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posted by 1999jacko
present day

Ron was at his new school ready for PE, everyone else was mucking around, throwing spitballs at each other or still getting changed when the teacher walked in. His large physique intimidating anyone he came into contact with, luckily enough he only came into contact with people when he was drunk at the local pub, Ron had discovered that by hacking into the police records last week and searching for any of his teachers, when he came across this one with 8 offences for beating up 5 policemen and 3 civilians simply, as he stated it, for the fun of it. Anyway back to our story, the teacher, Mr Craig, started to tell everyone what they were going to do today," well kiddies we get to do my favorite thing in the world... cross country." Every kid moaned at the very thought, which brought a shark like smile to Mr Craig face until he saw Ron smiling away to his hearts content, Ron saw the teacher looking at him." Smith! why don't you tell us what your smiling at? hmm," he said with a slight twang of venom in his voice. Ron looked around and saw everyone looking at him waiting for an answer," well sir, you see, well I don't not like cross country and find it fun." Was his reply his voice showing lots of confidence but his body slinking away from the teacher, " FUN! YOU FIND THIS FUN!" Mr Craig spat at Ron," well if you find it so fun then why don't you get up and teach the class today." He said to Ron still spitting every word, Ron slowly nodded while saying," okay sir if that's what you want," he tried to act bored, but to be honest the thought of doing that brought joy to Ron. Mr Craig put his arms out wide in a welcoming gesture and moved over to the chairs waiting for Ron to get up and start, so Ron did exactly what he said he'd do. He made a quick, swift jump up onto his feet and started saying get up and warm up to everyone else.

After an hour they were all running around the hall with Mr Craig staring at Ron with amazement until the head teacher came in. Ron quickly made everyone stop and be quiet, the head started to speak," Ron can I have a word with you please?" Ron nodded and left the room quickly. As soon as he left he spoke," what do you need Commander." The commander slowly started to say," how's your french Ron?" Ron looked at the commander questioningly but answered in perfect french,"Aussi bon que le commandant jamais." The commander nodded and without another word brought up his phone and put on a video for Ron to watch.

Although there was a lot of static He could still see a beat up version of his father and a dummy with a message written on it."Venez me chercher son fils," and then it went blank, leaving Ron staring wide eyed at the blank screen. He muttered under his breath," come and get me son." The commander spoke up again," Ron we need you to take basic training now so you can go and save your father." Ron nodded tears forming in his eyes and one thought going through his mind," my father is alive... what?"

well hope you like it and if its boring to you now it will get better
posted by Problematic129
*In case were still doing this, Genre:realistic fiction, humor. Also I do not own Doctor Who, or anything in it, it's just mentioned in here.*
Chapter 14
    The boy named Ryler
    It was quite refreshing to not be thinking of the fact that my crush Cal, nearly ignored the fact that I existed but showed up to my house, insulted me, and then made out with his girlfriend in front of my face.
    Yeah, if I had been thinking that I’d probably be flinging something out my window. But Ryler is totally distracting, he’s funny and different...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comments and fans :) Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 7
    Bonding with an enemy
    “She what?!” Grey asks, collapsing in laughter.
    “Stop laughing! I’m being serious!” I whine as I hit him with my pillow.
    “You and me?” He dissolves into another fit.
    “Hey?! I’m not that bad!”
    Grey nods. “But still…wow.”
    “Mutual feeling’s buddy.” I say falling onto my bed.
    After...
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posted by sawfan13
Chapter 1



"Excuse me?" He said quietly, staring at this woman with confusion. She got on all fours, crawled to him, and said,"I
wanna keep you forever." He furrowed his eyebrows and asked,"What? What you mean? What the hell is going on here?" She leaned down to his ear and whispered seductively,
"This can go either way, Criss. Promise and I can be your slaves, or," she continued, even quieter and scarier than before,"you can become ours." Criss shuddered in a bad way. No human being on this earth had ever been this way before. Sure, his fan base was pretty insane and he's met a few less than sane...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for the comments and the fans :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 11
    Those days and those nights
    I’ve never liked hospitals that much growing up, with my visions I’d have quite a handful by just stepping through the doors. Tradegies after tradigies. I know hospitals are good, and I respect them and all. But bad things tend to happen to something good, people die here everyday.
    People are taken here to be tended for their injuiries because of a tragic event.
    So far since...
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posted by hgfan5602
Tell me now,
Do you love me?
Whisper what you want to say
To me

Don't lie to me
Tell me the truth
I promise, I won't be mad

CHORUS
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Just tell me, tell me, tell me the truth
And don't make me get the wrong guy
So don't lie, don't lie, don't lie when you
Tell me what you feel about me

And if you really, really, really, love me
Then come into my arms
And hug me, hug me, hug me,
Until we kiss, in pure happiness
-------------------------------------------------------

There's no need to lie
Just take it easy now
There's no stressing it out
I just want to know the...
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Chapter 4



Young prodigy, you are now fading. You are dying in your human world, but being reborn in ours. We will soon fill you up with our nectar and energy. Follow our voices and ignore your reality. Come into ours. Come into ours.


Warren had flat lined, as nurses and doctors were reviving him. "Clear!" ZAP "Not working!" We'll try again! Clear!" Zap "We're losing him! We're losing him!" "We won't lose him! He's a fifteen year old boy and I won't have him die on us! Clear!" ZAP The machine started showing a healthy heart rate once again. "Yes! He's alive!" Everyone sighed of relief, as one...
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Chapter 3


Young prodigy, do not wake into the universe you were born in. You belong with us, so do not wake. Let our fangs drain out your humanity and fill you up with our sweet nectar. It will be your new blood.


