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ok so i have it up quicker, i hope that makes everyone happy. this is dedicated to littlemiss_ME for commenting first. same again for this one. plz plz plz plz plz review.....it makes me very, happy. i dont know if i've been putting disclaimers on here but i always froget, i dont own Twilight, i only own Keith. and this one is quite long. thanks for reading!!

Chapter 9 Finding Treasure (Edward’s P.O.V.)

I ran up the trail as fast as I could, leaving Emmett and Jasper in my dust. It spread out about 25 miles up and then just all went separate ways as if she was torn into a bunch of pieces and carried off different ways. That was horrible it cant happen, god no please no.

Emmett and Jasper came a few minutes later.

“That’s really weird, its like he couldn’t decide where to take her, and kept coming back to this spot and choosing a different trail.” Jasper said.

I breathed out a sigh of relief, good, I didn’t think of that, please let it be that.

“Call Carlisle, tell then to come and help, I can sort of feel her presence somehow.” I said and ran off towards the greatest scented trail, and where her presence was coming from.

After about 2 minutes, it was like he was standing right next to me, I just knew she was close.

I looked in all directions, trying to find something, anything. I found a very, very camouflaged house. That could only be done by a vampire, Keith.

I growled and ran as fast as I could again to the little house and slammed the door open, so hard it made a tremendous slam into the wall behind it. Good thing the door was steal, or else it would have broken.

The first thing I saw was a large couch with Bella sitting on it, with Keith leaning over her for the kill.

I ran and pulled him off, but I was too late, he bit her. He also had a steal grip on her legs and when I pulled him off, she was thrown into a concrete wall. The wall broke into a million tiny pieces. It, I knew, broke a ton of her bones too.

I started to rip Keith apart when she finally screamed a pain filled scream that hurt my vampire ears.

I dropped everything I was doing and ran over to her, touching her skin with my cold fingers, not knowing what to do.

I heard the door open, hoping it was Carlisle, but when I looked there was nobody here, not even Keith. While I was with Bella, Keith was putting himself back together, and he got away.

I didn’t really care, Bella was my first priority, I would find him later after Bella is better.

Carlisle came in a few minutes later, with everyone else. Carlisle came over here and started to treat Bella.

Bella was still screaming, but I could make out words as she was yelling, “Venom, Ankle!”

I gasped as I realized he still bit her.

“Edward, again it’s up to you, just like James.” Carlisle said.

I growled at James’ name, “I’m not letting it happen.” I said as I took hold of her ankle.

“Emmett, Jasper, hold her down.” I said.

“Carlisle where can we?” Jasper asked.

Carlisle pointed at two spots, they both grabbed them and held her down tightly, not enough to break those though.
I took a deep breath and swallowed all the venom in my mouth and started sucking it out. I completely forgot how potent her blood was, and I couldn’t stop. I felt Emmett trying to pull me off. I pulled off and ran out the door, ashamed of myself.

Esme came outside to try to comfort me. She was rubbing my back and saying, “It’s not your fault, all of us would have done that.”

I sighed and said, “I guess.”

Carlisle called out to me, “Edward, come out and carry her home.”

I sighed again and slowly walked back inside, I hung my head to show my embarrassment.

I picked her up, gently, at the same places Emmett and Jasper did to hold her down.

I ran home and took her up to Carlisle x-ray machine, knowing he will do that.

It took about 6 hours to have all the x-rays and casting done. I sat next to her on the bad and just sat thinking about when she will wake up. I couldn’t wait very long.
posted by Emmett4ever
Hey all this is making me cry so much.Just writing it brings back a memory i really want to forget.Oh well im not gonna keep you waiting any longer.Enjoy!!!!


Edward's POV


Why did I let this happen?I was surprised that it was Alice and not Jasper.I turned to look at Bella who is sitting on the floor.She was Checking herself to see if she was hurt."Bella are you alright"asked Carlisle. "Yeah I'm fine"She answered. SHe turned to look at me.When she saw my face she looked away.When Carlisle was done checking Bella,they all wished her goodnight and i drove her home.I didn't want to talk.As soon...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
TS12
Jake's POV 
I wanted to see Bella more but since we went to 2 different schools it was hard. I got out if bed, got dressed, ate breakfast, and than headed off to school. I saw Taylor sitting on the wall like she was yesterday. Taylor was full of secrets it felt. She always seemed to be hinding something. Hey Talor what's up? I asked her. Nothing waiting for school to start. Taylor said. Fun, what's your last? I asked her. I was so curious yo know. It Kullen, why? She asked. Just wondering. I told her. Oh, okay. She sounded like she was relieved. Than the bell rang. We went to our lockers...
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posted by surfergal
Sorry its short, got to go to bed!ugh



