . . hello Vincent," she welcomed. He stared at himself. He was transparent but still had that handsome glow. Obviously, Vincent wasn't going to get use to his spirit body anytime soon. He probably wouldn't remember who he was.

That is what happens sometimes. If you didn't fit in Heaven or Hell then you most likely would become a ghost that walks the earth searching for something they forgot. He was in his spirit body and spirit bodies have no memory.

"What, who, when , where, how!" he muttered. He flexed his fingers and then he stared at the tattered clothes he was forced to wear. "Who the heck are you?"

Chasity felt uncomfortable. "I am an angel and since I was the cause of your death I have decided to give you one free gift."

Vincent shook his head like he couldn't believe it. He didn't know what ot believe anymore. First, he awoke to find some tall, muscular guards poking him with sticks. Then, this pretty yet super young girl was giving him a wish. If anything, he wanted to see his old life. That would hopefully jog his memory back. " I want to see my old life. That is my wish and also to see how my family is dealing with my death."

"Technically that is two wishes but I will allow it." She looked down at her feet. She wasn't magical so all she could really show him is his family and as much as his spirit body would allow. "Just bend down and face this cloud. Try to put your head all the way through."

Vincent did as told and what he saw was amazing. Below the cloud where people walking the streets, tending to their own business. Vincent wanted to be like them. He wanted to be normal. "Where are my family?"

Chasity searched all the clouds to see where his family was at. They were at a local funeral home. Vincent's body laid quietly in the casket. Everyone was deadly silent except for Mrs. Matherly who was balling her eyes out. "Here you are. This must be your funeral." in the back of the building was Brooke. She was with another man and was quietly kisisng him.

"That was my girlfriend right?" Vincent asked. "The love of my life." Parts of his memory were coming back but he remembered everything then he would probably have to live among the humans. Rage, anger, and saddness was not allowed in Heaven. All suffering would end here not begin.

"Vincent maybe we should . . ." Chasity trailed off. She didn't know what to do. Vincent was way too upset to be reasoned with. He just needed some space. Wow, for an 8 year old, she was very sensitive. Technically, she was 8 about 102 years ago.

Vincent looked down once more. His mother and father were hand in hand. His dad held his mom closely towards him . "Are my parents together?" Everything he said sounded chocked. "Was I wrong to jump off that cliff?

The feeling of shame washed over her. When you felt an emotion that wasn't happiness, then you instantly told someone."I shoved you off that cliff to your death. So truly I was that one that killed you. I'm so sorry. At first I thought it was the right thing but now i know."

Vincent wouldn't look at her. He continued staring at his family. His funeral was small and barely anyone had shown but why? "Why aren't there more people?" He asked almost outraged.

"Calm down! Before it is too late. There is no one there because . . ." She looked away." Because no one likes you." All Hell broke lose in Heaven.


This story is not ment to insult anyone. It is just a little story that i thought would be interesting to tell. I am sorry if this story insulted you.
((This is an edited version of a novel posted in the Writing club. It was mainly worked on by two very different authors. I have done my best to repair any mistakes, but please ignore any that remain.
Currently, the book has six chapters. At the end of Chapter 6, watch for a special challenge.
Hope you enjoy!))

I
The Task
    It was a foggy morning. Guardians at the grey city walls could barely see the green forest that was not so far ahead. Behind the city was great mountain that was preventing enemies from coming from behind, so they only guarded at the city gate. Suddenly...
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Ricks parents and lawyer were sat either side of him as the two detective continuously asked questions that rick would only say no comment until they sai one that he could," how old are you?" One called Johnson asked and rick simply smiled,"12," he said knowing that even though he was twelve the lawyer he had was the best in town and he can't be beaten. Detective Johnson had a hard glare on his face as he spoke," we'll boyo you've been seved and if you fail you'll be put in juvy for 2 years with no pribation or early sentences, got?" Rick still smiled confidently and said," yep" his voice happy...
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Chapter Fourteen

PURE IN EVERY FORM IS SOMETHING RARE TO FIND. -Erica

      "Am I suppose to be impressed because all I see is a town covered in garbage and dirt." There was nothing royal about this court. The citizens wore garbage bags for clothes and cups for shoes. The town was smelly, dirty, and disgusting. I felt filthy all over but the smiles on their faces was unbelievably. They were living in the most disgusting place on Earth and yet they smile as if they don't notice. It had me thinking. 
      "There isn't much to see after The One took over. I still believe you should rule The...
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Source: me. i made up this quote. like?
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Chapter Two- Romantic Night with the Wrong Guy

Every Tuesday, right after school, the gang and I head over to the movies. Tonight was originally my night to choose the movie. I was going to pick that new Lindsay Lohan movie. I wanted to see the parts where she messed up her lines. Rumor has it that she was drunk while filming the movie. How delicious!

