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posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 20    
    When a psycho is near, chaos occurs
    Guess what? I was right! Adam’s team did lose, victory for Pam! You could hear his sad frustrating voice on the other end as I was hanging out with my gal’s and surprisingly Grey. He just invited himself but I’m not complaining.
    “That movie was awesome!” Sage announced as we exited the movie theater.
    “Of course it was, I paid good money for it.” Grey replied.
    I couldn’t argue with that, he did pay for it, and for that I am thankful. When Gyre took Beth’s hand I couldn’t help but smile, especially the embarrassed adorable smile they shared when their eyes met after, they are just too cute!
    We went to the mall next, going to store after store, having fun. It was a really great time, even with Grey, we joked we had fun. It was like he was part of our group, and it wasn’t even awkward, even though he was the only boy. But I bet if Ryler and Adam joined, it would be even better.
    We were at the food place when a voice I’ve come to fear and recognize sounded, and it made me dread the next few moments to come.
    “Grey! Grey is that you?” Talia yelled running to the table, smiling at him with a scary delight. “How is my favorite man doing? You look good! Ha! Who am I kidding, you always look good! Wanna hang?”
    Grey cleared his throat. “I kind of am, with the girl’s.”
    “Gal’s,” I stressed.
    Talia ignored me, not even glancing at us. They won’t mind.”
    One thing I forgot to mention is that Talia gets worse when it comes to him, she practically vies for his attention, she may tell you she loves you, but if she feels threatened she just might be pulling your dead eye closed.
    I mentally grin, finally I can go up against her. “Actually we will, were in the middle of something.”
    Talia laughs, patting my back rather forcefully. “No you don’t!”
    “Is that I threat? Cause I do, your cool Tal, but just bug off, and stop answering our questions, we have our own voices.”
    Ali nods, and Sage pipes a yeah.
    Talia narrows her eyes at us, before turning to Grey. “Grey, baby, come on.”
    Beth stands up. “Baby? He’s not your baby, leave.”
    Sage and Ali stands up. “Leave now.”
    I stand up too. “Yeah, this is not exactly a good time right now, like I said were in the middle of something, come back later, yeah?”
    Talia gives us what she thinks looks sweet but actually manic, she puts her hand on Grey’s shoulder. “I could join.”
    Grey stands up, brushing off her arm. “We were just leaving.”
    We all quickly departure, and I could literally hear her craziness activating, she turns to look at us with a glare and I give her a mock sweet wave before we exit.
    I couldn’t help but laugh when we got to the car, and suddenly we were all laughing. I wondered what was happening right now in there, was she throwing tables and chairs? What’s going to happen now?
    But I shrugged it off, we’ll find out later, and hopefully really later, that girl is crazy. And when someone like me calls someone crazy, you know it’s the real deal.
     *Thanks for reading! Please review, fan, and don't copy. Really appreciated :)*
posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I dropped the flashlight and slammed the window shut. “What on Earth was that!?” I didn't know I had said that out loud until my mom asked “What was what?”
“Mom! What are you doing in my room?” I spun around and leaned against the window sill. “I was just bringing up your laundry when I heard you talking to yourself.” She put down the pile of clothes she was carrying and sat on my bed. “You know you can talk to me about anything. Is it boy trouble?” I looked at her and walked to my door.
“Mom it's not boy trouble and I think I'm going to go to bed.” I yawned and stretched...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I pulled into the driveway with all the windows and doors locked. Mom's Corvette was parked in my spot, so I parked next to it. Unlocking the door, I slowly stepped onto the gravel in my beat up sneakers; grabbing my bag before I shut and locked the door. I walked into the front entrance of my house to find my mom and Dylan on the couch. “Mom, I'm home.” I said loud enough for both of them to hear.
“Oh, uh hi dear. How was your day?” My mom asked be as she got up from the couch, patting her frizzy hair down and straightening her shirt. “Dylan was going to stay for dinner. We brought...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow clutched the plans, watching his fellow United Flame and Sword soldiers as they shook their heads and muttered amongst themselves. He saw a few lower their swords and guns just to have them raised again after receiving looks from their superiors.
“You don't understand, if we continue the way we are this war will never end! We'll continue fighting with the Bellators until who knows when.” He looked towards Luca who wouldn't make eye contact with him. “You use fuel like it can be dug from the ground instead of traded for at the market. You don't see that everything is running out...
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posted by Max277
Chapter 6

