On a regular day of summer school the forks high school bus was picking up students as always the bus driver was going as fast as he could as if it was the end of the world but something happened that day that would change my normal life as a human forever as we left we got in a horrible accident the rest I didn’t remember as the bus rolled over I went black then I woke up with a few to many people around me and I saw a beautiful face before I closed my eyes thn suddenly I felt a burn in my neck it was unbarable the pain spread through my body like a wild fire then the fire hit my heart and it ….I opened my eyes frantic and confused wondering where I was as I looked up again someone was standing over me her face was so beautiful and soft and her eyes were golden brown but as I tried to get up I felt different my body felt stronger and my hearing I could hear what was happening downstairs someone was watching Sweeney todd and my vision it was like I didn’t need my glasses everything was so clear it had so much color and detail I looked up at the face again and she spoke “hello are you ok?” I said “who are you ?” “ I am Bella Cullen and you must be Victoria ”
“yes I am and how do you know my name and by the way I don’t like victoria call me tori….WAIT did you say that your name is Bella Cullen?” “yes”
“are you Bella the one that’s with Edward Cullen and has a daughter Renesmee who is maybe now with Jacob Black?” “yes so you know what we are and what you are?” “A vampire, I am a vampire ?” “yes you were dying and renesmee’s son mason saved you and Carlisle bit you it was the only way” “ so that explains the horrible burning in my throat.” and as she was about to say something many people walked in four couples walked in and two more guys walked in but one was the beautiful face that I saw before I closed my eyes he looked at me and smiled I felt a pull to him I couldn’t take my eyes off of his then suddenly I was able to look away then Carlisle called my attention then he spoke “Tori you must go hunt remember the only rule that we only drink animal blood not human so please do as best as you can to control your thirst if you come across a human in the forest Bella, Rosalie and Alice will come with you to hunt and keep an eye on you.” “thank you Carlisle very much.” then Alice called me over “come here tori come see what you look like now.” I walked over to where they were standing by a large mirror as I looked into it I saw a different face a stranger but I realized that stranger was me. My hair was a little longer and lighter and it was smooth and curlier than before and my face it had no impurities no blemishes everything was so perfect I didn’t look like the 16 year old that I was before then I turned to the girls and they nodded but what really surprised was my eyes then suddenly Edward said “that will wear off a few weeks after being a newborn they will be exactly like ours golden brown.” then Alice grabbed my hand and she pulled me out the back door she jumped of the porch gracefully and the others followed I jumped down and the looked surprised and then I said “what wrong?” then Bella replied ‘nothing it’s just that your jump it looked like as if you had already done it before many times.” and they took of running I followed them into the forest and then it was there Rosalie stopped and said “tori try to aim for deer and mountain lions even try a bear that would make Emmett happy .” she laugh I followed her then I picked up a scent it smelled like the forest but I could hear it’s heart beat then I took of into a sprint and stopped it was a buck I waited patiently to look as vulnerable as possible then I pounced on it sinking my teeth into it’s neck the blood ran down my throat not completely soothing the pain so I found a another small deer and bit into it’s neck now the fire was
“yes I am and how do you know my name and by the way I don’t like victoria call me tori….WAIT did you say that your name is Bella Cullen?” “yes”
“are you Bella the one that’s with Edward Cullen and has a daughter Renesmee who is maybe now with Jacob Black?” “yes so you know what we are and what you are?” “A vampire, I am a vampire ?” “yes you were dying and renesmee’s son mason saved you and Carlisle bit you it was the only way” “ so that explains the horrible burning in my throat.” and as she was about to say something many people walked in four couples walked in and two more guys walked in but one was the beautiful face that I saw before I closed my eyes he looked at me and smiled I felt a pull to him I couldn’t take my eyes off of his then suddenly I was able to look away then Carlisle called my attention then he spoke “Tori you must go hunt remember the only rule that we only drink animal blood not human so please do as best as you can to control your thirst if you come across a human in the forest Bella, Rosalie and Alice will come with you to hunt and keep an eye on you.” “thank you Carlisle very much.” then Alice called me over “come here tori come see what you look like now.” I walked over to where they were standing by a large mirror as I looked into it I saw a different face a stranger but I realized that stranger was me. My hair was a little longer and lighter and it was smooth and curlier than before and my face it had no impurities no blemishes everything was so perfect I didn’t look like the 16 year old that I was before then I turned to the girls and they nodded but what really surprised was my eyes then suddenly Edward said “that will wear off a few weeks after being a newborn they will be exactly like ours golden brown.” then Alice grabbed my hand and she pulled me out the back door she jumped of the porch gracefully and the others followed I jumped down and the looked surprised and then I said “what wrong?” then Bella replied ‘nothing it’s just that your jump it looked like as if you had already done it before many times.” and they took of running I followed them into the forest and then it was there Rosalie stopped and said “tori try to aim for deer and mountain lions even try a bear that would make Emmett happy .” she laugh I followed her then I picked up a scent it smelled like the forest but I could hear it’s heart beat then I took of into a sprint and stopped it was a buck I waited patiently to look as vulnerable as possible then I pounced on it sinking my teeth into it’s neck the blood ran down my throat not completely soothing the pain so I found a another small deer and bit into it’s neck now the fire was
I'm writing to introduce you to Kamakan The Vampire Slug. Its my kids book and live stage show.
Kamakan is a particularly evil monster who kidnaps two children and takes them to his lair at the bottom of a huge hole in Peru. The story follows the kids as they try to escape.
Its written in rhyme and is very original, funny and popular with everyone who reads it.
There's a cool website at www.kamakan.co.uk and a clip of the show on You Tube if you search Kamakan The Vampire Slug Live.
I hope you can take a look and let me know what you think. Its becoming quite successful now and I hope it will become well know worldwide soon.
All the best!
Huw
The Author