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posted by Problematic129
*Sorry for the wait, writer's block showed it's ugly head. Thanks for all the comments :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 3
    A strange vision
    “Was he hot?” My best friend Jessica asked. I groaned, of course that would be the first thing she asked.
    After that introduction, I drove straight to Jessica’s house, knowing she would rebel and not go to school, because she said and I quote ‘Monday doesn’t count as a school day in my book’. Ever since the first day of eighth grade, she hasn’t attended school on Monday, the best part, no one questions this.
    “That’s not the point, Jess.” I tell her. “He…I don’t know, it was like he knew something.”
    Jess nodded. “Hot guys always look like they know something.”
    I laughed, I took my pillow and threw it at her. “You suck.”
    Jess dodged the pillow, “what did they call you in for.”
    “They told us Dorothy was hit by a bat, and then drowned. Dad got so angry, and he’s never showed a slip of emotion until now.”
    “And that boy…Cadence, just happened to notice your special amulet on the floor,” Jess’s eyebrows scrunched.
    If I haven’t said it before, I tell Jess everything. So she knows why my amulet is so special, and that it might just be the number one reason I’m having these recurring dreams of my sister.
    “I don’t know what to think,” I confess, burying my face in her pillow.
    “Me neither,” Jess says. “But right now, let’s get you cheered up.”
    Jess gets up from her bed, and makes a peace and farewell sign, probably to go to the kitchen and stack up on my favorite foods. I smile to myself, pleased to have such a great friend.
    I hear this weird sound, it’s faint but gains momentum in seconds. At first I can’t tell what it is, but then I realize it’s something about a vision. The next thing I know, when I blink, I’m in some sort of store. I hear a familiar voice and my heart freezes.
    Dorothy.
    “Thanks, take care,” she says while flashing her dazzling smile to the stunned cashier. She turns on her heel and heads to the exit, I follow closely.
    She’s holding this grocery bag, I can’t tell what’s in it, it could be big, it could be small.
    She stops at this boat, it’s quite big, she enters it with ease and confidence, showing that she’s done this before. She calls out a name, but when she says it, it sounds all disoriented, as if she was in water.
    Water.
    As soon as I think of those words, I’m thrown into the blue devil. I can’t swim up, I can’t breathe, and my life is flashing before my very own eyes. I look up and see this dark shadow, silently watching me.
    My eyes pop open and I gasp for air, thinking of my vision, it was weird. First of all, there was a weight chained to my sister, and second of all the water wasn’t that deep when she drowned, it was a lake, and that vision felt like an ocean.
    Lastly, it was one of the first visions I’ve had in a long time, where I was put into a person’s mind, feeling what they were feeling, thinking what they were thinking.
    I shivered at the next thought, what if that vision of drowning wasn’t of my sister, but of someone else. And whoever that shadow was, probably killed my sister to.
    I took in deep breaths, thinking of Cadence and his mysterious aura. ‘I know’, he had said. Then I think of that police man years ago, when I asked him to borrow some police files, or newspapers of murders, trying to match some.
    If that was another person drowning, then I might be close enough.
    And I just might need help.
posted by alicia386
Wednesday

First day of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer or Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read books and she thought that maybe I could meet some new friends that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is by tomorrow.
After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at writing a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm writing is in the in the section below. If you like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen year old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.
I got dressed and slipped my jacket with badge on and went down the hall. And then someone bumped into me. Hey watch where you’re going! “Sorry you Agent Montezz?” Yes who are you?

“Doesn’t matter Kyle said for you to meet him in the shooting arena.” Where is that? “Take this hall straight down then make a right you will see a stair well go all the way down then make a left first door on your right.” Thank you.

He walked away then leaving me alone in an empty hallway. I followed the guy directions and stepped into a combat arena compete with targets bows, arrows, guns, and many...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Twelve: Small Rooms Makes for No Escapes

      Their headquarters was nothing more then a room with monitors everywhere. They had enough in the budget to get a bigger space and tons more gadgets, they just chose not to. Some of the monitors showed different views of the outside building. One monitor was showing a desert somewhere in Africa. It is odd how they got one out there and why they have he out there. I didn't ask questions. I wanted to appear as if I knew everything about everything in the room. Marlo wasn't going to get the best of me. 
      Darrell stayed by my side...
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posted by IlovePatch97
Sorry it took so long, school is crazy. i hope this makes up for it.
don't forget to comment :D


Chapter 6




“Wait! Wait!” I said, needing a moment of processing. “This is real? I’m not dreaming, I’m not hallucinating and this isn’t an extremely well executed prank?”
“No Alana I’m sorry to say but this is real, unbelievable, but real” Chris replied. I turned to look at Patricia, her face unchanged like stone.
“So then what are we going to do? Are you bringing me to this Zerokenum guy so he can cut out my heart!?” I exclaimed in sudden alarm. I didn’t think Chris or Patricia...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
17
    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy or anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...
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Orion woke up with a dark black aura slowly disappearing from his body. Libra hobbled into the room and saw Orion quickly waking up," Orion your up I have been waiting for hours, now quickly outside," he said hurriedly as he hobbled out through the other door that lead outside into a small arena. Orion stood up feeling fresh and powerful and ran through the door into the arena. Libra stood looking younger than he actually was at the other side, wand writhing about in his hand ready for a fight," come on Orion dont be afraid," Libra shouted out. So Orion stepped into his circle and drew his...
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posted by Dhampires
The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's heart whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~     
9
    Zaria
    We came to an agreement, if anything…unusual happened, we’ll check it out. If it happens to be another thing then we’ll comw to the conclusion that we and the book caused this. So on the next day, sadly where school wasn’t cancelled, I’d kept an open eye for anything weird.
    “Status report?” Stilere asks as she walks with me around school.
    “Nothing,” I sigh. “You?”
    “Same.” Stilere shakes her head....
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

      "You're lying," I said but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
      "That maybe, but would he really want you to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add more to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
      "You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most top notch...
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posted by 1999jacko
Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a pillow case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back seat of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...
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just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if you don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours ago and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
2
Alex
    “Are you okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris said giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...
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posted by 1999jacko
Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. Drake was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to cross the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that Drake was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge by the...
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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?





Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked strawberry red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm kiss on the check and saying, “I love you dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I love you two.” As he turned into the next road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...
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Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk home or is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" said Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" said Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where you are I'm picking you and Leo up, From ur 'Also...
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posted by hgfan5602
Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not home for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My heart is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any more of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and you are sinner, commit all, you are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take you to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...
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posted by kitty190123
One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. You know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your questions and comments!