True Writers Article: Eye of the beholder, Chapter 5

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posted by 1999jacko

Gemini tunneled under the ground spinning in circles causing the ground to rumble. As he reached his brothers old house he felt something in his head snap loose as though a part of his brain and been cut open and dissected. " ARGH" he screamed as he stopped tunneling and scoured through his mind looking for something different or missing, he soon found the thingt hat was missing. His empathy link with Libra which meant only one thing his brother is dead, he quickly jumped through the earth and dived into the air taking huge leaps through the air the earth rising beneath his feet, he soon reached Libras house and he dived through the window to see a boy wearing black crying over the dead body of his brother. He quickly saw that the boy had the name Orion in his power signature so as stormed towards the boy he rumbled," ORION what have you done to my brother," the boy looked scared as he aproached him and he stumbled over his words as he replied," I-I u-used a -n-n-ne-new power on him a-and it ki-kill-killed him," Gemini thought for a while before charging at him tendrils of earth flying around his body," I shall kill you."
The boy named Orion stood up and Gemini saw his eyes darken in anger and he caused a very odd eye to appear in the air and quickly with out realising it Gemini had the eye on him with an avatar close behind it all charging at him.

Orion glared at the man who said he was Libras brother as he quickly swiped at the huge eye flying towards him but it was to late the eye was soon upon him making him scream out. Yet as Orion whatched him scream he didn't notice the huge wave of earth cursing towards him and soon both wizards were down almost dead from the earth Orions eye and avatar dissipitated into the air and before the man could get up again a half dead Orion crawled away from the building his wand writhing around trying to heal him.

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happy tree akatsuki, chapter 1

posted by flippy_fan210

flippy

it was a normal day in the akatsuki. Pein was in his room doing paper work, Konan was making origami figures, Deidara was blowing things up outside, Tobi was annoying deidara and Miyu was practicing her elemental jutsus. She shot fire at a bird, it went up in flames and set a tree on fire. “interesting.” she mumbled. She shot electricity at another bird and it exploded. “are you gonna murder every bird from here to china?” itachi said? “shut up, there's nothing else to do.” miyu replied. “you could kill innocents.” itachi suggested. Miyu looked at him like he was crazy then...

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...Adira Anderson!!!

posted by hgfan5602

This is for the Hunger Games RP, but I thought it could be put on here to see what everyone thinks about it too.
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I stare up at the stage as they wait for everyone to be ready for the reaping. I hate the Capitol. I hate everyone who's even associated with the Capitol. I hate the reapings. And I hate the Hunger Games. I'm one of the very few people who don't like the Hunger Games here in District 3. Most people love the Hunger Games here. If they get chosen for it, they are usually celebrating about it later on. Some prepare for...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.22

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 22
        The little get together interrupted
    “Shut up! You totally cheated!” Sage yelled at my brother.
    Adam had an offended face. “Me? Cheat? Please, you help me win easily yourself.”
    “Hey!” Sage yells as Ali bursts out laughing.
    Meanwhile on the other side of the table Grey and Beth were in their own little world.
    “You actually went to Paris?” Beth asks, smiling.
    Grey...

The war of Color, chapter 3

posted by 1999jacko

Rick lay in hospital with stitches all over his face and his left eye swollen up, a small eye patch like thing barely covering it up. His best friends- Allan, Brandon, Kyran and Duncan- stood around his bed telling him what happened after he left, Kyran was mainly telling him about it though because everyone had bruises apart from him," and so everyone was fighting at lunch and som black kid had his leg broken, it was so cool you could see the bone sticking out and blood went everywhere over James, sp all in all we had a good first day of what they're calling 'the war'." Brandon smiled slightly...

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Inspired:Peacefully delicate

posted by Problematic129

I believe this is part 7, with another mixture of funny and inspiring pictures, cause let's face it. It's pretty hard to get fully serious, always have a happy funny mind to lighten everything in the middle of heartache and pain. Just a word of advice. Some pictures here come from pinterest hellobeliver.com, tumblr, gummy chocolates tumblr and deviant art (look for maryana02. deviantart .com), look for them, there awesome. I think one of these pictures is a repeat not sure, and too lazy to look fro the others.
Again I own absolutely nothing, and I do hope you smile laugh and get inspired because those are just wonderful feelings and it's the purpose of all of this.
Enjoy!