Okay, so were was I last time before I got hurt? Oh right now I remember. So battling demons, to be honest it scares the living soul out of me. Pretty much that's what those evil things are after. Alright your probably thinking what in the world is she talking about, She was hurt! Yes I realize that. I am just going to give you some info about those ugly things. Okay.
Rule 1-Never try to reason with them. That's just stupid and they will take your soul.
Rule 2-Please don't look into there eyes! If you do let's just say you will be sorry.
Rule 3-Always have a wepon.
Rule 4-Don't and I mean don't let them ever sneak up on you. You'll be a goner.
Rule 5 last rule- Never have a really hot guy helping you trying to fight these things. You will be focused on him! Not the demon!
That's why I blame Nick. Damn why did he have to be so darn hot.

I open my eyes and lucky me. Guess who's hovering over me? A demon.
posted by amoremusic
I don't envy you for the life
that you had lived, you kept
yourself guarded by all of the
horrible things that could've
happened to you.

You tell me that you
don't want or need my
sympathy vote that you
won't take it from some-one
like me.

you came through the
most devastating part
of your life and that is
why i admire you so much.

I know that I don't
fully understand the
ignorance that you lived
in, I pray to God that i
never will, but you didn't
let that put you into a position
that left you feeling bitter-and
hating every-one who came
to know you and love you.

You survived and came
out of...
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posted by alicia386
Thursday

Lots to blog about. Today was interview day. The principal made all 8th graders go through a mock interview for the experience. We had to dress appropriate and respectable. I wore a tight black and grey dress with a black belt above the waist with black wedges. My interview guy was this old fart whose wrinkles hid his emotions. His face was so wrinkled that I couldn't tell whether he was smiling, frowning, or laughing. I think my interview went okay. When I got back with my circle of friends, they told me how their interviewers were complimenting them and saying how much they loved this resumes and cover letters. He didn't say anything nice or mean. He did however joke with me. In other glorious news, Kyle took me out for ice cream. How cool is that?! He had chocolate and I had vanilla. We sat and talked. It was just the two of us. By next week, Kyle will surely be my boyfriend.
posted by alicia386
Friday

The Preps decided that I was the girl on Chirps causing them drama. Chirps is a social network founded by Twitter that is only for teens. Chirps is a safe site that allows teens to just talk or in this case, cause some serious drama. Today they thought that I was the one causing drama on Chirps. As if! Do they honestly believe that I do not have life? Why would I waste my precious time trying to humiliate them on the internet. People who cause drama on the internet are only cowards. If I have something to say to you, then I will say it to your face. That isn't all that happened today....
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posted by sadiebugz00
3
WHAT TO DO?
Carter’s Perspective


No matter how shocking, yes, we dogs can think. Gasps galore, I know. Anyways, I sat there, somehow knowing that we weren’t playing hide-and-go –seek in this… place. I decided to get out of the road as I had realized that I was in the middle of the lane.
I faltered for a second, wondering if I should stay there just in case Derek was to come back. I finally decided there was no chance that he would be coming back. I wander out into the desert a bit, and then I looked back at the way that I had come from. I realized I couldn’t see the road anymore. Great…....
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posted by CatiePotter
"What happened?" I questioned myself as I got up. I was in my bed; how did I get there? I looked around my small bedroom. The house was scilent, the usual voices of my mother making breakfast was not there. There was no smell of pancakes or coffee as the usual breakfast was.

I looked across my bed to the stand with my alarm clock. 5 o'clock in the morning."Odd they should be up by now" I wondered.

There was a bang downstairs, like the car grauge door." What are they doing?"I asked myself. I stretched as I headed downstairs to the kitchen. As I krept down further there was more noises coming...
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posted by Weasel1999
II The Kitchen.

Unsure where to go Ember dithered in the corridor outside the nursery for almost ten minutes the next morning. But soon the delicious smell of apples and cinnamon reached her nose.
She followed the scent until she reached a large old fashioned kitchen. An old, wooden table, worn and scrubbed filled the middle of the room. It was the biggest kitchen Ember had ever saw. One side of the room was simply all cupboards and drawers of all different shapes and coloured. Ember’s curiosity burned but she was distracted by a large woman wearing an apron. She was taking a steaming apple...
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posted by alicia386
I'm hiding in my mom's closet. IT was the only way for me to be safe from . . . the mirror. I know this sounds ridiculous but you wil understand when you hear my story.

