True Writers Club
Join
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
posted by malmcd
Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked strawberry red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm kiss on the check and saying, “I love you dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I love you two.” As he turned into the next road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s to late. They were heading straight at another car at insanely fast speed. She looked back at her dad and he was trying to look calm. Then she felt it.
The Impact...
She remember jolting around and that’s when she closed her eyes. She heard metal crushing, Alice screamed, everything was a blur. Then the movement stopped she slowly opened her eyes. She looked to her right and saw the car tipped over on it’s side but there was no since of her dad. Then she saw light’s, after that it was black.
The sound of metal made are eyes twitch sending jolt’s down her body. The cold table sent chills down her spine. This time I’ll open my eyes for shore! She told herself. She began to wiggled her eye’s open but something strange happened...all she saw was a blur of light and colors flying around her. She began to get scared not knowing what was happening to her. Her whole body began to twitch in a frantic twist to get free. But there was something around her body making her unable to move. Then she heard faint sound of a warning alarm. Then once again the world went black...

This time when Alice began to come to her sense’s she heard a familiar voice. The voice sounded sweet and warm yet harsh and scared. It sounded like a women who was half crying half yelling. She know the voice...it was her mom.
This time Alice was to afraid to open her eyes. Afraid about what she met see.
“Alice can you hear me?” Yelled her mom. She thought this was dream no...a nightmare.

She woke up again this time she was used to the weird felling of not being able to see...after the Car crash Alice had lost all of her sight or so the doctors think. Alice new it wasn’t gone she felt different yes but it was not gone. She was in her bedroom in her house the once bright yellow walls seemed to disappear. Like the world was not longer bright and colorful but dark and colorless. Alice began to break down her world had clasped...Her eyes were now colorless her mother was a reck and her father was no longer coming home...he’s gone she’s hopes to a better place. She thought about what her friends would think how everyone would think? Would they think she’s weird and stupid just because she couldn’t see? Would see have to get glass’s? She preyed that she wouldn’t have to. “Anything but glass’s” She said to her self. Besides how would they help her eyes were bad enough as it was.
Each night she would lesion to her mother cry in her room thinking that Alice was asleep but she wasn’t. She would lesion for his name in between sobs and chocked up tears. She wonder if my mother thought about her...like if she cried for him two, or cried because life as she new it was gone, all hope of being normal was lost. And she did cry most she would cry with her mother, cry about him and her newly found life that she now had to live. Live was no longer gumdrops and gummy bears, no it had become a WarHead. Not sweet only sour.


~Should I go on in this one to?~
posted by MissCarolyn143
Hey Guys,this is my very first story posted in this club!
I hope you love it!
Make sure to comment if you like it or if you found anything wrong with it cause I really wanna improve my writing!
Carolyn

--------------------------------------------------------------------------
Part One:
The dried leaves crunched beneath her feet as she walked in the dark woods alone searching for a way out of it on this dark scary night, I knew I shouldn't have accepted Beck's stupid dare!,she thought to herself, Now look what happened!,to busy thinking of ways on how to get back on her brother,Autumn didn't...
continue reading...
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~
Chapter 29
    Who and what is it?
    Practically everyone in the room was leaving, the police had left already, to search the other places Dorothy’s been, hoping to find some evidence.
    Dad had stormed out when we were released and mom, Jess, and I were just leaving when a group of girl’s blocked my way, leaded by a lucid looking Meredith.
    “Your in our way.” Jess said, levelly. “Better get out of it.”
    “I’m not here for you,”...
continue reading...
added by uoliujh
added by alicia386
Source: Google
posted by CatiePotter
Music is the only class I have with him. The longest class.

"Nick play that part of the excersice again." told our band teacher Mr. Bova.

No one argues with Mr. Bova, we all think he's scary.

"Why do I even stay in this class?" I sometimes ask myself. The fear of being yelled at? The fact that I loved playing the flute? Or Nick.... no I moved on! Or at lest I tell myself I did. I don't know what it is, his poping messy, curly blond hair, even more sunkissed than mine. Or the way he smiled to himself, his perfect smirk. I don't why I ever crushed on him.

Nick finished the part of the routine, his...
continue reading...
Hell is nothing more than the outcome of a natural life
Humans are not built for perfection or purity
Every human no matter what is stained in someway
It could be a horrid thought, A mistaken word said
Perhaps actions that ended in consequence
This is why I chose not to fear it, but embrace it
If you are to believe in heaven or hell than believe it’s whatever you want
Only the dead have seen it so how is we to know it’s a horrific place
Perhaps it is just a place you can be sent as a personal decision
I’m am not fully faithful, stepping into heaven would be fraud
I choose to accept whatever happens, in truth it is not me I worry about
Understand it’s all matter of opinion and I’m open to all
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
3
Terry
    Never, in the fifteen years that I’ve grown up in this town, did something strange and unexplained like this ever happen.
    All over the news were photo’s of us displayed on there, saying that we were found, and that a freak accident occurred but now were fine.
    But that wasn’t a freak accident?
    It felt too real and purposeful to be random, it was literally one half a second when the storm came and changed the sunny outside. I’d never been so scared in my life,...
continue reading...
added by h3rmioneg
added by h3rmioneg
added by alicia386
Source: GOOGLE i guess
added by alicia386
Source: GOOGLE i guess
added by h3rmioneg
added by alicia386
It is about three teens for ask themselvs, what are they willing to do to get to where they wanna be. They will either kill or die to get there.
video
carnival of souls
melissa marr
soul
entertainment
upcoming book
bestsellers
new york times bestseller
author
added by h3rmioneg
added by hgfan5602
added by Portia0623
added by alicia386
added by h3rmioneg
added by alicia386