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The Deadly Sins ~PART TWO~

posted by malmcd

SLOTH

'Do you ever get off the couch, sir?
Do you ever get off the couch and stop watching TV?
Do you ever go for a run?
Do you ever simply walk around or exercise outside?
Do you just play video games all day, sir?
Do you even do any work?
Man, you are lazy! '

I would not be surprised if someone
Said this to you, my friend,
For I am the cause of it all.
I am one of the Deadly Sins,
As you humans call me,
For I am what makes people a lazy bum.

I am a daemon from the pits of hell,
As are all my other brothers,
But I must say,
That I am not a sin,
But rather a human instinct.
And it amuses me to see you sit around...

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Millions Of Miles Apart

posted by malmcd

Millions of Miles Apart

From the moment your born somewhere out there you have a true love. At less that’s what they say? They say there’s one person who has the same heart strings as you and they complete you. And there’s nothing that can keep you apart from one another...But what if my one true love isn’t here? I mean what if I never find him or her if that’s the case which I hope it’s not. I don’t know what to say but I’m different from the rest...What if there’s no one out there for me?
My name is Sunflower I was born on the first day of spring, March 20, 1998. And was...

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Sendoffs and Memories (Prologue to "The Spotlight Trained on Me," a Harry Potter Fanfiction)

posted by dragonsmemory

I looked around the platform, waiting. George leaned down and whispered in my ear. "Don't worry, Hailey. They'll be here."

I glanced up at him. He had changed after the battle, we all had. George, always the prankster, became more serious. He had even talked about closing down Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes. The hole in the side of his head, where his ear used to be, was still unnerving, but I learned to accept it as a part of him.

"I know, George," I said. "There's still a connection."

"You mean that old twin telepathy thing you had going is still there?"

I stood on my toes to kiss him. "Always."...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.5

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
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        Stilere
    It wasn’t like I was expecting anything to happen, but what happened when we opened the book did surprise me.
    “What in the world is that?” Alex asked, looking at the weird lettering.
    “I don’t know, it’s definitely not English, but it doesn’t look like other languages, and I know a ton.” Iris said.
    “Maybe it’s not even a language.” Darren said. “Sure doesn’t look like it.”
    “It’s...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.19

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 19
        I didn’t even need revenge
    I couldn’t help but feel giddy as I brushed my teeth and changed into more prettier looking clothes than my bedtime pajama’s of Hello Kitty. The house was quiet and I was a little bit disappointed, but at least I’d get some time to myself, and I needed that very much. I was also glad I didn’t have to go to school either, not because I’d be embarrassed or anything, but because the minute I saw Meredith I’d go all Ninja...

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Remember me Ch.31

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~
Chapter 31
        The worst form of betrayal
    I think I woke up, it still painfully hurt to breathe. But I was still in the woods, or at least next to it. Witnessing the moment.
    The moment my sister died.
    I hadn’t been able to hold the tears ever since I appeared here, leaving my sister behind, I still couldn’t believe it. I missed my one chance, I remember what she had said, though I didn’t understand most of it, but I do now.
    Now...

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Coming Home: A Sons of Anarchy Fanfic Chapter 2 Part 1

posted by CapShunsuifan13

His eyes fluttered open, and his muscles automatically tensed. For a second he was back in Afghanistan, alone, without his comrades, falling asleep unguarded behind enemy lines. He noticed how his arms were, like they had been holding someone, someone who is no longer there. Gemma.... The thought entered his head like a speeding bullet. The fact that she wasn't there made him think that she had never been, that he wasn't really home, and that he imagined the whole thing. But one look around the room, his eyes adjusting to the moonlight, he could tell he was in the club house. He really was...

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Wolf Girl: Chapter 13

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

(Fantasy)

I woke with a pounding head and a throbbing shoulder. A bright light was shining in my eyes so I couldn't see anything. “What happened?”
“You were shot.”
“Shot?” I couldn't see anyone. Suddenly, the light snapped off and the room was thrown into shadows. Rubbing my eyes, I saw that I was in some sort of operating room. “Yes, shot. Brett and Dalla brought you here, said I was the only one that could save you so I did the only thing I could.” I was drawing a blank, what was it Dylan could do? An image came into my mind. It was a stack of files, one flashing after another....

