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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow stood reading the task he had been given. It had come from the general of the battalions and recruiting so he couldn't object. He read the scrawled out message again:

Task #1: Thursday, August 3 ****
Recruit 003579-Dains

You are to report to the prison-holds this afternoon for your task of executing the captured victims from the villages of Dains and of the Bellator boy captured one day after. Failure to comply will result in serious penalty including but not restricted to:
Demotion
Reassigned
Imprisoned
Death

Talow swallowed as he pushed open the large doors, behind were the prison-holds. The air held a stench of sweat and blood that lingered in one's throat. He forced himself not to gag as he walked towards the three soldiers standing around a large desk. The desk was occupied by a large man who was giving one boy the death stare.
“You brought this upon yourself, failure to follow the rules has its consequences.” The man's fingers were inched towards a drawer in the desk, the boy in question watched silently. “Do you remember what it was you did?” The man sat forward, a wicked grin on his face. The boy was sweating but made no move to wipe his brow. “Speak!” He jolted and like a machine began to talk.
“I refused to follow my battalion into battle, leaving my brothers to the mercy of the Bellators.” His mouth clamped shut when he was done.
“Exactly.” The man at the desk had a look in his eye like a savage beast with its prey pinned under it. “And you know why I have to punish you for this. If everyone started abandoning mission we would have lost years ago. Is that what you want! To be ruled by self-loving Bellators! Well do you?” The man's face had turned red with rage as he leaned across the desk to shout in the traitor's face.
“No...I...um..” He was silenced by the man as he stood and gripped him by the throat.
“I new you were a rat the day you were recruited.” He dropped him to the ground. “Take him away, I'll deal with him later.” Two of the soldiers who had been standing behind the boy now came forward and grabbed him by the arms. His shouts and pleading could be heard as he was dragged down the hall. Talow watched them leave and was having second thoughts about this when the man noticed him.
“Quit cowering and get over here before I do the same to you.” Talow obeyed and stood before the man, handing his paper over. The man read it and sank back into his chair.
“So, you got the guts to do this or are you going to chicken out like most of them?” Talow didn't say a word as the man walked around the desk and lead him down the same hall the soldiers had vanished down. Talow could see people locked behind bars, dirty and sad-looking as he passed keeping close to the officer. When they reach cell 23 Talow could see the villagers from Dains watching him as the door was unlocked. They backed into the corner as the officer entered the cell and grabbed a thin man with bloody nails and a bruise on his cheek. He dropped him in-front of Talow.
“Your choice. We can do this the quick way or we can drag it out.” He pulled from his belt a small gun and a club with nails poking out of it. Talow looked from the weapons to the man who was watching the floor, not meeting his eyes. Talow picked the gun, checking how many rounds it had left. One. Just enough to finish the job. He saw the officer watching him, waiting for him to pull the trigger and end this mans life in full view of the others. Talow knew this man which made all so much harder. As he aimed the gun and steadied his shaking finger on the trigger Talow was about to bury the bullet in the man's head when a shout from down the hall forced him to jerk his hand and shoot the floor next to the man. The officer spun on his heel and stormed down the small ahllway, stopping at a cell containing one person. The boy who had attacked Talow in the clearing. The man said something to him before he started walking back to his desk to fins another bullet.

Talow took this opportunity to run down the hall and stop at the cell.
“Why did you do that?” He asked the boy behind the bars. The boy leaned casually against the wall, examining his nails.
“Do what?”
“Stop me from shooting that villager.” Talow was growing impatient knowing that his time was running out.
“I know you don't like killing, it's written all over your face.” The boy came closer. “You want to get out of here?” Talow nodded eagerly. “Next chance you get out of this place find the main road until you reach a place with two alley ways. Take the second, it'll lead you the jungle.” Talow made a mental note of what he was told.
“Why are you helping me?”
“Think of it as a favour.” Talow took a step back from him and started to turn away.
“Thank you...um..” He didn't even know his name to thank him properly.
“Name's Raza, now get out of here.” Raza shooed him away as the officer started coming back down the hall.

Talow found the entrance to HQ easy enough, it was getting out that would cause some problems. He waited around until he saw someone he knew.
“Nico, Cyle!”
“Hey Talow, what's up?” They stopped to talk to him, moving to a wall where they wouldn't be in the way.
“I was wondering if you guys could get the guards to open the doors since you've both got more seniority then me. I think I dropped something outside when we were coming back.” Cyle and Nico exchanged looks, not quite believing his story but they helped him anyway. When Talow was far enough away, he started to follow the directions Raza had given him, sure enough he found himself at the edge of the jungle. All he had to do was dive in there and he'd be home free, but should he? Talow looked back at the city noticing the line of men coming down the main road. He still held the plans under his jacket and he knew they were looking for him. Were they after the plans? Did they know he had escaped? All thinking came to late as UFS soldiers found him. Maybe if he talked to them they would see it from his point of view. He had the plans, all he had to do was show them.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
11
    Terry
    “Just tell us!”
    “I already told you! I don’t remember!” Stilere yelled. “All I remember is having this headache and something and then when I was walking this weird feeling and then I opened my eyes…but I know something happened, I just can’t remember!”
    Zaria opened her mouth to say something else but I cut her off. “If she doesn’t remember, she doesn’t remember. Were just gonna have to…jog her memory back, yeah, that’s it.”
    “And...
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posted by 1999jacko
3 miles away

