Here is the second chapter, hope you like it. It's a bit longer than the first one. I got my ideas from the TWILIGHT books. So there are connections. Enjoy.
I HAVE UPDATED THIS, HIS NAME IS NOW EDWARD AND NOT JAKE - I ALSO PUT IN A BIT MORE TO EXPLAIN SOMETHING IN OTHER CHAPTERS
CHAPTER 2
He asked me my name. This angel was talking to me.
“I’m Bella” I replied in a feeble voice.
“How do you feel?”
“Disorientated, Scared, Frightened, Confused, everything all at once. Where am I? Who are you? What am I doing here?”
I shouted a whole load of things at this angel when I suddenly realised we weren’t alone. I gasped.
In the blink of an eye I was in a crouch on the back wall, snarling. They were speaking to me, though no lips were moving.
“Ha, she’s nuts” the biggest said.
“What a loser” the blond one muttered.
“I’m surprised she hasn’t attacked us” the oldest, and obviously the leader said.
I stared around, puzzled.
“STOP IT” I screamed, it was getting to much for me. The voices were coming from everywhere.
I noticed the angel boy was by me in an instant. His family growled. I really looked at him this time. He was young, around my age, 16-17 maybe. He had dark blond hair with brown streaks through it. He was perfect, everything about him was perfect. The only fault, if you would call this one, was the black shadows under his eyes. Like he hadn’t slept in ages. He was also extremely pale. I took a glance around. They all were pale.
“What’s wrong?” He murmured so quiet that I was surprised I could hear him.
“Does it hurt? Are you thirsty? What? Tell me?” he whispered softly.
“The speaking, it’s filling my head. It’s not stopping!” I replied. It was their turn to gasp.
“You can hear our thoughts as well…Interesting” The leader said.
“Anyway, Bella, we need to speak to you. I’m Carlisle, this is Esme, Emmett, Rosealie, Alice and Jasper. And that is Edward. He saved you.”
I turned back to Edward, he smiled a dazzling smile, that I couldn’t help but respond to.
“Anyway, Bella, you may feel different” Carlisle continued, “this is because you are a vampire.”
I giggled at this. “What?” I asked in bewilderment.
“You were attacked by a bear and I found you. I killed the bear, and because you were dying, I changed you into a vampire. You would have died otherwise.” Edward continued.
“You can never see your family again” Carlisle continued in a musical voice.
“My mum and dad died in a car accident when I was young, I was the only survivor” I sniffed, remembering this memory hurt.
I hear Edward stop breathing next to me and looked at him with a puzzled expression.
“I would have thought by now you would have asked about the burning sensation in your throat?” Carlisle quickly stated so Edward didn’t have to answer my questioning look.
Until now I had not noticed the burning in my throat. I groaned.
“What is it?” I asked.
“Your hungry you need to hunt” Edward beamed.
“HUNT?” I shouted.
“Yeah, come on, I’ll show you”
I then noticed the voices again.
“Come on Bella” This voice called. I looked at Edward.
“What?” I asked
“What?” He asked.
“I can hear you even though your not speaking. It’s like I’m reading your mind.” He smiled. I gasped.
“I AM reading your mind!”
“Yes, and I can read yours. Listen.” He whispered in my ear.
(Bella’s Mind - ITALICS
Edward’s Mind - BOLD)
“Come on Bella, we need to go and hunt, follow me, see if you can keep up”
“W-O-W”
“Run”
So I followed him all the way across the river, through the woods, until we ended up in a clearing.
“Where are we?”
“My special place, now listen carefully, what do you hear?”
“Your thoughts…” I whispered to him gently.
“Listen carefully, and smell.”
I smelt something warm and inviting down by the river. I heard the sloshing of lips, lapping the water up greedily.
He heard me, obviously.
“Go get them, trust your instincts” Edward said tracing his finger down the side of my face. Even though his skin was my temperature, it left a scorching trail on my face.
So I ran, I ran to the smell and the sound. I saw the deer by the water, and suddenly one was in my teeth, dead.
“Very good”
I drank all the blood until it ran dry then listened and caught another one. In the end I was full of liquid sloshing around inside me.
As we ran, I stared at him the whole time, there was a feeling deep inside me that I had never felt before.
“It’s there for me too, Bella. I don’t know what it is either.”
“It’s strange but I feel if I lose it now, I will never be whole again…”
I paused. I suddenly realised that I had fallen in love with him. This angel. I had known him a day, just a day. I loved him.
“I can still hear you, you know”
I gasped, “But, I have only known you a day.”
“And I have only known you a day too. Strange isn’t it? Because well, … I love you too”
Now I stopped. He whirled around and stood in front of me.
“What‘s wrong?”
“I-I-I d-don’t know”
Suddenly, before I even knew it was happening, he kissed me. He kissed me hard but passionately. I knew that I wanted to be with him forever.