I had to lie to them and say that I have some family thing to take care of. In actuality, Zeke is coming over tonight. How could I tell my friends that our enemy was infiltrating my house? They would think I'm crossing over to the dark side. They...
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When I reach into the stars
And all I find is pain
I remember that in the darkest nights
There is still hope

I've been through the deepest waters
The darkest nights
Even when I couldn't see
I fought through it all....and survived

You know it isn't easy
Just fighting through it all
Trying to survive when you know there's barely any hope
And it was clear to me what a difficult world this is

People never said it would be an easy life
All they said was that it'd be worth the time
So I came into this world one dark night
And saw for myself how amazing it could be

Through the nights, through the days
Through the triumphs, through the pain,
We saw through it all
And believed

Through the nights, through the days
Through the triumphs, through the pain,
We saw through it all....
And survived.
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Realistic Fiction

Chapter 2
The Text


Samuel's Point of View

Heh heh. These girls are such suckers... he thought as he typed out the text telling about the losers.

The text read: U guys wna know bout sme lsrs? Chck out the nmes Kelli Rush, Samantha Gonzalez, Lizzy Strickland, Anne Finley Riley, n Autumn Konrad. Ya, she my sis. I dnt like tht fact. Txt me l8er-Sam

Thank God, he thought, around 150 characters. Not 200. Surprised that didn't go over the limit.... Huh.



As he clicked, "Send to all contacts" He stopped. Something was bugging at him. Was it his conscience telling him to not send it? Nope....
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Seven
Book Three- Zoe

PUT ME WITH LIONS AND I WILL SURVIVE. PUT ME WITH MY SISTER AND THERE WILL BE HELL TO PAY. -Emma

      I stayed home all day today. I observed Shane as he inspected the forest. It was like he created work from himself so that he could stay here longer. I could just stroll out here and demand why he was still here but Emma came or appeared. I was up in the basement and she stood right alongside of me. I had gotten use to her just materializing whenever she pleased. "Hey Emma," I greeted without removing my gaze from Shane, "What brings you by?"
      "I need you,...
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I wrote this before Christmas. Hope you like!!!


Andre Louis sat quietly in the library. His butler, James, was standing next to him with a phone on a silver platter. It have been half and hour since his mom called him and explained that they were not coming home in time for Christmas.

His parents have been in Italy for 3 months. They only called about twice a month.

"James," said Andre, "We may need to make other arrangements for Christmas this year. Cancel all of the decorations and dinner parties. Tonight, i will take a walk. Make sure Katy is in bed on time."

Andre did not want toshow his misery...
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Chapter One

Mason Montgomery auditioned 480 girls this week alone to play the part as Charlotte in his new movie, Hourglass. Hourglass was all about a woman who could stop time just to be with her love. Each girl he auditioned wasn't giving him what he wanted. All he wanted was a fair-looking girl with pretty eyes and a sensitive heart but the girls he auditioned were anything but that. He tried being nice and say encouraging things but after the 248th girl he gave that a rest. Now he just said what came to mind like "You stink," or "And you call yourself an actress? Get it outta here." He had...
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posted by para-scence
I'm drowning in dark waters. I'm in a dark, empty room, filled with nothing bit black water. I see a white light hanging above me, but I can't reach it. It feels like my feet are bricks, dragging me down into the charcoal ocean. No matter how much I struggle, my efforts are useless. I'm just wearing myself out. I finally let go, and stop fighting. I drift away under the waters.

I could feel myself floating around for a long time, yet I could still breathe. It didn't feel like I was breathing, but I didn't feel any shortage of oxygen in my lungs. I felt numb.

Then after what seemed like forever,...
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