The next morning, Maria woke early and staggered into the bathroom. She leaned heavily on the sink and peered into the mirror. Her eyes were sunken and heavy with sleep, her hair a tangled mess atop her head. She attacked it with a brush and splashed water on her face, attempting to wake herself up fully, still shuddering from her nightmares. This proved to be an impossible task and so with a resigned sigh she left the bathroom. It didn’t matter about her hair. She’d looked worse.
She dressed quickly, flung her bag on her back and proceeded to leave. At the door she paused, chewing her lip. Coming to an abrupt decision, Maria snatched the photograph of her parents from its frame on her dresser and slipped it into her pocket. She wasn’t sure why, but she felt that she would want it close to her today.
Her grandmother was eating toast and marmalade in the kitchen by the time she was ready to leave.
“’Bye, grandma!” she called, grabbing a slice of toast as she dashed past.
“Late again, dear.” Maria’s grandmother was shaking her head, her disappointment apparent.
“Only a little,” retorted Maria. “I know what I’m doing.”
“You should be more careful, Maria-“
“I know what I’m doing!” Maria repeated. She was tired of this repetitive argument in the morning and it often made her snap. “I can take care of myself.”
She left, closing the door angrily behind her. As usual, she would apologise for that later. Tossing one last look at her grandmother’s house, Maria hurried up the path and crossed into the first field that would take her to school.
Back in the house, Theodora West sighed, pushing her toast around the plate. She worried about her granddaughter, worried that she was unhappy, worried that she was suffering. Maria would never show it if she was and that was what Theodora didn’t understand.
She heaved herself out of the chair and washed her crockery in the sink, humming quietly to herself. Maybe she would plant some begonias today. Water the honeysuckle... yes, it would need watering after the dry night.
Theodora’s mind was a fickle thing, one-tracked and easily sent astray.
A sharp knock at the door brought Theodora out of her formless thoughts. She dropped the plate and hurried along the hallway. The shape in the window was broad and hazy due to the rippling glass. She did not recognise the person on the other side of the wood.
The unsuspecting elderly lady pulled back the door, surprised to see two beautiful men with white skin and powerful muscles on her doorstep. The hazel-haired one smiled pleasantly.
“Hello, dears, what can I do for you?” This was the last thing she ever said.
Daeht tossed the limp body to one side and both brothers stepped through the doorway.
“Which room do you think?”
Eyran considered this for a fraction of a second.
“The bedroom,” he concluded. “The girl would want it nearby. Safe from...” he paused, flashing a smile. “Oh, I don’t know.” He laughed harshly. Daeht grinned.
“Fine, I’ll go look. You take care of the woman.”
Daeht flew down the hallway, barely touching the floor. He paused at the top and breathed in deeply.
“Her scent’s everywhere,” he whispered. He heard Eyran’s gentle intake of breath, silent to human’s ears, loud and clear to his finely attuned senses.
Finally, after months of searching, we can get our hands on it.
He moved swiftly, following the heavy trail. It was so close.
At the final, white-wooded door, he paused, allowing the long-awaited scent to fill his nostrils, swirl in his mind, clouding reason. If he had a working heart, it would have been thudding violently with the thrill of the hunt, the chase and finally... the prize.
He swept silently through the doorway and closed his eyes, feeling with his other senses. The smell was so potent, stabbing at his mind like a blunt spear, sharp and numbing. Beautiful.
His search led him to the gap under the bed. A small box. Perfect. He pulled it out and ran his fingers along the lid, tracing the lines on the surface of the wood. The smell was staggering.
“You’ve found it.” Eyran appeared suddenly at the doorway, his clothes stinking of burning flesh, his eyes bright with a blazing fire.
Daeht said nothing, and lifted the lid. A plain, paper-back novel lay matter-of-factly at the bottom of the box. Daeht and Eyran stared at it, their rage building like a rampaging fire.
Their screams of frustration shook the little house from floor to ceiling.
Eyran balled his hands into fists and began to pace, speaking fast and low.
“She must have taken it with her- it’s the only explanation. Argh, we should have tracked her first, why didn’t we realise!? It’s too late to get her now, at the school, in the sight of other humans. Just have to do it on the way back, when she’s alone. Don’t want any witnesses-“
“What!? What are you saying!?” spat Daeht. “Let’s just get her now!” He started to rise, his teeth bared. Eyran grabbed his shoulder.
“No, listen! If we get her in the sight of others then they could raise an alarm. We’ll wait a few hours, Daeht, waiting a few hours is nothing compared to an eternity, right?” He smiled ruefully. Daeht shrugged him off.
“Fine. A few hours. No more.”
They both rose and left through the window, before the villagers swarmed into the yard, alerted by the sight of the smoke and the sounds of the screams, to find Theodora’s charred remains in a haze of black... acrid black stench, her friendly face stamped on every broken gaze.
A little note to say:
Sorry it took so long to upload this. I was away. Won't happen again, guys. Anyway, hope you enjoy(ed) this installment. Wait with bated breath for the next... it's going to get interesting...
She dressed quickly, flung her bag on her back and proceeded to leave. At the door she paused, chewing her lip. Coming to an abrupt decision, Maria snatched the photograph of her parents from its frame on her dresser and slipped it into her pocket. She wasn’t sure why, but she felt that she would want it close to her today.
Her grandmother was eating toast and marmalade in the kitchen by the time she was ready to leave.
“’Bye, grandma!” she called, grabbing a slice of toast as she dashed past.
“Late again, dear.” Maria’s grandmother was shaking her head, her disappointment apparent.
