What do you think?

Okay, so this is a poem I wrote for my short story Love Poems, coming to FictionPress ASAP. I just need some opinions...

It's like I've known you
In another life
We work well together
That, no one can deny

We've been friends for a while
But it feels like longer
Each day our relationship
Grows a little stronger

Passersby watch, and
Think we're a couple
Our friends would agree
Just make it quintuple

Which is why I'm voicing
The popular thought
Something should be done
A change sould be sought

So will you do it?
Be my change-seeker
It needn't be much
Just a small gesture
Of love