I HAVE UPDATED THIS, HIS NAME IS NOW EDWARD AND NOT JAKE - I ALSO PUT IN A BIT MORE TO EXPLAIN SOMETHING IN OTHER CHAPTERS
CHAPTER 2
He asked me my name. This angel was talking to me.
“I’m Bella” I replied in a feeble voice.
“How do you feel?”
“Disorientated, Scared, Frightened, Confused, everything all at once. Where am I? Who are you? What am I doing here?”
I shouted a whole load of things at this angel when I suddenly realised we weren’t alone. I gasped.
In the blink of an eye I was in a crouch on the back wall, snarling. They were speaking to me, though no lips were moving.
“Ha, she’s nuts” the biggest said.
“What a loser” the blond one muttered.
“I’m surprised she hasn’t attacked us” the oldest, and obviously the leader said.
I stared around, puzzled.
“STOP IT” I screamed, it was getting to much for me. The voices were coming from everywhere.
I noticed the angel boy was by me in an instant. His family growled. I really looked at him this time. He was young, around my age, 16-17 maybe. He had dark blond hair with brown streaks through it. He was perfect, everything about him was perfect. The only fault, if you would call this one, was the black shadows under his eyes. Like he hadn’t slept in ages. He was also extremely pale. I took a glance around. They all were pale.
“What’s wrong?” He murmured so quiet that I was surprised I could hear him.
“Does it hurt? Are you thirsty? What? Tell me?” he whispered softly.
“The speaking, it’s filling my head. It’s not stopping!” I replied. It was their turn to gasp.
“You can hear our thoughts as well…Interesting” The leader said.
“Anyway, Bella, we need to speak to you. I’m Carlisle, this is Esme, Emmett, Rosealie, Alice and Jasper. And that is Edward. He saved you.”
I turned back to Edward, he smiled a dazzling smile, that I couldn’t help but respond to.
“Anyway, Bella, you may feel different” Carlisle continued, “this is because you are a vampire.”
I giggled at this. “What?” I asked in bewilderment.
“You were attacked by a bear and I found you. I killed the bear, and because you were dying, I changed you into a vampire. You would have died otherwise.” Edward continued.
“You can never see your family again” Carlisle continued in a musical voice.
“My mum and dad died in a car accident when I was young, I was the only survivor” I sniffed, remembering this memory hurt.
I hear Edward stop breathing next to me and looked at him with a puzzled expression.
“I would have thought by now you would have asked about the burning sensation in your throat?” Carlisle quickly stated so Edward didn’t have to answer my questioning look.
Until now I had not noticed the burning in my throat. I groaned.
“What is it?” I asked.
“Your hungry you need to hunt” Edward beamed.
“HUNT?” I shouted.
“Yeah, come on, I’ll show you”
I then noticed the voices again.
“Come on Bella” This voice called. I looked at Edward.
“What?” I asked
“What?” He asked.
“I can hear you even though your not speaking. It’s like I’m reading your mind.” He smiled. I gasped.
“I AM reading your mind!”
“Yes, and I can read yours. Listen.” He whispered in my ear.
(Bella’s Mind - ITALICS
Edward’s Mind - BOLD)
“Come on Bella, we need to go and hunt, follow me, see if you can keep up”
“W-O-W”
“Run”
So I followed him all the way across the river, through the woods, until we ended up in a clearing.
“Where are we?”
“My special place, now listen carefully, what do you hear?”
“Your thoughts…” I whispered to him gently.
“Listen carefully, and smell.”
I smelt something warm and inviting down by the river. I heard the sloshing of lips, lapping the water up greedily.
He heard me, obviously.
“Go get them, trust your instincts” Edward said tracing his finger down the side of my face. Even though his skin was my temperature, it left a scorching trail on my face.
So I ran, I ran to the smell and the sound. I saw the deer by the water, and suddenly one was in my teeth, dead.
“Very good”
I drank all the blood until it ran dry then listened and caught another one. In the end I was full of liquid sloshing around inside me.
As we ran, I stared at him the whole time, there was a feeling deep inside me that I had never felt before.
“It’s there for me too, Bella. I don’t know what it is either.”
“It’s strange but I feel if I lose it now, I will never be whole again…”
I paused. I suddenly realised that I had fallen in love with him. This angel. I had known him a day, just a day. I loved him.
“I can still hear you, you know”
I gasped, “But, I have only known you a day.”
“And I have only known you a day too. Strange isn’t it? Because well, … I love you too”
Now I stopped. He whirled around and stood in front of me.
“What‘s wrong?”
“I-I-I d-don’t know”
Suddenly, before I even knew it was happening, he kissed me. He kissed me hard but passionately. I knew that I wanted to be with him forever.
