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A/N: I love love loved the feedback I got for Part One! Not to mention the prompts :) I love you guys and I hope you enjoy this one! More feedback equals faster posts. Happy reading :)
ALSO: If you're new here, here's part one: link Anyways, enjoy!


The Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles (Part Two)

Prompt 1: Darkness (requested by SweetHoneyBunny)

The darkness suffocates me.

I can’t see, I can’t breathe. My hands claw at nothingness as I
attempt to find a way out.

My breathing escalates. It feels as though my lungs are constricting.
Cold sweat breaks on my forehead and I find myself on the floor,
desperately trying to find some sort of light source to diminish this
demon.

It feels as though the darkness has grown hands and the hands have
locked around my throat, preventing me from breathing.

Panic begins to set in and I find myself screaming hysterically, my
palms banging against the floor.

I cannot escape this, I need to get out.

Words cannot describe my fear of darkness. I do not know where it
originated from but as long as I can remember, darkness reminded me of
vulnerability and defencelessness. Of death and hopelessness.
I have visions of cloaked strangers with deadly knives lurking in
corners, waiting to strike.

My head collides with a wall and I fall back, nearly in tears.

My fear is getting the best of me. I must find a way out, I think to
myself somewhere in the flurry of hysterical thoughts.

I pull myself off the ground and nearly scream as a cold breeze
attacks my shivering, tear-drenched face.

I take a deep breath and walk gingerly towards the opposite direction,
my hands in front of me, feeling my way around.

I nearly shriek in relief when my fingers close around the cold metal
of the doorknob.

Twisting it, I breathe deeply as bright sunlight assaults my face.

That will be the last time I go looking in the cellar, I think to myself.

The menacing hands of darkness have released their grip.

There is a time for facing fears. However it is not my time...

Yet.

Prompt 2: Orphan (requested by hgfan5602)

I am greeted by a light, cool breeze as my hands push the black iron
gate open, creaking like nails on a chalkboard.

The graveyard is small. A small square of yellow grass dotted with
gravestones and stone markers.

This is the place, I think to myself, taking a deep breath. My
fingers’ grip on the wilting white tighten as I start walking. Dried
yellow and red autumn leaves crunch under the pressure of my combat
boots, a fresh new sound in the land of silent death.

Each row of graves are marked with a tall poplar tree. I stop at the
fourth one, my eyes scanning the ground, looking.

I breathe deeply when I see them.

Two rectangular gravestones, interlocked and engraved on as one. The
writing is worn with age but I can still make it out.

Here lies Gabrielle and Matthew Cohen
1973 to 2012
Beloved sister, brother, mother, father,
son, daughter and friend.
May they rest in peace, forever and always.


I can barely mask the sob that escapes me.

I am an orphan. A lonely, parentless child left alone in the dark.

My parents were victims of a car crash. A drunk driver on a rainy day.

All their hard work, the solid foundation they had built on
rock-bottom, all taken away by a driver hitting high on the happy juice, stupid enough enough to get into a car with hail the size of bullets raining down.

They didn't even press charges.

It’s been five years yet I can’t go a day without remembering them.

I swallow the bile that has risen in my throat and wipe away the dry
tears that have welled up in my eyes. I kneel down so I am level with
the stones. Breathing deeply I begin to speak, just like my therapist
told me too.

“Uh... Hi Mom, hi Dad.”

It feels silly talking to two stones in the ground but that was what
my therapist told me to do. To finally achieve closure. I breathe in
again and speak:

“Well it’s...it’s me, Abigail. You know, your-your daughter from all
those...years ago?” I feel like crying now but I can’t stop speaking.

“It’s been, like, f-five years since you last...uh...saw me,” I close
my eyes briefly, trying to imagine them in front of me, listening, “A
lot’s happened since then. I’m...I’m fifteen now for one thing.”

I clear my throat awkwardly, “I’m in high school now. Pretty cool, right?” I can
almost imagine them in front of me, smiling. I try to sound as natural
as possible, “It’s-It’s great but... Chemistry is just so freaking
hard...” I stop to laugh hollowly, “I mean, I love school but
I...sometimes wish you guys could help me out with it. It’s tough
stuff.”

I feel like I should stop but I find myself plowing on.
“I’m nearly six feet tall now,” I say, my fingers playing with the dead
grass, “People call me the Giant. I’m, like, the tallest in my grade.
Even my best friend Nadine says so. I find it really weird but there's nothing I can do about it. I'm, like, an outcast of sorts and..."

And before I know it, I am spilling my heart out to the two stones in
front of me.

I tell them everything: from my past crushes to my favorite teachers,
about the state of my room to the strictness of my foster parents,
from my favorite ice-cream flavor to my summer plans.

Everything.

It’s not until my phone rings, signaling it’s nearly five o'clock, do
I realise I’ve been there for almost an hour. Spilling my heart out to
a pair of stones.

“Well...I-uh... I guess I have to go now,” even though I know I’m
saying goodbye to a pair of gravestones, for some reason I feel as if
it’s the right thing, “It was...great talking with you guys.”

