Sorry sorry sorry! i had AIMS testin n didnt get a chance for this, i made it extra long for u! plz forgiv me! plus theres a flashback in ther!
It was about 2 hours after Alex tried to kill me, and I've learned alot about him; maybe even more than I wanted to know. First I was pronouncing his name wrong this whole time, it's Alec. And he's with the Volturi! I was so surprised when he told me that, and a little scared. Apparently he was in love with my masani. He joined the Volturi because my she refused to love him back, and now he had no love left in his heart, or compassion, or anything else like that. I felt kinda sad for him, but not that much. I can't really blame my masani, if that happened to me I would probably refuse him too.
Seth had shown up after I used my calling voice. He brought Jacob, who brought Sam, who brought Paul, the house was full of werewolves. I got the feeling that the Cullens wouldn't like all them in here, something to do with the smell. I saw a vision of Rosalie yelling at me, and even Carlisle was trying not to grimace from the smell. Oh yes, I would be in big trouble.
" Shoni." Seth said. " Do you wanna call your mom?" he asked, holding out his phone. I totally forgot about her this whole time. She still didn't know about who I associated with. She met Seth, and even Bella and Edward, but she didn't know their secret.
" No." I told him. " I'm supposed to be having a slumber party for the rest of the week." I said. He gave me an incrudelous look, so I read his thoughts.
Her mom's letting her stay the night during school day?! That's so not right.
"Seth," I said. " It's okay. She's just infatuated with her boyfriend." And fiancee, I added in my thoughts. I saw their future and her boyfriend was going to propose to her tonight. As if on cue she called the house. I gave her the number to the their house just in case.
"Hello? Cullen residence" I said while I picked up the phone.
" Nizhoni? You sound like a maid!" the voice said on the other end. It then continued to giggle like a maniac. This was my mom, just a little crazy.
" Um yea, it's me. Is there something wrong?" I asked. I knew perfectly that nothing was wrong.
" No just the opposite, Greg asked me to marry him!" She squealed with excitement. I squealed too, just to be polite. Wow, even if I wasn't a mind reader I could tell she was excited.
" Well, I have to go." I said. I just couldn't think of this right now.
" Wait!" She said. " I wanted to ask you if you would be my bridesmaid?" She said. Whoa. Didn't see that one coming.
" Of course I will! Thanks, but I have to go now." I said, hastily hanging up. Seth was waving me over to him, Alec, Paul, and Sam. I went over there and saw that Alec's spell was wearing off. Ok, what to do now.
" We need to keep him someplace." Sam said.
" Or we could just kill him." Paul suggested. Jeez, he like has no feelings at all.
" What's going on in here?" A high musical voice asked. Alice.
" Oh, well Shoni caught this guy trying to kill her." Jacob said to her. She hissed and went into a crouch. I read her mind and it was How did Alec get here?! And why was he trying to kill Shoni? Why hasn't he paralyzed anyone? Wow, she has alot of questions.
Just then Jasper walked in with 5 other vampires, and they all went into the same position. I had another flashback right in the middle of that.
My masani was talking to me the day after I had my kinaalda, and she said it was serious. Why couldn't mom be there? Alot of my relatives said that she was crazy, and it was scary being with her, all alone.
" Nizhoni, are you scared of vampires?" She asked out of the blue. She was staring intently at me, like she was trying to read my thoughts. Why is she asking this? I thought.
" Masani," I said, trying to find out what this was about, " Why are you asking me this?" I asked. This was starting to get even more scary. We were in the middle of the rez, she took me here right after I got rested up, and my mom hadn't objected. She actually was looking nervous, and a little happy.
" Well Nizhoni," She said while walking over to a cabinet that I was never allowed to look in, " I have something very important to tell you." She finished. By then she had unlocked the cabinet and was holding 2 different old books. One was red and had vines wrapped around it. The other one was greeen and had metal wrapped around it. Those books look real weird I was thinking.
She set them in front of me and then grabbed my chin and held it up to her face so I was looking directly into her eyes. I knew the second she looked into my eyes what my purpose was to help humans against the others.
I pulled away and said " Are these books supposed to teach me?"
" Yes Nizhoni." She said. She suddenly looked older and more tired. It must be the magic that makes her energetic and keeps her looking young.
" I will fulfill my job, and legacy, that you have given me." I said solemnly. She smiled and patted me on the back. She stood up and went to her room.
