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“He’ll wake in one minute”
Alice said with sad eyes. So, He had attacked me but it was nothing for me. Really, NOTHING!
“Bella”
He called my name with his perfect lips. And then when his eyes saw me, he jumped.
“What did I do to you?”
He analyzed me and then he took his face in his hands. I hadn’t seen him this upset till that moment. I tried to touch his hand but he took it out of mine and looked at Carlisle.
“Edward, I’m fine”
I lied. Every each cell of my body was in pain, and I didn’t know if I could move an inch. I didn’t know if I had any broken bones but I knew I wasn’t in a good condition.
“No need to lie, Bella. I did what I was aware of! And I harmed you…”
Carlisle looked at me and said:
“Everyone, please leave me and Bella alone.”
Everyone got out, and Edward did too. He didn’t look at me at all! Carlisle got closer to me and said:
“Bella, Edward’s not in a good condition. I think we need to move to another city. These strange attacking moments will not end, but if he leaves”
“Carlisle, what? You have left me once and you saw what you did to me… ”
“I know Bella… We all know… but there’s only something we can do to make everything like it was before… not quite but...”
“What is it Carlisle?”
“If we change you into a vampire.”
I laughed and said:
“Then, do it! I know Edward can’t right now… I need you to do it Carlisle, please”
His face got hard, his jaw clenched and then his mouth was at my neck.
“Bella, are you sure?”
I nodded once and then I could feel the fire burning me. Before my eyes got closed, I heard Edward shouting Carlisle’s name angrily. Every part of my body was on fire, I didn’t know how long it took but when I opened my eyes, I couldn’t feel my heartbeat. I looked around, Edward was at my side, looking in my eyes with sadness, and everyone was there… Carlisle crooked a smile and said:
“Bella, how are you feeling? Thirsty, yes?”
No, I really wasn’t feeling thirsty!
“Nope. I feel strange!”
He looked at Alice and then said:
“I think you are acting a little bit strange, too!”
I looked in horror to everyone. Had I done something wrong?
“Everyone’s alright?”
Carlisle pursed his lips together and then opened his mouth:
“Bella, newborns are very thirsty at the moment their change gets complete! But you’re just acting human!”
I smiled to each one of my new family and said:
“I’ll try not to be human anymore”
Everyone chuckled and then Esme came near and hugged me. Then I thought of Renee, I had completely forgotten Charlie and her.
“Whoa! Wait… what did you tell to Charlie?”
Everyone got out of their mood and then Edward opened his perfect lips and started talking with his melodic voice:
“He thinks that you’re gone to New Orleans with us! For considering college and stuff…”
“Oh!”
I sighed. I hadn’t left a message so Charlie would ground me again!?
“I guess I’ll be grounded again.”
Edward chuckled and then said:
“No! I copied your handwriting and wrote him a letter. I wrote that you got an immediate acceptance in a college and they wanted to see you, so you have left. He’s not angry at all! We should really go there for at least 2 months, till your eyes change color!”
I smiled. I got out of Edward’s bed. He wasn’t upset that much, really. I was walking across the room when I saw myself in the mirror! Holly lord! I was beautiful! Just my eyes where Red… and somehow it scared me off… and I was pale! Pale as other Cullens!
I touched Edward’s hand; He wasn’t that freezing for me any more! It was like I was touching something as warm as mine.
“My eyes…”
My chocolate colored eyes were gone and I knew they would not come back, EVER. I got afraid if Edward didn’t like me the way he did before.
“Of course I do!”
Edward said with a smile on his face. What?! He could read my mind now?
“He’ll wake in one minute”
Alice said with sad eyes. So, He had attacked me but it was nothing for me. Really, NOTHING!
“Bella”
He called my name with his perfect lips. And then when his eyes saw me, he jumped.
“What did I do to you?”
He analyzed me and then he took his face in his hands. I hadn’t seen him this upset till that moment. I tried to touch his hand but he took it out of mine and looked at Carlisle.
“Edward, I’m fine”
I lied. Every each cell of my body was in pain, and I didn’t know if I could move an inch. I didn’t know if I had any broken bones but I knew I wasn’t in a good condition.
“No need to lie, Bella. I did what I was aware of! And I harmed you…”
Carlisle looked at me and said:
“Everyone, please leave me and Bella alone.”
Everyone got out, and Edward did too. He didn’t look at me at all! Carlisle got closer to me and said:
“Bella, Edward’s not in a good condition. I think we need to move to another city. These strange attacking moments will not end, but if he leaves”
“Carlisle, what? You have left me once and you saw what you did to me… ”
“I know Bella… We all know… but there’s only something we can do to make everything like it was before… not quite but...”
“What is it Carlisle?”
“If we change you into a vampire.”