I sit up and dust off my jeans before laying my white rose right
between the graves.

Just as I am about to turn, a thought strikes me and look back.

I lean close to the stones, not aware of the tears on my cheeks. I
whisper softly, as soft as a feather, to them:

“I miss you both so much. I...I love you two. I’m proud to...to be
your d-daughter. I wish you could see that.”

I lean back and swallow hard but it can’t stop the tears from coming.
I turn and start walking towards the gate when I hear it.

A gentle whisper, either a figment of my mind or just my imagination.

But as my hand rests on the cool metal of the gate, I swear I can hear
five softly spoken words:

“And we’re proud you’re ours.”

Prompt 3: Monkeys (requested by sadiebugz00)

“Ya know, you look like a pwimate,” says the little three-year-old boy
to his friend as he watches him jump up and down on the ground while
waving his hands like a lunatic.

“A pwimate? ‘Wuzza pwimate?” his friend asks as he scratches dirt out
of his eye.

The boy looks at him and brings his hands to his armpits and sticks
his tongue out.

“‘Thith ‘thi ‘tha ‘thathay,” he manages with his tongue out.

His friend looks at him confusedly and asks, “Whajja say?”

The boy rolls his eyes and pulls his tongue back and says, “A pwimate
is see-me-lar to a monkey.”
He seems to be proud of using a big word and sticks nose into the air pompously.

The other boy scratches his head and asks, “You’re using big wowds,
Danny.” Then he squints at him, “You sho’ you’re not a pwimaid?
Uh...mwonkey or somefin’?”

Danny rolls his eyes once again and mutters, “Says the
pwimate-slash-monkey himself.” He looks at his friend, “Now you gotta
wee-peet afta’ me. Pwi-mate is a monk-ey. Got it?”

His friend attempts to repeat his words and messes up. After several
more failed tries, Danny finally thrusts his hands into the air and
sighs.

“I gwive up wif’ you Bobby. Wanna go make Lego monsters?”

Bobby grins and says, “Fwinally! Says the pwimait-swash-monkey himself.”

END OF PART TWO.

[i] A/N: Well I hope you liked that. Yes, I am aware of how I slaughtered the English language in the third one but I did that to fit in the three year old thing. Besides, that's how my lil' cousin talks :3 And I am indeed afraid of darkness :D
Anyways, hoep you enjoyed reading as much as I enjoyed writing. Which one was your favorite? Leave prompt requests, feedback and whateveryouwant in the comments. Remember, the more requests and feedback, the faster I shall post the next. That's all, thanks for reading and until next time! :)

xx cuteypuffgirl
posted by MissCarolyn143
Author's Note: Sorry I took so long with this chapter!
I was just so busy!
And as usual please comment it you loved it or if you found something wrong with it,cause I really want to improve my writing!
Lynn ❤

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Part Three:
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2) It doesn't create a new character

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Ryker's point of view.
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    I leaned against a large building and thought. Should I at least go tell her where I was? But then He might catch me. I decided that I wouldn’t go today. That would make sure that I was alive to take care of her. Anyway, I needed to sell what was in my backpack.
    I...
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    I walked home. Do that every day. Mostly ‘cause I don’t want anyone to see where I live.
    It’s a pretty rough place. Gotta watch your back, or you’re gonna get a bullet in it.
    I walked into a short alleyway. I was in the rough parts now. I listened to make sure no one was there. When...
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posted by Gryffindork99
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hey, so its been a really long time since I've posted anything on here so i needed something to get me started again. I've been reading Pourquoi tales, so stories explaining how something came to be. I wanted to write my own so mines about the Rose. I hope you like it. If you do please comment :)
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Chapter 1: Where am I?

A massive army stood at the bottom of an active volcano. Alice, restrained by 2 soldiers, looked around feverishly. In piles were mauled, broken figures, all lying in growing pools of blood, dead from the recently fought battle. She looked up, towards the edge of the burning volcano, her eyes fixed on the teen standing next to a dark, hooded figure. "Felix! Felix!" she cried out. But he refused to respond, his face emotionless. She struggled to free herself, but without success. As Felix was pushed into the boiling pit by the hooded person, he did not say a word.

"FELIX!!!"...
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Chapter 15
Sleeping in
    I yawned as I raised my head from the security of my lovely pillow, expecting the lovely outputting colors of my bed room I was surprised to see creepy bright white paint on the walls, with no pictures whatsoever.
    I jerked up from my position and noticed I was on one of those things in the doctors office the kid gets to sit on for whether it was for a check-up or sickness, I quickly calmed down when I realized I was in the nurse’s office, our lovely nurse was on her computer typing, and I noticed a familiar pretty girl sleeping...
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*Just starting on, I wanted to write some more horror, this is going to be a bit different than my other's, I'm still deciding on some things. Please be kind. Enjoy :)*
Summary:When normal student Lewis Vander and his friends make a horror film for their group project in history class, things seem to be going swell. The horror film is about killing’s that had happened years ago, and there adding some of their own little things, but soon the killings are happening again. And Lewis and his friends fear that this isn’t a coincidence these killing’s are starting up again, there’s a reason....
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posted by alicia386
I made these collages a while ago and i have got to share them with you.




















































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Will Bella ever stop loving Edward? Will Peeta ever cheat on Katniss? These questions and more will be answered after these messages.

