The next day she died.
It was about 2 hours after Alex tried to kill me, and I've learned alot about him; maybe even more than I wanted to know. First I was pronouncing his name wrong this whole time, it's Alec. And he's with the Volturi! I was so surprised when he told me that, and a little scared. Apparently he was in love with my masani. He joined the Volturi because my she refused to love him back, and now he had no love left in his heart, or compassion, or anything else like that. I felt kinda sad for him, but not that much. I can't really blame my masani, if that happened to me I would probably refuse him too.
Seth had shown up after I used my calling voice. He brought Jacob, who brought Sam, who brought Paul, the house was full of werewolves. I got the feeling that the Cullens wouldn't like all them in here, something to do with the smell. I saw a vision of Rosalie yelling at me, and even Carlisle was trying not to grimace from the smell. Oh yes, I would be in big trouble.
" Shoni." Seth said. " Do you wanna call your mom?" he asked, holding out his phone. I totally forgot about her this whole time. She still didn't know about who I associated with. She met Seth, and even Bella and Edward, but she didn't know their secret.
" No." I told him. " I'm supposed to be having a slumber party for the rest of the week." I said. He gave me an incrudelous look, so I read his thoughts.
Her mom's letting her stay the night during school day?! That's so not right.
"Seth," I said. " It's okay. She's just infatuated with her boyfriend." And fiancee, I added in my thoughts. I saw their future and her boyfriend was going to propose to her tonight. As if on cue she called the house. I gave her the number to the their house just in case.
"Hello? Cullen residence" I said while I picked up the phone.
" Nizhoni? You sound like a maid!" the voice said on the other end. It then continued to giggle like a maniac. This was my mom, just a little crazy.
" Um yea, it's me. Is there something wrong?" I asked. I knew perfectly that nothing was wrong.
" No just the opposite, Greg asked me to marry him!" She squealed with excitement. I squealed too, just to be polite. Wow, even if I wasn't a mind reader I could tell she was excited.
" Well, I have to go." I said. I just couldn't think of this right now.
" Wait!" She said. " I wanted to ask you if you would be my bridesmaid?" She said. Whoa. Didn't see that one coming.
" Of course I will! Thanks, but I have to go now." I said, hastily hanging up. Seth was waving me over to him, Alec, Paul, and Sam. I went over there and saw that Alec's spell was wearing off. Ok, what to do now.
" We need to keep him someplace." Sam said.
" Or we could just kill him." Paul suggested. Jeez, he like has no feelings at all.
" What's going on in here?" A high musical voice asked. Alice.
" Oh, well Shoni caught this guy trying to kill her." Jacob said to her. She hissed and went into a crouch. I read her mind and it was How did Alec get here?! And why was he trying to kill Shoni? Why hasn't he paralyzed anyone? Wow, she has alot of questions.
Just then Jasper walked in with 5 other vampires, and they all went into the same position. I had another flashback right in the middle of that.
My masani was talking to me the day after I had my kinaalda, and she said it was serious. Why couldn't mom be there? Alot of my relatives said that she was crazy, and it was scary being with her, all alone.
" Nizhoni, are you scared of vampires?" She asked out of the blue. She was staring intently at me, like she was trying to read my thoughts. Why is she asking this? I thought.
" Masani," I said, trying to find out what this was about, " Why are you asking me this?" I asked. This was starting to get even more scary. We were in the middle of the rez, she took me here right after I got rested up, and my mom hadn't objected. She actually was looking nervous, and a little happy.
" Well Nizhoni," She said while walking over to a cabinet that I was never allowed to look in, " I have something very important to tell you." She finished. By then she had unlocked the cabinet and was holding 2 different old books. One was red and had vines wrapped around it. The other one was greeen and had metal wrapped around it. Those books look real weird I was thinking.
She set them in front of me and then grabbed my chin and held it up to her face so I was looking directly into her eyes. I knew the second she looked into my eyes what my purpose was to help humans against the others.
I pulled away and said " Are these books supposed to teach me?"
" Yes Nizhoni." She said. She suddenly looked older and more tired. It must be the magic that makes her energetic and keeps her looking young.
" I will fulfill my job, and legacy, that you have given me." I said solemnly. She smiled and patted me on the back. She stood up and went to her room.
The next day she died.
Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
New Moon in theatres November 20, 2009