It all started when my friend, Bella, received an ancient mirror from her grandmother. Her granny had said it shows the truth within someone.

Everything was okay at first. Bella used the mirror rarely to fix her hair or something. Then things took a change for the worst.

Our other friend, Hanna, was sitting next to Bella at the lunch table so I sat next to them. Hanna was desperately trying to tell bella about her encounter with...
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Note: This one's from Ash's point of view. Hope the few people who are reading it enjoy.
Also, can't wait until they get older and I can make them do other things: strip each other, make out...XD. My mind is so sick.
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My clock read 9:47. I lay I my bed, my face buried in my pillow to muffle my sobbing.
    What was wrong with me? What had I done to deserve this?
    I felt the tight feeling in my stomach, more painful than it usually is. I needed to throw up again. I got up and...
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This is from Quin's point of view.
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My mom dropped me off at Lisa’s house at exactly 7:30. I hopped out of the passenger’s seat. The gravel driveway crunched under my feet.
    Mom went over to the front door and knocked. Brigit answered the door.
    “Hi, Penelope!” she said, giving my mom a quick hug. “How’s everything at home?”
    “Pretty good. It’s pretty good. How is it with you?”
    “Same,” Brigit said.
    “Good....
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Hey, guys. Sorry I didn't post a chapter for a while. The power's off at my house, so I can't get on the internet. I'm at the library right now; it's got Wi-Fi. Hope you guys enjoy this chapter! It's from Quin's point of view.
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“Are you sure it was Ryker?” Zoë asked. Tears were streaming down her cheeks. She was obviously even more upset that Ryker was smoking than when she thought it was Travis.
    I nodded. “Who else wears old hiking boots every day? I wish it wasn’t him, though. I wish...
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"Operation Get-Drew-to-ask-me-to-the-dance is undergo." I said in a hushed tone to my best friend Nyomi.

"We so got to get a better name then that, Lola," replied Nyomi. "Operation Drew sounds better."

"Who cares just go ask him who he is taking to the Valentine Dance."

"Why me?"

"You are his closest friend," i said. "You know him so much better then I do."

"Fine," she grumbled. I watched from behind the wall as Nyomi went up to my crush and ask him the sacred question.

I saw them laughing and thought everything went according to plan. Then she came back.

"He said he was thinking about asking Rachel,"...
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Felix's mother was worried as hell.

Not ONLY was her son almost run over by an 8 ton truck, he disappeared after the accident. She worried he might be under the huge pile-up of cars, but after several hours of car moving, his body was nowhere to be found, nor was Alice's.

Of course, Alice's father wasn't much support. Hell, he wasn't even here, where the accident was. Lazy, inconsiderate, horrible excuse of a father was probably still at home with a beer in his hand and his butt glued to the couch. Her mother was probably out gambling again, wasting all of Alice's hard earned money from her...
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Garren woke up to the faint smell of food and yelling coming from downstairs. The sound of a door slamming rang through the house, and Garren slowly sat up, just in case his joints and wounds still ached. As he got to his feet, he checked how his body was doing. Surprised, nothing hurt, not even his cut.

Climbing downstairs, he found Kayleen sitting at a table near what looked like a kitchen, fuming mad. Once she noticed Garren, however, she put on a small smile.

"Afternoon, sleepy-head," she greeted. "You know, you snore REALLY loudly. Thought I'd never sleep."

"Sorry." Garren replied. "Nothing...
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The Eden Chronicles is the main series set in Eden. Every book is from a different perspective. The books generally follow Edonian history in chronological order, but there may be a few exceptions. Here are the titles of the first six and final six books of the series.





A Place of Peace
The Founding of Cities
Draco: First King of the Dragons
The First Demons
The Ruling Council
Starlit Nights


A Little Bit More Than Love
Rise of the Demons
Rokujo's Revolution
Rebuilding Eden
Truth and Lies
Pandora: Last Queen of the Dragons
posted by Problematic129
Chapter 6
        Opposing and spoiled opinions
    The website made chills run down my back for the whole day and everything, it was…in other words, extremely creepy. The website was in the form of some kind of creepy old wallpaper, and you can immediately tell it was created by the crazies. You could just see the scent of craziness all over it, and I didn’t feel that excited to read on, but I did.
    More victims, more confusions, the one person in this town to befuddle our police men, either that or their losing...
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