Warren woke up in a hospital bed breathing heavily. He woke up alone, looking around feeling the I.V needles in him. He even felt the catheter, and it felt UNCOMFORTABLE! He felt weary, but didn't want to go back to sleep. Two beautiful women came in, one was a doctor and one was a nurse. The doctor came in, as Warren had kept his eyes open because of the small room. He still had the...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
“What are you doing here?” I asked as he walked into my living room and stood beside Sophie. “Sophie wanted to visit, so here we are.” He replied. He put his arm around Sophie's waist which annoyed me. Sophie was my best friend and he was just someone who likes stalking girls. Remembering my mom's rule about being a good host, I closed the door and asked them if they wanted anything to drink. “Ya, I'll have a double mocha cappuccino.” Sophie said. I knew she was joking because she was having a hard time keeping a straight face. We looked at each other, then burst out laughing. “I...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
(Sorry if it's not that great. It's my first time writing a story for fun and not for school)

“Mom! Phone!” Where was she? I slowly dragged myself off the leather couch, knocking my books to the floor. I watched as my pencil rolled under the armchair. Oh well, I was done with it anyways. I grabbed the phone on the eighth ring, “Hello?''
“Julie, babe. I thought you'd never answer. It's been like what? Three hours since we last chatted?” It was my slime-ball of an ex-boyfriend, Ryan.
“Ya, sure. What ev.” I replied while examining the nail polish chipping off my nails. “I got to...
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posted by sawfan13
Young beautiful gypsy
Free and sweet
Never show negativity towards her
Or you'll have her curse
Falling in love with her is okay
Only if you never break her heart
Lovers have left her for dead
But now our little butterfly has returned again
Spreading sickness and foulness in the air
Only to give the other gypsies fear of her
No longer branded a gypsy
She is now branded as an evil sorceress
Abandoned by her only family
Anger grows within her
Her happiness and freedom now faded
Has left our little butterfly mean and jaded
No longer does she see beautiful colors
Her whole world is now all black
She still lives...
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posted by wantadog
Chapter 2: The Enemy revealed! Friendship or Heartbreak?


“I don’t care! I am not wearing this!”
Odessa pouted. This fool thought he could force her to wear men’s clothing of all things? That looked horrible! If he thought he was gonna get her into this, he was mistaken!
He groaned. “It’s all I have that’ll fit you.”
“I don’t care! It’s hideous!”
“I thought you didn’t like me?”
She looked at him, confused and angry. “What’s that supposed to mean?”
He smiled. “Well normally women only fret about their opinion when they want to impress someone.”
She blushed red....
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added by hgfan5602
posted by 1999jacko
action or fantasy I am really not sure

Present Day
Leo,now 13, stood on top of the tall, sturdy tree looking for any sign of the kids who kill. Luckily he'd been there for 2 hours and seen or heard nothing and decided to make the swing back to the tree he lived in with Jason and Sarah, he ran down the branch and jumped onto the branch and pushed off from what they call the watch tree.

The swinging was the greatest thing ever in Leos mind, with the trees flying by at unnatural speeds, the insects moving all around your head wondering whats going on and best of all the height your up at, because...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 12
    One messed up sleepover
    “So should I go with raspberry yellow, or remedy green?” Sage asks.
    “Sweetie, were doing nails not a Trix commercial,” I tell her.
    Sage sticks her tongue out at me. “Bite me, the one with brown hair.”
    “Cherry head!”
    Meredith rolls her eyes, but still comes to sit closer to us as Talia’s giving her the obsessed ‘let’s be friends glance’.
    “So your one of Pamela’s friends!”...
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Writing Tip #1: Put off editing

Each of us works at writing on two levels:a creative, unconscious level and a critical, conscious level.

The unconscious produces creative and powerful words and images. It makes surprising and original connections. It shuts down if the critical "editor" part of your mind goes to work too soon.If your High School English teacher's voice runs through your mind as you write, if you worry about spelling, grammar, or how to sell your book while you write, you are writing with a dull pencil.

There are many books written on how to unlock your unconscious and let the writing...
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posted by dragonsmemory
(Dear Reader,
The story you are about to read is another Eden book. "The Guardian of Eden" is part of the Encounter series. Please keep in mind that some parts may be spoilers for other Eden Chronicles books.
The following story was originally written spring 2011 under the title "Hirach." It has since been changed. I hope you all enjoy this tale from Eden.
Jo)
A FANTASY NOVEL


PROLOGUE
THE FIRST GUARDIAN

Centuries ago, when humans began to exploitthe dragons' Knowledge and power for themselves, something had to be done. A special meeting of Parliament was called to address the problem. The king, who,...
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posted by rory2011
David couldn't take all his pain since Jack has been taken to jail from three years ago ,witch made him very ill ,David now in 47 and almost to 48 years old ,but he looks older because of his illness ,he refused to face people after what Jack did ,all the people in the country knows who's David miller is ,he's the father of the most dangerous criminal in the country, Jack got crazy in jail ,because of a lot of things happening and happened to him
Jack was getting tortured every night ,which made him crazy and pushed him kill three of the cops and two prisoners ,plus he tried to escape so many...
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posted by alicia386
I am pretty sure everyone in the world has at least one phobia. I found two but I didn't go through the whole thing. This list is only half of what I found. Shocking!

Ablutophobia – fear of bathing, washing, or cleaning
Achluophobia – fear of darkness
Acrophobia – fear of heights
Agoraphobia, Agoraphobia Without History of Panic Disorder – fear of places or events where escape is impossible or when help is unavailable. Fear of open spaces or of being in public places. Fear of leaving a safe place.
Agraphobia – fear of sexual abuse.
Agrizoophobia – fear of wild animals
Agyrophobia –The...
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