I'm starting a new story, I read something like this off Fanfiction.net. And I desided to do my own little verson of it. Please tell me what you think of it.
thanks!
teamalice_0
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I have loved the Twilight Series ever since they came out. I only wish that it was real, not in a book.
Today was my 17th Birthday. And were were having the 'party'. It was just family so it was small. All traditions were kept, even the singing.
"Cassie! Make a wish!" My annoying brother said, I knew what he wanted. The faster I made my wish, the faster I blew the candels out, then he could get he cake.
I closed my eyes, 'I wish Twilight was real &that I was in it.' I made my wish and blew out my candels.
I knew the wish wouldn't come true, but it could never hurt to try right?
The party died down and everyone went to bed. I just went to my room. I sat on the window sill, watching the stars. But I got cold, so I shut the curtains and climbed into bed.
It was officaly summer break when I woke up. Someone knocked on my door, and Mom came in.
"Are you going to get ready?"
"To go where?" I wasn't planning on going anywhere.
"You don't remember where you are going?"
I took a guess, "On a plane?"
"Yes on a plane! Or do you want to drive all the way there?"
"No." It was automatic response. But now I at least it's on this continent.
She left closing the door behind her.
I had no clue where I was going.
thanks!
teamalice_0
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I have loved the Twilight Series ever since they came out. I only wish that it was real, not in a book.
Today was my 17th Birthday. And were were having the 'party'. It was just family so it was small. All traditions were kept, even the singing.
"Cassie! Make a wish!" My annoying brother said, I knew what he wanted. The faster I made my wish, the faster I blew the candels out, then he could get he cake.
I closed my eyes, 'I wish Twilight was real &that I was in it.' I made my wish and blew out my candels.
I knew the wish wouldn't come true, but it could never hurt to try right?
The party died down and everyone went to bed. I just went to my room. I sat on the window sill, watching the stars. But I got cold, so I shut the curtains and climbed into bed.
It was officaly summer break when I woke up. Someone knocked on my door, and Mom came in.
"Are you going to get ready?"
"To go where?" I wasn't planning on going anywhere.
"You don't remember where you are going?"
I took a guess, "On a plane?"
"Yes on a plane! Or do you want to drive all the way there?"
"No." It was automatic response. But now I at least it's on this continent.
She left closing the door behind her.
I had no clue where I was going.
Hi! Here's the rest of chappie 1! I have to do this quick! Review and make it good!
Chapter 1 cont.
All of the wedding preperations were getting tedious. But it was worth it all in the end, when I would marry the most perfect person on the planet. Edward, my Edward. It was all over,no one would bother us again. We wuld be together forever. If I could survive the wedding first.
That night, I got home around 11:20, I carried the 500 bags that I had gotten from the wedding shops in Seattle and Port Angeles up to my room. I turned on the light and set them on the bed. I looked up and Edward was standing in the window smirking. "Had fun with Alice?", he asked, I made a face. "You know I hate shopping". I walked over to him and kissed him. "Missed me?", he murmured. "Yes." Spent the rest of the night talking and then I fell asleep.
Chapter 1 cont.
All of the wedding preperations were getting tedious. But it was worth it all in the end, when I would marry the most perfect person on the planet. Edward, my Edward. It was all over,no one would bother us again. We wuld be together forever. If I could survive the wedding first.
That night, I got home around 11:20, I carried the 500 bags that I had gotten from the wedding shops in Seattle and Port Angeles up to my room. I turned on the light and set them on the bed. I looked up and Edward was standing in the window smirking. "Had fun with Alice?", he asked, I made a face. "You know I hate shopping". I walked over to him and kissed him. "Missed me?", he murmured. "Yes." Spent the rest of the night talking and then I fell asleep.
