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B4 you read my idea you should read where I got my idea from. It's is by the author Qire.

Louie healed Jean's shoulder before he took her back. "Why? Tell me why. What did I do?" Jean cried as he eased her tear streamed face into his own shoulder. Louie only tightened his grip, his emotions far too hot to be comforting. On his arrival to her apartment they were confronted by a well dressed young woman with a warm smile that turned into concern as they neared. "Is everything alright?" Louie nodded. " Just a little over tired. That's all. Excuse us." The young woman stepped aside, but did not...

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain:more examples:0-

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Jamie rubbed her eyes as she sat at the desk on an oversized pillow that she'd had to ask for as an actual chair seemed too much to come up with. At that thought her hand caught fire as it did whenever she was perturbed. In this case it was nearly non-stop.
As for the treaty....it was now as tall as the table. Not more then maybe 2 feet if that. Even though it had been more then 3000 years she still remembered all the problems from her father's time and her own....she sagged. Not many had ever been solved. The Living Realm had been worse, women had less of a say and treated less then a prized...

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain:Descriptions of Kuchiki and Gloryflower5/10

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His hair was the color of the darkest abyss of space shattered with streaks of gleaming comets. His face stern and white with a moonlight glow and he walked as he led, calm and controlled.As if the very air dared not exist without his say so. Those he hunted could not hide from his steady sword of earthbound release. His name was reaper.
She was born of flame, seductive, passionate, part guardian and destroyer. Hair of Life, Soul of many, . Her face warm and gentle to all those who saw her. She walked with a light but heavy step as many years passed, she never did. She led none, but herself...

Bleach-Betrayed and the Captain (Prologue) 2

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KaraKura more than one year after Aizen's defeat.

Ichigo walked home in the dying light after spending hours in the school's library. The dream he'd had the night before, had driven him to find some kind of answer to it in the library. Leaving a bad taste in his mouth as it had gained him nothing but more questions. His phone rang. Rukia? He sighed. No. Just Yuzu worrying. Maybe it was for the best. He winced. Any ways Renji had been itching for a chance with her and he was a full fledged reaper..... Damn it! His heart nearly stopped with that thought. He'd saved...he grit his teeth, that was...

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain(After the confrontation with As Nodt)Prologue 1

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Byakuya's comatose body lay in a private room hooked up to monitors and a breathing tube. While blood was slipping into it, it was seeping out from the wounds he had received. Some prayed for his easy passing while others prayed for him to fight on. Either way he did not care, he was not there. Instead he was a child again in his families garden. The cherry blossoms were in full bloom, she never missed the day of her arrival. Not ever. He rushed to the tree but found her not there, he started to panic."Over here bone head!" She yelled from
over by the koi pond. He ran towards her and fell...

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain pg12

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In the deserts of Mundo a castle appeared out of thin air. Gardens suddenly shook off the sand and then conquered it until it was a forgotten dream. Streams and ponds bubbled and burst in sprays of moisture.In the sky rose up a sun that drove most of the hollows to seek the darkness beneath the ground. Birds, animals, and fish flourished in the new scenic view. Those hollows that resisted the desire to crawl back down into the ground crept closer and tried to enter only to be repelled with blasts of lightning and acidic flames. Snarling they slid away from the invading structure. While inside...

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain pg10

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P.B. covered what she could of the bruises Voro had given her. She had worn the wrong color dress for the date. Even though everyone at the party said it was beautiful and made them stand out. Impossible to miss. Tears spilled down ruining the careful blotting out she had done. She needed to break it off but Voro's past girlfriends....went missing. How had this happened? Mira had left leaving her finally on her very own for the real first time but she'd only done so as mom had been on her way, mom or Jamie as she liked to be called now had had one of her episodes. That now had become the norm...

Bleach the betrayed and the captain.page1 3/4

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P.B. woke with an ice pack surrounding her head. Her eyes barely able to see as the swelling had yet to go down. There was a tell tail sound of the puff-puff as the silencer and then a body....no two. Assaulted her ears, P.B. swallowed hard. "I'm so sorry baby,but why couldn't you have behaved?" P.B. shrank away from his thick bourbon stench."You gave me no choice." Her voice wobbled out of her bruised and cut lips.
Voro sighed heavily and sat across from her.
"Perhaps, but I love you, and my love is not so easily given. When I do, it is demanding. All consuming and it makes me volatile." P.B....

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain pg7

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Byakuya met with the messenger from the high king in his garden. "Ah greetings young lord I am happy you obliged such a small creature such as me into your beautiful home." He bowed deeply to the captain. "I understand you have news of a reached out come of the negotiations with the other captains." The messenger nodded lightly and leaned his head toward an open cherry blossom. "Never have I smelled such lovely blossoms, there is something in the soil here that I have never encountered." Byakuya folded his arms and narrowed his eyes at the man."You did not come all this way to talk of soils...

Bleach:The Betrayed and the Captain. pg18

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Voro stretched out on the extra large bed alongside a heavily comatosed P.B. Who had made it half way up in the elevator before becoming a problem that only a shot of vellum into the veins could cure. As for the front desk...it had taken a considerable sum of both money and threats to ensure not a word of him or his friends got any further.Though if she kept on going she'd leave him no alternative but to pump her body with an over dose of liquified cocaine and drop her out the window. Which may cause a few to babble, but even then who would care when the toxicology report came out.Just another...

