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I sat and waited for someone to come and take the note but no one did. I went down stairs to see if anyone had figured out who could have sent it. “Do you have any idea Carlisle?”
“No, sorry Edward”
“It’s ok” I wandered back up to my room. I went to get the note on the window but it wasn’t there. Someone had taken it whilst I went downstairs. Whoever this was quite clearly didn’t want to meet you. I decided I would go downstairs but not tell the others about it. Alice couldn’t see whoever was sending these notes so she wouldn’t have seen whoever took it. I waited for the sun to rise then I would go back up to my room. Esme wanted me to spend time with them. They were still all on the mission to find out who sent the note. “We’re quite clearly not going to find the person who’s sending these are we?”
“We might Emmett”
“I think you have a secret admirer”
“Oh shut up” I stormed back of to my room. On the floor there was a note.
Dear Edward,
I’m sorry I have upset you but everything I’ve said is true. I love you more than anything. You must keep the ring and give it to someone else. I’m sure you’ll find another girl to love.
Love you
Bella
I went back downstairs and showed the everyone the note. Carlisle decided to try something with the notes. He put them between two pieces of blank paper and dribbled water over it. He took the blank piece of paper off. The writing on the notes was still there. But a crest was on the white piece of paper that was originally blank. It was the Volturi crest. “Why would someone from the Volturi do this?”
“I don’t know”
“Are we going to Volterra to ask them?”
“No let’s wait to see if you get more and if you do we’ll do the same test again”
“Ok” I went back to my room and wrote a reply.
Dear Someone,
Why won’t you show yourself? We all know now that you come from the Volturi. If you don’t show soon we’ll be coming down to Italy to get you!
Edward
I went outside of my bedroom hoping to hear the person come in. But I didn’t hear anything so I went in and there was another note on the floor.
Dear Edward,
Stop calling me someone, my name is Bella. I can’t show myself to you because I’m dead don’t you remember
Love you
Bella
I took the note down to Carlisle and he did the test again , it came out with the Volturi crest like the last two.
I sat and waited for someone to come and take the note but no one did. I went down stairs to see if anyone had figured out who could have sent it. “Do you have any idea Carlisle?”
“No, sorry Edward”
“It’s ok” I wandered back up to my room. I went to get the note on the window but it wasn’t there. Someone had taken it whilst I went downstairs. Whoever this was quite clearly didn’t want to meet you. I decided I would go downstairs but not tell the others about it. Alice couldn’t see whoever was sending these notes so she wouldn’t have seen whoever took it. I waited for the sun to rise then I would go back up to my room. Esme wanted me to spend time with them. They were still all on the mission to find out who sent the note. “We’re quite clearly not going to find the person who’s sending these are we?”
“We might Emmett”
“I think you have a secret admirer”
“Oh shut up” I stormed back of to my room. On the floor there was a note.
Dear Edward,
I’m sorry I have upset you but everything I’ve said is true. I love you more than anything. You must keep the ring and give it to someone else. I’m sure you’ll find another girl to love.
Love you
Bella
I went back downstairs and showed the everyone the note. Carlisle decided to try something with the notes. He put them between two pieces of blank paper and dribbled water over it. He took the blank piece of paper off. The writing on the notes was still there. But a crest was on the white piece of paper that was originally blank. It was the Volturi crest. “Why would someone from the Volturi do this?”
“I don’t know”
“Are we going to Volterra to ask them?”
“No let’s wait to see if you get more and if you do we’ll do the same test again”
“Ok” I went back to my room and wrote a reply.
Dear Someone,
Why won’t you show yourself? We all know now that you come from the Volturi. If you don’t show soon we’ll be coming down to Italy to get you!
Edward
I went outside of my bedroom hoping to hear the person come in. But I didn’t hear anything so I went in and there was another note on the floor.
Dear Edward,
Stop calling me someone, my name is Bella. I can’t show myself to you because I’m dead don’t you remember
Love you
Bella
I took the note down to Carlisle and he did the test again , it came out with the Volturi crest like the last two.
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I terminate the call, and scream at the top of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two seconds to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.
I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, more pain.
* * *
I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.
I broke Jacob's wrist by accident.
I terminate the call, and scream at the top of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two seconds to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.
I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, more pain.
* * *
I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.
I broke Jacob's wrist by accident.
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Bella's Pov.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.