“Only a little,” retorted Maria. “I know what I’m doing.”
“You should be more careful, Maria-“
“I know what I’m doing!” Maria repeated. She was tired of this repetitive argument in the morning and it often made her snap. “I can take care of myself.”
She left, closing the door angrily behind her. As usual, she would apologise for that later. Tossing one last look at her grandmother’s house, Maria hurried up the path and crossed into the first field that would take her to school.
Back in the house, Theodora West sighed, pushing her toast around the plate. She worried about her granddaughter, worried that she was unhappy, worried that she was suffering. Maria would never show it if she was and that was what Theodora didn’t understand.
She heaved herself out of the chair and washed her crockery in the sink, humming quietly to herself. Maybe she would plant some begonias today. Water the honeysuckle... yes, it would need watering after the dry night.
Theodora’s mind was a fickle thing, one-tracked and easily sent astray.
A sharp knock at the door brought Theodora out of her formless thoughts. She dropped the plate and hurried along the hallway. The shape in the window was broad and hazy due to the rippling glass. She did not recognise the person on the other side of the wood.
The unsuspecting elderly lady pulled back the door, surprised to see two beautiful men with white skin and powerful muscles on her doorstep. The hazel-haired one smiled pleasantly.
“Hello, dears, what can I do for you?” This was the last thing she ever said.
Daeht tossed the limp body to one side and both brothers stepped through the doorway.
“Which room do you think?”
Eyran considered this for a fraction of a second.
“The bedroom,” he concluded. “The girl would want it nearby. Safe from...” he paused, flashing a smile. “Oh, I don’t know.” He laughed harshly. Daeht grinned.
“Fine, I’ll go look. You take care of the woman.”
Daeht flew down the hallway, barely touching the floor. He paused at the top and breathed in deeply.
“Her scent’s everywhere,” he whispered. He heard Eyran’s gentle intake of breath, silent to human’s ears, loud and clear to his finely attuned senses.
Finally, after months of searching, we can get our hands on it.
He moved swiftly, following the heavy trail. It was so close.
At the final, white-wooded door, he paused, allowing the long-awaited scent to fill his nostrils, swirl in his mind, clouding reason. If he had a working heart, it would have been thudding violently with the thrill of the hunt, the chase and finally... the prize.
He swept silently through the doorway and closed his eyes, feeling with his other senses. The smell was so potent, stabbing at his mind like a blunt spear, sharp and numbing. Beautiful.
His search led him to the gap under the bed. A small box. Perfect. He pulled it out and ran his fingers along the lid, tracing the lines on the surface of the wood. The smell was staggering.
“You’ve found it.” Eyran appeared suddenly at the doorway, his clothes stinking of burning flesh, his eyes bright with a blazing fire.
Daeht said nothing, and lifted the lid. A plain, paper-back novel lay matter-of-factly at the bottom of the box. Daeht and Eyran stared at it, their rage building like a rampaging fire.
Their screams of frustration shook the little house from floor to ceiling.
Eyran balled his hands into fists and began to pace, speaking fast and low.
“She must have taken it with her- it’s the only explanation. Argh, we should have tracked her first, why didn’t we realise!? It’s too late to get her now, at the school, in the sight of other humans. Just have to do it on the way back, when she’s alone. Don’t want any witnesses-“
“What!? What are you saying!?” spat Daeht. “Let’s just get her now!” He started to rise, his teeth bared. Eyran grabbed his shoulder.
“No, listen! If we get her in the sight of others then they could raise an alarm. We’ll wait a few hours, Daeht, waiting a few hours is nothing compared to an eternity, right?” He smiled ruefully. Daeht shrugged him off.
“Fine. A few hours. No more.”
They both rose and left through the window, before the villagers swarmed into the yard, alerted by the sight of the smoke and the sounds of the screams, to find Theodora’s charred remains in a haze of black... acrid black stench, her friendly face stamped on every broken gaze.
A little note to say:
Sorry it took so long to upload this. I was away. Won't happen again, guys. Anyway, hope you enjoy(ed) this installment. Wait with bated breath for the next... it's going to get interesting...
This story take place after Nessie is born. Zoey has been in the family since The begining of twilight. Although I don't cover anything from the books. Whatever happen to Bella it happen to Zoey accept getting pregant with a half vampire half human baby. Zoey is in love with Jacob Black but Jake is in love with Nessie. Alice and Jasper are practically her parents. She fill like the outsider because she is not a vampire, warewolf or like Nessie. The Volturi have dicided that she can be a human, until a day after she turns 17. She has her GED so she doesn't have to go to school.
Ok don't get me wrong I love the Cullens but take a look at what I would do if I was a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to date a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big tree a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to date a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big tree a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there fan fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add more descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. You can email your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to you and you can post it or change somethings I did. I would love to write my own fan fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really edit stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
Bella's Pov.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was short for a reason. CLIFFHANGER!!! hehehehehe......
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black castle to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black castle to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I probaly said thank you thirty times.
When I heard that they didn't have a place to stay i offered for them to stay here. They aren't living in out hotel room but they are only to doors away.
When i woke up i turned to susans side.She wasn't there. A note took her place.
It read
Dear Chris,
I am pretty sure i got you with the note!
The guys said you would think i left. (it worked)
We are hanging out in their room and we are playing spin the bottle. (what!)
Love,
Susan ps. got you again!
I looked at her hand writing it was very pretty.
I got dressed and walked to the elevator.When i noticed i pressed two when i didn't even have to change from 11 the doors closed.I pressed the 11 button mabye 5 times.When it went up I sighed.
...
to be continued...