That night Nathen and I had made plans to go to the beach that mroning before making the drive back up to forks. Once I woke up I put on my bathingsuit and then I took off my ring so I wouldn't loose it. It finally hit me I was actually engage. We drove to the beach and we got there and started surfing immediately. We surfed for about two hours and then we had to make a tough desion on having to leave and go back to the hotel. Once we got back we went upstairs and took showers and then we finished getting ready and sent all of our stuff down to the car....
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posted by Gabstaaa
Ever since I was a little girl, I had watched the birds dive and swoop through the air. Gliding and soaring over tree-tops and houses. When I had walked, hand-in-hand, with my Gramps through the park we’d collect their feathers. Duck feathers, swan feathers. If we were lucky and searched hard we would sometimes come across abandoned nests with hollow eggs left inside. I would handle them with great care, like they were going to crack any minute and out would pop a brand new baby bird.
‘Can I be a bird, Gramps?’ I always used to ask.
‘You can. Do you want me to teach you how to be a bird?’...
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posted by surfergal
That morning I woke up and decided that I didn't want to go school. Sure I had been missing a lot of school but I didn't care. I looked over and Nathen as still by my side as I had fallen asleep that night. It was nice to wake up and Nathen was still by me I was so warm and comfy I didn't want to get out of bed but I had a feeling that the waves were going to be good today.I went over to the computer and checked the surf report and of course my feelin was right the perfect swells were here. I went to my bathroom and put on my bathingsuit and then grabbed my wetsuit that I leave hangin up in...
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posted by surfergal
Sorry its so short! Comment and rate PLEASE!!!


I felt bad for leaving without one word to Nathen, but I knew I couldn't leave without one word so I said;
Look, I'm sorry I made you mad, but... I couldn't even finish my sentence.
No, I shouldn't have gotten so mad it was stupid of me anyways to know if you cared where I lived. Nathen said.
Its ok. I said with a yawn.
I think someone needs to go to bed. Nathen said with his oh so perfect grin that I loved.
Nathen carried me up to my room, like he usually did. I fell asleep against his warm chest. It was great to know that me and Nathen had made up. I didn't like to be mad at anyone. It is hard sometimes for me to forgive people but its usually not that long till I do forgive them.
I told Nathen goodnight and that I loved him and he said the same back to me.
renesmee's pov

i wake up i was felling better my neck was almost heal because i heal faster than normal humans

i was alone in my room but i could hear jake and noah talking outside in a low voice but i could still hear it

"look bloodsucker let me explain this to you" jake said
"hey don't call me bloodsucker and i won't call you dog ok?" noah said
jake sigh and said "ok look i just wanted to explain you what imprinting is "
noah interupted him
"oo i get it is like love at first sight but"
jake start talking
"no no is not like that i imprinted on renesmee since the day she was born " jake said paitienly...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
Sorry this is all i have. night.

I had my hand on the door knob when Nikki asked " where are you going?" oh, I'm just going to the living room. I said. Nope, sorry, you have to stay in here until Jackson gets here. Nikki said. Oh okay, I learn somethig new every 5 minutes. I said I we both laughed. We heard the door bell ring. I couldn't tell what Jesse was saying to
Jackson. Okay, are you ready to go on your first date? Nikki asked. No, how about some pointers?I asked. Okay, when you are on a double date, never go to the bathroom alone, never order off the kids menu unless you reay have to,...
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he smiled at me and look deeply into my eyes as i look into his he started to get closer until i realized i was getting closer too. until his lips touched mine
It was as if when our lips touched an explosion had occured everything was in fire.
Electricity was running through my body.
There was no thought only fire and beauty i put my arms around his neck and knotted my fingers through his soft hair he pulled me closer with his arm and with his other hand he gently touch my face.
Then what seem to me too soon he pulled away.
The tip of his nose still touching mine and his breath warm my face.
the...
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sorry if my grammar is not the best but english is not my native language
renesmee pov
noah wasnt in any of the next classes.
i was grateful but also each class i hope that he would be there so i could see his face...
o come on renesmee cullen get a grip of yourself was he even that good looking??
i remember in my head...yep yeah he was more like GOD LOOKING
But it was a good thing i was alone in those classes so i could think about what was happening i look at my bracelete it was a gift from jacob like a promise bracelete i sigh

my thoughts were interrupted buy the teacher
mr. hara "ok kids...
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posted by surfergal
I got back to the house 6 hours later. I hugged everyone and told them sorry for freaking out. They all said it was okay and that it happens. I went outside to call Nathens cellphone and he didn't answer. I left him a voicemail saying:

Hey, Its Addi.
I'm sorry for frreaking out on you and I'm sorry that, I just didn't know what to do. Thanks for looking out for me, your the best.
I hung up and waited for his call back. I went to get something good to eat and to drink and then went and take a shower. it felt good to take a hot shower. It was getting late and I still hadn't heard from Nathen yet....
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posted by twilightfantic1
Chapter 3


        