K-Stew and Rob are OVER. Well, she did cheat on him with a MARRIED MAN WHO HAS KIDS.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :) Sorry for the mishap, fixed it!~
Chapter 34
        A way of escape
    Though I wanted to scream and fight, it was of no use, if we really were far away I’d just be making useless noises. Jess had taken everything out of my pockets, my phone, money, all that stuff. But she was merciful enough to give me entertainment, a tv stood on the far corner of the basement, it was on the news channel, and I kept it there for a daily update.
    It was worse than I thought.
    Mom’s...
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posted by Problematic129
    ~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~
Chapter 30
    Confusing sensations
    As soon as those words were uttered the world became weird. I felt weird, light headed, like I was flying or something. I could hear screaming and shouts, they were so loud, and yet I couldn’t hear what they were saying.
    My eyes felt to heavy to open, and my head started to hurt just the faintest. Even though it felt like seconds when this weird sensation hit, I knew it was only minutes.
    I could distinctly...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Twelve

WE UNRAVEL THE LAYERS THAT PROTECT US FROM PAIN AND MISERY AS WE GET TO KNOW YOU. -Erica

      "You lie to me!" said my demon as he threw the spirit of Emma through the door. How he threw a transparent object through a solid object, I will never know. I do know that Emma was whimpering as she she laid motionless on the floor. I appeared from the library before realizing that I wasn't suppose I be there anyways. Hopefully. He would be too focused on Emma to notice my mistake. "You said she would be here and she isn't! You let her escape!"
      Emma's face was planted on the...
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posted by 1999jacko
[So your back for more are you young ones, well as long as you don't interrupt I'll tell you the next part.] Sam sat in the headmasters office staring at a still unconscious Drake, while the actual head master stood ripping Jake to pieces for putting Drake ' under' as he put it. Jake was sinking down into his chair, the fear of the head clearly showing on his face trying to say," b-but he wouldn't co-" but you could see the head just wasn't having any excuses. "JAKE GET OUT OF MY SIGHT NOW, I'LL DEAL WITH YOU LATER!" the heads booming voice shouted at Jake, and Jake took his chance to run out...
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crime

Detective James Whitaker stood at the homicide scene, inspecting the body as thoroughly as he could, until he figured out what had happened. With all the forensic scientists gathered around him he started to tell them what had happened," well what happened was the killer was chasing the girl through the forest, and the girl tripped up and the killer slowly walked oveeer." James made his way swiftly through the branches and twigs until he reached a large tree and took 3 steps forward, and then continued." Here, he raised his gun and aimed at the head and shot then ran as fast as he could...
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posted by Problematic129
In case were still doing genre~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)*
Chapter 26
    The club of doom and popularity
    “Glad you guys could all make it,” Meredith said, grinning like a Cheshire cat. “As you know I’ve called you all girl’s because the day has finally arrived!”
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The dark shadows of the 5 tall men faintly lay on the wall of the old abandoned factory. Among those men was the Killer and the Leader of the group of men, but it was neither of them speaking it was the newest and most deadly member, who was trying to push himself into the spot of the killer of the group and push the old one out." Listen to me guys sure he got the job done and it was a clean job but he should of waited until the suspicion of us had moved on before killing her." He turned his attention to the leader and continued," if you had given me the job I would of waited because she didn't...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 11
                Game on
    “So I’ve been knocking on the door for ages,” Talia shrieks. “But you never answered! Never! And you’re here! And Beth’s here!”
    One thing you learn to not like about Talia, is that she never talks normal, yelling is her normal level of voice.
    “Oh…” I stall until a brilliant plan comes to me. “Beth and I were listening to music quite loudly, getting ready for our sleepover with the girl’s...
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posted by campcheerio123
I did not write this song; all credit goes to Lenka

Underneath the moon,
underneath the stars
Here's a little heart for you
Up above the world,
up above it all
Here's a hand to hold on to
But if I should break,
if I should fall away
What am I to do?
I need someone to take
a little of the weight
Or I'll fall through
You're just the one that I've been waiting for
I'll give you all that I have to give and more
But don't let me fall
Take a little time,
walk a little line
Get the balance right
Give a little love, gimme just enough
So that I can hang on tight
We will be alright,
I'll be by your side
I won't let...
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Chapter Eleven

      Dakota had learned a long time ago that the hospital always monitored their patients and the ins and outs of the hospital to make sure everything was safe. This gave her the idea that maybe if she could somehow weasel the footage out of the nurse's computer, then she would have a tape of Hazel Portwood admitting to the murders for Abigail and Gwendolyn Dalton. This could hopefully get Connor out of jail. It was a long shot and not very well planned out but Dakota had to take the chance.
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