This is my first one, and I know its not that good, so tell me what you think and give me suggestions about ANYTHING. This is for Brooki and Gab. Hope you enjoy!
Have you ever had a day where it was all normal, and then that one strange, heart stopping second, everything changed? Well, this was the day my whole life changed.
“Come on you guys, we are going to be late!”, I said with a sigh. Brook, Gabbie, and I were going to walk to the movies at the mall this Saturday afternoon. I bought three tickets to see New Moon for my birthday (which was on November 22, two days after the premiere.) and it started at 6:30, so we only had a few minutes until it started, so I was in a rush.
“Hang on, I need to finish my hair!” said Brook. “ And I am not done with my make up.” Gabbie said. “Well, hurry up.” I exclaimed in an exaggerated tone. “ We’re coming!” they said together, in the same tone right back at me. Then, Gab and Brook came running out of the bathroom like bullets.
They went to put on their heels, when I pulled them to the other side of the hall where the kept their gym shoes. I knew that walking in a mall with heels would not be worth the effort. Then, practically dragging them out the door, we left.
It was lightly snowing outside, but to us Chicagoans, it wasn’t cold. As the three of us were stumbling blindly down the sidewalk, our heads in our cell phones, I bumped into someone.
I tottered backwards, but strong hands were suddenly around my arms, preventing me from falling back onto the cement. I looked up, and stared straight into big, bold hazel eyes. They were striking. “ Are you alright?” the boy said, sounding concerned. I fell out of my reverie and said “ um, yeah, sorry, I’m a klutz. Did I hurt you?” The boys sudden laugh scared me. “Did you hurt me? You’re the one I was worried about! You looked like you just got electrocuted!” I blushed. Then someone said “Yeah, this big hunk of meat couldn’t get hurt that easily. I don’t think he would even flinch if you whacked him with a skyscraper!” Oh, it must have been one of the boys friends. In fact,there were two of them. When did they get here? “Um…” And I don’t think this guy would even survive getting hit with a skyscraper! He really needs to pay attention in school. “Oh, you never told me your name. I’m Erik.” He put out his hand. I just stared at it. Was I supposed to shake it? I saw his forehead crease. Duh, of course I was. God, I’m dumb.
I toke his hand. “ I’m Sarah. Thanks for, uh, helping me”. I looked at Gabbie and Brook. They were staring at me and giving me with nods of encouragement and matching devilish smiles on their faces. “ Do you want to come with us to the mall? We are going to see a movie.” “ Sure, that would be great.” So we all turned around, walking to the mall, which was visible and not too far. Then I looked at my cell. Damn. It was 6:34! We needed to hurry. I also noticed that the snow got heavier, so I started to jog in front of the crowd. I heard them all pick up the pace, and we quickly jogged into the mall entrance.
Ok, so this is just the intro. Its a little slow, but it will get better!
Have you ever had a day where it was all normal, and then that one strange, heart stopping second, everything changed? Well, this was the day my whole life changed.
“Come on you guys, we are going to be late!”, I said with a sigh. Brook, Gabbie, and I were going to walk to the movies at the mall this Saturday afternoon. I bought three tickets to see New Moon for my birthday (which was on November 22, two days after the premiere.) and it started at 6:30, so we only had a few minutes until it started, so I was in a rush.
“Hang on, I need to finish my hair!” said Brook. “ And I am not done with my make up.” Gabbie said. “Well, hurry up.” I exclaimed in an exaggerated tone. “ We’re coming!” they said together, in the same tone right back at me. Then, Gab and Brook came running out of the bathroom like bullets.
They went to put on their heels, when I pulled them to the other side of the hall where the kept their gym shoes. I knew that walking in a mall with heels would not be worth the effort. Then, practically dragging them out the door, we left.
It was lightly snowing outside, but to us Chicagoans, it wasn’t cold. As the three of us were stumbling blindly down the sidewalk, our heads in our cell phones, I bumped into someone.
I tottered backwards, but strong hands were suddenly around my arms, preventing me from falling back onto the cement. I looked up, and stared straight into big, bold hazel eyes. They were striking. “ Are you alright?” the boy said, sounding concerned. I fell out of my reverie and said “ um, yeah, sorry, I’m a klutz. Did I hurt you?” The boys sudden laugh scared me. “Did you hurt me? You’re the one I was worried about! You looked like you just got electrocuted!” I blushed. Then someone said “Yeah, this big hunk of meat couldn’t get hurt that easily. I don’t think he would even flinch if you whacked him with a skyscraper!” Oh, it must have been one of the boys friends. In fact,there were two of them. When did they get here? “Um…” And I don’t think this guy would even survive getting hit with a skyscraper! He really needs to pay attention in school. “Oh, you never told me your name. I’m Erik.” He put out his hand. I just stared at it. Was I supposed to shake it? I saw his forehead crease. Duh, of course I was. God, I’m dumb.
I toke his hand. “ I’m Sarah. Thanks for, uh, helping me”. I looked at Gabbie and Brook. They were staring at me and giving me with nods of encouragement and matching devilish smiles on their faces. “ Do you want to come with us to the mall? We are going to see a movie.” “ Sure, that would be great.” So we all turned around, walking to the mall, which was visible and not too far. Then I looked at my cell. Damn. It was 6:34! We needed to hurry. I also noticed that the snow got heavier, so I started to jog in front of the crowd. I heard them all pick up the pace, and we quickly jogged into the mall entrance.
Ok, so this is just the intro. Its a little slow, but it will get better!
Ok, so Brooki and I were at a bit of a disagreement with where Lustful was going: I wanted there to be a Stelena, but she didn't. So, I took it upon myself to write a story for Stelena (don't worry, Damon will not be forgotten!)!
I have a name for it already, and I will be posting it soon! The Terrible Triangle. What do you think? Too cheesy? Let me know what you think about it, cause I can;t wait to get started!
If you have better name suggestions for me, comment!
Here is a preview!:
I got out of the car and locked my door, nervious and embarassed for being late...for our anniversary. I raced up the steps and knocked on the door. No one answered, so I turned the knob; the door was open. I walked in to hear a loud crash coming from the kitchen. I ran to the kitchen to see Damon and Stefan arguing-again.
I have a name for it already, and I will be posting it soon! The Terrible Triangle. What do you think? Too cheesy? Let me know what you think about it, cause I can;t wait to get started!
If you have better name suggestions for me, comment!
Here is a preview!:
I got out of the car and locked my door, nervious and embarassed for being late...for our anniversary. I raced up the steps and knocked on the door. No one answered, so I turned the knob; the door was open. I walked in to hear a loud crash coming from the kitchen. I ran to the kitchen to see Damon and Stefan arguing-again.