I laughed and said:
“Then, do it! I know Edward can’t right now… I need you to do it Carlisle, please”
His face got hard, his jaw clenched and then his mouth was at my neck.
“Bella, are you sure?”
I nodded once and then I could feel the fire burning me. Before my eyes got closed, I heard Edward shouting Carlisle’s name angrily. Every part of my body was on fire, I didn’t know how long it took but when I opened my eyes, I couldn’t feel my heartbeat. I looked around, Edward was at my side, looking in my eyes with sadness, and everyone was there… Carlisle crooked a smile and said:
“Bella, how are you feeling? Thirsty, yes?”
No, I really wasn’t feeling thirsty!
“Nope. I feel strange!”
He looked at Alice and then said:
“I think you are acting a little bit strange, too!”
I looked in horror to everyone. Had I done something wrong?
“Everyone’s alright?”
Carlisle pursed his lips together and then opened his mouth:
“Bella, newborns are very thirsty at the moment their change gets complete! But you’re just acting human!”
I smiled to each one of my new family and said:
“I’ll try not to be human anymore”
Everyone chuckled and then Esme came near and hugged me. Then I thought of Renee, I had completely forgotten Charlie and her.
“Whoa! Wait… what did you tell to Charlie?”
Everyone got out of their mood and then Edward opened his perfect lips and started talking with his melodic voice:
“He thinks that you’re gone to New Orleans with us! For considering college and stuff…”
“Oh!”
I sighed. I hadn’t left a message so Charlie would ground me again!?
“I guess I’ll be grounded again.”
Edward chuckled and then said:
“No! I copied your handwriting and wrote him a letter. I wrote that you got an immediate acceptance in a college and they wanted to see you, so you have left. He’s not angry at all! We should really go there for at least 2 months, till your eyes change color!”
I smiled. I got out of Edward’s bed. He wasn’t upset that much, really. I was walking across the room when I saw myself in the mirror! Holly lord! I was beautiful! Just my eyes where Red… and somehow it scared me off… and I was pale! Pale as other Cullens!
I touched Edward’s hand; He wasn’t that freezing for me any more! It was like I was touching something as warm as mine.
“My eyes…”
My chocolate colored eyes were gone and I knew they would not come back, EVER. I got afraid if Edward didn’t like me the way he did before.
“Of course I do!”
Edward said with a smile on his face. What?! He could read my mind now?
Stephenie Meyer
That is a not easy choice for Bella,espically face Edward and Jacob.
Edward is like an antiquated and gentlest brand,such as link.
But Jacob,who is new arisen,just like link.
That is really a difficult choice for Bella.
Feeling?Emotion?What is the measurement?
Woman is very strange,includig Bella.They want to be loved,and want a happy ending with her prince.Eactly,that person should be everyone's prince.
To go along with feeling is not always right.
May be we could know what is her finally choice in the ending.
Edward is like an antiquated and gentlest brand,such as link.
But Jacob,who is new arisen,just like link.
That is really a difficult choice for Bella.
Feeling?Emotion?What is the measurement?
Woman is very strange,includig Bella.They want to be loved,and want a happy ending with her prince.Eactly,that person should be everyone's prince.
To go along with feeling is not always right.
May be we could know what is her finally choice in the ending.
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Edward is hot i have to admit but he even admits he's a killer in New moon and he is TOO much of a gentalmen! Bella need some one better than that who wont be tempted to kill her whenever they touch.
Jacob on the othe hand can let loose and have fun, Bella has know him her WHOLE life, hes just better for her. plus who doesnt love a shirtless werewolf with a SIX pack?
Jacob is kind of young for bella but if bella chooses Jake she wont have to completely FREEZE her life before she hits 20!
Edward is Bellas age but to be with him she has to go through TONS and TONS of pain when Edward bites her and freeze her life in its tracks to live for ETERNITY!
Bella always seems soo much mor conferable around jacob, but with edward shes always so stiff and seems so nervous.
Iv'e read every book and seen every movie at least 5 times so far and i started out team Edward then i realized JACOB is SO much better for Bella.
Jacob on the othe hand can let loose and have fun, Bella has know him her WHOLE life, hes just better for her. plus who doesnt love a shirtless werewolf with a SIX pack?
Jacob is kind of young for bella but if bella chooses Jake she wont have to completely FREEZE her life before she hits 20!
Edward is Bellas age but to be with him she has to go through TONS and TONS of pain when Edward bites her and freeze her life in its tracks to live for ETERNITY!
Bella always seems soo much mor conferable around jacob, but with edward shes always so stiff and seems so nervous.
Iv'e read every book and seen every movie at least 5 times so far and i started out team Edward then i realized JACOB is SO much better for Bella.
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