Gemini woke from his sleep, his wand in his hand with an old brown tendril half out of it as though he had been fighting someone. He slowly said under his breath," samantanes," his voice rough and gravely from a thousand years of unconscious, after a second of waiting a huge water hand shot from his body clearing his way backup to the surface. He grabbed the wand and jumped up onto the surface as 18 of his ( former) captors came towards him tendrils flying everywhere. He could see the fiery robes of his worst enemy Virgo at the front, but as they ran forward Gemini saw the flabby...
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Sometimes I have this feeling
Right here deep in my heart
A feeling that is steady, pounding against my soul
A feeling that I write but can't complete

Oh, I want my dreams and hopes to be heard
I can't hide my feelings any longer
No one's gonna stop me from doing what I want
They will not be pushed aside

Now I'm done believing what you told me about
I have no trust or faith in you anymore
And it's time for me to follow my dreams
To stand tall and scream out my lungs

Listen to me and the story I will tell.....
I was just sitting by the bedside
Staring at the world outside of my home
And it changed my life,...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Four: Do All Teenagers Go Through What I Go Through

      Raven Millan was the daughter of the double agent Marcus Millan. He is notorious for sending information to Germany while pretending to be loyal to the U.S. He told Germany all about what was going on in Area 51. Germany learned how to use that information against us and we almost went into a World War 3. Last I heard, he was going to be given the electric chair. My dad was supervising Millan when the government found out about the betrayal. My dad had told me everything because we have this open relationship and he tells me...
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They all rushed to the hospital. "Kyle." they gasped. Kyle, with his blonde hair, scratches, bruises and broken bones lyed under the white, soft, hospital blanket. The only sound that could be heard was the soft, quite sound of the heart monitor beeping. They all went and sat next to his hospital bed. They all tried to hold back the tears. Summer gave in and tears streamed down her cheeks and on to the floor. Tiffany, Angus and Mariah burst into tears as well. James didnt, he didnt like to show emotion, no matter how sad he was. Even though he wasn't crying on the outside, they knew there were...
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posted by rory2011
while Kat cleaning the house ,she heard a weird voice coming from the corridor ,it looks like someone is eating there in a loud voice
she went to see what was there ,Mac was behind her when she saw a ghost for an old man eating himself
she looked scared and shock at the ghost ,the ghost of the old man looked at her , he was very angry ,he ran towards her fast while he's screaming and he was opening his moth , he wanted to bite her or maybe eat her
she screamed when he was almost got her but Mac's voice cut what she's seeing
" what are you doing here ? " Mac asked
" I'm just a... I'm just cleaning...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
    7
    Zaria
    It was crazy, one minute we were just wandering aimlessly around looking fro the source of the noise and the next this…thing, comes out from nowhere. We ran like crazy, not bothering to look back, we lost Alex in the way and we were freaking out.
    “Where did he go?!” Iris asks, freaked.
    I shake my head. “I don’t know.”
    I’m close to tears and Iris looks pale, all of a sudden we hear this roar, followed by a scream,...
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Chapter (21): 'The Finale' 
She walked happily on her way home from school with a smile at everyone she saw in her way, suddenly she heard a twig snap right behind her, she turned and there was no one there she continued walking but she knew she had a feeling that something bad was going to happen and it just popped up every time she tried to ignore it, this time she heard the sound of footsteps other than her's on the grass and every time she turned there was no one there, her fear was increasing every time she turned around and back again, she couldn't take it anymore she broke into a run...
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Both were silent for a long while, the minutes dragged by and Bobby swore he could see the entire scene playing across Husky's eyes, the same thing over and over again. A not so subtle cough brought him back to the living world, and he continued with his tale. "I woke up a couple days later, both Matt and Ethan were okay and alive, and I was damn lucky. In my act of bravery," he spat the word with such disdain and Bobby couldn't understand why. He thrown himself on an explosive device to save his men, if that wasn't bravery then what the hell was? "I managed to not even cover the IED, rather...
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A/N: Hey everyone, it's me again...sort of. Anyways, this will be a series of short stories...or shorter than short stories based on word prompts. So I'll post three in each part. And they'll be maybe around five or six parts based upon user feedback :) Now I'm using several word prompts courtesy of Dhampires, hgfan5642 and several others :) I hope all of you enjoy this.

A Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles

Prompt 1: Hate

When I see her with him, my blood boils. My mind is being supplied several mental images of her painful demise.