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A Wish on The Northern Star Chapter Three

posted by Dhampires

I shook in fear as I felt him hovering over me it scard me out of skin I could already feel his hits coming. As leaned over me I heard angry load foot steps stomping their way towards us. My eyes were closed tight but snapped open when I heard his out burst.

"Dad! Stop!" He'd said firmly.

"This little witch" he stooped down so his mouth was level with my ear. "Was snooping on on our conversation I think I'll..." he chuckled "finish her off in one sweep."

I could feel the cold metal of the knife against my skin against my vocal cord. God, I wasn't even breathing I didn't didn't bother to think....

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Charmed and Dangerous Ch. 2

posted by alicia386

Action: Spy Fiction

Chapter Two: I May Be A Spy But Weather Can Kick My Butt Any Day

I and almost everyone else is the world takes life for granted. I didn't realize how good I had it until something hit our jet which immediately caught on fire. Years of training for disasters like this kicked in. I was on high alert looking for the nearest exit. My dad was already at one with two parachutes. Dang it. How could he have possibly have gotten those that fast? This would not seem impressive. Our pilot was already trying desperately to control the jet. It was like he wasn't afraid of those...

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Smith, Ron Smith,Prologue

posted by 1999jacko

4 weeks ago
Ron sat miserably in his apartment watching the new for something interesting, when a beeping noise butted into his little day dream. He ran over to the table where the phone was placed, he picked it up instantly hitting answer." Hello commander, is my dad back yet?" he said hopefully. The commander cleared his throat before answering," Ron I'm really sorry but we just received a message and its not good news... I'm afraid your father is dead and we need you to relocate away from Washington today. So pack your stuff and get ready for your escort to take you to your new home." All...

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What I Took From It, Chapter Three

posted by flabaloobalah

Genre: Realistic Fiction, Mystery, Drama/Romance

Claire and I unpacked our belongings and put them in our own dressers and waited for lunch to be ready.
After a little while, Leila hollered for us. As Claire and I reached the doorway, we observed the stampede as the six of them pounded down the stairs.
When my little sister and I reached the kitchen, Jeb greeted us and handed us a bowl and silverware. At the head of the table, Leila stood with a ladle and served us plenty of food. I sat next to Makayla, and Claire sat across from me, next to Joey.
The meal was spent in almost total silence, save...

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What I Took From It, Chapter Two

posted by flabaloobalah

Once we were all done swarming each other, Leila helped Claire and I through the little herd of cousins, upstairs, to our room. Where usually you would take a left and be looking at their bedroom doors and a bathroom, we took a right at the top of the stairs so we were faced with a room i hadn't seen before. The interior was a pale, almost skin like beige that was cracked and peeling in some spots, especially where our beds were pushed against the wall. Beside each bed was a small table with drawers and a lamp. In between us was a large window, creating a distorted patch of light on the scratched...

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Be Normal!...Not. (Chapter One)

posted by hgfan5602

Hi, my name is Jonas. I'm thirteen. I'm...well, not what you would consider normal.
I have twenty pairs of X-His from the Converse store next door, all pink. Okay, okay, see? I'm not normal. And that's not the end of it.
I have thirty T-shirts that say Sheep Vampires Rock on them. Yeah, I love the horror movie "Sheep Vampires." It's filled with sheep that get tortured and wake up at midnight only to turn into sheep vampires that suck the blood out of their shepherds. It's rated R, but my parents never notice. I bet they don't even know there's a rating system. Lucky for me.
So, this morning, I woke up, when my glass of Coke left from an year ago shimmered. A misty face appeared.
"Jonas...come here to me...or you shall suffer the consequences...like your precious ancestors," the woman screamed.
Was it my imagination...or did I get sucked into my glass of Coke?

Jonas's glass of Coke

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A life of survival,prologue

posted by 1999jacko

because I like to have lots of stuff on at once heres a prologue of one of my new stories

The prologue
I ran forward into nothing things being erased in the path of the other kids behind me, the world is crumbling before my eyes. MY friends that have already died bodies appear on the nothingness in front of me I shove them away from my eyes and jump high over them.Too high I feel the pain shoot up and down my leg searing a hole of pain in my head and then that's all I feel, think and hear..Pain and that's when I know they are right behind me haunting me for all the bad things I've done I just...