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain....examples

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Orihemia looked at the immobile Jamie on Unohana's bed. Jamie's darkness, her lonliness, her depression was so deep so black it was more then frightening. It had reached out to her invading her, only the slap of Unohana had saved her from being taken over. "She's past all our help. Her body is freezing itself because of it. She has been in so much pain for so long, she has given up all hope. Orihemia what did you say before I hit you?" Byakuya answered instead. "She misses him." Unohana nodded."Yes at the core of all her pain is the boy she loved. Weather he abandoned....."
Byakuya stood up...

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain pg8

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Orihemia sat in front of her mirror. The very same that the angel had been at 5 months ago.She turned her branded arm this way and that, the dragon rotated and then suddenly disappeared off her shoulder. "Huh? Where did you go?" A voice like a whisper came to her ear. "I am where I have always been child within you." Orihemia screeched as it spooked her. She turned expecting to see the dragon, but found an older version of herself smiling back at her. "You have very good lungs." The older one said laughing. "Ah-uhmmm-thanks." Orihemia said blushing. A flurry of rapid knocks came suddenly at...

The Betrayed and the Captain.Pg 18 1/2

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Clicking off of Fenton's line Jamie walked with her eyes down caste. Ignoring nearly everything and only looking up when she had to cross a street or thought she heard a voice of a long dead friend. She should have come back sooner, but running away had more or less become her life. When she'd lost too many of her children, orphans,she just up and moved away. Never looking back, never going back. Jamie wondered briefly if the cherry tree she'd planted all those centuries ago had survived.Then she heard the play ground noises. Swings creaking, the streaky sounds of a child inching their way...

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain pg11...

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Mira made the young flyboys top off the fuel, other liquids and wash the pretty birds before they even thought about putting on their helmets and plugging into the simulators. It took them all day. A few fist fights a couple black eyes which made the one group have to wait a day before they even got as far as the simulators. Those that had done the tasks as a team, with minimum arguing were already on their 2nd day of simulator training. "Phantom and Hawk how are your teams?" The two young men growled at each other. "Really? I thought you two wanted to fly and be the best of the best. The Elite...

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain 19.5 pg

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Byakuya slept uncomfortably, his once dreamless sleep now bothered considerably by his so called guardian. With each dream she became more and more detailed. Now she came to him unlocking more and more of the secreted away doors of his childhood. By morning he would not remember the dream but his doors would be weakened and he would have to meditate for hours either at the school, the living realm's house or his own home. How dare she try to undo all his work! All he had strived for! He could not-would not return to the uncouth youth that was far too emotional to handle even a game of tag with...

Bleach: betrayed and the captain 4-26pg5

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Next town over at a restaurant.

Yuzu picked at the food on her plate. It smelled good, but also off as if there was something missing. "Is there something wrong with the food miss?" The waitress said. "Oh no....well it could use a pinch of oregano.Maybe a dash of celery salt too." The waitress nodded and went back to the kitchen and grabbed the items. "We aim to please." Yuzu blushed and thanked her before adding the ingredients. A delicate sniff made her smile. "Perfect." The waitress came closer and wafted the scent towards herself. " Oh my it does smell much better. I think I'll have to...

Bleach:The Betrayed and the Captain.Page2not needed

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Byakuya practiced his swordsmanship in the hottest part of the day as he had since the time he was given his first sword. It was the only time he allowed any emotions to pass upon his face without checking them at the door. In this case the practice form wore a spiked orange mop of hair. Ichigo-Ichigo! No! No! No! The form exploded into a flurry of old clothes and straw. He could feel Rukia slipping away with every moment she was with that disrespectful orange haired freak of a substitute soul reaper. He yelled his frustration, it had been bad enough to have been beaten not once but twice...

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain:more examples

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Jamie sent her crew out on orders as she sensed trouble moving in. Of course she went out to meet it alone. The place was peaceful with trees and a deep and stream that bubbled playfully. Hell she could hear the bees a couple of trees back and saw a fine patch of flowering clover just ripe to pick for either making wine or medicine The only problem was that at its back was a cliff face. A most perfect place to corner your prey. She made her hair shorten as she tied a handkerchief over it. As she smelled the horses coming closer, her basket was out on her arm and as she bent down to pluck a...

Bleach: The Betrayed and the Captain- letter from Fanpop writer

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If some of you actually come across my stories and start to read them you will notice some do not have any real connection to the continuing story. As I have learned in the past. Pen and pencil tend to fade away on paper or anything else you write on. So I come here and write it on a screen and send it out as a pop fly into the audience instead of a home run.. Don't know if I'll use them or trash them, I just want to make sure if I burn out and leave the story for awhile I have some record of it somewhere I can still read it. I have tons of paper at home in 20 gallon totes at least 2 or more and 5 years in and can no longer read due to the fading. So I hope you thoroughly enjoy my scribbles in case I end up having a bad case of multiple personalities due to the people I have living inside my poor drooling brain. Probably why I have terrible spelling and punctuation at times. At least I think I do. Never did get higher then a C average in English.

Bleach-The Betrayed and the Captain:more examples Trial by dream.

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Byakuya's eyes closed even as he fought them. He was tired, distraught and too emotional where Jamie was concerned. He shouldn't have gone over, but when Unohana retold him of her workings on the girl that even after a few days still drew an unprecedented pale and no smile from the captain it had disturbed him. "Never in all my life have I seen so much disregard for her own body. But never one so brave, she shames the whole society with her selflessness." She had said and then asked him. "You were there when they took her, were you not?" The question had caught him off guard, for he had made...