“Now do you forgive me?” “Of course mom and do you forgive me?” “Of course honey”. Then we heard a scream then another. We ran to the living room. You wouldn't believe what I saw. My husband,Edward was breaking our son-in-law Jacobs legs saying “this is for getting my daughter pregnant” crack “and this” crack “is for having the idea and trying” “Edward what the hell are you doing to Jacob?” “I was just.......getting..... pay back.” “daddy what are you doing thats my babies daddy.”. Before I knew it...
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posted by surfergal
I finally fell back to sleep when all of the sudden I heard snarling and hissing. I jumped up and started looking around. I was so dazed I didn't know what was happening till my eyes ajusted to the somewhat darkness. There were six huge red-eyed vampires crowded around us. My heart started racing so fast. One vampire tried to leap at me but Nathen stopped him before he could get to me. I backed up so far from everyone until I hit something so hard and cold I thought it was a vamp but I was wrong it was just rocks. It was getting colder outside. I was wearing sweatpants and a t-shirt with a...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
He kissed me like he had never kissed me before so of course I kissed him back. We kissed more deeply and then all of the sudden we were surrounded by a bunch of vampire. I was scarred to death, I kindo screamed, then I changed into my human form, I didn't mean to, I couldn't gigure out how to change back.Th worst part ever is that they out numbered Sawyer and I. This isn't a fair fight! I yelled not really meaning to. This boy, not much older looking than me came up, she smells like a good snack. Will you share? The boy asked. Sawyer got really protective, she's a vampire! Sawyer said. Well...
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posted by surfergal
It seemed forever sinse we had left the house and I was scared to death. It got cold really faast and it was beginning to thunder storm. We were walking now, well I wasn't Emmet was told apperently that I needed to be carried. I so didn't want to be carried, Emmet was kinda of cold to tell you the truth.
Emmet, can I walk. I ask.
No, you will leave your scent on where you are walking. Emmet had told me.
Oh, can I have jacket? I'm sorta freezing. I said.
Yeah,Emmet said while Rose handed him another sweartshirt for me.
Nathen came out of the woods from infront of us and ask:
Do you want me to carry...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
This is not a Twilight Fan fiction Sorry I didn't know where else to post this, Please read and comment!

My name is Mulletfingers or well that's what my step-sister calls me. My mom sent me off to some boot camp in Mobile Alabama, I lasted 2 days and than ran all the way back to Coconut Cove. I live all by myself because my mom doesn't know I'm back, Bea (short for Beatrice) gives me food like apples, oranges and her famous banana bread. There is always police sireign going around here. The other day I saw a girl or maybe a boy with long hair, came through here ( the empty boatyard
filled with...
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one week later and a day
It's march 31st and Vickie's birthday is April 4th and she's going to be 2 year's old!im exsited see loves sweets.i got her a bracelet that say's
"you are my world"on the heart thats silver and on a silver chain that as she gets older she can change the size of it!and i also got her a new toy.

it was sunny today so edward and alice would not be there as i drove over to the day care i seen edward's car there alice and him where there
"hey bella"alice said as i got out of the jeep
"hey waz up?"i asked her
"since its sunny out side and we cant go to school can we watch Vickie?"alice...
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posted by surfergal
The jet that they flew on to Cali.
The jet that they flew on to Cali.
I stayed at Max's house for a couple of weeks, I went home every so often. Max could pick stuff up now sinse his shoulders were heald now.. I was finally able to sleep in my own bed, instead of being on an air mattress. School was starting within three days and I had nothing to take. When I did get into the door of my house Alice came straight to me and ask:
Hey, Addi Do you want to go school shopping? Alice ask me.
Yeah totally. Let me go up stairs and take a shower though frist. I said
Okay, great. Alice said.
I loved going shopping Alice, she pick out clothes that was me and that I looked hot...
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posted by xXjakeloverXx
Chapter Fourteen

    I didn’t know how to feel. How was someone expected to feel after they had almost been killed? Someone was gasping. What was wrong with them? As I tried to concentrate, I realized it was myself gasping. I think I was starting to hyperventilate.
“ Grandpa! She needs help!” Renesmee cried beside me. They were trying to get me back to the house. I couldn’t see anything. My vision had black dots clouding it and I felt woozy.
“ She’s going into shock. We need to get her somewhere she can lie down as soon as possible.” I distantly heard Carlisle’s...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
Ugh I couldn't stand it any more! Edward came out side with Emmet and Jasper. Zoey, what can you not stand any more? - Edward asked. Just some people, first Collin and now Sawyer!! I said. Slow down, Zoe, What happen with Collin - Jasper asked. I dont want to talk about it, I told them. Jasper would quiet trying to make me spill, I don't want to! I yelled at him. You need to talk to someone, why not us? Emmett said. Yall are guys, yall wouldn't understand. I told them. Zoe, you know we will understand, you can tell us. Edward said. I don't want to and them I lunged for Edward. I had him pinned...
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