this is my first MLP fanfic.Tell me if I do good
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Rainbow Heart was trotting around town looking for her best friends Pink Rose and Appletini.Those three were -as Dimond Tiara would say- blank flanks.She gave up and trotted into Sugercube Cornor,and sure enough Pinkie Pie was there "Haiii Rainbow Heart!What'cha doin' here?" asked the giddy pink pony."I'm lookin' for Pink Rose and Appletini.Have you seen em'?"."Yes I did!I think they said they were going to the clubhouse." Pinkie Pie said smileing."Thanks Pinkie!" said Rainbow behind her shoulder as she raced out."No problem!" shouted Pinkie Pie.Rainbow Heart got to the tree house and sure enough they were there."Is bout' time you showed up." re-marked Appletini."Well you could told me you were comeing here!" chucked Rainbow Heart."Sorry.We forgot to." said Pink Rose in a sweet voice."Its ok guys." She Rainbow sitting in her beanbag next to Pink Rose."I think we should think of ways to earn are cutie marks." siad Appletini."I have the best idea!" shouted Rainbow Heart!"What?" said Pink Rose and Appletini.......
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Rainbow Heart was trotting around town looking for her best friends Pink Rose and Appletini.Those three were -as Dimond Tiara would say- blank flanks.She gave up and trotted into Sugercube Cornor,and sure enough Pinkie Pie was there "Haiii Rainbow Heart!What'cha doin' here?" asked the giddy pink pony."I'm lookin' for Pink Rose and Appletini.Have you seen em'?"."Yes I did!I think they said they were going to the clubhouse." Pinkie Pie said smileing."Thanks Pinkie!" said Rainbow behind her shoulder as she raced out."No problem!" shouted Pinkie Pie.Rainbow Heart got to the tree house and sure enough they were there."Is bout' time you showed up." re-marked Appletini."Well you could told me you were comeing here!" chucked Rainbow Heart."Sorry.We forgot to." said Pink Rose in a sweet voice."Its ok guys." She Rainbow sitting in her beanbag next to Pink Rose."I think we should think of ways to earn are cutie marks." siad Appletini."I have the best idea!" shouted Rainbow Heart!"What?" said Pink Rose and Appletini.......
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to be countinued!
this is my first MLP fanfic.Tell me if I do good
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Rainbow Heart was trotting around town looking for her best friends Pink Rose and Appletini.Those three were -as Dimond Tiara would say- blank flanks.She gave up and trotted into Sugercube Cornor,and sure enough Pinkie Pie was there "Haiii Rainbow Heart!What'cha doin' here?" asked the giddy pink pony."I'm lookin' for Pink Rose and Appletini.Have you seen em'?"."Yes I did!I think they said they were going to the clubhouse." Pinkie Pie said smileing."Thanks Pinkie!" said Rainbow behind her shoulder as she raced out."No problem!" shouted Pinkie Pie.Rainbow Heart got to the tree house and sure enough they were there."Is bout' time you showed up." re-marked Appletini."Well you could told me you were comeing here!" chucked Rainbow Heart."Sorry.We forgot to." said Pink Rose in a sweet voice."Its ok guys." She Rainbow sitting in her beanbag next to Pink Rose."I think we should think of ways to earn are cutie marks." siad Appletini."I have the best idea!" shouted Rainbow Heart!"What?" said Pink Rose and Appletini.......
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to be countinued!
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Rainbow Heart was trotting around town looking for her best friends Pink Rose and Appletini.Those three were -as Dimond Tiara would say- blank flanks.She gave up and trotted into Sugercube Cornor,and sure enough Pinkie Pie was there "Haiii Rainbow Heart!What'cha doin' here?" asked the giddy pink pony."I'm lookin' for Pink Rose and Appletini.Have you seen em'?"."Yes I did!I think they said they were going to the clubhouse." Pinkie Pie said smileing."Thanks Pinkie!" said Rainbow behind her shoulder as she raced out."No problem!" shouted Pinkie Pie.Rainbow Heart got to the tree house and sure enough they were there."Is bout' time you showed up." re-marked Appletini."Well you could told me you were comeing here!" chucked Rainbow Heart."Sorry.We forgot to." said Pink Rose in a sweet voice."Its ok guys." She Rainbow sitting in her beanbag next to Pink Rose."I think we should think of ways to earn are cutie marks." siad Appletini."I have the best idea!" shouted Rainbow Heart!"What?" said Pink Rose and Appletini.......
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to be countinued!