I hate her, despise her, loathe her with...
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His mother set about straightening up the room, as he drifted into the bathroom, stripping down and climbing into the shower.
He turn the knobs, a feeling of instant security filling him as the water crashed down on his face. Something about a nice shower just made him feel safe. He hissed a bit as the scalding water poured ever him and into his open wounds, he thought he could hear his skin sizzle when the water pounded down onto the gash in his forehead. He could feel the dirt fall away, the scent of death all falling away and circling the drain below. It took him awhile to realize the water...
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posted by 1999jacko
Fantasy

Water looked confused as the old man said all this,"w-what do you mean wizard?" Walter said his mind full of questions for the old man. The old man answered quickly, his voice seemingly getting older as he went on," you are wearing the clothes of a wizard and you have a wand in your belt so that means your a wizard." The hard,heavy breathing coming from the old man got louder as Walter answered," but i'm not a wizard, sir," the man cackled and coughed. " Come through here boy and sit down, I can't stand for much longer," he said and started to lead the way out of the room, which Walter...
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posted by hgfan5602
I will not be under your tyranny
Your cruel and oppressive force
Yes, maybe you should be my leader
But that doesn't mean I should follow you all the time

Do you know he's got you bound
Under ropes and chains of cruelty
Well, I don't wanna be a follower
If it means I have to be a killer

No, I'm not exactly kind-hearted
But that doesn't mean I have to kill, kill, kill
I don't wanna be just a senseless follower
I have a heart, I have a soul, so I don't follow you

I don't just wanna be a follower
So I don't give a fuck bout what you do, do, do
But I myself will not give in to the tyranny
So you'll watch me leave

No one's gonna stop me
Look, I'm walking out the doors of tyranny
And I'm not gonna be a senseless follower
Ever again in my life.
posted by rory2011
after a long day of work , Kat came back to the house ,she stood staring at every single corner of the house
the house is almost empty ,she had to sell everything for the expansive painkiller that David taking ,the only thing left in the house is that little white chair , a blanket ,and her father's bed she knows that she can't make a life in that house , but she has to keep going strong till the last breath

it's a calm night ,David is sleeping ,Kat reading her favorite book in her father's bed room
the bills ringing woke David up
" Kat ,that's Paul ,go and open the door " David said in pain...
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Only a few months ago, I was diagnosed with Asperger's Syndrome. Asperger's is one of many conditions that falls on the autism spectrum. Unlike truly autistic people, many Aspergians are excellent communicators…at least, if that's what your "gift" is. You see, every Aspergian has a particular area where they excel. One could be a science genius, while another, such as myself, might be a brilliant writer.

Many Aspegians are either misdiagnosed or never diagnosed at all. Our symptoms, are difficult to identify. Once, my mom went to the Child Study Team at my elementary school. She brought up...
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To my honorable and loyal readers this goes because in just a few more chapters..the story is going to end,and I have made a decision not have a second part but to post a new story The Stones of Aramis..I have posted the Prolouge for those who haven't read go to my profile page and you will find it in my favorites.
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Chapter (20):
It's been two days since Abbie's dream and she has been yearning ever since to talk to Susie about it, but she hasn't got the chances because of the very little classes they are in together and...
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posted by alicia386
Spy Fiction

Chapter One: A Big Difference Between Normal and Reality

      "Well, maybe if you didn't yell so much then I would try to listen to you!" I gave Christina a dangerous stare that sometimes made her back off but not today. Today she had one too many to drink and decided to stand her ground. She knew what I was capable of but still she remained focus on me. "Then you think you could just stand here and pretend you actually love my father!"
      Her bright grey eyes gleamed a little, almost like she was hurt by what I said. "I do love him but you are too conceited to realize the...
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posted by rory2011
David's health getting worse and worse after all these problems ,he can't understand anything happen around him ,he's screaming with Paul's name
it was very hard on Kat to see all that happening and she can't do anything ,this is the second time she feel of herself weak and pointless ,the only thing she can do is making her father's pain less with the tranquilizer

another hard thing for Kat is making money , her brothers won't help her anymore and her father is very ill ,she had to work in the hospice as a cleaner, she doesn't get much salary ,but she can buy cheap food for her father and...
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posted by rory2011
Jack has left the house ,the silence occupied the house ,Paul having his breakfast slowly ,he can't think of the food or anything else ,he wanted to explain for David why he always out ,but he doesn't know from where should he start
Kat came with the bread and sat near Paul
" from how long you know what was Jack doing ? " David said breaking the silence
Paul looked at Kat ,then he looked at his father
" you're late for your school young lady " Paul said
" it's only seven " Kat said
" you heard what your brother said " David said
" bye " Kat said carrying her bag
" ok now we can talk " Paul...
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Chapter 1
October, 1964

I lied awake on my bed.

I couldn’t sleep.

My mind was wandering, racing to different topics at the same time. I couldn’t stay on one subject in my mind for more than ten seconds. I was restless.

Just then, out of nowhere, I remembered something that I particularly didn’t want to remember. But I did anyway. It was something that I hated thinking about, and something that I thought about all the time. I got up, clad in only a pair of jeans, and walked over to my closet and turned on the light. I pulled down old, dusty boxes and yellowed papers off of the closet’s...
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